Timeline - Unit G324
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Timeline Order of events Verbal/non-verbal/ technical codes Screen fades from black to (Girl 1) walking down road looking vulnerable (Girl 1) walks past alley where there are two men looking suspicious (Boy 1) hands (boy 2) a small package which he puts in his pocket (Girl 1) is still walking and sees round corner (girl 2) and a boy having a fight/argument (Boy 1) says to (boy 2) “Keep this between us” (Girl 2) says to boy “I hate you, just get out of my life!” (Girl 1) looks away and continues to walk down the street One man gets jumped by another man and they fight and come across the path of (Girl 1) so she has to step back. There is an exchange of dialogue between the men: “You thought you could get away did you?” (Girl 1) gasps and continues walking down the street looking worried and afraid (Girl 1) walks to the end of road into a woodland and stops as she realises she is lost A hand comes from behind over her mouth before the screen goes black. There is then a shot of (Girl 1)’s feet elevated off the ground like she has be hanged. The screen fades black once more and the ‘Hanging Hill Lane’ title comes on the screen. Screen fades from black to tracking shot of girl 1’s footsteps then a head-on medium shot of girl that reveals vulnerability and facial expression. Non diegetic ST on. Low angle medium shot of the two boys with a close up of their hands and the package. Low key lighting. Over the shoulder shot off girl 1 walking. Camera pans round corner (from girl 1’s POV) to see the argument side on. Camera comes back to close up shot of girls facial expression as she looks away and keeps walking. From Girl 1’s POV she sees the two men come out from the side and then there is a side on eye level shot as she steps back and gasps. Camera continues to track Girl 1’s walking down the street. There is a high angle close up shot as she looks up at the woodland ahead. The camera is then positioned behind at a high angle as she starts to walk into the woodland. The lighting changes from high key to low key. High angle shot of Girl 1 stood in forest as if lost. Cuts to eye line match of girl 1’s face as the hand comes over. Then a low angle low key lighting shot from behind as you see the girls feet.
Transcript of Timeline - Unit G324
TimelineOrder of events Verbal/non-verbal/technical codes
Screen fades from black to (Girl 1) walking down road looking vulnerable(Girl 1) walks past alley where there are two men looking suspicious (Boy 1) hands (boy 2) a small package which he puts in his pocket
(Girl 1) is still walking and sees round corner (girl 2) and a boy having a fight/argument
(Boy 1) says to (boy 2) “Keep this between us”
(Girl 2) says to boy “I hate you, just get out of my life!”(Girl 1) looks away and continues to walk down the street One man gets jumped by another man and they fight and come across the path of (Girl 1) so she has to step back. There is an exchange of dialogue between the men: “You thought you could get away did you?”(Girl 1) gasps and continues walking down the street looking worried and afraid(Girl 1) walks to the end of road into a woodland and stops as she realises she is lostA hand comes from behind over her mouth before the screen goes black.There is then a shot of (Girl 1)’s feet elevated off the ground like she has be hanged. The screen fades black once more and the ‘Hanging Hill Lane’ title comes on the screen.
Screen fades from black to tracking shot of girl 1’s footsteps then a head-on medium shot of girl that reveals vulnerability and facial expression. Non diegetic ST on.
Low angle medium shot of the two boys with a close up of their hands and the package. Low key lighting.
Over the shoulder shot off girl 1 walking. Camera pans round corner (from girl 1’s POV) to see the argument side on.
Camera comes back to close up shot of girls facial expression as she looks away and keeps walking. From Girl 1’s POV she sees the two men come out from the side and then there is a side on eye level shot as she steps back and gasps.
Camera continues to track Girl 1’s walking down the street. There is a high angle close up shot as she looks up at the woodland ahead. The camera is then positioned behind at a high angle as she starts to walk into the woodland. The lighting changes from high key to low key.
High angle shot of Girl 1 stood in forest as if lost. Cuts to eye line match of girl 1’s face as the hand comes over. Then a low angle low key lighting shot from behind as you see the girls feet.
Additional Notes (for group purpose):• The events that unfold while the girl walks
down the lane are in slow motion with the dialogue being added in over the top with some kind of sound effect like an echo for dramatic effect. This is because the soundtrack will make up most of the sound and the dialogue should be quick and punchy.
• The idea is that it should be as if the girl isn’t actually there and the events are just unfolding in font of her.
• All of the clips of the events that happen should be fairly fast paced while the shots of the girl walking should start off slow and get quicker as the soundtrack builds up.
