Progression from preliminary

Charles Skoulding

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Progression

• My images have improved massively.– Ths shot type is completely different and I have

used a different style of person.

– The looks on the man in the preliminary magazine’s face is jolly, in comparison with my final piece.

– I have used posture and facial expressions to connote a specific genre of my magazine.

– I have also used photoshop to touch up the final magazine to make it look more professional.

Progression

• I have looked at conventions more in my final piece, including many more headlines and an ordered layout.

• Also the use of differing fonts is more conventional and makes the magazine altogether look more professional.

• I have also appealed to route of the eye for my magazine final piece. This allows it to stand out more than the preliminary magazine.

Progression

• My masthead has improved dramatically –using fonts and colours that I collected audience research information on.

• I have also used a separate font for my cover story and my masthead as well as using different fonts to stand out for my coverlines.

• The more cluttered layout has improved the magazine in general, making it look conventional and professional.

Progression

• I have also included features such as a date, issue number and barcode in my final piece. These are crucial to a magazine and these were not included in my preliminary task.

• The mode of address in my final task has also massively improved. I have used a more aggressive and indie style, opening it up to more readers adding striking coverlines and images. The coverlines on my first draft preliminary were basic and lacking in anything.