Hello! Today, oh, this is a very beautiful day...

Life is beautiful like the flowers of the field...

This is a story about a girl who loves everything in life...

A girl who has a sweet smile and whose eyes shimmers...

This girl is me, I love doing things in family and going out with my family...

THE ENDAuthor: Mylena Costa Silva

Editorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. MouraIllustrator: ZuzolPublisher: www.storybird.comPeriod: II Semester - Summer 2014

A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário”

CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia

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