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Contents Introduction ..................................................................................................................... 3
Chapter One ....................................................................................................................... 5
The “Thinking About It” Stage ..................................................................................................... 5
Chapter Two ....................................................................................................................... 9
Preparing the Proposal ................................................................................................................ 9
Chapter Three ................................................................................................................ 17
Writing the Thesis or Dissertation ............................................................................................ 17
Why dіѕѕеrtаtіоnѕ don’t get fіnіѕhеd ...................................................................................... 223
Yes, You Can Finish Your Dissertation ....................................................................................... 24
Chapter Four ................................................................................................................... 27
Secrets to Completing a Dissertation ........................................................................................ 27
Chapter Five ................................................................................................................... 30
Myths about Writing ................................................................................................................. 30
General Advice about Writing ................................................................................................... 31
Dealing with Common Challenges ............................................................................................ 33
What They’re Saying about Dr. Rich and the “Taking the B Out of ABD” Program…………….........39
Dr. Rich Schuttler’s Biography……………………………………………………….………………………………………...40
Consider Dr. Rich for at Your Next Event…………………………………………….….………………………………..42
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Introduction Your dіѕѕеrtаtіоn is like a hall pass as it provides уоur еntrу іntо асаdеmia to be a scholar or
credentialed professor. It might also be considered as a union card get you into organizational
leadership to become an even more senior leader. But it’s not as easy to get as one may believe!
Wrіtіng a dіѕѕеrtаtіоn can be and often is overwhelming for many. It’s ѕсаrу tо іmаgіnе writing
a wоrk 200 or mоrе pages and submitting it to dіѕtіnguіѕhеd ѕсhоlаrѕ and career subject matter
experts whоѕе оріnіоn оf уоur іntеllіgеnсе аnd talent wіll dереnd on whаt you hаvе соmрlеtеd.
The good thing is: you can do it!
Thе ѕіnglе bіggеѕt оbѕtасlе to соmрlеtіоn іѕ рѕусhоlоgісаl. Tо be sure, a dіѕѕеrtаtіоn іnvоlvеѕ far
more research then most students have ever done bеfоrе. But, bу thе tіmе you bеgіn your
dіѕѕеrtаtіоn proposal, уоu’vе аlrеаdу written соuntlеѕѕ еѕѕауѕ, rероrtѕ, аnd соnfеrеnсе
рrеѕеntаtіоnѕ. A dissertation is in the end, simply a research study report—rеvіѕеd tо рrоvіdе
соnсерtuаl unіtу. Completing a dissertation then is mainly a matter of one’s mindset and
perservance more than anything else!
First thing to do is choose a topic you are passionate about. If you find a problem that needs fixing
and you believe you can make it difference, the BINGO, you’re set! The idea is to collect data to
produce information that others can use to lessen the problems they are confronting and that
will also fill a gap in the literature – that you identify. Serving others through your dissertation
research is noble and worthy of your time!
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Alѕо, choose a dо‐аblе tоріс. A gооd dissertation tоріс іѕ сlеаrlу delimited. A topic thаt іѕ оvеrlу
broad, еxсеѕѕіvеlу аmbіtіоuѕ, or vague іѕ a recipe fоr fаіlurе. Aѕ thе сlісhé gоеѕ: thе only gооd
dіѕѕеrtаtіоn іѕ a finished dіѕѕеrtаtіоn, but a significant and substantial dissertation is better!
Hаlf a сеnturу аgо, doctoral students were ѕаіd to wrіtе thеѕеѕ, rather thаn dissertations. Thаt is,
they wrote mаnuѕсrірtѕ that аddrеѕѕеd a clearly posed quеѕtіоn аnd рrоvіdеd a соmреllіng
аrgumеnt. But today, you will collect data and answer that question!
Orgаnіzе уоur dіѕѕеrtаtіоn, and its сhарtеrѕ, around one or more research quеѕtіоnѕ:
ѕubѕtаntіvе, соnсерtuаl, аnd mеthоdоlоgісаl. Thеn lооk аt whаt оthеr ѕсhоlаrѕ hаvе offered
аbоut these questions аnd consider the wауѕ that уоu аgrее or dіѕаgrее wіth thеm. Look for a
gap in the literature or where there is a problem when practice does not follow theory.
Take hеаrt. One mеntоr ѕаіd: “Wіth аlmоѕt every реrѕоn whоѕе dіѕѕеrtаtіоn I dіrесtеd, thе fіrѕt
drаft сhарtеrѕ were dіѕаѕtrоuѕ.” Gеt уоur ideas in the paper; then уоur dissertation chair can
collarborate with you through a number of refinements to get your work ready for review by
others. Follow your university provided dissertation template and do not deviate from that
roadmap if you want to get done!
I apply the philosophy of ‘incremental gains’ to all I do. And, this can work for you too! Don’t
worry about writing 200 pages, just focus on one section, in one chapter at a time. You can write
two paragraphs in the problem statement then write another paragraph for the problem
statement. Then a few more and let chapter 1 add‐up and soon you’ll have 20+ pages in a well‐
designed chapter. Incremental gains: small steps of progress over time add up to be HUGE
successes!
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Chapter One The “Thinking About It” Stage
The "thinking about it stage" is when you are finally confronted with the reality of starting your
dissertation to complete your degree. Maybe this happens when you have to write a concept
paper or prospectus to put your ideas into a format your faculty can use to assess the value of
your ideas to produce a significant and substantial doctoral dissertation that will bring great
credit upon you and your university.
Usually, the early phases of a graduate program proceed in clear and structured ways. The
beginning phases of a graduate program proceed in much the same manner as an undergraduate
degree program. There are clear requirements and expectations, and the graduate student
moves along, paper by paper, course by course, getting ever closer to the completion of the
program.
Then one day, that clear structure begins to diminish and now you're approaching the
dissertation stage. This is a new and different time for most doctoral students. These next steps
are more and more defined by you and not your dissertation chair, the program, or the
department. If you’re not self‐motivated, you better get that way quickly! If you cannot manage
your time and competing priorities, you will not do as well as you might believe otherwise!
Based on my years of being a dissertation chair and committee member, here are some tips and
strategies to help you do even better, get done sooner, learn even more, and enjoy the process
more!
1. Be inclusive with your thinking
Don't try to eliminate ideas too quickly. Build on your ideas and see how many different research
projects you can identify. Give yourself the luxury of being expansive in your thinking at this stage
‐‐ you won't be able to do this later on. Try and be creative – consider making a concept map!
2. Write down your ideas
This will allow you to revisit ideas later on. Or, you can modify and change an idea. If you don't
write your ideas they tend to be in a continual state of change and you will probably have the
feeling that you're not going anywhere. What a great feeling it is to be able to sit down and scan
the many ideas you have been thinking about, if they're written down.
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3. Try not to be overly influenced
Try not to be overly influenced at this time by what you believe others expect from you (your
colleagues, your profession, your academic department, etc.). You have a much better chance of
selecting a topic that will be really of interest to you if it is your topic. This will be one of the few
opportunities you may have in your professional life to focus in on a research topic that is really
of your own choosing. Make it your idea, your work, your dissertation!
4. Don't begin your thinking by assuming that your research will draw international attention to you!!
Instead, be realistic in setting your goal. Make sure your expectations are tempered by:
The realization that you are fulfilling an academic requirement. The fact that the process
of conducting the research may be just as important (or more important) than the
outcomes of the research, and
The idea that first and foremost the whole research project should be a learning
experience for you so after you graduate you are an informed consumer of research and
have some experiencing doing data collection and analysis.
The fact you want to graduate sooner than later!
If you can keep these ideas in mind while you're thinking through your research you stand an
excellent chance of having your research project turn out well and in a timely manner.
5. Be realistic about the time that you are willing to commit to your research project
If it's a 2+ year dissertation project that you're thinking about admit it at the beginning and then
decide whether or not you have that time and money to give to it. If the project you'd like to do
is going to demand more time than you're willing to commit then you have a problem. From start
to finish, there is no reason a dissertation should take you more than 12‐months! And, if it has,
please do yourself a favor and contact me immediately about my 60‐day Mentoring program at
http://www.drrichschuttler.com/dr‐richs‐60‐day‐1‐on‐1‐dissertation‐proposal‐mentoring‐
program/
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I know it's still early in your thinking but it's never too early to create a draft or a timeline. Try
using the 6 Stages (see below) and put a start and a finish time for each. Post your timeline in a
conspicuous place (above your computer monitor?) so that it continually reminds you how you're
doing. Periodically (at least monthly), update your timeline with new dates as needed. Sounds
like ‘incremental gains’ to me! Also be realistic, most students create an unrealistic timeline that
needs to be extended far beyond the original completing date – after all ‘life happens!’
Stage 1 ‐ Thinking About It
Stage 2 ‐ Preparing the Proposal
Stage 3 ‐ Conducting the Research
Stage 4 ‐ Writing the Research Paper*
Stage 5 ‐ Sharing the Research Outcomes with Others
Stage 6 ‐ Revising the Research Paper
6. Asking for leave from work; some do!
If you're going to ask for a leave of absence from your job (some can and do) while you're working
on your research this isn't a good time to do it. Chances are you can do the "thinking about it"
stage without a leave of absence. Assuming that there are six major phases that you will have
during your research project, probably the best time to get the most from a leave of absence is
during the fourth stage* ‐ the writing stage.
Step 4 is the time when you really need to be thinking well. To be able to work at your writing in
large blocks of time without interruptions is something really important. A leave of absence from
your job can allow this to happen. A leave of absence from your job prior to this stage may not
be a very efficient use of the valuable time away from your work.
7. Try a very small preliminary research study
It can be most helpful at this early stage to try a very small preliminary research study to test out
some of your ideas to help you gain further confidence in what you'd like to do. The study can be
as simple as conducting half a dozen informal interviews with no attempt to document what is
said. The point is that it will give you a chance to get closer to your research and to test out
whether or not you really are interested in the topic. And, you can do it before you have
committed yourself to doing something you may not like. Take your time and try it first.
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Chapter Two Preparing the Proposal
Assuming you've done a good job of "thinking about" your research project, you're ready to
actually prepare the proposal (or perhaps your university first requires you to complete and get
approved a concept paper or prospectus). A word of caution ‐‐ those students who tend to have
a problem in coming up with a viable proposal often are the ones who have tried to rush through
the "thinking about it" part and move too quickly to trying to write the proposal. Here's a final
check. Do each of these statements describe you? If they do you're ready to prepare your
research proposal.
I am familiar with other research that has been conducted in areas related to my research
project.
(___Yes, it's me)
(___No, not me)
I have a clear understanding of the steps that I will use in conducting my research.
(___Yes, it's me)
(___No, not me)
I feel that I have the ability to get through each of the steps necessary to complete my research
project.
(___Yes, it's me)
(___No, not me)
I know that I am self‐motivated and have the drive to get through all of the steps in the research
project.
(___Yes, it's me)
(___No, not me)
Okay, you're ready to write your research proposal. Here are some ideas to help with the task:
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8. Read through someone else's research proposal
Quite frequently, a real stumbling block is that we don't have an image in our mind of what the
finished research proposal should look like. How has the other proposal been organized? What
are the headings that have been used? Does the other proposal seem clear? Does it seem to
suggest that the writer knows the subject area? Can I model my proposal after one of the ones
that I've seen? If you can't readily find a proposal or two to look at, ask your adviser to see some.
You can search for published dissertations online for other such examples for content and format.
Check to see if your university provides templates as well as proposal and/ or dissertation
handbooks to guide you.
In my 52‐week Incremental Gains and Complete Bundle of Chapters 1 – 5 programs, I provide
examples of actual work my mentees did that allowed for their approvals. First I share exactly
how to write each heading in each section and where applicable I provide actual examples from
approved proposals and dissertations. You first learn, see an example, and then write your work!
Check out those programs at http://www.drrichschuttler.com/taking‐the‐b‐out‐of‐abd‐2/ and
watch a FREE lesson on how to write the Nature of the Study section. And, while you’re on my
website, scroll down and join a free webinar series too!
9. Make sure your proposal has a comprehensive review of the literature included
Now this idea, at first thought, may not seem to make sense. I have heard many students tell me
that "This is only the proposal. I'll do a complete literature search for the dissertation. I don't want
to waste the time now." But, this is the time to do that. The rationale behind the literature review
consists of an argument with two lines of analysis: 1) this research is needed, and 2) the
methodology I have chosen is most appropriate for the question that is being asked. Now, why
would you want to wait? Now is the time to get informed and to learn from others who have
preceded you! If you wait until you are writing the dissertation it is too late. You've got to do it
sometime so you might as well get on with it and do it now. Plus, you will probably want to add
to the literature review when you're writing the final dissertation (Hint: Use Google Alerts!)
Most university guidance is as such that you will need to produce 30 or more pages in your
Chapter 2 review of the literature. Keep in mind, take the reader through your story of the related
literature, reflecting higher order levels of ‘your’ critical thinking. And, end the chapter, before
the Conclusion section, with two to three paragraphs identifying the Gap in the Literature. Keep
in mind, no slang, trite casual or conversation tone writing. This is after all a scholarly review of
the literature! And, oh yeah, be sure to format it to the APA Manual’s guidance too (whatever
your university stipulates for a form and style preference).
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10. Availability of photocopy machines
With the ready availability of printing and saving electronic files you should be able to bypass
many of the hardships that previous dissertation researchers had to deal with in developing their
literature review. When you read something that is important to your study, save the relevant
article or section. Keep your files organized according to categories and sections in your proposal
chapters. And, most importantly, save the bibliographic or references so that you can easily cite
in your references pages. Then, when you decide to sit down and actually write the scholarly
literature review, bring out your files, put them into logical and sequential order, and then begin
your writing. I suggest you write your ideas first then add in your sources to support or refute
your expertise. Make it your story not a string or quotes and paraphrases.
My Taking the B Out of ABD program provides step‐by‐step guidance on how to design and write
a scholarly literature review. Watch the lessons, learn, and write! More information can be found
at http://www.drrichschuttler.com/taking‐the‐b‐out‐of‐abd‐2/ Let me help make this easy for
you! (P.S. Have you considered staring with a concept / mind‐map? If not, you might want to! It
can save you much time in the early phases of designing and Chapter 2. My program offers
guidance on how to apply creative thinking and then move the map’s content to a linear outline.
All this value – add ideas ‐ are in my programs as I know they worked for others and they can
work for you too!)
11. What is a proposal anyway?
A good proposal should consist of the first three chapters of the dissertation. It should begin
with background information as to how a problem came to be and then the problem statement
today and the purpose of your study (typically Chapter I of the dissertation), then move on to a
review of the literature identifying a gap in the literature (Chapter 2), and conclude with a
defining of the research methodology and plans for how you will collect and analyze data
(Chapter 3).
Of course, it should be written in a future tense since it is a proposal. To turn a good proposal
into the first three chapters of the dissertation consists of changing the tense from future tense
to past tense (from "This is what I would like to do" to "This is what I did") and making any changes
based on the way you actually carried out the research when compared to how you proposed to
do it. Often the intentions we state in our proposal turn out different in reality and we then have
to make appropriate editorial changes to move it from proposal to dissertation.
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12. Focus your research very specifically
Don't try to have your research cover too broad an area. Now you may think that this will distort
what you want to do. This may be the case, but you will be able to do the project if it is narrowly
defined. Usually a broadly defined project is not do‐able. By defining too broadly it may sound
better to you, but there is a great chance that it will be unmanageable as a research project.
When you complete your research project it is important that you have something specific and
definitive to provide that can fill the gap in the literature. This can be accommodated and
enhanced by narrowly defining your project. Otherwise, you may have only broadly based things
to say about large areas that really provide little guidance to others that may follow you.
Often the researcher finds that what he/she originally thought to be a good research project
turns out to really be a group of research projects. Do one project for your dissertation and save
the other projects for later in your career. Don't try to solve all of the problems and save the
world with you dissertation; do a significant and substantial research study and graduate!
13. Include a title on your proposal
I'm amazed at how often the title is left for the end of the student's writing and then somehow
forgotten when the proposal is prepared for the committee. A good proposal has a good title and
it is the first thing to help the reader begin to understand the nature of your work. Use it wisely!
Work on your title early in the process and revisit it often. It's easy for a reader to identify those
proposals where the title has been focused upon by the student. For as long as you are going to
be working on your dissertation and after, people will ask you about your research. A good title
will allow you to easily answer all those questions you will get forever!
Preparing a good title means 15‐words or less:
Having the most important words appear toward the beginning of your title,
Limiting the use of ambiguous or confusing words,
Breaking your title up into a title and subtitle when you have too many words,
Including your research method and design
Including key words that will help researchers in the future find your work.
Example from one of my mentees, Dr. Joseph Hage who in 2013 won the Quantitative
Dissertation of the Year Award:
INFLUENCE OF RELIGION AND RELIGIOSITY ON LEADERSHIP PRACTICES IN THE WORKPLACE: A
QUANTITATIVE CORRELATION STUDY
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14. Research proposal be organized around a set of questions
It's important that your research proposal be organized around one or more research questions
that will guide your research. When selecting these guiding questions, write them so that they
frame your research and put it into perspective with other research. Write you research
questions so that their answers can be used to fill the gap in the literature you articulate in
Chapter 2.
These questions must serve to establish the link between your research and other research that
has preceded you. Your research questions should clearly show the relationship of your research
to your field of study. Don't be carried away at this point and make your questions too narrow.
You must start with broad relational questions. And, your research questions MUST align with
your research design! Once you decide your research design, then start to build your expertise
in that design – this will save you much time later!
A good question:
To what extent, if any, do adult learners in a rural adult education setting correlate to earned
income in the southern Georgia?
A poor question:
Do adult learners in a rural adult education setting make more money than those who live in
downtown Atlanta, Georgia?
15. More Ideas
Now here are a few more ideas regarding the defining of your research project through your
proposal.
a. Make sure that you will be benefitting those who are participating in the research.
Don't only see the subjects as sources of data for you to analyze. Make sure you treat
them as participants in the research. They have the right to understand what you are
doing and you have a responsibility to share the findings with them for their reaction.
Your research should not only empower you with new understandings but it should also
empower those who are participating with you. Look to align the Significance of the Study
section in Chapter 1 to those who can potentially benefit from your study when
completed.
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b. Choose your methodology wisely. Don't be too quick in running away from using a
quantitative methodology because you fear the use of statistics. A qualitative approach
to research can yield new and exciting understandings, but it should not be undertaken
because of a fear of quantitative research. A well designed quantitative research study
can often be accomplished in very clear and direct ways. A similar study of a qualitative
nature usually requires considerably more time and a tremendous burden to create new
paths for analysis where previously no path had existed. Choose your methodology
wisely! Choose your research method and designs based on what data is needed to
produce the correct information to fill the gap in the literature you noted in Chapter 2.
c. Sometimes a mixed methodology makes the most sense. You can combine a qualitative
preliminary study (to define your population more clearly, to develop your
instrumentation more specifically or to establish hypotheses for investigation) with a
quantitative main study to yield a research project that works well. But, be cautious, a
mixed‐method study may be beyond the scope of a dissertation you want to do. It can
take more time than you think it will. Check with your dissertation chair about this before
committing to using this research method in your dissertation research.
d. Deciding on where you will conduct the research is a major decision. If you are from
another area of the country or a different country there is often an expectation that you
will return to your "home" to conduct the research. This may yield more meaningful
results, but it will also most likely create a situation whereby you are expected to fulfill
other obligations while you are home. For many students, the opportunity to conduct a
research project away from home is an important one since they are able to better control
many of the intervening variables that they cannot control at home. Think carefully
regarding your own situation before you make your decision.
e. What if you have the opportunity for conducting your research in conjunction with
another agency or project that is working in related areas. Should you do it? Sometimes
this works well, but most often the dissertation researcher gives up valuable freedom to
conduct the research project in conjunction with something else. Make sure the trade‐
offs are in your favor.
It can be very disastrous to have the other project suddenly get off schedule and to find
your own research project temporarily delayed. Or, you had tripled the size of your
sample since the agency was willing to pay the cost of postage. They paid for the postage
for the pre‐questionnaire. Now they are unable to assist with postage for the post‐
questionnaire. What happens to your research? I usually find that the cost of conducting
dissertation research is not prohibitive and the trade‐offs to work in conjunction with
another agency are not in favor of the researcher. Think twice before altering your project
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to accommodate someone else. Enjoy the power and the freedom to make your own
decisions (and mistakes!) ‐‐ this is the way we learn.
16. Selecting and preparing your advisory committee
Selecting and preparing your dissertation committee to respond to your proposal should not be
taken lightly. If you do your "homework" well your dissertation committee can be most helpful
to you. Try these ideas:
a. If you are given the opportunity to select your dissertation committee do it wisely. Don't
only focus on faculty you like. Too many students have picked faculty they met once in a
residency or online class and thought that faculty member would make a great committee
member. That is not always the case! Some people are great in a big setting but one‐on‐
one not so much! You need more reasons to have someone on your committee because
they are nice and talked to you – it’s their job to talk to all students!
b. Make sure you have selected faculty for your committee who are supportive of you and
are willing to assist you in successfully completing your research. You want committee
members who you can ask for help and know that they will provide it for you. Stay away
from those who will not help you and expect you to find all the answers to all your
questions on your own! Don't forget, you can always access content experts who are not
on your committee at any time during your research project.
c. Your major professor/adviser/chairperson is your ally. When you go to the committee
for reactions to your proposal make sure your chairperson is fully supportive of you.
Spend time with him/her before the meeting so that your plans are clear and you know
you have full support. Be sure you both communicate regularly and in an open manner so
you can learn and improve your work as will be required. It is ‘your’ job to build a strong
professional relationship with your dissertation chair – not the other way around. You
need that person far more than your chair need you!
d. Pick committee members with intention. Consider one committee member who is an
expert research methodologist with specific depth and application of experience in the
research method and design you will apply to your dissertation research. If you can have
another committee member, seek a subject matter expert in your field of study, even if
your dissertation chair is as well. Get as much expertise on your team as you can; you’ll
need it!
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Keep in mind, the dissertation chair is responsible for about 90% of the work you will do.
Your committee members are there to help when you chair needs assistance or to act as
facilitators of subject matter and research experts when you need such expert help. And,
they are to take a well‐developed proposal and dissertation that your dissertation chair
guided you to complete and act as first‐time readers of the full document to provide you
insights into areas for improvement to help ensure your work will be approved at the
university staff reviews.
Your committee is not there to make you feel good, though it is nice if they do. They are
there to help you learn more about how to produce and even better product. You need
to be able to accept feedback openly, revise your work based on that feedback, and apply
reflective learning forward. Committee members should not have to tell you more than
once to improve something. Most committee members will not expect perfection from
you, but they will expect you to get better and better over time while not making the
same mistakes over and over.
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Chapter Three Writing Your Dissertation
Now this is the part we've been waiting for. I must assume that you have come up with a good
idea for research, had your proposal approved, collected the data, conducted your analyses and
now you're about to start writing the dissertation. If you've done the first steps well this part
shouldn't be too bad. In fact it might even be, and should be, enjoyable.
17. Writing dissertation myth
The major myth in writing a dissertation is that you start writing at Chapter 1 and then finish your
writing at Chapter 5. This is seldom the case. The most productive approach I have found is once
you have identified a ‘gap in the literature’ or realize there is a disparity between theory and
practice, to draft a related problem statement. Identify the general or holistic problem, perhaps
what is happening in the country and quantify suggesting how severe the problem is and to
whom. Then, identify the specific or micro problem that narrows from the general problem to
those who will be part of the survey population (in a city, state, region).
Focus on defining and refining the problem statement then move to the next section and write
that one, usually the purpose statement. Don’t worry about writing 20+ pages for Chapter 1, just
focus on two paragraphs in the problem statement, then go to the next heading or section and
write that one. Use ‘incremental gains’ to create one well‐developed section at time and soon
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you’ll have a full Chapter 1 draft ready for full alignment if the research method and design. In
my Taking the B Out of ABD program, I offer 58 individual audio / video lessons on how to write
each heading in each chapter and how to align all headings within each chapter and then the
entire proposal and dissertation. More information on the Complete Bundle of lessons, go to
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proposal approved, when is a good time to stop the madness? Yes, right now. Let me help you!
18. Apply higher order levels of critical thinking
Okay, you’re smart! You know that and your committee members know and believe that too!
But, do you write like a smart educated person? In particular, do you write scholarly reflective of
higher order critical thinking? Over my 17+ years of working with doctoral students in their
classes and dissertation related work, I have found they have been apply critical thinking at the
highest levels but due to poor habits write and talk at more so the lower levels. This needs to
change – especially if you want to get a proposal and dissertation approved! Too many smart
people dumb‐down their expertise and knowledge and never get the benefit of their intelligence.
(And, some wonder why they never achieve more success?!)
Don’t think smart and write dumb! Use Benjamin Bloom’s Cognitive Taxonomy verbs to improve
your writing to be more so reflective of your ability to synthesis, analyze, and evaluate the
literature and the works of others. It takes no critical thinking to quote others and not much
critical thinking to just paraphrase what others ‘stated.’ Do yourself a favor, learn to apply your
true abilities to how you communicate! You want a doctoral degree? Act like you already have
one!
19. Write specific, succinct, and purposeful
Another area that you need to get better at with your scholarly writing is your word choices.
You’re seeking the highest educational degree in the world, a doctoral degree that about 2% of
the educated people in the world have. Your doctoral level work should not be reflective of a
casual conversation with friends around the breakroom table but of an academic discourse. Stop
using contractions, slang, trite sayings in your scholarly writing (and speaking)! Use the
vocabulary of scholars and of researchers. You are after all producing a doctoral dissertation
research study – write as such and get approved sooner!
My mentees have heard and or read this many times:
“Write in a word choices that are specific, succinct, and purposeful! Yes, every word!”
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20. Figures & Tables
I like tables and figures in every chapter of a dissertation. That is, if they add value! As they say,
“A picture is worth a thousand words.” I like figures to reflect a ‘concept map’ in Chapter 2. I like
other figures such as ‘research maps’ and ‘data analysis plans.’ And, I like figures that reflect
formulas applied to statistical analysis. I like tables to present the richness of one’s efforts to find
literature suggesting all the sources and year ranges in Chapter 2. And, I like tables in Chapter 4
when presenting data or theme findings.
When providing a table or figure:
1). Open a new paragraph and introduce to topic with a standard topic sentence (no citation).
2). Provide support content with a few sentences.
3). Allude to the table of figure and its number.
4). Present the figure or table.
5). Then provide as many other paragraphs (after the figure or table) needed to fully explain the
contents of that figure or table. If there is nothing to explain, then you may want to question
even inserting the figure or table!
(When you include figures and tables, if you align your work to prescribed guidance in the APA
Manual, be sure you verify you did steps 3 & 4 per that specific guidance! Attention to details!)
21. Dissertation-style writing
Dissertation‐style writing is not designed to be entertaining but it does need to be informative!
Dissertation writing should be clear and unambiguous. To do this well you should prepare a list
of key words that are important to your research and then your writing should use this set of key
words throughout.
There is nothing as frustrating to a reader as a manuscript that keeps using alternate words to
mean the same thing. If you have decided that a key phrase for your research is "educational
workshop," then do not try substituting other phrases like "in‐service program," "learning
workshop," "educational institute," or "educational program." Always stay with the same phrase
‐ "educational workshop." It will be clear to the reader exactly what you are referring to.
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22. Review two or three well organized and presented dissertations
Look for and download a couple ‘recently’ published dissertations from your university. The
reason for a recent dissertations is that much like you, your university also matures and gets
better. Your program leaders look to improve the value of their dissertations over time and what
was approved in prior years may not match up to today’s standards. See what is recently
published to ensure the format and design you emulate will serve you well. Use these published
dissertations as a model for the preparation of your own dissertation. In this way you will have
an idea at the beginning of your writing what your finished dissertation will look like.
23. Table of Contents
We are all familiar with how helpful the Table of Contents is to the reader. What we sometimes
don't realize is that it is also invaluable to the writer. Use the Table of Contents to help you
improve your manuscript. Use it to see if you've left something out, if you are presenting your
sections in the most logical order, or if you need to make your wording a bit clearer.
Thanks to the miracle of computer technology, you can easily copy/paste each of your headings
from throughout your writing into the Table of Contents. Then sit back and see if the Table of
Contents is clear and will make good sense to the reader. You will be amazed at how easy it will
be to see areas that may need some more attention. Also, use this Table of Contents to ensure
you have balance in your Chapter 2 content! Don't wait until the end to do your Table of
Contents. Do it early enough (revise it as needed) so you can benefit from the information it will
provide to you.
24. Conclusions and implications
If you are including a Conclusions/Implications section in your dissertation make sure you really
present conclusions and implications. Often the writer uses the conclusions and implications
section to merely restate the research findings. Don't waste my time. I've already read the
findings and now, I want you to help me understand what it all means.
This is an important section of the dissertation and is sometimes best done after you've had a
few days to step away from your research and allow yourself to put your research into
perspective. If you do this you will no doubt be able to draw a variety of insights that help link
your research to other areas. I usually think of conclusions/implications as the "So what? & Who
Cares?” section. In other words, what are the most important findings that we can draw from
your study.
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Do yourself, your committee members, and the academic community a favor. Don’t make strong
claims about weak findings and also do not make weak claims about strong findings. Be realistic
in what you suggest the data means. The end result is you are creating and suggesting meaning
from your dissertation research study; do so responsibly.
Dr. Rich Tip:
In Chapter 5, relate each finding, implication, and recommendation back to the data in
Chapter 4. Let the reader get the sense that you are not just making‐up and providing
unsubstantiated opinions but literally indicate in your writing where the data was born in
Chapter 4. Related to what the results of testing a null hypothesis suggests or how a
theme was generated from interview findings to support an implication in Chapter 5.
25. Suggestions for Further Research section.
Potentially the silliest part of the dissertation is the Suggestions for Further Research section. This
section is usually written at the very end of your writing project and often little energy is left to
make it very meaningful. The biggest problem with this section is that the suggestions are often
ones that could have been made prior to you conducting your research. Read and reread this
section until you are sure that you have made suggestions that emanate from your experiences
in conducting the research and the findings that you have evolved.
Make sure that your suggestions for further research serve to link your project with other
projects in the future and provide a further opportunity for the reader to better understand what
you have done. A good question to ask yourself is ‘What kind of suggestions would you have liked
others to make that could have helped you when you were starting?’ Then, write your section to
help someone who follows your work who may just want to extend your research study!
26. The last chapter should be the first chapter
Now it's time to write the last chapter. But what chapter is the last one? My perception is that
the last chapter should be the first chapter. I don't really mean this in the literal sense. Certainly
you wrote Chapter 1 at the beginning of this whole process. Now, at the end, it's time to "revise"
Chapter 1. After you've had a chance to write your dissertation all the way to the end, the last
thing you should do is turn back to Chapter 1. Reread Chapter 1 carefully with the insight you
now have from having completed Chapter 5. Does Chapter 1 clearly help the reader move in the
direction of Chapter 5? Are important concepts that will be necessary for understanding Chapter
5 presented in Chapter 1?
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Why Dіѕѕеrtаtіоnѕ Don’t Get Fіnіѕhеd
1. The task seems overwhelming.
Thе ѕоlutіоn: Brеаk thе project іntо small, mаnаgеаblе unіtѕ – INCREMENTAL GAINS!
2. There are no clear deadlines.
The solution: Wоrk оn ѕub‐ѕесtіоnѕ that уоu can finish in a рrеdісtаblе amount of tіmе,
рrеfеrаblу at one setting. Write one section at a time even if it is one section each week. Don’t
forget, even slow progress is progress!
3. Bеіng оvеrроwеrеd bу nеgаtіvе thоughtѕ.
Sіlеnсе уоur іntеrnаl сrіtіс.
Ignоrе оr rерrеѕѕ self‐defeating thоughtѕ. Have a positive mindset. I have a 15 Lesson plan on
the Mindset of the Successful Doctoral Student. Check it out at
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Ovеrсоmе уоur fееlіngѕ оf іnаdеԛuасу.
Brеаk you subject dоwn іntо manageable subsections. Write one at a time!
Rеfuѕе to ѕubmіt tо реrfесtіоnіѕm.
Thе ѕоlutіоn: Yоu muѕt gеt mаtеrіаl оn рареr bеfоrе уоu саn rеwоrk іt.
Listen to your favorite music or look at your favorite pictures.
It’s difficult to have negative thoughts when you listen to your favorite music or are looking at
your favorite pictures!
4. Bесоmіng isolated.
Thе ѕоlutіоn: Find sounding boards. Many who feel isolated find value in my 52‐week
Incremental Gains Program where I provide one audio video lesson (with PowerPoint) a week
on how to write a proposal and dissertation, a second audio visual bonus lesson each week,
weekly Dr. Rich quotes, and other information. This might help you feel more like I am there with
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5. Bесоmіng оvеrlу аnxіоuѕ about your mеntоrѕ’ rеасtіоnѕ. Thе ѕоlutіоn: Be a рrо. Gіvе еасh сhарtеr tо a mentor for соmmеntѕ. Call or Skype and talk to
your dissertation chair at least once a month. Realize you are going to get much feedback over
the entire time you work on your proposal and dissertation. All that feedback is designed to make
you learn more and your work even better. Feedback is a gift! Say thank you and be glad you are
getting it!
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Yes, You Can Finish Your Dissertation
1. Distill your arguments into a single sentence. If you can explain your dissertation succinctly, you can write it.
"What I hope to communicate in this chapter/article/dissertation/book is ________."
Identify the basic questions or issues you are addressing and how your work relates to
contemporary literature. State the overall significance of your work to your field.
2. Set smaller – incremental gains - goals. (do you notice a ‘theme’ in this ebook?)
Write one heading at a time. Don’t ask yourself to “Write 30+ pages in Chapter 2” ‐ instead break
it down into tiny do‐able steps. Don’t scare yourself. Write your dissertation in manageable
segments as doing so helps to keep you focused on what you writing at the moment. If you can
manage just 1‐hour a day, you’ll be surprised at how much progress you’ll make with that focus!
3. Avoid the mistakes dissertators make.
Choosing a boring or overly broad and ambitious topic.
A good dissertation topic has clear focus and circumscribed limits.
Failure to focus:
‐ Every chapter should have a clear focus—an overarching question or issue that it
addresses.
‐ Failing to keep references for every quotation or piece of evidence.
4. There are two kinds of research: research on your topic and research relevant to writing.
In addition to collecting data or quotations, look at how other scholars (or even journalists)
handle your topic. How do they structure and frame their arguments? What key phrases do they
use? What can you learn from how others did their work not just what did they write.
5. Brainstorm, then organize your ideas.
After you have identified key ideas, organize them into a structure, then work through the ideas
one at a time. I like to create a ‘concept map’ first then convert that to an outline. Then, write to
the outline – one heading at a time. Yup, you are correct – with ‘incremental gains!’
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6. There is no such thing as Writer’s Block.
When you don’t feel like writing, write SOMETHING. Spell out a chapter’s argument. Work on
your introduction. Analyze some of your evidence. Work on the literature review. Write down
your ideas. Proofread what you already wrote. Whatever you do, don’t stop writing! Don’t let
your negative self‐talk enter your head and win! You can be lazy once you earn your degree but
not right now!
7. Be selfish
Compartmentalize. Forget your other responsibilities and obligations. Find a time period when
you can work— and protect it. For me, I write best between 4 pm – 6 pm. And, I write at least 1‐
hour (yes, incremental gains). This time works for me as all my day’s work is done and I have
some creative energy left before it gets too late in the day. When do you write at your best? Why
write when you know it’s not an ideal time for you?
8. Find a sounding board, someone who you can speak to about your writing.
Tell this person what you have accomplished that day, your arguments, and the challenges you
encountered. A sounding board will not only help you formulate and clarify your ideas, but will
also help you make them more sophisticated, logical, and compelling.
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Chapter Four Secrets to Completing a Dissertation
In the picture below you’ll see a bridge. This is not a normal bridge; this bridge represents your
dissertation, and like all bridges, it’s built around the keystone. The keystone of your dissertation
bridge is your research questions, then you pendulum to each side of the research questions to
flesh out the methodology, then to the literature review, then to the results, then ultimately off
to graduation. Expect this back and forth—you’ll build the bridge and you’ll get to where you’re
going.
1. Start with the research questions and hypotheses.
Research questions are the keystone and establish the whole project. They set‐up your
methodological approach, theoretical constructs, participants and sampling frame, and data
collection procedures. The research questions take either a quantitative form (i.e., questions
written in statistical language) or a qualitative form (i.e., phenomenological study revealing
human experience, grounded theory seeking to build a theory, or case study). That stated, you
might actually have to write your problem statement section first and your purpose statement
second. You need to have the questions in mind, but what one writes first is not quite an exact
science. Check with your dissertation chair and find what is best for you to do first, second, etc.
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2. The methodology is the blueprint of the dissertation bridge.
I’ve heard the typical sequence for decades: Introduction, then literature, then methodology,
right? Wrong! The methodology is your project. Gather all of the plans for your study, then
imagine you can give your methods chapter to your next door neighbor who knows nothing about
your research; can they now replicate your study? All science is based on the ability to replicate
findings, and a clear methods chapter is the instruction manual for others to replicate your study.
Develop the participants, instruments, and procedures sections‐‐if you don’t have these, you
don’t have a study.
3. Consider participant recruitment and data collection very early on.
What are the potential implications (read “roadblocks”) when submitting your proposal to the
Institutional Review Board (IRB) if you are planning to interview vulnerable participants? Do you
think they may be cautious in approving your application? Of course they will! As an institution
they are opening themselves up to potential liability. An idea to consider is working backwards
from the data. What data can you secure (data from where you work or other secondary data)?
Then seek to develop your research questions from that data. You need to be aware of the
common denominator in your data. For example, a recent student‐researcher stated that she
wanted to examine five teachers’ leadership style on 150 students’ achievement scores. Guess
what her sample size is? Yep, its 5, and there is little you can statistically do with just 5
observations. Be sure you know what the difference is between good research and dissertation
worthy research!
4. Ask a librarian.
Without a doubt, the librarians were the most useful people to me when I was working on my
proposal and dissertation. I went to the University of Hawaii library every other Saturday morning
for months while working on my proposal and dissertation. Librarians know exactly where
everything is in their library and where to find everything else online. They are experts – let them
help you and you’ll be more efficient and effective in your searches for literature, books, and
perhaps even a shoulder to lean on when things get challenging and you just want to cry! (P.S. I
also learned after a couple visits to the library that if I brought the donuts or other such treats,
they were even more helpful to me.)
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5. Hire a statistician, researcher tutor, and APA editor.
Student’s time is better spent on thinking through the implications of their findings rather than
working through the nuances of statistical analyses to generate accurate results, editing, and
other aspects on their own. You have to know everything in your proposal and dissertation and
defend your own work in your oral defense, but you can have help from experts. Be smart
enough to know what you don’t know then go find out who can teach it to you or help you!
6. Plan appropriately.
Expect revisions from your chair, readers, and the IRB, and plan for them. For example, my
dissertation chair put a 3x multiplier on my original timeline to complete a research project. He
was close, it took me far longer than I thought as it does my mentees! But, keep making progress
– incremental gains!
7. Relax.
I know it’s a challenging time during this process, but to be creative and to think well, you need
to stay calm. It helps to maintain a strong vision of you completing your dissertation. Stay in
balance in your life, and keep your attitude positive. Keep your family and friends around you!
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Chapter Five Myths about Writing
Certain myths and misconceptions make writing problems worse and discourage you from
incorporating writing into your teaching.
Myth 1: Skilled writers write effortlessly.
Every writer procrastinates, gets anxious, and loses focus. The Pulitzer Prize winning historian
Richard Rhodes (American historian, journalist, and Pulitzer Prize winning author) offered a simple, if
crude, piece of advance: Keep your ass to the chair. Model writing on weight loss: Strive for small,
daily advances rather than attempting to do everything all at once. There is only way to write:
write a lot. He must have heard of incremental gains too!
Myth 2: Skilled writers write from carefully plotted outlines.
There is nothing wrong with brainstorming and carefully organizing your ideas. But in fact writing
is messy. It is not a linear process. Writing is thinking. It is during the writing process itself that
you will come up with your best ideas. For me, I write 1‐hour a day as I can be totally focused for
that amount of time. And, the next day, I remember where I left off the day before!
Myth 3: There are two stages to the writing process: writing a draft and then editing it to correct grammar and delete typos and extraneous words.
There is no writing, only re‐writing. And, re‐writing generally requires significant re‐organization
and rethinking. Don’t try this if your tired or angry – you won’t get much done and you’ll only
frustrate yourself even more. And more importantly, you might end up frustrating others around
you who love you and are there to help you. If you are not up to writing, take a break, spend time
with the family or pet, and then get back to it!
For writing, it is difficult to be creative when you are stressed out and lack enough sleep. Your
mind works best when rested and focused toward the goal. Heck, if you can’t get excited about
your own dissertation, you might have chosen a wrong topic! Yikes!
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General Advice about Writing
1. Writing is “dialogic”
Don’t write in isolation. When you write, you enter into a conversation, a debate, a controversy.
Therefore, you must first understand and identify an existing debate. Then you can intervene and
contribute to that debate.
In discussions of ____, controversy has swirled around _____.
2. A dissertation is not a survey. It addresses a problem or a question.
A dissertation advances an argument. It stakes out a thesis and supports it with evidence and
logic. Your argument should grab the reader’s attention. It debunks a myth, corrects a
misconception, enters a debate, or challenges a popular interpretation. Be prepared to explain
the significance of your topic succinctly and compellingly.
My dissertation will address the following question: ____.
It will fill the following gap in the literature: ____.
3. Writing is a social activity.
Don’t hesitate to find a “sounding board.” Talking out your arguments helps to make them more
logical, concise, and persuasive. You might be surprised at how smart the people around you,
even your kids, are and willing to help you so you can be successful. After all, they love you and
want you to succeed.
4. Learn the “tricks of the trade”
Every writer needs to acquire the secrets of written argumentation What are the secrets? They
are a series of formulas that ensure complex thinking.
a. You must explain the significance of your topic:
I am studying ___________, because I want to find out what/why/how ___________ in order to
help my reader understand ___________
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b. You must engage others who have studied the topic:
I think X is mistaken because she overlooks _______X’s theory of ___________ is extremely
useful because it sheds insight on the difficult problem of ___________
Whereas X provides ample evidence that ___________, Y and Z’s research on ___________ and
___________ convinces me that ___________ instead
c. You must effectively integrate quotations into your argument:
Evidence never speaks for itself. Evidence always needs to be interpreted and explained.
Signal the importance of what the author is saying: Basically, X is saying ___________
Use quotations for your own purposes: I agree with X that ____, and would add ____
But, keep in mind, quote less and paraphrase more. And, be sure you are referring to the works
of other reflective of ‘your’ higher order critical thinking skills.
d. You can easily make your writing and argument more sophisticated by explaining how you agree or disagree with other peoples’ ideas.
Although it is often said that ____, I claim ____.
Group X argues ____ , and I have mixed feelings about it. On the one hand, ____. On the
other hand, ____.
I used to think ____. Now, however, after ____, I have come to see ____.
Debates over ____ tend to dominate discussions of ____. But these debates obscure the
far more important issue of ____.
At this point you will probably object that ____. While it's true that _____, I still
maintain____.
"Of course the problem is far more complicated than ____,"
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Dealing with Common Challenges
1. “I’ve got nothing to say”
Academic writing—whether this is an essay, a lab report, or a problem solving exercise‐‐ involves
taking part in an argument, conversation, and debate. Your job is to persuade a reader that your
position is appropriate and sensible take on the issue.
The first step is to identify the larger conversation surrounding an issue. Try to figure out
how whatever you're writing about—an event, text, experiment, finding or whatever—fits
into your larger subject or field.
Then problematize the conversation: Look for questions, tensions, and unresolved issues.
These provide openings for something new to say.
Develop a thesis—a distinctive stance within the conversation.
Have an angle‐‐a slant that gives your paper focus. Advance a provocative thesis that speaks to
larger controversies.
How do you do this? Use the magic formula: Become part of a broader conversation or
controversy.
Refute an argument
Refine an argument
Reveal a gap
Fill a gap
Ask a new question or refine an older question
Unlike a legal brief, an academic argument must be fair‐minded and balanced, based on evidence
and taking account of alternate interpretations and counter‐arguments.
2. Awkwardness
We’d like our writing to be original and elegant and their arguments nuanced and sophisticated,
but often we’d be happy if our writing was clear. Instead of writing with concision, short active
verbs, and a smooth flow of sentences, too often writing is wordy, filled with the passive voice
and with arguments that are jumpy and undeveloped.
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You can gain clarity by:
Breaking sentences into easier‐to‐understand pieces. Simplify. Cut out excess nouns,
adjectives, and adverbs.
Using active verbs and attaching verbs to clearly identified actors. Minimize the use of
the words “was,” “were,” and “is.”
Avoiding nominalizations—actions expressed as nouns.
Eliminate anthropomorphisms – giving human characteristics to an entity.
Examples include argument instead of argue; analysis instead of analyze; performance
instead of perform.
Using transition phrases and words
Transitional phrases:
I will begin by... Before I say what is wrong with..., I will first...
At this point, we need to consider the following objection...
Although I have shown..., I still need to...
Next, I will offer support for what is perhaps my most controversial claim, that... Further
support for this claim comes from...
Having argued that..., I need to consider rival views...
Transitional words (use sparing but use when needed).
To give multiple reasons: In addition, Also, in the first case
To explain: Because, Given, Since To conclude an argument: Therefore, Hence,
Consequently
To illustrate your argument: A case in point, to illustrate
To provide a specific example: Specifically, Namely
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To intensify: Above all, Moreover, Furthermore, More importantly
To emphasize: Of course, Indeed, Certainly
To compare: Similarly, Likewise
To contrast: However, Even so
To speculate: Assume, Supposing
To concede an argument: Of course, Doubtless, While recognizing that...
Using tenses consistently.
Establishing an academic tone.
The student must establish a reasonable, open‐minded tone that promises honest
consideration of a question.
Be careful about the beginnings and ends of paragraphs. These are natural emphasis
points.
3. So what?
An argument can be clearly written yet trivial. The question it grapples with may be insignificant
and the argument can be simplistic. Here are some suggestions for making arguments more
powerful and persuasive.
Engage the reader.
The opening paragraph must grab the reader’s attention.
Crystallize the argument in a single sentence. A paper must present a strong argument.
But too often the thesis is weak, absent, or confusing.
Remember the power of 3. In classical rhetoric, this is the tricolon. Lists are more
powerful when they contain at least three items.
Don’t sweep contrary evidence or alternate interpretations under the rug. Engage the
counter‐arguments. Use words like admittedly, clearly, at first it may seem, in fairness.
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4. Misusing quotations
Misuse of quotations in rampant in undergraduate papers. Sometimes, students quote too
much—or too little. Sometimes, they blur their voice and those of the sources they quote. Often,
they assume that quotations speak for themselves. Keep in mind, it take little, if any critical
thinking to cut and paste the word of others. And, quoting drives‐up your Turnitin.com report.
Make sure when you use quotations that you:
Explain the quotation’s point.
Integrate the quotation into the text.
5. Gripping introductions and strong conclusions
Journalism schools teach reporters to begin their stories with a lede: a gripping anecdote, a telling
statistic, a provocative quotation, a surprising research finding. Ledes grab readers’ attention and
set the stage for your distinctive “take” or “angle” on a topic. A powerful introduction functions
just like a lede. It captures the readers’ attention and it allows you to then present your thesis or
argument.
In oratory, the peroration is the conclusion of a speech or discourse. It is the place where the
speaker recapitulates the argument and presses it a final time with renewed vigor. It provides an
opportunity to remind, to reflect, to inspire, to leave the listener with a bit of wisdom—to sum
up with panache. Mediocre essays simply recapitulate the paper’s argument. Strong endings
provide a larger vision or context, and broaden the implications of the paper’s argument. They
provide a fresh twist or a broadened the perspective. Often, they “close the circle”—connecting
to the paper’s introduction.
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Dr. Rich Schuttler is a leadership and communication expert and Best-selling author. He has over 25 years of diversified international management and leadership improvement expertise within academic, healthcare, federal/state governments, and Fortune 1,000 environments developing strategies and implementation methods. Dr. Rich has mentored executives, faculty, and students from around the world in a variety of professional leadership and management settings.
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