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Ian Lurie portent.com @portentint
Ian Lurie
BECAUSE I SAID SO WRITING UNIVERSE-CONQUERING PROPOSALS THAT OPEN DOORS AND MAKE YOU MORE ATTRACTIVE
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(Yes, use .co, not .com)
1: Hand-wavy vision stuff 2: Specific tips
WHY?
BECAUSE I F-----G SAID SO
MOST PROPOSALS ANSWER WHAT? WHATHOW
really? you went there?
COVER
YOU MUST ANSWER WHY?
THEN DO THE LITTLE THINGS
A WARNING I MAKE FUN OF OTHER COMPANIES, BECAUSE ITS GOOD FOR A LAUGH
bask in my guru-ness.
Guided by relentless focus on our five imperatives, we will constantly strive to implement the critical initiatives required to achieve our vision. In doing this, we will deliver operational excellence in every corner of the Company and meet or exceed our commitments to the many constituencies we serve. All of our long-term strategies and short-term actions will be molded by a set of core values that are shared by each and every associate.
Guided by relentless focus on our five imperatives, we will constantly strive to implement the critical initiatives required to achieve our vision. In doing this, we will deliver operational excellence in every corner of the Company and meet or exceed our commitments to the many constituencies we serve. All of our long-term strategies and short-term actions will be molded by a set of core values that are shared by each and every associate.
Guided by relentless focus on our five imperatives, we will constantly strive to implement the critical initiatives required to achieve our vision. In doing this, we will deliver operational excellence in every corner of the Company and meet or exceed our commitments to the many constituencies we serve. All of our long-term strategies and short-term actions will be molded by a set of core values that are shared by each and every associate.
To be Americas best run, most profitable automotive retailer.
To be Americas best run, most profitable automotive retailer. To be Americas best run, most profitable automotive retailer.
To help all people live healthy lives.
GETTING THE WHY YOU FIGURE OUT YOUR RAISIN DETRE RAISON DTRE YOUR WHY
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WE ARE IN BUSINESS BECAUSE WE BELIEVE THAT _______________________________
IF YOU _______________________ THEN WERE YOUR AGENCY.
I AM IN BUSINESS BECAUSE I BELIEVE SOMETIMES THE DOCTOR JUST HAS TO KICK SOME ASS.
Photo from Wikipedia
Photo from Wikipedia
IF YOU LIKE TO SEE A SKINNY NERD CRUSH ENTIRE ALIEN CIVILIZATIONS USING ONLY HIS BRAIN, ALL WHILE WEARING A BOW TIE, THEN HAVE WE GOT A SHOW FOR YOU.
WE ARE A FULL-SERVICE DIGITAL AGENCY PROVIDING PPC, SEO, ANALYTICS, SOCIAL MEDIA, COPYWRITING, ONLINE PR AND STRATEGIC CONSULTING.
WE ARE IN BUSINESS BECAUSE WE BELIEVE THAT GREAT MARKETING CAN SAVE THE WORLD BY CONNECTING PEOPLE TO WHAT MATTERS.
IF YOU THINK WHAT YOU DO MATTERS, AND WANT TO WORK WITH FOLKS WHO KNOW THAT MEANS IT ALL MATTERS, THEN WERE YOUR AGENCY.
WHY = VALUE
IMPUTED VALUE I STEAL IDEAS FROM STEVE JOBS, BECAUSE HEY, WHY NOT.
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HOW WHY HOW WHY ||
LITTLE THINGS ADD UP
TOOLS I USE
RESEARCH I LIKE
LOOK EM IN THE EYE
YOU & US & WE
OUR CLIENTS THINK WHAT THEY DO MATTERS, AND WANT TO WORK WITH FOLKS WHO KNOW THAT MEANS IT ALL MATTERS.
IF YOU THINK WHAT YOU DO MATTERS, AND WANT TO WORK WITH FOLKS WHO KNOW THAT MEANS IT ALL MATTERS, THEN WERE YOUR AGENCY.
HAVE A PERSONALITY
GET TO THE POINT
A MAJORITY OF CLEARLY IN ORDER TO INDEED BECAUSE OF
MOST TO BECAUSE
ACTIVE VOICE SHOULD BE USED WHENEVER POSSIBLE.
USE ACTIVE VOICE WHENEVER POSSIBLE.
ILLUSTRATE
DONT ASSAULT THE CLIENT
Hi were jamming all of this onto one page because we know that if we stop you may go somewhere else. Ever go to one of those parties and meet someone with no sense of personal space who keeps talking and talking and talking no matter what you do and you cant get rid of them or even get a word in edgewise? Thats how you feel reading this, too, I bet. But thats OK! Because youre still reading! Youre still here! Yay! That must mean things are going well. Youre going to hire us right? Right? Cause were so awesome?! Nice. Hey, want to go fishing? I can tell well be pals in no time. I had a pal once who was a
Hi were jamming all of this onto one page because we know that if we stop you may go somewhere else. Ever go to one of those parties and meet someone with no sense of personal space who keeps talking and talking and talking no matter what you do and you cant get rid of them or even get a word in edgewise? Thats how you feel reading this, too, I bet. But thats OK! Because youre still reading! Youre still here! Yay! That must mean things are going well. Youre going to hire us right? Right? Cause were so awesome?! Nice. Hey, want to go fishing? I can tell well be pals in no time. I had a pal once who was a
Hi were jamming all of this onto one page because we know that if we stop you may go somewhere else. Ever go to one of those parties and meet someone with no sense of personal space who keeps talking and talking and talking no matter what you do and you cant get rid of them or even get a word in edgewise? Thats how you feel reading this, too, I bet. But thats OK! Because youre still reading! Youre still here! Yay! That must mean things are going well. Youre going to hire us right? Right? Cause were so awesome?! Nice. Hey, want to go fishing? I can tell
AVOID STOCK PHOTO ABUSE
THEY ARE SO AWESOME!!!
WE LOVE OUR CLIENTS THIS MUCH
USE DATA SPARINGLY (AND WELL)
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CLEAN TYPOGRAPHY
BE CONSISTENT
USE PDF
THE WRAPUP I ATTEMPT TO TIE THIS ALL TOGETHER WITHOUT SPRAINING MY BRAIN
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KNOW THE WHY
BUILD IMPUTED VALUE
WHY || HOW
COMMENCE HECKLING
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