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Teaching and Learning Forum # 4 Academic
Monday 14 May
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Approaches to Teaching and Learning
Building a Culture of Examining and Reflecting on Pedagogy
• National Professional Teaching Standards - AITSL• Observation and Feedback – McKinsey Report and Grattan Institute
Research by Ben Jensen• TRIADS – action learning model - Professor Helen Timperley• Ladder of Feedback tool – Daniel Wilson - Project Zero• Instructional (Observation) Rounds – Professor Richard Elmore
(Harvard GSE Project Zero)• Research based instructional practices – Core readings • Evidence-based practices – John Hattie • Student Voice Surveys – Tripod Model (Harvard GSE Project Zero)
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Project Zero: Approaches to Teaching and Learning
• Making Thinking Visible – David Perkins & Ron Ritchhart
• Teaching for Understanding – David Perkins• Cultures of Thinking – Ron Ritchhart• Lifeworthy Learning – David Perkins• Concept-based Curriculum – Teaching and Learning –
Dr. Lynn Erickson• Developing a Growth Mindset – Carole Dweck
Approaches to Teaching and Learning
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General• Differentiation for students with learning needs• Developing Student Agency and Self Regulation• Teaching EAL students in the mainstream classroom• Teaching for Cultural Awareness and Sensitivity• Indigenous Cultural Awareness• Data and Developmental progressions – Geoff
Masters, Patrick Griffin, • Mindfulness
Approaches to Teaching and Learning
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Developing student agencyself-regulation and effective collaborative learning; the importance of persistence and diligence
Concept based teaching and learning focused on facilitating deep understanding that requires students to think
Developing a growth mindset
Academic Priorities
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Why these two priorities?
My personal observations and observations of colleagues• passive learners. • an expectation, often even a demand that the teacher will give them a “formula” for
success.• they panic when assessment tasks are given without sufficient warning• a reluctance to contribute to substantive discussions• a reluctance to think • a fear of failure• a focus on grades rather than the learning • little interest in “learning and understanding” – high interest in how much a task is worth
and whether it will be recorded on schoolbox.• lack of resilience in the face of challenge and high levels of anxiety around assessments• reliance on spoon feeding by teacher as they get older and the stakes go up.• lack of skill in collaborative learning
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Bringing the various strategies together
• Use range data and pre-testing of prior knowledge to identify levels of student skills, knowledge, understanding and learning needs
• Address student learning needs while promoting the development of student thinking and understanding
• Identify approaches to learning and key practices that will support and develop student knowledge, skill development and conceptual understanding
• Select and implement specific teaching and learning strategies that promote high quality learning and engagement– Collaboration, Thinking Routines, Direct Instruction, Vocabulary development, Implementing a range of feedback strategies, Questioning,
• Reflect on and measure impact of intervention strategies on student learning
So what did I do?
Using my understanding of the
8 Cultural Forces and the
Quality Teaching Framework my goal was to build a classroom
where
thinking, understanding, rich and deep learning, effective collaboration,
substantive discussion and
student agency are expected every day
and become
the new normal.
Multiple connections between 8 Cultural Forces, Quality Teaching Framework and Academic Priorities
NSW Quality Teaching Framework:
8 Cultural Forces
Link with my teaching strategies: Understand that my role is to do more than deliver the curriculum. My role is to build student capacity to think, learn and understand.
Opportunities For purposeful engagement with thinking and understanding as part of their ongoing experience of the classroom and in every lessonFor acknowledging prior and existing knowledge as starting points Building on prior and existing knowledge to deeper levels of understanding
Language Use the language of thinking and understanding: concepts, growth, perseverance, making connections, reasoning with evidence, building explanations, noticing and observing closely, generalizing and drawing conclusions, wondering and questioning, reaching for complexity.
Expectations Provide clear expectations that all students are required to engage, think and learn deeply, both independently and collaboratively. Reinforce the value of thinking and understanding over completion of task and gradesMake sure this is reflected in all learning tasks and in all classes
Time Make and provide time for thinking, discussion and structured collaboration. Allow time for exploring ideas in depth.
Modeling Model my own thinking wherever possible. Reinforce student thinking.Model expectations of student outcomes in every lesson. Use student work samples wherever possible to model expected outcomes. Model how I expect students to interact with one another by how I interact with and question students.
Environment In every lesson create an environment conducive to focused learning for every student – collaborative and independent. Create this through structures, displays, desks and student groupings. Create an environment where thinking is promoted as integral to the learning and growth of every student.
Interactions Personal, respectful…to build relationships. Continue to show students through my interactions that each student’s personal learning is important to me. Constantly draw out student thinking and understanding through the embedded use of the thinking routine “What makes you say that…?” requiring students to justify and explain their thinking through providing reasons and evidence. Interactions between all members of the class must show respect for and valuing of one another’s ideas and thinking.
Routines Lesson starting routines: welcome every student to every class and taking a genuine interest in their worldProvide visuals of thinking routines and display these around the class. Engage students in routines that scaffold thinking and uncover deeper levels of complexity over time.
I made the decision that in order to increase student agency and self-regulation I would need to make
the learning in the classroom more student centered without compromising rigour.
In order to develop student understanding I would need to teach for understanding
By focusing on lifeworthy learning and conceptual ideas that relate to the real world I hoped to engage the students
By shaping the learning around concepts and leading students to deep understanding of concepts I would need to draw out student thinking by embedding a range of visible thinking routines into the learning.
I would use student responses to these thinking routines formatively so that I could determine the learning needs for each student, and provide feedback in a timely manner – differentiate authentically.
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Reinforce the importance of thinking and understanding over scores
• Use of variety of formative learning tasks• Embed peer and self assessment and feedback strategies• Expectations around contributing to class thinking forum• Protocols for student engagement on social stream and
class discussion – Listening and respect• Collaborative Learning - with and from each other• Proactive use of visible thinking routines as formative
feedback NOT “one off” activities that are completed an then never used or referred to again
Displayed in the classroom for students to see
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Social stream as a collaborative platform for making student thinking visible
Focus on developing Conceptual Understanding – “big ideas” that go to the heart of the learning
Use of questions and thinking routines to draw out prior knowledge and push thinking.
Reflecting: What did I notice?How will this inform my practice and the choices I make?
Feedback: Student voice surveys
Approaches
I began the year by asking my students to respond to the question:
What is understanding?
“Understanding is wisdom. It is very different from knowledge, which is memorising facts.
Understanding something isn't about knowing all the minutiae, but the overarching concepts and ideas. Someone who
understands something is able to analyse, to form an opinion, and make connections. For example, if someone is trying to
understand the vikings, they wouldn't memorise all the dates of raids, and numbers of boats, they would learn about the cultural
values, and the motivations to raid other countries.”
What is Understanding?
“Understanding is the ability to define the key concepts and ideas of something. It means you can draw connections from things that
you've previously learnt and know, therefore giving yourself a better picture of what you are trying to understand. It is being able to form in depth conclusions that are brief, yet able to host a large
number of developed ideas. When one truly understands something they are able to give detailed accounts of the topic and can teach others their knowledge. Being able to understand is the
ability know without thought, having a subconscious knowledge of something in large complexity allowing you to explore the idea into
even more complexity.”
What is Understanding?
“Understanding something is basically one step further than knowing something. It involves much more knowledge of your topic and more experience in what there is in each aspect of whatever it
is you have an understanding of. To understand something you need to dedicate time, effort and patience. It is not something that
will happen overnight. You need to invest time into your topic to perfect your understanding of the topic or activity that you wish to improve upon. Effort is required as without it you will struggle to achieve the desired understanding of whatever it is you are trying
to get better at. Someone doesn't become a professional sportsman with out putting in the time or the effort that it takes to understand what sport they are involved in. One of the best ways to understand
something is to demonstrate your knowledge to others who are interested in the same thing. This can be by teaching it or even
having a casual chat about it with some friends.”
What is Understanding?
“Understanding is not the same as knowledge. You need to able to explain, describe or show how you comprehend your understanding. Understanding something is about knowing
how something operates, what it is and being able to replicate it yourself. Understanding is making connections between different things. Understanding is looking at your knowledge and looking at it in different perspectives. For
example, when we first learnt shells and electronic configurations in chemistry I didn't understand why electrons
go in particular shells after 20 electrons. I now know and made the connection from 1/2 chemistry and understand that
shells fill up in a certain order of subshells now.”
What is Understanding?
“Understanding something is closer to knowing how and why something is, as opposed to knowing that something is. If you know that the mitochondria is the powerhouse of the cell, that doesn't matter if
you don't know what a cell is, or what a mitochondria is, or why a cell needs a powerhouse,
or what a powerhouse is or what a cell does, or how a mitochondria works more specifically.”
What is Understanding?
“Understanding is being able to make mistakes and learn from them. To really understand something you should be able to
analyse and organise your thoughts. To appreciate, understand and question the different perspectives, understanding is to
know something or to do and action second nature.”
What is Understanding?
Responding to each other on social stream:
Goal: Respectful engagement Strategy: respectful engagement protocol established at
the start of the year
Class Protocol Introduced: Respond, Read, Select, Respond
Respond to questionRead other comments
Select a comment that challenges/pushes your own thinkingRespond respectfully
Understanding is "one step beyond knowing". It is being able to do something almost sub-consciously, and knowing almost everything about a certain thing. To
develop understanding, you must first be introduced to a certain thing, and then you must either practise, study, or experience that thing or topic over and over again, until you can formulate your own ideas and explain them effectively to someone else. To understand something you have to actually experience it, such as riding a bike. You can read as many books about bicycle riding as you want, but unless you actually go out and ride the bike, you won't truly understand how to ride a bike.
The bike example is very true. There was an experiment where someone reversed the direction of the bike. Turning the handle left will make the bike turn right and
turning the handle is right will make the bike go left. Furthermore, everyone knows how to ride the bike and has the knowledge that reversing their thinking will make
them ride the bike. However, this isn't enough because you don't understand or haven't practised the motion.
Responding to each other on social stream:
Responding to each other on social stream:
“Understanding is not necessarily just knowledge. Knowledge is generally what you have been told whereas understanding is a deeper knowledge. Understanding how to do something is not needing assistance in order to partake in the activity. When
someone understands something it can become a second nature and become automatic. Understanding is the next level after knowledge. It is the ability to apply
knowledge For example I know how to play scales on the trumpet, it has now become a second nature to me, at first I had to think about every little thing but
now I don't even need to think.”
“I agree with what you are saying about understanding being beyond and deeper then knowledge, but I think that understanding doesn't necessarily
mean that you do not need assistance to do something. I believe this because you always have something to learn and you may understand an aspect of what you are learning but you can only understand so much on your own. Sometimes you need other people to help push you further and nudge you
outside of your comfort zone”
1. Understanding is not necessarily just knowledge. Knowledge is generally what you have been told whereas understanding is a deeper knowledge. Understanding how to do something is not needing assistance in order to partake in the activity. When someone understands something it can become a second nature and become automatic. Understanding is the next level after knowledge. It is the ability to apply knowledge For example I know how to play scales on the trumpet, it has now become a second nature to me, at first I had to think about every little thing but now I don't even need to think.
2. I agree with what you are saying about understanding being beyond and deeper then knowledge, but I think that understanding doesn't necessarily mean that you do not need assistance to do something. I believe this because you always have something to learn and you may understand an aspect of what you are learning but you can only understand so much on your own. Sometimes you need other people to help push you further and nudge you outside of your comfort zone
3. I agree with understanding not just being knowledge. My example was that someone could have read how to ride a bike but still not know how to and therefore need a deeper understanding. I think this relates to your statement too.
4. I would add that understanding would also involve being able to teach the thing, at some basic level. As an understanding of something would be required to explain it to someone with no pre-existing frame of reference.
Responding to each other on social stream:
I introduced students to the Understanding Map to extend their thinking
Broad concepts about reading and literature
Making Thinking Visible
Thinking Routines used formatively to inform me about where the students are at in their learning and what my next steps might be to
develop deeper understanding.
Thinking Routines Matrix from the upcoming book Making Thinking Visible by Ritchhart, Morrison & Church (Spring 2011)
Routine Key Thinking Moves Notes
Routines for INTRODUCING & EXPLORING IDEAS See-Think-Wonder Description, Interpretation & Wondering Good with ambiguous or complex visual stimuli Zoom In Description, Inference, & Interpretation Variation of STW involving using only portions of an image Think-Puzzle-Explore Activating prior knowledge, wondering,
planning Good at the beginning of a unit to direct personal or group inquiry and uncover current understandings as well as misconceptions
Chalk Talk Uncovers prior knowledge and ideas, questioning
Open-ended discussion on paper. Ensures all voices are heard, gives thinking time.
321 Bridge Activates prior knowledge, questioning, distilling, & connection making through metaphors
Works well when students have prior knowledge but instruction will move it in a new direction. Can be done over extended time like the course of a unit.
Compass Points Decision making and planning, uncovers personal reactions
Solicits the group’s ideas and reactions to a proposal, plan or possible decision.
Explanation Game Observing details and building explanations Variations of STW that focuses on identifying parts and explaining them in order to build up an understanding of the whole from its parts and their purposes
Routines for SYNTHESIZING & ORGANIZING IDEAS Headlines Summarizing, Capturing the heart Quick summaries of the big ideas or what stands out CSI: Color, Symbol, Image Capturing the heart through metaphors Non-verbal routine that forces visual connections Generate-Sort-Connect-Elaborate: Concept Maps
Uncovering and organizing prior knowledge to identify connections
Highlights the thinking steps of making an effective concept map that both organizes and reveals one’s thinking
Connect-Extend-Challenge Connection making, identify new ideas, raising questions
Key synthesis moves for dealing with new information in whatever form it might be presented: books, lecture, movie, etc.
The 4 C’s Connection making, identifying key concept, raising questions, and considering implications
A text-based routine that helps identifies key points of complex text for discussion. Demands a rich text or book.
Micro Lab A protocol for focused discussion Can be combined with other routines and used to prompt reflection and discussion
I used to think Reflection and metacognition Used to help learners reflect on how their thinking has shifted and changed over time.
Routines for DIGGING DEEPER INTO IDEAS What makes you say that? Reasoning with evidence A question that teachers can weave into discussion to push students to give
evidence for their assertions. Circle Viewpoints Perspective taking Identification of perspectives around an issue or problem. Step Inside Perspective taking Stepping into a position and talking or writing from that perspective to gain a
deeper understanding of it. Red Light, Yellow Light Monitoring, identification of bias, raising
questions Used to identify possible errors in reasoning, over reaching by authors, or areas that need to be questioned.
Claim Support Question Identifying generalizations and theories, reasoning with evidence, counter arguments
Can be used with text or as a basic structure for mathematical and scientific thinking.
Tug of War Perspective taking, reasoning, identifying complexities
Identifying and building both sides of an argument or tension/dilemma
Word-Phrase-Sentence Summarizing and distilling Text-based protocol aimed at eliciting what a reader found important or worthwhile. Used with discussion to look at themes and implications.
Thinking Routines Used with Year 10s
Routines for Introducing and Exploring IdeasThink Puzzle ExploreChalk Talk/Flat ChatExplanation Game
Routines for synthesizing and Organising IdeasHeadlines
Generate Sort Connect Elaborate: Concept MapsConnect Extend Challenge
I used to think…Now I think…
Routines for Digging Deeper and Exploring ComplexityWhat makes you say that?
Step insideClaim Support QuestionWord Phrase Sentence
Routines for notetaking+1
Routines for engaging in building on each other’s ideas respectfullyRRSR
our social stream responding protocol
DRAWING OUT STUDENT PRIOR KNOWLEDGE, INITIAL THOUGHTS AND UNDERSTANDINGS ABOUT MACBETH
Think Puzzle Explore: Draws out prior knowledge and understanding
1. Think: What do you think you already know or understand about Shakespeare's, Macbeth?2. Puzzle: What lingering questions or puzzles do you have about the play's ideas, characters, language and plot?3. Explore: What else do you believe you need to know, learn to do or understand better in order to deepen your understanding of the play and its ideas?
After thinking about each of these questions, post your detailed responses here.
UsingThink Puzzle Explore
Student Response
I think I know the main themes of Macbeth.
The main themes of Macbeth are greed and ambition, and how it can lead to unspeakable evil, and then the demise of the character."absolute power corrupts absolutely" -
I am bit puzzled about the role of the witches
I would like to explore further if Shakespeare designed the witches' prophecy to be self -fulfilling or to be the personification of Macbeth's desires, or just a device to kick the plot into action, or playing the role of the spoiler like the chorus at the start of Romeo and Juliet.
For instance, does Shakespeare propose the prophecy as something that may have happened without the interference of Macbeth?
"Step Inside" Thinking Routine to develop understanding of character in Macbeth
1. Read through the scene or section of scene that you have been allocated.2. Discuss with your partner/s the context of this scene - in terms of action and character development.3. Discuss the characters involved in your scene?4. For each character, choose a key moment in the scene and discuss the following questions:
a) What can the character perceive?b) What does the character know about or believe?c) What does the character care about?
5. Post your responses here.
1. "I have lived long enough. My way of lifeIs fall'n into the sere, the yellow leaf,And that which should accompany old age,As honor, love, obedience, troops of friends,I must not look to have, but, in their stead,Curses, not loud but deep, mouth-honor, breathWhich the poor heart would fain deny and dare not."
2. “She should have died hereafter.There would have been a time for such a word.Tomorrow, and tomorrow, and tomorrow,Creeps in this petty pace from day to dayTo the last syllable of recorded time,And all our yesterdays have lighted foolsThe way to dusty death. Out, out, brief candle!Life’s but a walking shadow, a poor playerThat struts and frets his hour upon the stageAnd then is heard no more. It is a taleTold by an idiot, full of sound and fury,Signifying nothing."
What insights into M’s mind do we gain from the following 2 soliloquys?
How does M describe his life and why does he see it in this way?
Asking rich questions on social stream
In what ways might Macbeth's life be considered a tragedy?
To what extent do Macbeth and Lady Macbeth demonstrate awareness - prior to the act of killing Duncan - of the consequences of murder? Does this make a difference to how we view each character?
To what extent does the play, Macbeth, explore the tension between the impulse to transgress and the need for moral boundaries? Any takers?
To what extent does Shakespeare's play, Macbeth, explore the human soul's capacity to
cope with guilt and evil?
Questions used to prompt student thinking
Moving to a study of Animal Farm.
Continuing to challenge the existing “passive” culture of classroom learning
and to reshape the culture of the classroom
into a dynamic learning environment
where students are actively engaged and thinking
in every lesson
Focus on conceptual ideas to frame student learning
What are some of the broad concepts at the heart of the study of a text?1. Writers use language in a variety of ways to explore and comment on ideas that transcend time and
place2. Writers use language to challenge or reinforce thinking patterns, beliefs, ideologies and systems.3. Writers use language to enlighten and to entertain.4. Writers use a variety of techniques and form to create meaning (reveal aspects of human nature) or
effect (generating an emotional impact on) an audience?
1. Readers read to be entertained 2. Readers read to engage with new ideas3. Readers read to develop a deeper understanding of themselves, the world around them and
their place in that world.4. Readers use their understanding of technique and form to interpret a writer’s message.
What are some of the core concepts at the heart of the study of George Orwell’s Animal Farm?
1. Language, information and knowledge are power2. Power corrupts, absolute power corrupts absolutely3. The corruptibility of human nature4. How good will and sound principles can fall victim to ambition, selfishness and hypocrisy..5. Any society which has leaders with absolute power is ultimately doomed to failure
due to the inevitability of leaders manipulating power for their own personal benefit.
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Steps towards Building Conceptual Understanding
1. Prior to reading the novel, students began by exploring core ideas on the social stream.
2. Students were asked to read the novel over the holidays
3. Students completed a knowledge quiz in first class
4. Students were asked to think about and write down what they each believed Orwell’s central messages were.
The question asked was:
What powerful ideas (that transcend time and place) is Orwell trying to convey to his readers?
Using the Social Stream to Make Student Thinking Visible and Build Collaboration
Engage students in thinking about concepts or big ideas –that live at the center of the learning
Build this as a platform that captures student thinking
Reinforce this as an essential part of student learning and growth where core ideas can be explored and developed
Students to see this as part of the learning culture in the classroom
Reinforce protocols that allow all students to feel safe to express their viewpoints.
Write a paragraph of between 150-200 words in which you explain your understanding of the causes and
consequences of revolution.
Further to the stream of posts on causes and consequences of revolution, write a considered
response to the question, Why do you think revolutions fail?
Drawing Out Thinking about Important Concepts
What powerful ideas (that transcend time and place) is Orwell trying to convey to his readers?
ManipulationGreedInequalityCorruptionToo much power corruptsWrong Leaders are electedRevolutions failImbalance of power and equalityThe pigs have become what they originally set out to destroyHypocrisyThe nature of truthPower corruptsTrust and loyaltyThe pursuit of freedomLeadershipCommunism and DictatorshipIndividual power and greed corrupting good leadershipImbalance of power
Pigs becoming just like menRebellion and revolutionHow communism effects the lives of IndividualsLeadership and powerHow leaders become corrupted and manipulate others for their own greedThe need for rules to create orderPeople blindly following rules without questionSocial hierarchyEagerness and hunger for powerHow people are manipulatedDistribution of power in a societyThe corrupting influence of powerHow power can compromise moralityIdealism is not achievablePower is addictiveHumans themselves cause all good things to come to an endHumans are manipulative, gullible, idealistic, greedy, destructive and power hungry by nature
What did I notice?
How did I respond?
Most students were able to zone in on the key ideas Only some students were able to make clear claims about the writer’s core ideas and messages. A number of students identified statements of fact rather than contestable claims
Looked at ways to assist students in writing effective claims Provided multiple opportunities for students to work collaboratively to develop their claim writing skills
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I summarized the students’ comments into core ideas. Social justiceOppressionPropagandaLeadership
The power of languageIdeology
DeceptionCorruption
Utopia/DystopiaFreedom and individual responsibility
DictatorshipsRebellion/Revolution
Government and LeadershipFalse narratives and the rewriting of history
Rules and order in societyComplacency
Language and truthCommunism
Dictatorships and Tyrannies
Writing Claims
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Students were placed in mixed groups of 3 or 4 Their learning task was to create effective claims for 5 or 6 core ideas.
The students had to cast their claims as clear “statements”
I reinforced the expectation by asking the following questions:
In Animal Farm, what do you believe Orwell is claiming about the power of language?
In Animal Farm, what do you believe Orwell is contending about power?In Animal Farm, what do you believe Orwell is arguing about the
corruptibility of human nature?In Animal Farm, what do you believe Orwell is suggesting about governance
and leadership?
Writing Claims
What follows is a range of examples of claims that students came up with.
Freedom: Orwell is saying the freedom is hard to achieve under an oppressive governmentDictators: Dictators use propaganda in unjust ways.Communism: Communism effects people in negative ways even though they are manipulated into thinking otherwiseUtopia: Orwell suggests that communism is not an example of a utopian world/governmentIdealism: Orwell suggests that creating an ideal world is unrealisticHuman nature: Humans are susceptible to manipulation when they invest in those in powerSocial class: Those in higher social classes feel they have the authority to manipulate the lower social classes
Propaganda: Propaganda is most dangerous when it is used to excuse individual actionsOppression:After a revolution anyone can become an oppressor even if they were once oppressed themselvesThe Power of Language:Words can be interpreted differently depending on what people want to be trueBlind trust:Blind trust can lead to destructionPower and corruption:Orwell claims that power has the ability to corrupt somebody to such an extent that it can change their moralityRules and social order:Orwell suggests that leaders are going to break rules for their own gain.Government and Leadership:Orwell displays that governments and leadership are full of corruption
What did the students do?
In groups, students had to review the claims for accuracy and validity.Students worked collaboratively to re-word claims Students were asked to find alternative words and phrases to Reduce unnecessary repetition of “Orwell shows…”
What did I notice?
Some claims were inaccurate, some were not valid based on the details of the novel .Some students wrote claims that were statements of fact.The phrase “Orwell shows…” was overused – need to introduce students to alternative vocabulary in order to avoid unnecessary repetition
Building a Working Vocabulary
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Claims or Facts: What is the difference?
Some students confused these two repeatedly.We needed to clarify as a class what the difference was between making a claim about the writing or the writer’s purpose that is contestable – an interpretation that can be argued and supported with evidence - and a claim that is merely a statement of fact or opinion.
Expanding Ideas – Flat Chat Thinking RoutineI then looked at strategies I could use to get students thinking about the core concepts in greater depth.I selected the Flat Chat/Chalk Talk thinking routine. This is a routine specifically aimed at drawing out student thinking related to a topic.
We started with the following ideas that the students had chosen:
Power and PowerlessnessGovernance and LeadershipSelf-interestLanguage and PowerEquality and freedomHuman CorruptibilityAnimalism
Many students did not have a broad working vocabulary that would enable them to discuss effectively the conceptual ideas explored in the novelMost students did not dig below the surface and were making only the most obvousconnections
What did I notice?
Developing a working vocabulary
In groups the students had to come up with a vocabulary list that was relevant and important to the novel.
Some groups worked on drawing words from chapters in the novel, others selected words from the introduction to the novel and others still had the job of reading articles about the novel
Together they came up with a list of 153 words.
Generate Sort Connect Elaborate
Student Generated Word List
Learning Task: In groups of 3 or 4 the students were to sort the words into groups in any way that they thought was significant.
Having sorted the words into groups, the students then had to make the connections between the words clear by providing an umbrella heading for each groups of words.
Next I wanted the students to make connections between the “big ideas” and the details of the novel.
In groups of 3 or 4, I asked students to consider a random list of quotations selected from the novel – each group having about 15 -20 quotes.
Students then had to read the quotes, discuss them and then connect the quotations to the most relevant flat chat page.
Making Connections between Ideas and Quotations
Students were asked to think about and discuss in groups the characteristics of an effective paragraph
This is what they came up with
TEEL ModelTopic sentence
Examples and evidence from textExplanations
A linking sentenceStrong language and vocabulary
We developed this further as a class by introducing the ideas of argument and the
language of thinking
Argument ModelClaims
Reasons Evidence
ExplanationsCapturing the Heart.
(Think –Pair –Share)
Criteria 1 2 3 4 5
Opening Claim No claim Claim Relevant claim Clear and relevant claim Powerful and relevant claim
ReasonsExplanations
No reasons or explanations
1 reason and explanation 2 or more reasons and explanations
2 or more relevant reasons and explanations
2 or more relevant and powerful reasons and
explanations
Evidence(Quotes and examples)
No evidence provided 1 piece of evidence 2 or more pieces of evidence
Range of Evidence provided to support reasons
Highly effective range of evidence provided to
support reasons
Link No attempt to link threads back to big idea
Some attempt to link threads
Clear attempt to link threads
Clear attempt to link threads meaningfully
Powerful link that connects threads back to claim
Conceptual and Transitional Vocabulary
Minimal use of conceptual and transitional
vocabulary
Some use of conceptual and transitionalvocabulary
Range of conceptual and transitional
vocabulary
Strong relevant range of conceptual and transitional
vocabulary
Sophisticated and diverse range of conceptual and transitional vocabulary
Fluency and accuracy of expression
Flawed accuracy of expression
Reasonable accuracy expression
Accurate expression Fluent and accurate expression Highly fluent and accurate expression
An assessment rubric for a paragraph was co-created from this whichthe students would use to assess each others’ paragraphs
and provide constructive feedback
Students to write group paragraphs on ONE
of the Concepts
“big ideas”already explored
They had only 30 minutes to do this.
Students encouraged to use the resources from around the room to assist them
Students discussing and clarifying claims
Students discussing and co-constructing group paragraphs – need for reasons and evidence
Students discussing claims and using text to check for relevant quotations
Students were then required to use the paragraph rubric
which we had co-constructedto assess a group paragraph
and to provide constructive feedback
that would move the group’s paragraph forward.
What did students notice in the paragraphs of their peers?
• Lack of depth in explanations• Lack of variety of vocabulary• Limited use of evidence from the text – examples and quotations• Repetition of ideas rather than development and complexity• Need to make more meaningful connections between ideas and evidence
What strategies can assist students to expand their ideas and develop complexity?
Introduce Concept Maps as a strategy to flesh out big ideas even further
Thinking Routine: Generate, Sort, Connect, Elaborate
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Act withoutthinking orquestioning
Followblindly
Chantslogans
rather thanthinking forthemselves
Donkey
Benjamin
Cynical
Lazy
Intelligent
Hens
Protest andrevolt against
personalinjustice
Eventuallyconfess tocrimes notcommitted
PublicallyExecuted
Raven
Moses
PerpetuateMyths and Lies
Promise of Sugar CandyMountain - Utopia
Paradise
In league with pigs
Tamed by man
DogsBluebell,
Jessie, andPincher
Litter of puppiesTrained by NapoleonSavage
Body Guards andprotectors of Napoleon
Loyal to Napoleon
Types of Leadershipand Governance
Ethical/Fair
Snowball
Seeks fairconditions and a voice for all
Votes
Meetings
Committees
Ideas driven
Boxer
Leads by exampleand hard work
Naive and unintelligent
Physically strongLoyal
Trusted by all
Unethical/Corrupt
Farmer Jones
Authoritarian Exploits the animals
Beats the animalsinto submission
Neglectful
Takes for himself
Napoleon
Trains dogsas guards
UsesSquealer as a
messenger
Abandonsvoting
OrganisesExecutions of those
who oppose
Abandons freespeech andmeetings
Squealer
Mastermanipulator
SpreadsLies
Usespropaganda to
justify N'sdecisions and
actions
Spokespersonfor Napoleon
Liaisesbetween theanimals and
Napoleon
Unethical/CorruptLeadershipBehaviours
Lies
ManipulationSelf-interest
Violence
Develops andMaintains a
Regime of Fear
Executions ofInnocent People
Greed
Making Connections between Core Concepts, Related Concepts and Evidence from the Text
Students were then required to write an individual paragraph on one of a list of unseen topics
Learning Task – students to write an individual paragraph
Students then submitted their paragraphs for me.
I then organised peer assessment groups based on the relative strengths and weaknesses of the student responses
I sorted the papers so that each group was assessing a range of 3 or 4 de-identified paragraphs
They had only 30 minutes to do this.
Identifying areas for student learning and further growth
Learning needs determine group formation
Assessment and Feedback: Using the rubric for Peer and Self Assessment
Peer assessmentThe students worked in groups using the paragraph assessment rubric to assess the papers and provide constructive feedback
Self assessment
Each student had to compare all 3 levels of feedback - peer, self and teacher – and take notice of commonalities, patterns, contradictions and recommendations for improvement
The students sat silently with their own paragraphs and read them from beginning to end. They then had to use the rubric to assess their own piece and identify important areas forimprovement
Teacher Assessment.
Students using rubrics – familiarisation with criteria and translation to action
I vary student groupings depending on the nature of the learning task
I sort the students into different groups depending on their strengths and weaknesses
Students working collaboratively with assessment criteria to provide peer feedback
What was noticed?
• Some over-simplification of ideas• Making connections between related ideas• Need for stronger use of evidence – quotations and examples• Building explanations• Fluency - need for more varied and confident use of transitional
language (connectives
Decision to develop concept map skills further so that students could practice organizing their thinking, making connections between ideas and
evidence, building explanations and reaching for greater levels of complexity
How did I respond?
Co-construction of a Concept Map
Making Connections and Building Explanations
Making Connections and Building Explanations
Finding relevant evidence from the text
Co-construct a rubric for assessing concept maps
Constructing Individual Concept Maps for Assessment
Students could plan on scrap paper before translating to an A3 sheet
Students could bring in nothing but coloured pens and a copy of their novel
Students had no prior knowledge of the concepts with which they could work
Students could use their texts to find relevant evidence - examples and quotations
Students had time to think about how to organize concepts, connections and evidence
Students had assessment criteria visible at all times
Color was used to represent hierarchies of thinking from abstract concepts to concrete evidence
What next?
Prior to the essay assessment task students were required to construct An individual concept map that would be used as an assessment.
We created a rubric that would be used to assess the concept map.
Prior to the essay, student will complete two further online quizzes one testing their recall of details from the novelthe other testing their knowledge of quotations
Using Student Voice surveys to gauge student reactions to classroom approaches
How effectively students transfer the strategies introduced into their preparation for and execution of the essay and exam.
Quality of student written analytical responses