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...In my ideal world, there aren’t monsters.
...In my ideal world, there is a God which is my priority...
...In my ideal world, there is, yes, the imaginary world...
...In my ideal world, there isn’t beauty greater than love...
...In my ideal world, there are crazy people capable of loving...
...In my ideal world, there isn’t fear...
...In my ideal world, there is love among each other...
...In my ideal world, there are people who wish a good day and greet each other even when it’s sunny...
...In my ideal world, there is happiness!
THE ENDAuthor: Natália Durães Editorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. MouraIllustrator: novoseltsevePublisher: www.storybird.comDate: II Semester - Summer 2014
A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário”
CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia
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