Ict 2nd Grading

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The Devils Advocate

ICT SUSPENSE/THRILLER STORY

Written by: Edward Kenneth A. Dragas


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Fade In : Intro SFX Suspense

At the school, about 6 pm 1st

scene

Different scenes of the school were presented. The

quite hallways and pathways, the swaying of the

leaves, the sound of the wind gushing etc etc.

After this the scene will now focus about two

students running. They were afraid, as seen in the

look in their eyes. They were obviously running

away from someone.

It was a non stop game of chase. Whoever got

caught has a price to pay. Whoever lose, DIES. The

two of them can feel the adrenaline rushing through

their veins. They can feel their lactic acid

building up their muscle soreness. But they cannot

stop. THEY SHOULDNT OR THEY WILL DIE.

The place was sheer dark and cold. The deafining

silence intensified their predicament. Theyve been

running down a few blocks non-stop. They can feel

the great exhaustion and asphyxia eating up their

remaining sanity. They turned left, then right. And

just around the corner. It was as if they are

running in circles. It was as if they were running

through the Cretan Labyrinth of Daedalus. No matterhow much theyve tried to hide, she can easily find

them. It was as if she had Ariadnes red fleece

thread attached to them. They kept running. They

had no choice. They have to. It was a long and

narrow pathway. It was dark. Only a single


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flickering light coming from their flashlight

illuminated their way. They ran further. They ran

for their dear lives. It was a dead end. Theres no

where else to go. Theres no turning back. It was

as if the tall graffiti wall will put an end totheir petty little lives. The long goose chase is

coming to an end. The winner is about to be

proclaimed and the loser is about to be killed,

like in the hunger games.

SFX FADE OUT

Person # 1 : Come out, come out wherever you are!

SFX FADE IN

They heard footsteps. Its coming near, as it

intensified with every step.

SFX FADE OUT

Unknown Person : You can always run, but you cant

hide the Angel of Death dont you? You will never

survive the wrath of the disciple of Thanatos!*evil laugh*

SFX FADE IN

They turned their backs behind the wall. The on and

off sequence of the flickering light seemed to be

in synchronized to the racing rhythm of their

heartbeat. They can feel fear and dread all over

the place. Theyve never felt this kind of terror

before. It was deadly. The lights turned off. It

was a complete blackout. Even the moon and the star

s lost its shining light. They seemed to be

incognito behind those thick storm clouds.


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Unknown Person : Its the final curtain call, its

the end of the line

A familiar devilish voice shrilled again through

the place. The lights suddenly went back on. Therewas a silhouette. There was someone under the

light. She was standing still. She had this creepy

grin. She was looking at them. She laughed. It was

sure an evil one.

SFX FADE OUT

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scene a police car, then at the morgue (whichwill be filmed in the school)

SFX FADE IN POLICE CAR

The sound of the wailing sirens stole the

condiments of a beautiful sunny day. Several

policemen came turning the whole neighborhood

upside down for clues. Apparently, their efforts

prove no avail. The news of the mysterious gruesome

death of two persons came like a wildfire. This

created serious fear and distress crisis as the

apparent infamous serial killer had apparently

struck again.

Senior Police Inspector Roderick Manansala : Whats

the cause of death?

Dr. Alexandra Villanueva : Mark Joseph and Rexa

Marasigan, teachers, both 40. Immediate cause of

death would be the ballistic trauma sustained in

the cranium region of the head. Murder weapon would

be a 44 Magnum Revolver. Based on the results of


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the rigor mortis, they have been dead for a maximum

of 4 hours.

SPI Manansala : Revolver eh? It couldnt have been

silenced. How come no one heard a single thing?

Dr. Villanueva : It happened within the vicinity of

the school they teach in between 6 and 7 in the

evening. No one except the two are present in the

scene at that time.

SPI Manansala : He really did it again this time.

This is the third incident this semester.

Dr. Villanueva : He? He could be a she inspector

SPI Manansala : What made you say that?

Dr. Villanueva : Womans Intuition *Mona Lisas

grin*

Senior Police Inspector Roderick Manansala, 34, has

been the head of the Homicide Division for the

local Police Department. He has been personally

handling cases of the infamous Angel of Death.

Dr. Alexandra Nia Villanueva, 30, is the Forensic

Pathologist in charge. Its been almost a month

since she deliberately got transferred and started

working. She developed a particular liking to her

colleague, SPI Manansala.

A blood-thirsty beast that looms in horror and

lures its prey to the shadows, this serial killer

gained its moniker and status as the Angel of

Death. Some were almost regarding him as the modern


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day Jack the Ripper, infamous for inhumane and

precise killing tactics, the Angel of Death had

been wild to his capture since his resurgence to

his four victims, 3 months ago. The Angel of Death

strike with great precision, leaving no trailsbehind except a note saying Another soul hasbeen

collected

Dr. Villanueva : Got any leads or suspects?

SPI Manansala : Well, were considering another

angles. Are you scared?

Dr. Villanueva : No

SPI Manansala : Dont worry, Im always here.

Dr. Villanueva : *blushed* Always? Promise?

SPI Manansala : *smiles* Always. Promise

3thscene : At the office of SPI Manansala

Inspector Manansala has been devoting much of his

time deciphering this series of mysteries. He has

been divulging deeper to that maze only to find

that hes been lost beyond comprehension. There

have been neither patterns nor connections except

for its heinous nature. Unknowing to them, the

horrifying monster lingers right under their noses.

SPI Manansala : Give me the latest status report

about the case about Angel of Death.


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Dr. Villanueva : Arthur Santiago, 46. Autopsy

indicates he suffered from internal hemorrhage on

the cephalic region which deliberately slowed him

down. Possibly he has been hit by a hard object to

incapacitate him. The immediate cause of deathwould be the seven multiple stabs hitting his

pulmonary and renal system.

SPI Manansala : This has been second time this

month. These serial killings need to stop. Why do

you think hes killing these innocent people?

Dr. Villanueva : The world is congested with allsorts of people. Maybe this Angel of Death is

actually a prophet tasked to send a message. His

job is to get rid of the rubbish to perfect this

society. The unfit should be eliminated, theyre

just a waste of space.

SPI Manansala : Wow. Thats a lot of serious

thoughts you put into. Well, I have to go. I need

to finish the paperworks. See you around and oh,I

almost forgot. Were throwing off an engagement

party. I hope youd come.

Dr. Villanueva : Engagement Party? Whos getting

married?

SPI Manansala : Me! Oh right, I havent told you.

Shes coming home from abroad. Uhm, lets see. Next

week Friday. I insist that you come.

Dr. Villanueva : Youre leaving me behind?


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SPI Manansala : Of course not. Ill just be at the

HQ.

Dr. Villanueva : Liar. You promised me *murmurs*

Dr. Villanueva stared at him with fury, then walked

out of the office.

SPI Manansala : Wait!

Inspector Manansala has been working late. This

crime crisis is getting to his nerves is getting tohis nerves. Its past ten in the evening. He was

alone in the office. The lingering drowsiness has

finally knocked him off to sleep.

SFX FADE IN Suspense

A loud ring echoed through the place. He panicked.

His phone was ringing. Someone at this wee hour iscalling him. It must be really important. He

grabbed it up and answered.

SPI Manansala : Hello? Whos this?

Unknown caller : I got some leads. Please do find

her. *conversation muted*

The long conversation had strucked him with terror.

Just when he was starting up to lose hope an give

it up, some angel shed some light. The truth that

has been evading them for how many months has

finally starting to unfold. Before he even got up


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from his chair, his phone rang again.It was her

fianc.

Fatima : Help me. Please. Someones after me.

SPI Manansala : Fatima? Where are you whats going

on?

Fatima : Please help me. Save me.

There was a loud click on the phone. It was cut

short.

Another game of chase has commenced. This time,

its a 3 way battle. No matter how hard it is, this

time, he needs to win. He immediately got off from

his office and ran to their house just a few block

away. He searched the entire house. Fatima wasnt

there. There was no sign of his fianc nor the one

after her. His time is running out. Just when hope

started to disappear, he saw a silhouette. It was a

suspicious one. He secretly followed. It was around

the corner, he found Fatima. Cornered. Threatened.

About to get killed. The silhouette he was

following was pointing something to Fatima. A gun.

A 44 Magnum Revolver. He pointed his gun to the

culprit

SPI Manansala : Stop it Alexa! Youre better than

this!

Dr. Villanueva : *turns around* Well, what if I do

not? Are you going to shoot Inspector Manansala? By


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the way, youre fianc is kinda pretty. No wonder

you were smitten by her.

SPI Manansala : Youre crazy. It was you all along.

Dr. Villanueva : You knew nothing Inspector. *fires

the gun*

There was a loud bang. A white smoke came out from

the gun. Manansala was caught unaware. His service

gun went flying out from his grip, his hand

bleeding.

Fatima : Nooooooooooooo! *shrieks*

Dr. Villanueva : You better stay your place lil

sis or both of you will die. *points her gun at

Fatima*

SPI Manansala : Its the final curtain call, its

the end of the line Angel of Death. Urgh *clutching

his bleeding hand.

Dr. Villanueva : Im surprised that you took ages

to know.

SPI Manansala : Ive got some help. Your Aunt

Beatrice called.

Dr. Villanueva : That pesky hag, she doesnt even

know when to shut up.

SPI Manansala : There is a connection between those

killings. A tiny detail I seemed to have

overlooked. You killed five persons. Three of them


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were responsible for the tragedy your mother had in

your childhood. Your mother has been gang raped

when you were nine. After that, she literally lost

her mind. It was then you lost a mother. Your

father at the blink of rage, killed the fourthmember of the gang. He was imprisoned. The

embarrassment caused by that ruckus has taken a

toll on him. After a year of imprisonment, he

hanged himself. You then lost a father.

Dr. Villanueva : Yes. And Ill never forgive them.

SPI Manansala : But the couple you killed backthen? Why?

Dr. Villanueva : It was the debt I payed when I

started this killing frenzy. I sold myself to the

devil, to Thanatos, vowing to give my soul just to

give me the revenge that I wanted. They were the

tributes. *evil laugh*

Fatima : Then what do you want from me? *clueless*

Dr. Villanueva : You said youll never leave me. I

loved you, but you never reciprocated. And for

what? For her?

SPI Manansala : Please, turn yourself in. Ive

called for back up and their own their way here.

Dr. Villanueva : If I cant have you, no one will.

*points again the gun at Fatima*

The sound of the wailing sirens echoed the place.

Theres no way out now. Theres no escaping. It


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only took few moments before they were completely

surrounded.

SPI Manansala : Please, Alexa, do it for me.

There was a loud bang. Dr. Alexa Villanueva fired

away. The sound of the ricocheted bullet and the

splashing of blood enveloped the place with terror.

SPI Manansala : It has been a harrowing night.I was

taken to the hospital. My hands has been bleeding

profusely. I need some minor medical procedures andsome stitches. My girlfriend, Fatima Rivera has

been tended as well. She received minor bruises but

psychological effects has been the greatest. Dr.

Alexandra Villanueva on the other hand, was taken

to the morgue. Her remains are now being embalmed.

The gunshot fired in her head immediately caused

her life. It was a suicide. The Angel of Death has

taken lives like a thief in the night. Now, she

took a dose of her own medicine. It was a case

closed. *different scenes from the characters are

presented*

Dr. Villanueva : And now you know my story. I am

Dr. Alexa Villanueva. I am the Angel of Death. Some

will understand, but many will judge me. My hands

have been bloodstained with death. For every crime

I committed, the blood of my preys become my

morphine. It was as if a dark invisible energy is

enveloping me. It commands me as it wishes, and I

cannot disobey. It tastes like heaven but feels

like hell. Now I have achieved impunity. I have

achieved freedom from the grip of the devil. Deep


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within me, I know, the fires of hell will haunt me.

The soil will open up and devour my human essence.

The chains of hell will bind it to great

tormenting. A terrible price I have to pay, for I

AM THE DEVILS ADVOCATE.

THE END

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