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Good work!! You style of expression and coverage of the issue is quite good. However, it left me with the feeling that you could have accommodated yourself in fewer pages (around 16-17 pages). If you have written something interesting but seems endless, examiner might get bored and would be relieved when it's "finally over!" A pleasant feeling that he would have derived out of your content would go in background and this could affect your final marks that could have been outstanding! Second, you could have added some socio-cultural differences in the nature of battle fought between government and people across the world. Glaring example would be differences in influence of internet in mobilizing and motivating the crowd in U.S. (e.g. Occupy Wall Street movement, Snowden revelations, Anonymous movement etc.), middle east (Jasmine revolution, ongoing protests in Egypt which eventually overthrown Morsi, Syrian revolution etc.) and on the other hand, south-east Asian countries e.g. India, Pakistan and Bangladesh, where rarely do we see such an organized movement with a sustained motivation arising out of social networking sites. Seems that getting a platform to express oneself is sufficient to douse one's frustration and anger with the system. This way, you could have added some fresh appeal to your content. Rest, your introduction and conclusion were good! Keep it up!! Alignment Competence - Very Good! Context Competence - Very Good! Content Competence - Excellent! Language Competence - Very Good! Introduction Competence - Very Good! Structure-Presentation Competence - Excellent! Conclusion Competence - Good! Total Marks - 145/250AMIT SHEKHAR
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