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Vox Pop First Edit Improvements
Questions:
1. What did you like about our frst edit
• !uttin" do#n the $oota"e made it seem more ed"y
• %he e&e'ts make it look like a dream
• E&e'tive editin" #ith (ui'k 'uts
• %he 'olours that have been added in are e&e'tive) 'reates a 'learer line
bet#een the dream and the sleepin" shots
• *o# $ast pa'ed it #as) but still "ave a stron" story line
+verall the 'omments #here "ood $o'usin" on the e&e'ts o$ the editin" $rom the
'ut to the (ui'k 'uts. With this ea'h one did have similar opinions ho#ever there
#here a $e# di&eren'es. ,atthe# said that it #as e&e'tive as havin" the shots
'ut do#n made it seem more ed"y and mysterious- #ith this $eedba'k it is "oodas that is #hat #e #ere expe'tin". s #ell as this nni $elt that the editin" #as
"ood be'ause it made it look like a dream #ith the di&erent e&e'ts that #e
in'orporated in the frst edit. ,s /aur said that the editin" #as really e&e'tive
due to the (ui'k 'uts it keeps up a "ood pa'e. lso 0eor"ia like the 'olours and
e&e'ts that have been added onto the frst edit as it sho#s the di&eren'e
bet#een the dream and reality o$ #hen the anta"onist is sleepin". Finally the last
"ood $eedba'k $rom this (uestion #as $orm at #here he said that the editin"
#as "ood as it #as $ast pa'ed #hi'h "ives o& a stron" story line.
2. Was the sound e&e'tive
• 3ounds realisti'
• It #as e&e'tive and raised tension
• %he sound #as "ood as it #ent #ith the edit
• 3ound #as "ood as it 'reated tension
• ,usi' #ent alon" #ith !allum4s heavy $ootsteps
$ter askin" #as the sound e&e'tive #e "ot some $eedba'k on #hat the
audien'e $eels. From this nni $elt that the sound #as realisti' as it #ent #ith the
frst edit. ,oreover ,atthe# said that the sound #as e&e'tive be'ause it raised
the tension o$ the frst edit. Furthermore ,s /aur said that the sound #as "ood
as it #en t #ith the edit- this means that the sound ftted better #ith the a'tions
that #as o''urrin". 3imilar to ,atthe#s opinion on the soundtra'k 0eor"ia $elt
that it #as e&e't as it #as able to 'reate tension in the frst edit there$ore it
sho#s ho# important a sound tra'k is to a thriller openin". Finally the last
opinion #as that the sound #as e&e'tive as it #ent #ith the anta"onists heavy
$ootprints behind the vi'tim.
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5. Where the shots e&e'tive
• 6es) the 'ut up 7s o$ 8ess in di&erent areas
• 9an"e o$ di&erent shots sho#s detail in #hat #as "oin" on
•9eally E&e'tive
• !lose ups o$ the rope and inter'uts o$ the sleepin" anta"onist
• !lose ups and lon" shots are e&e'tive
Firstly 0eor"ia $elt that the shots #here e&e'tive be'ause she $elt that the 'ut up
shots o$ the vi'tim #alkin" throu"h the #oods #as e&e'tive it #as also e&e'tive
as it didn4t dra" on $or too lon" and kept her interested. 3e'ondly at said that
the shots #e had #ere e&e'tive be'ause #e had a ran"e o$ di&erent shots so
that #e #ouldn4t have to repeat them too o$ten as #ell as this it sho#s more
detail to #hat is "oin" on in the frst edit. dditionally ,atthe# thou"ht that the
shots #here really e&e'tive $or the frst edit o$ our thriller openin". s #ell as this
$ee ba'k ,a /aur $elt that the shots #here e&e'tive but the most e&e'tive shots
#here the 'lose ups o$ the rope as #ell as the inter'uts bet#een the sleepin"
anta"onist. Finally nni $elt that there shots #here e&e'tive as there #as a vast
variety $rom 'lose ups to lon" shots and pan shots.
. What 'ould #e improve on our frst edit
• ,ix it up #ith 8ump 'uts
• ,ake the sound tra'k a bit louder or speed it up
• ,ore pa'e #ith the editin"- make them shorter as some o$ the shots
are a bit did distorted
• dd more (ui'k 'uts at the end
From the last (uestion #e asked $or $eedba'k on #hat #e 'ould do to improve
our thriller openin" a$ter #at'hin" our frst edit. With this #e "ot some
'onstru'tive 'riti'ism. at4s opinion #as that #e 'ould mix it up #ith more 8ump
'uts to make it more mysterious and 'on$usin". Whereas nni thou"ht that a
#ay to improve #as to be to make the soundtra'k louder to build the suspense.
lso ,s /aur said that to improve #e 'ould have even shorter as some o$ them
#here distorted #ith this it should "ive the editin" more pa'e. 3imilarly 0eor"iaadded that more (ui'k 'uts near the end to keep the audien'e interested.
What 'ould #e do to improve
With all o$ this $eedba'k #e have several improvements to make- #ith this
$eedba'k #e have learnt that it is important to make sure that the shots are
short so that #e 'an keep the audien'e interested as #ell as this addin" in
di&erent e&e'ts like 8ump 'uts to make it more mysterious. dditionally #e 'ould
make the sound tra'k even loader to build the tension. +verall #e had "ood
$eedba'k #ith the editin" #ith e&e'tive 'olours as #ell as havin" a variety o$
shots there$ore #ill not need to re)flm any more $oota"e. Furthermore #e #ill not
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need to 'han"e the sound as the 'omments su""ested that it #as e&e'tive and
#ent #ith the shots.