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    Ms. Jasmin Freal RN, MSN Ms. Yolanda T. Canaria,RN ,PhD

    Ms. Grace Antoni RN, MAN

    Title

    Level of Awareness of

    Selected Medical-SurgicalPatients at UPHDMC on

    Informed Consent: Basis for

    Enhancement Program

    Place submitted by

    Add the date (month, year)

    Table of Contents

    Adjust the indentations

    Add to Appendices:

    Letter of Permission Letter to Validator

    Chapter 1

    Introduction

    Relate the quote to the study

    Add informed consent about

    UPHDMC

    Include the patients bill ofrights and the ethical principle

    In the last paragraph, includemotivations in choosing this

    study, based on experiences.

    Title

    Level of Awareness of Selected

    Medical-Surgical Patients atUPHDMC on Informed

    Consent: Basis for

    Enhancement Program

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    Place Nursing Research I andsubmitted by

    Add date

    Table of Contents

    Indentations

    Chapter 1

    Introduction

    Look for statistics aboutmalpractice/incidents due to

    informed consent

    Second paragraph should be in

    the first paragraph

    Another paragraph for thePSDA

    Include Patients Bill of RightsInclude why you have chosen

    this topic, personal experiences

    of the group regarding

    informed consent

    Title

    Level of Awareness of

    Selected Medical-SurgicalPatients at UPHDMC on

    Informed Consent: Basis for

    Enhancement Program

    Change degree to course

    Place Nursing Research I andsubmitted by

    Add date

    Table of Contents

    Adjust the indentations

    Add to Appendices:

    Letter of Permission Letter to Validator

    Chapter 1

    Introduction

    Relate the quote to the study

    First paragraph includes the

    definition of informed

    consent

    Delete the medical

    malpractice issue

    Summar of Correction

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    Review of related literature

    Subtitle of each studies and

    literatures

    Use linking words

    Can place the citation in thelast part

    Delete studies which was not

    related

    Synthesis

    Expound on ethico-moral-

    legal aspect

    Change the title

    Theoretical

    Make a theoretical framework

    Relate to study

    Conceptual Framework

    In the demographic profile add

    religion and educational

    attainment

    Exclude frequency, weighted

    mean and one way ANOVA

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    program to enhancement

    program

    Statement of the problem

    Add educational attainmentand religion in the

    demographic profile

    Review of related literature

    Subtitles

    Citation years should be in

    open-and-close parenthesis

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    to, can place citation in the lastpart

    Synthesis

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    study

    Theoretical

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    and relate to your study

    Conceptual Framework

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    Place feedback

    Put title

    Statement of the problem

    Change general objectiveaccording to the new title.

    Delete perception and diagnosis

    Review of related literature

    Arrange by topic headings

    Delete the first study in the

    local study

    Synthesis

    Change ethical obligations to

    ethico-moral-legal aspect(explain)

    Change the title

    Theoretical

    Make a theoretical paradigm

    Conceptual Framework

    Revise necessary changes

    Place feedback

    Put title

    Statement of the problem

    Exclude perception anddiagnosis

    Change ethical obligations

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    Delete perception and

    diagnosis

    Change ethical obligations and

    terms of legality to ethico-

    moral-legal aspect.

    Change implementation toextent of implementation

    Hypothesis

    Change in terms of ethical

    obligation, perception and

    terms of legality to when they

    are grouped based on

    demographic profile

    Significance

    Include decision making to the

    patients

    Change to the researchers

    Restate to the clinicalinstructors

    Scope and Limitation

    In limitation include special

    areas

    Definition of terms

    Include only:

    Enhancement program Ethico-moral-legal

    aspect Extent of

    implementation

    Informed Consent

    Change ethical obligations andterms of legality to ethico-

    moral-legal aspect.

    Change implementation toextent of implementation

    Hypothesis

    Change in terms of ethical

    obligation, perception and

    terms of legality to when they

    are grouped based on

    demographic profile

    Significance

    Restate to the clinical

    instructors

    Scope and Limitation

    Respondents will include

    guardians of pediatric patient

    Limitations: Patients in ER,

    ICU.

    and terms of legality to

    ethico-moral-legal aspect

    Change implementation to

    extent of implementation

    Add propose enhancement

    program

    Hypothesis

    Change in terms of ethical

    obligation, perception and

    terms of legality to when

    they are grouped based on

    demographic profile

    Significance

    Include decision making to

    the patients

    Change to the researchers

    Restate to the clinical

    instructors

    Scope and Limitation

    Include patients in 3rd

    and 4th

    floor ward, and the

    JONELTA ward

    Definition of terms

    Include only:

    Enhancementprogram

    Ethico-moral-legalaspect

    Extent ofimplementation

    Informed Consent

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    LEVEL OF AWARENESS OF SELECTED MEDICAL

    SURGICAL PATIENTS AT UPHDMC ON INFORMED CONSENT:

    BASIS FOR ENHANCEMENT PROGRAM

    An Undergraduate Thesis Presented to the

    Faculty of College of Nursing

    UNIVERSITY OF PERPETUAL HELP SYSTEM

    Alabang-Zapote Rd, Pamplona, Las Pias City

    In partial fulfillment

    BACHELOR OF SCIENCE IN NURSING

    Nursing Research 1

    Submitted by:

    ANGELES, CATHLEEN JOY

    BALTAR, MICHELLE

    CARREON, MA. ERICKA

    EDNACO, KENNETH JAY

    GARCIA, PATRICK ANGELO

    PALCES, RALPH ANDREW

    RIVERA, ROMALYN

    March, 2013