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Lesson 1
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Lesson 1
You are going to write your own version of
Hansel and Gretel.
But we cannot keep it exactly the same
how it was! We are going to CHANGE things.
What could we change?
-settings(where story takes place)
-characters(different people)
-outcome (what happened at the end)
Settings
Pyramids
A desert
A jungle Mountains
A park
A cave
Can you think of
other places your
story can take
place?
A castle
Characters
A frog A unicorn
A wizard
A fairyA dwarf
A dragon
Can you think of any other character that you could use in your story?
Outcome
Become friends
Can you think of any other way that your story could finish?
Turn into something else Live happily ever
after together
Story Mountain
Beginning
Middle
End
A story
mountain helps
us to remember
what happens
in different
parts of the
story
Can you remember
what happened in
the Story of
Hansel and Gretel
• At the beginning
• In the middle
• At the end
Design your own Story Mountain
• Choose 1 or 2 things to change
in your story
• Think about your new setting
and/or character and any
words that you can use to
describe them
• Plan your story on the story
map
Beginning
Middle
End
Lesson 2
Today we will be writing the beginning of
our story.
How do fairy tales normally start?
Once upon a time…
Far, far away…
In a land that time forgot…
Deep in the forest lived…
Look at the beginning of my story:
Once upon a time in a gingerbread
house, there lived a fairy called
Beatrice. She was a lovely fairy and
looked after all animals in the forest.
One day, Beatrice found some
breadcrumbs on her way back home.
When you are writing,
remember about:
Lesson 3
Today we will be writing the middle part
of our story.
• Do you remember what has happened so
far in your story?
Beatrice noticed two little trolls spreading
the breadcrumbs near her gingerbread
house. She asked them to stop but the
trolls ignored her. They gave her a nasty
look and said their names are Hansel and
Gretel.The trolls said they were hungry and
started to eat Beatrice’s house.
When you are writing,
remember about:
What has happened so far
in your story?
Today we will write the end.
Beatrice grabbed her magic wand and muttered a
spell. Hansel and Gretel gave out a terrifying
squeal. You could not see anything because there
was a big, grey cloud of smoke. Few minutes later,
in a place when Hansel and Gretel stood, there
were two green frogs croaking madly. Beatrice
smiled and picked the frogs from the floor. She
told them they can now stay with her as pets
until they learn how to behave better.
When you are writing,
remember about:
Lesson 5
Look at some of my sentences. Are they
correct?
Onceuponatime there lived a fairy called
Beatrice
she waz a lovely feary and lookd after
al animalz in the forrest
beatrice foundsome breadcrumbs on her
way bak hom
When you are checking your
work, remember about:
