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Take out your personal narrative

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Take out your personal narrative

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Agenda:• Review of run-ons• Partner practice fixing run-ons• Complete P. 71 “PROOFREAD”• Read your narrative to a partner.

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Partner Practice

Partner A Partner B

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SCENARIO 1

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“#1. Brown bears include the grizzly and the kodiak, the largest brown

bear is the kodiak.”

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Partner A Partner BI think #1 is a

run-on because…

You are correct!

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SCENARIO 2

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Partner A Partner B

I think #1 is correct.

Unfortunately, it’s not. Now that you know it’s a run-on, where do you need

to correct it?

I think the sentence ends

at “kodiak.”You are correct!

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OR

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Partner A Partner BI think #1 is a

run-on because…

You are incorrect. Circle the subject and underline the

verb.

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R . T

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For each sentence…

• I think that #1 is correct/a run-on because…•You are correct/incorrect because…