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Unit 1 Question: To What Extent Does our Health Depend on Technology? Area of Interaction (AOI): Health and Social Education

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Unit 1 Question:To What Extent Does our

Health Depend on Technology?

Area of Interaction (AOI):Health and Social

EducationSignificant Concept:

Our health is only as good as our health service

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“Complete your introduction to the Unit. Use the slides on the previous PowerPoint that list the information you need to know to give you ideas of what to write about. This work needs to be finished for homework, for this time next week.”

This will have to be my first task; the deadline for it is Friday the 27th of September.

Introduction:

In this first unit of the year, I will have to research on some of the modern technologies which are being used in our days. These technologies will not simply have to be the ones we use for pleasure. Instead, they have to be related to our health. In fact the unit question I will have to focalize on is: “To What Extent does our Health Depend on Technology?” I find this a very interesting question because it can be analyzed under different perspectives. For example when I look at this question, the first thing that pops into my mind is the technologies used to cure heart malfunctioning problems. I already know one basic technology that I could research on because of personal experience. Furthermore, I know that I will have some problems while researching and investigating because some of the equipment that I am going to be investigating on could be difficult to use in my final animation.

Most of them are going to be very complex pieces of equipment, and I will have to discover in more detail what they are. My final product for this first unit of the year will be an animated video of my own production. This animation will have to based on my unit question (To what extent does our health depend on technology?). I have some clear ideas on what I will have to do in order to achieve the highest grade as possible. In fact, I want to keep working hard so that I can get a 7 A like last year. In order to have the highest mark as possible I know that I have to work very hard, maybe even harder than last year; I will have to gather a lot of different information that will help me produce the final product and also I will have to reflect on every decision I make. I was asking myself: what will my animation have to have? And what should I include in it? These types of question will help me create a clearer idea on how to design my final product. I do not think that I should think about my product in this introduction section, but instead, I will have a more detailed analysis on it in my research that will come immediately after this first task. A question that I should have answered now is: What do I want to achieve during this unit?

1. I want to understand how to use different programs on the computer,

2. One of my aims is to understand how much health can depend on technology,

3. Lastly, I want to research on how much we depend on technology now,

4. Also, how it can be so essential to us under so many aspects.

To end my introduction I have to talk about the Area of Interaction (AOI). This unit is seen under the “Health and Social Education” point of view. I think it is obvious of why, the whole final product is based on the new technologies related to our health. Furthermore, during my entire research I will have to state how the technologies will help my community and me. I already know that they bring a lot of new advantages to old machines that were used in the past. People are now healthier because of all the inventions that can help doctors to cure the people who need specific and extremely delicate cures. The research question will guide me through my research and investigation. I want to look at the social experiences of people who have had technologies implanted in their bodies to help them live better. I will have two interviews to specific people I know, this will give me an idea on what it is like now compared to what it was like before these new technologies even existed. This is how it relates both to me and to the society that surrounds me.

Deciding on my guiding question:

1. What are some of the advantages/benefits of the technology I am basing my product on? √

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2. What exactly do I have to create as a final product? √

3. What software will I need to use in order to complete my tasks? √

4. What do I need to do in order to create a high standard product?

5. Where will I get my information from? Which sources will I use? √

6. How can I make my product effective? How will it be interesting for the reader?

7. What is my aim for this unit of work? √

8. What is my specific audience? Who am I aiming for? √

9. Why do I have to create a video or an animation? √

My new task consists in answering my research questions, which are all of the ones listed above. In order to do this I will have to start and complete some stages of my research process. I will use different web sites and mainly focus my research on what technologies I will include in my video or animation. For now, I think I will research more on the pacemaker, I find this very interesting because I already have an idea for my product. Because I am starting a new project I have to think about who my target audience is going to be. I want to aim the product at young teenagers from Grade 7 to 9. This will affect how my product will be because I will have to have specific elements that the audience will be interested in. For more information on this, check the document below, which is called the “Design Specification.” I have thought about it a lot and I think I have decided to make an animation using the same software we have used last year which is called: “Macromedia Dreamweaver.” I want to use this specific program because it will be easier to know all the functions that I will now be able to use. This is all thanks to last year’s unit based specifically on learning how to use the functions available. My animation will have multiple slides showing a heart beating. From this heart there will be a little “door” which will be opened by something that looks like a pacemaker. This technology will then talk directly to the audience. I think it’s going to be very original and interesting for the person who looks.

Considering my research, the main advantages, and benefits, of the pacemaker are these:

1. By regulating the heart’s rhythm, a pacemaker can often eliminate the symptoms of bradycardia.2. This means individuals often have more energy and less shortness of breath. However, a

pacemaker is not a cure. It will not prevent or stop heart disease, nor will it prevent heart attacks.

The two benefits above are the main one’s I have found, and are the one’s I want to base my product on. The message of my animation will be: How can technology improve our health.

A very interesting website I found was: http://www.healthcentral.com/encyclopedia/408/289.html?ic=506048

In order to conclude my specific research on pacemaker’s here is a definition I found that gave me a very good idea of what it was:

“Since their introduction in the 1960s, pacemakers have steadily shrunk in size and grown in sophistication, yet their basic function remains the same. The job of the pacemaker is to maintain a safe heart rate by delivering to the pumping chambers

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appropriately timed electrical impulses that replace the heart's normal rhythmic pulses.

The device designed to perform this life-sustaining role consists of a power source the size of a silver dollar (containing the battery), and control circuits, wires or "leads" that connect the power source to the chambers of the heart. The leads are placed in contact with the right atrium or the right ventricle, or both. They allow the pacemaker to sense and stimulate in various combinations, depending on where the pacing is required.”

As I already did, most of my general information will be gotten from the internet, this is because I think there are more sites which explain information in a simple way more than books. Even because, web sites display information in a more organized way. This would mean that I could find my information, the one I am interested in, in a shorter period of time. Furthermore I also want to include an interview with my grandfather which has had a surgery operation in order to install a pacemaker. I want to ask him about what it was like, if he felt any differences and also what has changed in the pacemaker’s that they used in his times and the one’s they use now days.

The last two guiding questions I will have to answer should be part of my specification. Right now, I will briefly explain five of the main points. Below, you will find a restricted answer to the question: “How will my product be interesting enough for my target audience”:

1. The colors must be light and attractive for young people. I will have to use colors such as: light blue, light red, and probably pink and grey. Something I have to pay attention to is the contrast between the colors. I want to attract the reader but if he’s finding hard to read what the animation says, he will get bored and my animation will not be a success at all.

2. I will also have to think about my use of language. Because it regards medical specific terminology, I have to make sure it is not too complicated for children to understand. If there is the case that I really have to insert a specific term I need to remember to also include the definition near to it.

In order to answer my guiding questions and to produce my research I have used the following sources:

1. Websites (Such as: http://www.thepad.pm/2013/08/simplified-how-pacemaker-is-implanted.html )

2. Leaflet on pacemakers (Found in a hospital in Monza)

3. Videos on the internet (Such as: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SMXBR_YFocs )

4. Books on pacemakers

5. Experts point of view

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In order to achieve the highest grade as possible, I will have to make sure that I complete every task that is asked in the two photos above. As you can see from the text in the above pages, I have answered to the questions and tried to modify them by writing what was needed in my own words. Following what I needed to do and what the actual unit asked to do. I am now ready to start on my Design brief part. Mr.Mariani has given the class a precise deadline where we will have to hand everything in. It’s on the 4 th

of November, and I think it’s not going to be a problem at all because I will have a lot of time in order to finish and check everything done so far. For now I’m only missing:

1. Design Brief,2. Design Specification,3. Test plan,4. Evaluation of performance so far.

Design Brief

In this part of my project I will have to state five different things, as you can clearly see from the list below:

1. Why have I decided to do this particular animation? √2. What am I going to do? (Explained in a lot of detail of course) √3. What am I going to need to do in order to succeed in this unit? √4. What information will I have to gather? (Will I have to do any interviews? Etc.) √5. Where am I going to do the work? (Only at school? Homework?) √6. Who will help me during this unit? Who will guide me throughout the work? √7. When will I have to hand in my final piece of work? (Do I have any deadlines) √

I will have to answer these questions and analyze my thoughts critically in order to understand whether I will have to do further research, whether I have to produce any further information (like interviews and tables etc.). For example, I want to start by saying that I have decided to do this particular animation because I thought of my target audience. Because it is going to be composed mainly by young teenagers, the animation will have to be creative and very simple. I will also have to add some color that will make different parts of it stand out more; by doing this I want to grab their attention and make them interested in what I am saying. I am going to produce an animated video. It will have various different slides. The main protagonist of my animation will be a heart; this is because I’m focusing on a technology that improves the heart’s health. In order to succeed I will have to organize my work much better than last year. By this I mean that I will have to have clear ideas on when my deadlines are, so this would give me enough time to prepare all of the work which is requested and hand it in on time. This will not only help me get a better grade, but it will also improve my organizing skills.I want to write an interview and ask my grandfather to answer some questions. I chose him because he has had a pacemaker installed. I want to ask him his feelings at the moment, and also if he ever got to see what it actually looked like. I don’t only want to know about his feelings and emotions, but also the more technical parts. As an example, I thought about asking him: “What was the main difference you felt before and after the operation? Did you feel your health increase, or was it like before?” In order to achieve the highest grade as possible, I want to create another piece of material which I can then use to

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amplify my knowing. I want to design a questionnaire on the different opinions that people have on technologies that help our health. I will ask whether they think it’s useful or not, whether they know someone who has got a heart surgery etc.

I am going to have a vast amount of time in order to finish my project. I will not only work in school time, but I will have to do a big part of the work for homework too. For example, I know already, that I will have to do the interviews and questionnaires in my own time, after school. The biggest deadlines I have for now are that, on the 11th of November I will have to upload on my blog the document. The only thing I have to remember is that, in order to have a well organized and clear blog, the different parts of this document will have to be separated. I will have to separate for example the design brief in a document and the design specification on another separate document. This will make everything neater and Mr.Mariani will be able to look and find my work in a much easier way, and also in less time. We still have a lot of time in order to conclude the whole project. I also need to start my animation, but it will be in the last few weeks we have.

Look at a blog which could help me throughout the project: http://g11unit1.blogspot.it/

Design Specification:

In order to know which of the elements I will have to include (or the one’s I cannot include) I have designed three lists which will indicate the various limits, demands and my personal wishes regarding the final product.

Limits:

1. My product must not be too long2. My product must not have too many different colors3. My product must not be difficult to understand for the audience4. The product must not be too quick or the audience won’t understand what is happening5. The story my product is based on must not be too complicated to follow easily6. My product must not be full of information on every slide

Demands:

1. It has to be eye-catching2. It has to have an interesting plot line3. It has to educate the audience and inform them on my technologie04. It has to be colorful5. It has to have interesting information6. All of the information must be laid out carefully on different slides7. It must all be organized and planed in advance8. The product must have information in which the audience is interested in9. Everything must be suitable for the target audience10. The subject of the animation must be standing out more than the other elements11. The colors must not be contrasting with the writing

Wishes:

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1. I wish my product could include some sound effects2. I wish my product could educate even the younger people in the audience3. I wish it would end up being a high standard piece of work4. I wish that some of my interview answers could be implemented in my animation5. I wish that my animation was colorful and well drawn

Test Plan:

Questions: Answer: Improvements & Suggestions:

Is it interesting?

Is it colored?

Is it educational enough?

Is the length appropriate?

Does it look good?

Is it organized well enough?

Is it original?

Is it appropriate for the audience?

Are the slides clear and neat?

Is the language easy to understand?

In the first column you can see ten questions which I will make at least five people answer. They will obviously be regarding the animation I have been designing. The second column will be used from the audience to answer the questions. And the final will be used always by the audience if they have some additional comments, such as suggestions on how to improve the animation etc. I will also use the test table on myself in order to auto evaluate under a critical point of view the final product. Before I actually come to use my test table I will have to evaluate the sources and this is my next step. This test plan is particularly efficient because it is clear and easy to understand. I will have to ask somebody for their opinion and then fill in the columns. I think I did a good job planning it out because afterwards this test table will be particularly useful in order to understand whether I have to add something or modify some aspects of my animation. I will use it different occasions in the future, for example I will need it while I’m designing my final product. This is because I think it will be easier to design and do it if I know the major elements that must be inserted in it. For example, I need to remember to make it colorful by using different colors and shades etc.

Evaluation of Storyboards:

Design Number 1:

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Questions: Answer: Improvements & Suggestions:

Is it interesting? Yes

Is it colored? No Could have added different shades instead of using two unique colors

Is it educational enough? Kind of It includes just a certain range of information

Is the length appropriate? Yes

Does it look good? Yes

Is it organized well enough? Yes

Is it original? No Could have improved presentation

Is it appropriate for the audience? Yes

Are the slides clear and neat? No Could have improved layout of text

Is the language easy to understand?

Yes

Design Number 2:

Questions: Answer: Improvements & Suggestions:

Is it interesting? No Could have improved colors used

Is it colored? Yes

Is it educational enough? Yes

Is the length appropriate? Yes

Does it look good? No Could have improved color of text and layout

Is it organized well enough? Yes

Is it original? No Could have improved plot and story line

Is it appropriate for the audience? No

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Are the slides clear and neat? Yes

Is the language easy to understand?

Not always

Design Number 3:

Questions: Answer: Improvements & Suggestions:

Is it interesting? No

Is it colored? Yes

Is it educational enough? Yes

Is the length appropriate? Yes

Does it look good? No

Is it organized well enough? No

Is it original? No

Is it appropriate for the audience? No

Are the slides clear and neat? No

Is the language easy to understand?

No

Design Number 4:

Questions: Answer: Improvements & Suggestions:

Is it interesting? Yes

Is it colored? Yes

Is it educational enough? Yes

Is the length appropriate? Yes

Does it look good? Yes

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Is it organized well enough? Yes

Is it original? Yes

Is it appropriate for the audience? Yes

Are the slides clear and neat? Yes

Is the language easy to understand?

Yes

I chose to evaluate my designs with my test plan because at the end I will have a clear idea on which is the best one and which I want to use as my final design to follow in order to create my final product. I will then have to write which elements I want to change or keep the same so I can have a clear and well organized plan out of what exactly mi need to do. Of my planning stage I think I could have improved the part where I did my Gantt chart. The Gantt chart I have produced was good overall but because I think that the process is also very important I need to be evaluating even the process of how I made it and what difficulties I encountered while creating it.

The main problem I found with my designs was that most of them were based on ideas which were not very original. I think this is a problem because if I carry out a storyboard which has the same story line (The same plot) as another person or more than one person in my same class then our products will obviously be very similar. I do not think of this as being a small part of what makes the product interesting. Having original ideas means that no one else has the same story lines as you do. This also brings the audience to be more interested because it is something they have never seen before. How boring is it when we have to watch advertisement on the television? It’s boring after a while because we have the same constant ideas that what they are saying is all the same. I don’t know if this relates to me only but I always get the feeling that they’re saying exactly the same thing. The advertisements that catch our attention the most are the one’s that are different from the others. They are the one’s that say something new, something you didn’t know before. And this links perfectly with my animation. In order to decide which one I wanted to use at the end I grouped the designs into two groups.

The first and third designs made the first group and the second and last (The fourth design) came into the second group. I did this because it felt that all of my designs had some good Ideas I could have then used but none of them (A part from one only) had exactly what I think I am looking for. The first group of designs is both designs I did not chose, this decision was brought because of two main reasons. The first one being that the plot was too simple for my audience. By too simple I mean that probably my target audience would be very bored and wouldn’t pay attention to it because they’d find it “stupid”. Also, the plot was a little bit too complicated to make due to the fact that most of the objects required some real skill to draw (For example specific equipment doctor’s used etc.) and I, not being that good in drawing, didn’t want to risk not being able to finish my final product on time. My second design in particular and my third one too had some graphics problems.

The fonts I am now using (Look at the screen shots I posted later on) to create my designs are exactly the opposite one’s I had planed to use in the story boards I had planned. At the end, the major problem was deciding between which of the two story boards in the second group I was going to chose for my final

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designs. The last decision I considered was to look at the symbol behind the plot, I didn’t look at the esthetical part for this stage because the aim I want to focus on is how to transmit something new to the audience and I will only be able to do this by having a good and solid plot line which I will have to develop afterwards in much more detail. You will also be able to see my progress in this sense by the screen shots I will have to take every fifteen minutes of work. The plot which I was always more convinced about is the one of the fourth design. Which is in fact my last design and my first choice. I want to use this design as it is now, the only thing that I want to change is the timing of the different slides. I want to increase some time and make the whole animation last longer. This is because I started to consider my target audience which will want to read less, but still they want to understand what they are reading. I also want o work on the fonts and creating the different objects. This is a skill that I really need to work hard on so that I can improve it for future assignments.

Evaluation:

In order to understand how my process went till now I will have to concentrate on doing a complete evaluation of my work in this stage. When I looked at Mr.Mariani’s blog I found some of the questions that will help me write a full critical evaluation that will help me understand what I can do better the next time I will have to do the same type of work. The questions which are listed below are particularly interesting because of the fact that they also help me reflect and think in a more critical manner.

Is there anything you struggled with in this section? Is there anything which you could have added more detail to? Is there anything which you missed out? How did you perform in writing the Design Brief and Specification? Are the testing ideas sufficient? Did you do enough research? Did you use at least 4 different sources? How could you improve your performance for the next project?

In this section of work I found myself particularly struggling with the design stage where we had to design four separate and different designs for our final animation. OF course, it is not obligatory to chose only one of them and stick to it until the end. It has happened in fact that I have designed two of them that I particularly liked, this would bring me in trying to combine them together and pick out the elements that were particularly interesting for some reasons. This, in some cases, meant that the final design was better than the two originals. In all cases, most of the time, I find myself wanting to change some of the elements in a design but instead still keeping other ones. I was saying that I found it particularly difficult this time because the first design I drew was the one which I prefer. This brought me to concentrate on that for the majority of the time. This meant that I didn’t really think a lot about the other three. When it came to designing them I didn’t have many ideas and so, I had to take some time to think and brainstorm some new ideas. In the first design I have added a lot of detail and I think I could have put more details on the other three. Even though I must say that they are detailed enough, but not like the first one. I do not think I missed out on anything. This is because I continuously check on Mr.Mariani’s blog if I have to do something and when the deadlines are. This makes me aware of what he is expecting from me and I understand whether I am working at the right standards or if I have to improve on something in particular. The stages which I found the less difficult ones are in fact the Design Brief one and the Design Specification one too. This is because I think they are rather simple, also because I am becoming very used in writing them (Also from last year’s units). The testing ideas are sufficient and the criteria’s are

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well though of. The only element I would modify is the superficiality of the questions. To improve, for next time, I will try and make the questions less superficial and maybe even more specific. I did use at least for sources, in fact I used five (Without counting Mr.Mariani’s blog that could be a sixth one). To improve the only thing I would suggest is to improve my test table. This is because I think I could have added more specific questions regarding specific elements on my animation. For example I could have included questions on the titles, on the fonts, on the drawings and on the timing of the slides. I want to continue working as I did till now because I think that my effort will be seen and appreciated. My effort was overall good and I always tried to pay attention during class. Further more my organization skills have improved a lot from last year. I think this because now I understand that I have to work at school and both at home in order to balance everything. When I come back to school I will have to start evaluating the designs I have created in the previous lessons.

Test Plan: Creating the Gantt Chart

As you can see above I have created a Gantt chart that displays exactly how much time it will take me to do the various different stages. The next step is to now design and create a complete table where I will record my process. This Gantt chart has helped me develop loads of different skills. An example would be: Organizational skills. This is because I have understood the importance of having a timetable that you can refer to while working. This Gantt Chart has also improved my skills with technology and using new and different programs on the computer. I think that during the creation stage of this Gantt chart I have put a lot of effort and I always tried to understand how to make it as efficient as possible. So that it could then be used by me in the future. I could also apply this knowledge in other subjects, that would mean that I am not only using and developing new skills during the computer technology classes, but also during other classes. Later on in my process journal you will find an evaluation of my planning stage where I also refer to this particular stage of creation. I have listed all of the positive and negative points regarding my work project. I have also talked about what I could do better in the future, what I already

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improved from last year and also what I think that I could have developed or improved in any ways. I have also listed some aspects that tell the reader what I have learned during this very important stage. On the next page you will be able to find my complete step by step plan!

Step by Step Plan: Creating my Schedule

Date Task Duration Equipment Needed20th November Brainstorm Main

Ideas30 Minutes Paper and pen!

22nd November Write down the aim of my animation

20 Minutes Paper and pen or write it electronically in my process journal

23rd November Plan how many slides I will have and how long each one of them will last

1 Hour Paper and pen!

24th November Start designing the first five slides

1 Hour Paper and pen or write it electronically in my process journal

25th November Include Sound Effects

30 Minutes Program used to create animations (Flash Animations)

28th November Start designing the other five slides left

1 Hour Program used to create animations (Flash Animations)

29th November Finnish designing slides

1 Hour Program used to create animations (Flash Animations)

30th November Modify any problem in animation

1 Hour Program used to create animations (Flash Animations)

1st December Ask for suggestions and improvements to class mates

20 Minutes Write everything in process journal

3rd December Improve and repair anything that doesn’t work properly

40 Minutes Program used to create animations (Flash Animations)

5th December Test against Test Plan and evaluate animation critically

1 Hour Write everything in process journal

The main problem I had while designing this test table was that I still don’t know exactly which dates have to be inserted. I think I remember that Mr.Mariani’s PowerPoint included dates from the 22 nd of November to some day in December (maybe the sixth?). I have really struggled in lesson time because I really wanted to work on my product. I didn’t ask him on time and as soon as I can I will change the blank spaces into the correct dates. I think that overall this table is effective because the different things I

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have to do are gradual. With this I mean that every step is building up the product. I have reflected a lot on it and tried to make it as useful as I could so that I could use not only the Gantt chart but I also had this to help me organize in a better way. By doing all of this work I am building and increasing my level of skills every time. By the end of the year I hope to have achieved more organization skills and I hope to become more inquirer. In the sense of always trying harder and more to understand things and to know more about different topics. I want my animation to make other people be interested in this topic. I want it to make others be more inquirer’s. I don’t want my audience to get bored, I want them to be attracted and interested in what is being said in the animation. This is in fact one of my biggest aims for this project.

Process Journal: Taking Screenshots and starting to create my animation!

1 – In this first lesson I starting to create my product. As you can see in these first screen shots they are very different from the following one’s. I was using a program for flash animations.

2 – I was trying to make the timing for the first slide right. I wanted to make sure that the audience had the sufficient time to read all of the information on the different slides.

3 – In this screen shot you can see that I was using www.Google.com in order to find a picture of a heart. I had planned to take a picture and place on the first slide. Then trace the outline of it and trash the image away. I wanted to resemble a cartoon heart.

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4 – I was starting to doubt on the effectiveness of my product. This is because the program I was using previously was very difficult to use. The drawings never came out decent or how I wanted them I researched different software’s that I could have used.

5 – I found www.goanimate.com this is an extremelly good website because it is very simple and clear to udnerstand. Therer are thousands of characters which are already made that can then be modified in order to meet your preferences.

6 – As you can see i wanted to give the animation a fun side too. I had decided that because one of my specifications, which I had also included in my test table, was to create a colourful and creative animation, I included colours and images.

7 – At the end of the first lessons i found that because this website was so easy and clear that my product was nearly finished. I really wanted to show Mr.Mariani to see what he thought about it. He seemed very pleased with my work and I hoped he enjoyed it as much as I did.

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8 – I was trying to make the animation more intense and rich of details. For example before this slide was just plain without any effects. Afterwards I tried including monitors and other objects. I was also trying to gather some sound effects of a heart beating.

9 – I had found some really nice sound effects. For example in the first scene there is an effect going through the whole slide of a heart pumping. I had to convert the youtube song using a website and then import it into this website. So I could then use it rapidly and easily.

10 – I had to start thinking about my conclusion. I wanted a creative and funny way to end my animation. The obvious idea was this. A “Thanks For Watching” slide. After that, because I still had ten seconds I could use. I wanted to come up with some other surprise element.

11 – I started to think a lot about the “surprise element” and at the end, after many consultations and brainstorms I decided to have other two slides. Something funny and a joke-type to finish and wrap up my animation. I had no more time to create other slides because the maximum was thirty seconds. I hope I can show my class and my teacher what I have done. This is because it shows a clear development of my skills and abilities and I am proud of the effort I put into this work.

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Final Evaluation

Questions: Answer: Improvements & Suggestions:

Is it interesting? Yes Thanks to the sounds I have inserted and images

Is it colored? Yes Thanks to the variations of shades

Is it educational enough? No Could have inserted more information

Is the length appropriate? No Could have lasted longer

Does it look good? Yes Interesting and creative

Is it organized well enough? Yes Has a clear and logical sense

Is it original? Yes Not obvious and very fun

Is it appropriate for the audience? Yes Appropriate for my target audience

Are the slides clear and neat? Yes They are all easy to understand

Is the language easy to understand?

Yes No complicate language has been used

In case you are interested in viewing my product here is the direct link to it (I have also uploaded it on GoogleDrive): http://goanimate.com/videos/0E73y94Md6d0? utm_source=linkshare&utm_medium=linkshare&utm_campaign=usercontent In order to evaluate my final product I will have to assess it based on my test table. In addition I will also have to carry out two tests in order to have a better view on what impact it has on the audience. I have designed a questionnaire and an interview which I will later display. Now I want to talk about the test I have just performed. The table clearly shows that most of my specifications have been met. The only two major problems I had were regarding the timing of my animation and the amount of educational information that I have decided to include. The timing section has been particularly complicated even because the site only allowed me to have a thirty seconds animation and no longer than that. I think that the individual timing for each slide was correct in the sense that the length was appropriate. The audience had the right time to read what was written and understand better. For the educational part, this product turned out to be much more an advertisement more than a campaign to transmit a particular message or information. I think this form is still appropriate this is because the task consisted in trying to understand to what extent our health

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depends on technology. With my animation advertisement I tried to experiment new skills and new techniques also because of the fact that by using a new website that I had never used before meant that I had to activate myself in trying to understand how exactly it worked and how I could use all of the tools as efficiently as possible. From my questionnaire and my interview I hope I will be able to understand whether my product was effective or not. I am also very interested in understanding what exactly the person is going to say.

Here is my complete interview. I have asked these questions to my grandfather. This is because he has had the operation done himself so it is interesting to understand what he is going to think about my advertisement:

Interviewer: Hello and good morning. I am here to ask you some questions on pacemakers. Will you be so kind to answer them for me?Guest: Hello, of course I will. What exactly do I have to do though?Interviewer: I will shortly show you an advertisement (I did not tell him that it was of my production so the tests are not biased) and all you will have to do is answer some questions afterwards.*Shows Animation*Interviewer: Very well, first of all. What is the advertisement about?Guest: Obviously about pacemakers.Interviewer: So you thought that the meaning and the intention of the advertisement were very clear right?Guest: Yes, indeed.Interviewer: Perfect, let’s proceed to the next question then will we. What did you like the most and why?Guest: I really enjoyed the sound effects that were consistent throughout some of the scenes. I liked the fact that they weren’t too much. It was the right amount, very balanced I would say. I also liked how the doctor figure was moving. That gave motion and creativeness to the whole animation. It was fun to watch!Interviewer: I’m glad you enjoyed it. I will also have to ask you though: What did you like the least and why exactly?Guest: It was rather fast, and a little bit too short. It was very good and I hoped it would have lasted for a longer period of time. I think it would have been something that the creator could have worked on. Also, I don’t know if it was necessary or not, but maybe there could have been more facts and information included. But overall I really think it was effective.Interviewer: Who do you think this product is aimed for? What target audience?Guest: I would recommend this animation to an audience between ten and thirteen. A maximum of fourteen or nearly fifteen. Not older though, it would risk to be found stupid or not interesting enough for them. Interviewer: Thank you very much for your patience and your time. You can go now.Guest: Thank you! Bye.

From this interview I have understood how much time is important while designing an animation. In my evaluation I have already said that the program would not allow me to exceed thirty seconds. An idea I had come up with was to create two or more distinct and different animations and then when having to show them I would play one after the other in a sequence type of movement. At the end I decided not to do this because I thought that maybe having a shorter animation would have meant that the audience could have been more interested for a longer period of time. Without loosing their focus on what was happening. I also think that from this interview I have understood that my overall product is a success because it is clear and it transmits humor to the audience. Something I should keep in mind for the next time, if I will have to create an animation for something else, that both the comic and the educational sides have to be balanced. Otherwise the audience will not understand what the purpose that you wanted

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to achieve was. And it may result that your product isn’t that successful afterwards. On the next page you will be able to find the questionnaire. Under that there will be a final evaluation paragraph. My Questionnaire:

I thought that having a questionnaire was too similar to an interview. For this reason I thought about ways to present my information in a more original and clear way. After collecting my questionnaire data I have designed a graph (Which on the side has a screen shot of how I made it) which sums up my collection of data. It clearly states how the majority of people thought that the animation was excellent. It also shows that my animation at the end was a success because no one thought it was insufficient. This is a very positive thing because it means that I have succeeded in my initial goal. I really wanted to connect with my audience and let them understand how important technology is for us now days. In conclusion I would only like to say two last things. Firstly, my product is obviously not 100% perfect. I could never make something as perfect as that. I must admit that I am very proud of how I have worked throughout the various stages of this unit. I always worked hard, both in class and at home. Designing this animation was a lot of fun and I hope that my teacher will enjoy watching it as much as I do. I have found many difficulties in this unit but thanks to the help of my teacher’s blog I always understood exactly what to do because all of the information was always clearly presented on the blog.

Secondly and lastly, I want to say that I really hope that with this project I will inspire people. I hope that they will see it as being something fun and creative. Also interesting and educative. I hope that they will understand how by inquiring in these units I have understood so much more than I thought about or lives. In this unit in fact, I have understood clearly how our lives are changing so quickly and why. I have understood the importance that new technologies can have on our lives and how they can save us from different diseases. Furthermore, because I have inquired on the pacemaker, something that my grandfather has, I have understood how thanks to humans different technologies have been able to transform and evolve and also develop throughout the course of many years. I hope that they will not stop here and that with time passing by scientists and doctors will finally be able to find new cures by inventing and using new technological apparatuses.