First StageThis is my first go with my magazine review, I then went thought it with a purple highlighter and highlighted the changes that need to be changed.

Portative's:1. I find both the images that I have chosen

really representing my Documentary 2. I feel that I have a lot of information on the

about me and my documentary.

Improvements:1. The writing needs to neater and a lot evenly

spaced.2. Need to add a ‘tag line’.3. Magazine Name4. Page Number and Issue Number.

Second StageHere’s my second attempt at my magazine review, I have added in a few of the improvements that need to be done from the 1st one, but I don’t like the Dalmatian font that I have used ( 101 Puppies SW), I am going to go back to the original Dalmatian font which is ‘Dalmatian BT’ because it’s much more child like which is the impression I am trying to show.

I have added in a picture of myself where I am going to write a bit of information about my self, so that the readers know a little bit about me.

Need to leave a space between photo and column

Third Stage

Website needs to be out of the red box.

Lower the T down, to look more like a magazine article capital letter.

Make the name of the Magazine needs to be higher off the page.

Needs to be lower, so that there’s a space between photo and writing.

Forth Stage

Need to change‘tag line’

En-large title

Printer Ran out of Ink

Adds reviews name

Page Number much smaller and further down the page

Fifth Stage

The ONDOC’s website has been made smaller

Has been made smaller, but thinks it needs to go up one more size

Title has been made bigger by a few sizes.

The fifth stage looks very similar to the forth, but there have been a few changes

Sixth Stage

Stage sixth in on the next slide because, I’ve written a lot on the actual page so it needs to be very large so you can see it. I’ve not going to type any information on to the slide because I feel it’s very clear just so long as you view the slide in full view.

Seventh StageMoved upMoved up

Have added in caption

Need to sort the title out a bit more

Have change the ‘tag line’

Added the name of the reviewer

Added a caption here as well.

Need to move the black bar slightly back

Have taken away the disoperation logo’s

Stage Eight

Almost done, just need to touch up a few things, such as needing to add one more star, and changing the name of the reviewer from Poppy M Slater to Nick Maris. Also by just sorting out the capital T, to come down slightly.

Final Magazine Article