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Vox Pop First Edit Improvements

Questions:

1. What did you like about our frst edit

• !uttin" do#n the $oota"e made it seem more ed"y

• %he e&e'ts make it look like a dream

• E&e'tive editin" #ith (ui'k 'uts

• %he 'olours that have been added in are e&e'tive) 'reates a 'learer line

bet#een the dream and the sleepin" shots

• *o# $ast pa'ed it #as) but still "ave a stron" story line

+verall the 'omments #here "ood $o'usin" on the e&e'ts o$ the editin" $rom the

'ut to the (ui'k 'uts. With this ea'h one did have similar opinions ho#ever there

#here a $e# di&eren'es. ,atthe# said that it #as e&e'tive as havin" the shots

'ut do#n made it seem more ed"y and mysterious- #ith this $eedba'k it is "oodas that is #hat #e #ere expe'tin". s #ell as this nni $elt that the editin" #as

"ood be'ause it made it look like a dream #ith the di&erent e&e'ts that #e

in'orporated in the frst edit. ,s /aur said that the editin" #as really e&e'tive

due to the (ui'k 'uts it keeps up a "ood pa'e. lso 0eor"ia like the 'olours and

e&e'ts that have been added onto the frst edit as it sho#s the di&eren'e

bet#een the dream and reality o$ #hen the anta"onist is sleepin". Finally the last

"ood $eedba'k $rom this (uestion #as $orm at #here he said that the editin"

#as "ood as it #as $ast pa'ed #hi'h "ives o& a stron" story line.

2. Was the sound e&e'tive

• 3ounds realisti'

• It #as e&e'tive and raised tension

• %he sound #as "ood as it #ent #ith the edit

• 3ound #as "ood as it 'reated tension

• ,usi' #ent alon" #ith !allum4s heavy $ootsteps

$ter askin" #as the sound e&e'tive #e "ot some $eedba'k on #hat the

audien'e $eels. From this nni $elt that the sound #as realisti' as it #ent #ith the

frst edit. ,oreover ,atthe# said that the sound #as e&e'tive be'ause it raised

the tension o$ the frst edit. Furthermore ,s /aur said that the sound #as "ood

as it #en t #ith the edit- this means that the sound ftted better #ith the a'tions

that #as o''urrin". 3imilar to ,atthe#s opinion on the soundtra'k 0eor"ia $elt

that it #as e&e't as it #as able to 'reate tension in the frst edit there$ore it

sho#s ho# important a sound tra'k is to a thriller openin". Finally the last

opinion #as that the sound #as e&e'tive as it #ent #ith the anta"onists heavy

$ootprints behind the vi'tim.

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5. Where the shots e&e'tive

• 6es) the 'ut up 7s o$ 8ess in di&erent areas

• 9an"e o$ di&erent shots sho#s detail in #hat #as "oin" on

•9eally E&e'tive

• !lose ups o$ the rope and inter'uts o$ the sleepin" anta"onist

• !lose ups and lon" shots are e&e'tive

Firstly 0eor"ia $elt that the shots #here e&e'tive be'ause she $elt that the 'ut up

shots o$ the vi'tim #alkin" throu"h the #oods #as e&e'tive it #as also e&e'tive

as it didn4t dra" on $or too lon" and kept her interested. 3e'ondly at said that

the shots #e had #ere e&e'tive be'ause #e had a ran"e o$ di&erent shots so

that #e #ouldn4t have to repeat them too o$ten as #ell as this it sho#s more

detail to #hat is "oin" on in the frst edit. dditionally ,atthe# thou"ht that the

shots #here really e&e'tive $or the frst edit o$ our thriller openin". s #ell as this

$ee ba'k ,a /aur $elt that the shots #here e&e'tive but the most e&e'tive shots

#here the 'lose ups o$ the rope as #ell as the inter'uts bet#een the sleepin"

anta"onist. Finally nni $elt that there shots #here e&e'tive as there #as a vast

variety $rom 'lose ups to lon" shots and pan shots.

. What 'ould #e improve on our frst edit

• ,ix it up #ith 8ump 'uts

• ,ake the sound tra'k a bit louder or speed it up

• ,ore pa'e #ith the editin"- make them shorter as some o$ the shots

are a bit did distorted

• dd more (ui'k 'uts at the end

From the last (uestion #e asked $or $eedba'k on #hat #e 'ould do to improve

our thriller openin" a$ter #at'hin" our frst edit. With this #e "ot some

'onstru'tive 'riti'ism. at4s opinion #as that #e 'ould mix it up #ith more 8ump

'uts to make it more mysterious and 'on$usin". Whereas nni thou"ht that a

#ay to improve #as to be to make the soundtra'k louder to build the suspense.

lso ,s /aur said that to improve #e 'ould have even shorter as some o$ them

#here distorted #ith this it should "ive the editin" more pa'e. 3imilarly 0eor"iaadded that more (ui'k 'uts near the end to keep the audien'e interested.

What 'ould #e do to improve

With all o$ this $eedba'k #e have several improvements to make- #ith this

$eedba'k #e have learnt that it is important to make sure that the shots are

short so that #e 'an keep the audien'e interested as #ell as this addin" in

di&erent e&e'ts like 8ump 'uts to make it more mysterious. dditionally #e 'ould

make the sound tra'k even loader to build the tension. +verall #e had "ood

$eedba'k #ith the editin" #ith e&e'tive 'olours as #ell as havin" a variety o$

shots there$ore #ill not need to re)flm any more $oota"e. Furthermore #e #ill not

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need to 'han"e the sound as the 'omments su""ested that it #as e&e'tive and

#ent #ith the shots.