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PROBLEM STATEMENT & TOPIC SENTENCE (V2)

Mr. Yuhan SatapoG10

25 Nov 2013

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In three weeks, I will design an information poster with 5 pictures taken by me from the internet with large size in English and Thai that shows five tips to stop smoking with START plans for All Thai male adult smokers from ages 15 and above to follow and learn how to save their lives from smoking habit (Sunanta, 2011, para.5) in two months.

A* A B C PASS FAIL01. Logic: Easily understood and logically clear meaning A* A B C PASS FAIL02. Clarity: One complete sentence with no errors A* A B C PASS FAIL03. Difficulty: A topic that can be at college-level A* A B C PASS FAIL04. Specific Output: A clear product for grading A* A B C PASS FAIL05. Viable Output: Doable before deadline A* A B C PASS FAIL06. Beneficiary: Exactly who will benefit from proposal A* A B C PASS FAIL07. Urgency: Beneficiary need is convincingly urgent A* A B C PASS FAIL08. Specific Beneficiary: Beneficiary need is quantified A* A B C PASS FAIL09. Relevance: What beneficiaries must do to meet needs A* A B C PASS FAIL10. Objective Concepts: Measurable verbs and nouns A* A B C PASS FAIL11. Original Input: Use of elements of originality A* A B C PASS FAIL12. Proof (Bonus): Use of authoritative support A* B C PASS FAIL

G10 Mr. Yuhan Satapo #01 Mr. Jaime 25-Nov-13

TOPIC: 5 TIPS TO STOP SMOKING WITH START PLANS75%

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Sunanta. (25 August, 2011). World Tobacco Control Laws for a Smoke – Free Thai Society. Retrieved 24 November, 2013, from Thai Health Promotion Foundation: http://en.thaihealth.or.th

Ventures, H. M. (2013). Social, Sneaky, or Skinny? The 7 Types of Smokers. Retrieved 24 November, 2013, from Health: http://www.health.com

Economics, T. (2013). SMOKING PREVALENCE; MALES (% OF ADULTS) IN THAILAND. Retrieved 24 November, 2013, from Trading Economics: www.tradingeconomics.com

Wikipedia. (14 November, 2013). Maslow's hierarchy of needs. Retrieved 25 November, 2013, from Wikipedia: http://en.wikipedia.org

The links are incorrect. Solution: It is correct that the text only shows the website

address. However, the hyperlink should open to the file that you selected.

In three weeks, I will design an information poster with 7 pictures taken by me from the internet with large size in English about 7 practices of Thai Family Values, Dining and Meeting Etiquettes for all foreign foreigners in AIU to follow and learn how to deal with Thai people (Areva, 2012, para.4) in 2 days before they visit Thailand.

A* A B C PASS FAIL01. Logic: Easily understood and logically clear meaning A* A B C PASS FAIL02. Clarity: One complete sentence with no errors A* A B C PASS FAIL03. Difficulty: A topic that can be at college-level A* A B C PASS FAIL04. Specific Output: A clear product for grading A* A B C PASS FAIL05. Viable Output: Doable before deadline A* A B C PASS FAIL06. Beneficiary: Exactly who will benefit from proposal A* A B C PASS FAIL07. Urgency: Beneficiary need is convincingly urgent A* A B C PASS FAIL08. Specific Beneficiary: Beneficiary need is quantified A* A B C PASS FAIL09. Relevance: What beneficiaries must do to meet needs A* A B C PASS FAIL10. Objective Concepts: Measurable verbs and nouns A* A B C PASS FAIL11. Original Input: Use of elements of originality A* A B C PASS FAIL12. Proof (Bonus): Use of authoritative support A* A B C PASS FAIL

G10 Mr. Yuhan Satapo #02 Mr. Jaime 25-Nov-13

TOPIC: 7 THAI ETIQUETTES FOR FOREIGNERS83%

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Learning-theories.com. (2007). Social Learning Theory (Bandura). Retrieved 23 November, 2013, from Learning-theories.com: www.learning-theories.com

Areva. (19 October, 2012 ). Temptation of Assuming – Thai Culture. Retrieved 25 November, 2013, from Thailand News: www.thailandnewsworth.wordpress.com

AngloINFO. (25 November, 2013). Thai Customs and Etiquette. Retrieved 25 November, 2013, from AngloINFO: http://bangkok.angloinfo.com

The links are incorrect. Solution: It is correct that the text only shows the website

address. However, the hyperlink should open to the file that you selected.

In three weeks, I will design an information poster with 7 pictures taken by me from the internet with large size in English about 7 questions to check sleeping problems for all AIU students to follow and check their sleeping problems (Center, 2013, para.1) in 1 day in case they need help if they have.

A* A B C PASS FAIL01. Logic: Easily understood and logically clear meaning A* A B C PASS FAIL02. Clarity: One complete sentence with no errors A* A B C PASS FAIL03. Difficulty: A topic that can be at college-level A* A B C PASS FAIL04. Specific Output: A clear product for grading A* A B C PASS FAIL05. Viable Output: Doable before deadline A* A B C PASS FAIL06. Beneficiary: Exactly who will benefit from proposal A* A B C PASS FAIL07. Urgency: Beneficiary need is convincingly urgent A* A B C PASS FAIL08. Specific Beneficiary: Beneficiary need is quantified A* A B C PASS FAIL09. Relevance: What beneficiaries must do to meet needs A* A B C PASS FAIL10. Objective Concepts: Measurable verbs and nouns A* A B C PASS FAIL11. Original Input: Use of elements of originality A* A B C PASS FAIL12. Proof (Bonus): Use of authoritative support A* A B C PASS FAIL

G10 Mr. Yuhan Satapo #03 Mr. Jaime 25-Nov-13

TOPIC: 7 QUESTIONS TO CHECK YOUR SLEEPING PROBLEMS

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Center, U. H. (20 November, 2013). Sleep Rocks! ...get more of it! Retrieved 24 November, 2013, from The University Health Center: http://www.uhs.uga.edu/sleep/

SleepPhones. (2007). College Students and Sleep. Retrieved 24 November, 2013, from SleepPhones: www.sleepphones.com

Cherry, K. (2013). Theories of Sleep. Retrieved 25 November, 2013, from About.com: http://psychology.about.com

The links are incorrect. Solution: It is correct that the text only shows the website

address. However, the hyperlink should open to the file that you selected.

I AM LOOKING FORWARD YOUR FEEDBACK.

THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR YOUR TIME AND CONSIDERATION