Progression from preliminary
Charles Skoulding
Progression
• My images have improved massively.– Ths shot type is completely different and I have
used a different style of person.
– The looks on the man in the preliminary magazine’s face is jolly, in comparison with my final piece.
– I have used posture and facial expressions to connote a specific genre of my magazine.
– I have also used photoshop to touch up the final magazine to make it look more professional.
Progression
• I have looked at conventions more in my final piece, including many more headlines and an ordered layout.
• Also the use of differing fonts is more conventional and makes the magazine altogether look more professional.
• I have also appealed to route of the eye for my magazine final piece. This allows it to stand out more than the preliminary magazine.
Progression
• My masthead has improved dramatically –using fonts and colours that I collected audience research information on.
• I have also used a separate font for my cover story and my masthead as well as using different fonts to stand out for my coverlines.
• The more cluttered layout has improved the magazine in general, making it look conventional and professional.
Progression
• I have also included features such as a date, issue number and barcode in my final piece. These are crucial to a magazine and these were not included in my preliminary task.
• The mode of address in my final task has also massively improved. I have used a more aggressive and indie style, opening it up to more readers adding striking coverlines and images. The coverlines on my first draft preliminary were basic and lacking in anything.
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