A. T. M. Monawer Mahallah: Al-Faruk

Block: B.4.8.b IIUM, Gombak Kuala Lumpur

EPT ESSAY WRITING 2

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Note • This presentation shows only the structure of an essay

based on opinion. In other words, it will guide you how to write a persuasive essay based on your own opinion, not based on any argumentation/ cause and effect/ comparison and contrast.

• Most of the time you will see the question in a persuasive pattern. You may also get the question in an argumentative pattern. In this case, you should choose only one opinion and ignore another one. Focus only on your chosen opinion in your whole essay. While you chose one opinion you are not concerned about another opinion in your essay. So forget the second opinion.

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Structure of the Whole Essay

Essay

Introduction

Body Para A

Body Para B

Conclusion 3

Structure of Introduction

Introduction

General Statement

Thesis Statement

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General Statement

Over the past forty years, television sets have become standard pieces of equipment in most homes, and watching TV has become a regular activity for most families. Children in our culture grow up watching television in the morning, in the afternoon, and often in the evening as well. Although there are many excellent programs for children, it may be a bad influence on them.

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Structure of Thesis Statement

Topic

Indication of Body B

Opinion

Indication of Body A

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Thesis Statement

I strongly believe that television is harmful for children because it shapes their behavior negatively and affects their study

badly.

Opinion Topic

Main idea 1 Main idea 2 7

Another Thesis Statement

Terminally patients should be allowed to die for two main

reasons.

Terminally patients should be allowed to die because the patients have no chance to recovery and medical costs are high.

or

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Complete Introduction

Over the past forty years, television sets have become standard pieces of equipment in most homes, and watching TV has become a regular activity for most families. Children

in our culture grow up watching television in the morning, in the

afternoon, and often in the evening as well. Although there are many excellent programs for children, it may be a bad influence on them. I strongly believe that television is

harmful for children because

it shapes their behavior negatively and affects

their study badly.

General Statement

Thesis statement 9

Structure of Body Para A

Body Para A

Topic sentence

Supporting detail 1

Supporting detail 2

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Topic Sentence

First of all, television shapes children’s behavior in an

adverse way.

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Supporting Detail 1

For example, there are many police stories on television. People are killed with guns, Knives and even cars. Some children might think that these things could happen to them at any time. Therefore they can become frightened.

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Supporting Detail 2

In addition, some youngsters might begin to think that violence is a normal part of life because they see and hurt themselves or their playmates. That is why watching TV is not good for kids.

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Complete Body Para A

First of all, television shapes children’s behavior in an adverse way. For example, there are many police stories on television. People are killed with guns, Knives and even cars. Some children might think that these things could happen to them at any time. Therefore they can become frightened. In addition, some youngsters might begin to think that violence is a normal part of life because they see and hurt themselves or their playmates. That is why watching TV is not good for kids.

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Structure of Body Para B

Body Para B

Topic sentence

Supporting detail 1

Supporting detail 2

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Topic Sentence

Second, television affects children’s study in a harmful way.

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Supporting Detail 1

For instance, if teenagers watch television too many hours each day, they do not practice the skills they need to learn how to read. Thus their reading ability can be damaged.

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Supporting Detail 2

Moreover, if they stay up to watch a late movie, they may fall asleep in class the next day. Consequently, they will not learn their lessons, and they could even fail in school.

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Complete Body Para B

Second, television affects children’s study in a harmful way. For instance, if teenagers watch television too many hours each day, they do not practice the skills they need to learn how to read. Thus their reading ability can be damaged. Moreover, if they stay up to watch a late movie, they may fall asleep in class the next day. Consequently, they will not learn their lessons, and they could even fail in school.

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Structure of Conclusion

Conclusion

Concluding sentence

Final comment

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Concluding Sentence

In conclusion, if children watch too much television or watch the immoral programs, their personalities can be harmed as well as their progress in school can be affected. Hence, television is not good for them.

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Final Comment

Parents should know what programs their children are watching and turn off the TV so that their adolescents will study.

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Complete Conclusion

In conclusion, if children watch too much television or watch the immoral programs, their personalities can be harmed as well as their progress in school can be affected. Hence, television is not good for them. Parents should know what programs their children are watching and turn off the TV so that their adolescents will study.

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Structure of the Whole Essay

Essay

Introduction General statement

Thesis statement

Body Para A

Topic sentence

Supporting detail -1

Supporting detail-2

Body Para B

Topic sentence

Supporting detail-1

Supporting detail-2

Conclusion Concluding sentence

Final Comment 24

Whole Essay Question: Children in our culture grow up watching television. There many excellent programs on television. However, some people think watching television is harmful for children. What is your opinion? Over the past forty years, television sets have become standard pieces of equipment in most homes, and watching TV has become a regular activity for most families. Children in our culture grow up watching television in the morning, in the afternoon, and often in the evening as well. Although there are many excellent programs for children, it may be a bad influence on them. I strongly believe that television is harmful for children because it shapes their behavior negatively and affects their study badly. First of all, television shapes children’s behavior in an adverse way. For example, there are many police stories on television. People are killed with guns, Knives and even cars. Some children might think that these things could happen to them at any time. Therefore they can become frightened. In addition, some youngsters might begin to think that violence is a normal part of life because they see and hurt themselves or their playmates. That is why watching TV is not good for kids. Second, television affects children’s study in a harmful way. For instance, if teenagers watch television too many hours each day, they do not practice the skills they need to learn how to read. Thus their reading ability can be damaged. Moreover, if they stay up to watch a late movie, they may fall asleep in class the next day. Consequently, they will not learn their lessons, and they could even fail in school. In conclusion, if children watch too much television or watch the immoral programs, their personalities can be harmed as well as their progress in school can be affected. Hence, television is not good for them. Parents should know what programs their children are watching and turn off the TV so that their adolescents will study. 25

Functions and how to Achieve Each Part of the Essay

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General Statement and Thesis Statement

• Introduces the general topic of the essay.

• Captures the reader’s interest.

General statement

• Write a complete sentence that contains your opinion, topic, and two main ideas.

• States the specific topic.

• May indicate the pattern of organizing the essay.

• Is normally the last sentence in the introductory paragraph.

Thesis statement

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Funnel Introduction

General Statement

Thesis Statement

Turning from general to specific statement like a funnel wide at the top becomes narrow at the bottom.

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Body Para

• Explain one main idea.

• Explain causes, reasons, types, kinds, qualities, methods, advantages, disadvantages and so on.

Explain

• Include all supporting details.

• Each detail supports only the main idea of Para

Elaborate

• Divide your main topic into two subtopics/ ideas.

• Divide one main idea into sub ideas.

• Explain the ideas with examples, quotations, and evidence.

Keys to elaborate

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Organizing of the Essay Divide your topic into two subtopics, and discuss each subtopic in a separate paragraph.

Write a thesis statement that includes these two subtopics.

Explain and elaborate each subtopic In an individual paragraph.

Use transitions between paragraphs to guide your reader from one subtopic to the next.

Prepare an outline to organize your ideas before you begin to write.

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Topic Sentence

• It states the main idea of the paragraph.

• It names the topic and limits it to one specific area which is called controlling idea.

Functions

• Make one complete sentence containing one subtopic/ main idea of the topic.

• It contains at least one subject and one verb.

• Contains both a topic and a controlling idea.

• It is neither too general or too specific.

• It is usually the first sentence in the paragraph.

How to achieve

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Supporting Details

•These explain or prove the topic sentence.

•These Are specific and factual.

Functions

•It can be examples.

•It can be facts.

•It can be statistics.

•It can be quotations.

How to achieve

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Concluding Sentence

• It signals the end of the paragraph.

• It leaves the reader with the most important ideas to remember.

Functions

• By summarizing the main points of the paragraph.

• By repeating the topic sentence in different words.

How to achieve

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Transition Signals

• Transition signals give a paragraph coherence.

• They guide your reader from one idea to the next.

• They tell your reader when you are giving a similar idea, an opposite idea, an example, a cause, an effect, a solution, a result, or a conclusion and so on.

What are those

• Transition signals can be expression of logical order such as first, finally, and however.

• Phrases such as in conclusion, on the other hand.

• Coordinators such as and, but.

• Adjectives such as another, additional.

• Prepositions such as because of, in spite of.

Characteristics

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Unity and Coherence

• Unity means that a paragraph discusses one and only one main idea from beginning to end.

Unity

• Discussing only one idea in a paragraph.

• Always staying on the topic in your supporting sentences.

How to achieve

• Coherence means to hold together.

• The sentences must hold together.

• The movement from one sentence to another must be logical and smooth.

Coherence

• Repeat key nouns or use consistent pronouns.

• Use transition signals to link ideas.

• Arrange your ideas in logical order.

How to achieve

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Some Extra Clues

Do brainstorm and make an outline before you begin to write. Focus on your thesis statement and topic sentences to be more clear. Edit your writing after you finished writing. Check spelling, word missing, and grammatical errors. Very your vocabulary, and do not try to use the same word. Very your sentence structure, and try to write in different patterns. Use transition signals logically. Use punctuation correctly (. , ; : ‘’ “” ? !).

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Transition Signals Function Transition phrases Others

To add idea In addition, furthermore, moreover, besides, also.

Another, an additional

To contrast On the other hand, in contrast, however, yet, but, nevertheless, still, nonetheless, whereas. while.

Though, although, even though, in spite of, despite.

To maintain order First, second, third, next, last, firstly, finally.

The first, the second, the next, the last, the final.

To give an example For example, for instance. An example of, such as.

To conclude In conclusion, in summary, in a nutshell, in brief.

To show result As a result, as a consequence, hence, so, consequently, therefore, 37

Thank You

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