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Primary Care Research Leader
Workshop
Manuscript Writing & Publishing
Primary Care Research
Cindy L.K. Lam, MD (HK) Department of Family Medicine and Primary Care
The University of Hong Kong
September 24, 2011
Pre-Workshop Reading
1. Sample manuscript WM
2. Sample manuscript CM
3. Chipperfield L et. al. Authors’ Submission Toolkit: A
practical guide to getting your research published.
Current Medical Research & Opinion 2010; 26(8).
1968-82.
4. European Association of Scientific Editors. EASE
Guidelines for Authors and Translators of Scientific
Articles to be Published in English. 2011.
Goal of Medical Research
To discover facts and new
knowledge to inform practice for the
enhancement of health and medical care
To serve the Purpose - Manuscript
• Documentation of work
• Record of the facts (results)
• Interpretation & implication for practice
• Dissemination of knowledge
• Publication (journal or book)
• Conference presentation
• Report
• Public media
• Personal communication/ letters
Manuscript – a means of communication
• Useful messages
• Credible
• Coherent
• Clear & easy to read
• Interesting
• Precise
• Concise (2000-3000 words)
Manuscript – Continuation of the research protocol
• Authors
• Declaration
• Title
• Introduction
• Subjects and
Methods
• Results
• Discussion
• Conclusion
• Acknowledgement
• References
• Abstract
“ The Jewels are in the details”
Courtesy of [email protected]
Content Checklists (EQUATOR Network: http://www.equator-network.org/ )
• RCT : CONSORT (25-items + flow diagram)
• Diagnostic : STARD (25-items + flow
diagram)
• Observational studies : STROBE (22 items)
• Qualitative : COREQ (32-items)
• Meta-analysis & systematic reviews of RCT:
PRISMA (27-items + flow diagram)
• Meta-analysis observational studies:
MOOSE (35 Items)
Authors • Significant contribution (declared) to
– conception, planning and execution of
the research
– data analysis & interpretation
– Writing and revision of the manuscript
• All authors must endorse & are
responsible for the manuscript
• Avoid gift / hidden authors
Declaration & Acknowledgement
• Funding source (ref no.)
• Conflict of interest, industry sponsorship
• Ethics approval (ref no.)
• Trial registration no.:
www.ClinicalTrials.gov.
• Consultants, advisors, mentors,
colleagues, service providers, research
assistants
• Previous or concurrent publications
Title – what it is about?
• Reflects the focus & boundary of
the manuscript
• Succinct summary of answer to
the research question
• Succinct summary of the P.I.C.O.
• States the design & method
• Interesting
Title – Appraisal
Reflecting the content of manuscript
WM: Effectiveness of Western medicine
outpatient consultations in primary care - a
comparison with Chinese medicine
CM: A comparison of the effectiveness
between Western medicine and Chinese
medicine outpatient consultations in
primary care
Introduction
• Rationale & justification
• The problem and its importance
• What is known (literature review)
• What is the knowledge gap (need of
study)
• State clearly the research aim,
question, objectives, hypothesis
Introduction – Appraisal
Coherence between justification
(importance of TCM in PC) & aim
WM: evaluate effectiveness of WM
consultations in improving HRQOL … &
compare it with CM
CM: evaluate effectiveness of TCM
consultations in improving HRQOL … &
compare it with WM
Objectives – Appraisal Base of the results & discussion
•To investigate whether WM consultations
…. could improve HRQOL ….
•To compare the effectiveness of WM and
TCM consultations in improving HRQOL
and health condition
•To investigate factors …. that may affect
the effectiveness of WM consultations in
primary care
Methods (1) • Setting
• Place, culture, system, organization
• Study design
• Subjects
• sampling frame, criteria & method
• sample size with justification
• Response & completion rates
• Representativeness / bias/ group diff
Methods (2) • Clear pre-study definitions of
• Primary & secondary outcomes
• Confounding variables
• Data collection/extraction method
• Study instruments (validity & reliability)
• Tests (accuracy)
• Case record form (CRF)
• Who, when , where & how
• Justification & quality assurance
Methods (3) – Data Analysis
• How & what, to answer each objective &
hypothesis (subheadings)
• Specific statistical tests & programmes
used, with justification
• State dependent and independent
variables in explanatory analyses
• Standards of significance, statistical &
clinical
• Sub-group/ post-hoc analysis
Methods – Appraisal
Clarity & relevant to aim
Subject recruitment: Figures 1 & 2
WM: Prospective studies … 2 WM clinics &
1 CM clinic… The WM … clinics were used
as controls.
CM: Prospective studies ….1 TCM … & 2
WM clinics….. The WM … clinics were used
as comparison groups for the TCM clinic
Results • Data quality, deviation from protocol
• Answers to the research question and
objectives (sub-headings)
• Descriptive statistics of outcomes (95%
C.I) , & independent & confounding
variables
• Comparative results, p values, r, OR
• Tables & figures, title, legend & footnotes
• Highlight important/ unusual findings,
don’t repeat
Results - Appraisal
• Answers to objectives 2 & 3
WM: Factors … that had significant
independent effects on changes in HRQOL
scores .. Baseline HRQOL score…. The
specific clinic had an effect ……
CM: Linear regression analysis found that
specific clinic had an effect ….. Baseline
HRQOL score…..
Discussion
• What is important? –key findings (KISS)
• What is new? – compare & contrast with
other studies
• Is it true?- justify results, confounding
• What is the implication for practice ?
• What are the limitations (methods,
subjects, data scope & quality)?
• Don’t repeat introduction/ results
Discussion - Appraisal
• Systematic, coherent & convincing
• WM: The ideal methodology …. RCT
but ….. The effectiveness of WM &
TCM … was compared…
• CM: The study showed that HRQOL
…. Improved after TCM & WM
consultations ….
Conclusion
• Succinct summary of the answer to the
research question
• Achievement of aim of study
• Recommendation for policy/practice
• Recommendation for further research
• Be specific, avoid empty or over-
statements
Conclusion - Appraisal
Answer to the research question ?
WM: More people used WM than TCM as
the 1st primary care …WM ….
Significant improvement in HRQOL ….
No difference between WM & TCM
(abstract).
CM: Both TCM & WM …. Improvement in
HRQOL….. No difference between TCM
& WM … support the role of TCM as an
alternative primary care. (abstract)
References • Numbered (Vancouver style) or by
authors (Harvard style)
• Published refereed journal articles
• Cite primary source
• Avoid unpublished work,
newspapers, magazines, personal
communication
• Be up to date & selective
Ready to submit
Courtesy of [email protected]
Publishing -Dissemination
• Thesis/ dissertation
• Refereed journals
• Indexed (Index medicus)/ non-
indexed
• International/ local
• Books
• Conference proceedings
• Report
Choosing the right journal
Journal Website address IF
Lancet http://www.thelancet.com/ 32.50
BMJ http://www.bmj.com 13.47
Ann of Fam Med http://annfammed.org/ 4.46
Family Practice http://fampra.oxfordjournals.org/ 1.71
BMC- Family
Practice
http://www.biomedcentral.com/bmcf
ampract
1.47
HK Practitioner http://www.hkcfp.org/
HK Medical J http://www.hkmj.org/
Chinese Med J http://cmj.org/ 0.98
Choosing the right journal (2) Journal Website address IF
BMC – Health Serv
Res
http://www.biomedcentral.com/bmch
ealthservicesresearch
1.72
BMC – Public Health http://www.biomedcentral.com/bmcp
ublichealth
2.36
Social Sci and
Medicine
http://journals.elsevier.com/02779536
/social-science-and-medicine/
2.74
Medical Education www.mededuc.com 2.64
Medical Teachers http://www.medicalteacher.org/ 1.98
BMC – Med Educ http://www.biomedcentral.com/bmcm
ededuc
1.20
Revisions • Average 7 versions from draft to press
• Re-submit after revision
– good chance of acceptance
– Point-by-point response, cross-ref to
manuscript
– Receptive to suggestions
– Disagree tactfully
– Don’t argue with the editor or reviewer
– ASAP
Rejections
• Never ever again!
• Success of failure – keep trying
– Another journal
– Another focus
– Other analyses
– Other conclusions
“ Research is not a very
difficult task but it requires the
ability to ask the right question,
and to think clearly and in an
organized way.” John G. R. Howie 1989
Useful References
• BMJ. Resources for Authors- Article Requirements.
http://resources.bmj.com/bmj/authors-
submission/article-requirements.
• BMJ. Resources for Authors- Research Articles
http://resources.bmj.com/bmj/authors/types-of-
article/research
• Wagner, P.D., Writing up your research results for
publication. Chest, 2009. 136(2): p. 639-642.
• Wells, W.A., Me write pretty one day: how to write a
good scientific paper. The Journal of Cell Biology,
2001. 165(6): p. 757-756.
References
• Alpert, J.S., Learning to write: a personal
reflection. The American Journal of Medicine,
2010. 123(8): p. 671-672.
• Neil, U.S., How to write a scientific masterpiece.
The Journal of Clinical Investigation, 2007.
117(12): p. 3599-3602.
• Tong A., et. al. Consolidated criteria for reporting
qualitative research (COREQ): a 32-item checklist
for interviews and focus groups. Int J Quality in
Health Care 2007; 19: 349-357.