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Developing dialogic feedback processes through
peer reviewProfessor David Carless
Guangdong University of Foreign Studies
13th October, 2016
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Overview
1. Key feedback processes & issues
2. Peer feedback rationale
3. Select literature review
4. Our recent research
5. Challenges & Implications
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Marking overload
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Aim of talk
To discuss salient issues for effective implementation of peer feedback
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My definition of feedback
“A dialogic process in which learners make sense of information from varied sources and use it to enhance the quality of their work or learning strategies”.
Carless (2015a, p.192)
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Defining peer feedback (PF) An arrangement whereby students evaluate and make judgments about the work of their peers (Nicol et al., 2014, p. 104)(peer review)
(peer response: Liu & Hansen, 2002*)
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A key pointLearners often gain more from composing PF than from receiving it
(Lundstrom & Baker, 2009*; Nicol et al., 2014; Yu & Lee, 2015*)
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SITUATING FEEDBACK & PEER FEEDBACK
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Productive assessment task design
Understanding quality in the discipline
Student engagement with feedback
Learning-oriented assessment framework (Carless, 2015b)
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Bigger pictureFeedback as assessment design issue
Feedback as a pedagogical issue
Feedback as a relational issue
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Key aim of feedback
To enhance student ability to self-monitor their work in progress
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Less can be More
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RATIONALE FOR PEER FEEDBACK + FOUR KEY STUDIES
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Rationale Involve students in dialogue around the quality of work
Help students to reflect onown performance
Potentially plentiful & timely
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1. To give is better than to receive
Students taught to give PF, improved writing more than students taught to use PF
You review in your own ZPD but you may not receive in your ZPD
Lundstrom & Baker, 2009*
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2. Higher order thinking• Composing PF is cognitively engaging:- Applying criteria- Diagnosing problems- Suggesting solutions
(Nicol et al., 2014)
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3. Varying motives for PFNot all students buy in to PF Gains from reading others’ texts
Passive involvement
Yu & Lee, 2015*
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4. Feedback on PF• Receivers of PF gave feedback to
providers (Kim, 2009)• Enhanced motivation & performance
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OUR RECENT RESEARCH
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Qiyun Zhu (Judy) The University of Hong Kong
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ContextYear 1 university EFL class
200 students, 5 teachers
Peer review of writing
Sustained observations, interviews
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Preparation No or minimal training
PF sheet / guiding questions
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Selected positive findings• Written peer feedback then oral dialogue• Timeliness, immediacy, negotiation
• “I realised it’s not that my idea was wrong but I didn’t express it clearly”
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Selected negative findings• Partner not enthusiastic, perfunctory• Comments were vague & general
• The teacher should have explained how to complete the form
• What does the teacher think about our peer feedback?
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Implications • Importance of interaction between peers
• PF as preparation for feedback from teacher
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Yueting Xu (Tracey) The University of Hong Kong
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ContextYear 1 university EFL class
57 students, 1 ‘excellent’ teacher
PF on oral presentations
Sustained observations, interviews
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Preparation • Positioned PF within wider goals of
university study• Discussed video of OP in class• Introduced assessment criteria, including
content, audience awareness, pacing etc• Modelled how to give PF
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Positive findingsStudents more engaged
Enhanced audience awareness
Focused on content
Enables teacher feedback on PF
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Challenges• Reticence & uncertainty at outset
• Comments inaudible or difficult to understand
• Not easy to get students to be critical
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Implications • Interplay between cognitive scaffolding &
social-affective support• Teacher feedback literacy to support
development of student feedback literacy(Xu & Carless, 2016)
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PEER FEEDBACK CHALLENGES
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Discussion
In your view/experience, what are the major challenges in carrying out PF?
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Negative experiences• Students don’t take it seriously
• Poor quality PF
• Students prefer teacher feedback
Lack of teacher assessment & feedback literacy
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Conclusions The University of Hong Kong
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Communication
Rationales
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Potential benefits
Processes
Tackling challenges
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Good PF practice• Sell rationale to students
• Communicate gains for ‘giver’
• Provide some training & support
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Feedback literacy• Need for further development of teacher
assessment & feedback literacy …
• … seeding student assessment & feedback literacy
(Xu & Brown, 2016) (Xu & Carless, 2016)
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ReferencesCarless, D. (2015a). Excellence in University Assessment: learning from award-winning teachers. London: Routledge. Carless, D. (2015b). Exploring learning-oriented assessment processes. Higher Education, 69(6), 963-976.Kim, M. (2009). The impact of an elaborated assessee’s role in peer assessment. Assessment & Evaluation in Higher
Education, 34(1), 105-114Liu, J., & Hansen, J. G. (2002). Peer response in second language writing classrooms. Michigan: University of
Michigan Press.Lundstrom, K., & Baker, K. (2009). To give is better than to receive: The benefits of peer review to the reviewer’s
own writing. Journal of Second Language Writing, 18(1), 30-43.Nicol, D., Thomson, A., & Breslin, C. (2014). Rethinking feedback practices in higher education: a peer review
perspective. Assessment & Evaluation in Higher Education, 39(1), 102–122. Xu, Y., & Brown, G. T. L. (2016). Teacher assessment literacy in practice: A reconceptualization. Teaching and
Teacher Education, 58, 149-162. Xu, Y. & Carless, D. (2016). ‘Only true friends could be cruelly honest’: cognitive scaffolding and social-affective
support in teacher feedback literacy, Assessment & Evaluation in Higher Education, DOI: 10.1080/02602938.2016.1226759.Yu, S., & Lee, I. (2015). Understanding EFL students’ participation in group peer feedback of L2 writing: A case
study from an activity theory perspective. Language Teaching Research, 19 (5), 572-593.
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THANK YOU
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