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ANIMATIC PEER FEEDBACK

DOES IT MAKE NARRATIVE SENSE?

IS IT EASY TO SEE HOW THE SPECIAL FX WILL FIT IN?

IS THE DIALOGUE ENGAGING?

WHICH SHOTS DO THINK LAST TOO LONG?

HOW COULD THE SEQUENCE BE IMPROVED?

HOW COULD THE TECHNICAL QUALITY OF THE ANIMATIC BE IMPROVED?

Student
Was very difficult to understand what was going on later on in the sequence, was quite easy to understand what going at the start but still wasn't 100% clear though.
Student
Wasn't clear when the special effects where suppose to be, I could of guessed where the special effects where suppose to be but isn't very clear.
Student
The dialogue helped tell me what was going on in the story but it didn't flow together that well.
Student
The shot of the close up of the eyes went on a bit too long but the shots flowed together nicely.
Student
Student
The sequence can be improved by making it more clear where the special effects are and what they are.
Student
Making it more clear when and what the special effects are and make it a little bit longer and maybe some dramatic tense music to go over the top