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Form 5
FIRST ASSESSMENT 2016
An analysis of common errors
PAPER 1
*Based on 5SF papers
SECTION APurpose of the talk
Write a talk on keeping fitNOT
a talk on Health Week
SECTION B• QUESTION 1
Describe a place that you would go to when you are feeling sad or down
Keyword: a place
Good one: She writes about Korea (a place); from general to specific places in Korea,
together with the descriptions of the place and reasons why she chooses Korea
SECTION B• QUESTION 5
- Describe how determination and hardwork helped a friend achieved his
dreams,
NOT
How you can help him
Keyword: helped
Common Grammatical Errors
ERROR CORRECTIONmore healthier healthier
more easy easiermore happy happier
Common Grammatical ErrorsERROR CORRECTION
The place has a beach that makes me calm.
There is a beach at the place that makes me calm.
The place has not many people who come.
There are not many people come to the place
Common Grammatical ErrorsERROR CORRECTION
You cannot spend too much time on social networks. We have to make time for your family too.
You cannot spend too much time on social networks. You have to make time for your family too.
We cannot spend too much time on social networks. We have to make time for our family too.
We need to be determined to achieve your dreams.
We need to be determined to achieve our dreams.
You need to be determined to achieve your dreams.
Common Grammatical ErrorsERROR CORRECTION
Most youngsters have their own social networks such as facebook, twitter, instagram and others/many others/another.
Most youngsters have their own social networks accounts such as on Facebook, Twitter and Instagram.
Common Grammatical ErrorsERROR CORRECTION A shoes A pair of shoes
A shoeAn enemies An enemy
A new friends A new friendAs a teenagers As a teenager
As teenagersOne of the student One of the studentsA lots of problems A lot of problems
Lots of problems
Common Grammatical ErrorsERROR CORRECTION
His father was proud with him.
His father was proud of him
The teacher was angry to me.
The teacher was angry with me.
The teacher was angry at me.
*angry at
Common Vocabulary Errors / Choice of word
ERROR CORRECTIONMake revision Do revisionMake an action Take an actionYou have to practise to do the questions.
You have to practise to answer the questions.
I would like to story about my successful friend.
I would like to tell about my successful friend.
I would like to tell a story about my successful friend.
Common Spelling ErrorsERROR CORRECTION
SuccesfulSuccessful
?
Untill ?Good morning to our principle, Pn. Aminah
?
Smilling ?Peoples ?
Thankfull ?DissapointedDissappointed
?
Affect vs effect ?
PLEASE..
1. READ the questions extra carefully
2. WRITE the Question No. in your answer sheet
SEE YOU IN YOUR NEXT WRITING
GOOD LUCK!