Exploratory Essay Draft #1
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I went to a relatively prestigious college well known for having the most medical school applicants in the
US. Therefore, I thought I was going to be around people who were as passionate about helping people
as I was. I thought it was going to be a caring community and we were all going to have the “grow
together” attitude like I was told happened in college. I got smacked in the face with reality. Everyone
was extremely competitive, isolated, rude, and didn’t care about anyone but themselves. I’ll start with a
few examples. The clubs were on basically on a grading system where, if you have the most points
compared to everyone else (which you can earn for coming to the meetings, fundraisers, etc.) you can
participate in the activity. This was even the case in volunteering clubs. It went as far as to even get into
some clubs you had to go through a “rush” of sort not unlike the Greek system, then an interview, and
finally, you were either accepted or declined a spot. Additionally, my classmates refused to ever help or
collaborate with their peers. For instance, I once asked someone during class if they heard what the
teacher just said and they ignored me and even went as far as to shield their notebook. It was simply
things like holding the door for another, saying “excuse me” when you walk in front of someone, not
talking loudly on your cell phone in a public place, or saying hi or, god forbid, have a conversation with
another freshman that was completely alien to the people that attended this school. The worst of it was
when I asked people why they wanted to be in the medical field, the main reason we were all there in
the first place. The responses were “because my parents expect me to,” “they make good money,” or “I
want to become famous.” While I can handle rudeness and every other thing mentioned above, these
responses tipped me over the edge. It made me realize that we are now in a world that is purely
materialistic and cold.
I tried to not be so cynical, so I looked towards the actual physicians that worked in the college’s world-
class hospital. That’s how I ended up at a roundtable with physicians and medical students discussing
what was supposed to be about children and providing healthcare abroad. First I must tell you that my
mother is a nurse. So I am used to talking about patients: what happened to them, how it happened,
how you help it, and how their character probably influenced the situation that they were in and how
their stay went at the hospital. So I was expecting something similar like discussions about interesting
cases the physicians had abroad (especially involving children), inspiring stories about survivors and
caregivers, how the lack of certain supplies and abundance of other supplies was a learning experience,
and so on. However, the whole two hours we focused on the research they had done and what they
published. Now, research is incredibly important and it is what makes us advance, particularly in the
medical field. But the fact that all five of the physicians only talked about it and the medical students
only had questions about research made me feel hopeless. These were people in the field of helping
others, and, again, they were focused on things that appeared superficial, in my opinion. I would like to
extend that too to the majority of my professors. You could tell that many of them had never taken a
teaching class before and were primarily there for research due to how many times they referenced it in
a lecture. Even talking with students seemed strenuous on the professor, say, if you had a particular
question after class and, therefore, they were unapproachable which added to the overall isolation.
So, as you can tell, I was crushed and that’s just a few things that happened. I was contemplating my
life-long dream of being in the medical field and even attending college for that matter. I realized that
during all of this, I even started to emulate my peer’s mannerisms, attitudes, and overall lifestyle. So I
quit. After the first quarter, I moved back home. I was hopeful that I would have the courage to go back
for third quarter, but this was something I couldn’t even contemplate doing. However, being home
changed things. It made me realize that that world I was in doesn’t reflect everyone. The reason I
thought college was going to be all of those wonderful things was because that’s actually what does
happen in most cases. Why I expected more from the doctors and physicians is because there are many,
many wonderful people in both professions. Why I was shocked at people’s mannerisms at school was
because there are people, every day, who go out of their way to be courteous and kind to one another
regardless if they are strangers. People truly are loving, caring, thoughtful, passionate and so much
more.
I realize now it hurt me because those traits are what I cherish and hold closest to me. So to be around
all of these people who, in my opinion, were the exact opposite, showed me that maybe everything that
I thought was important couldn’t be important because of how the world actually works. That that part
of myself had to be eradicated and, therefore, nothing mattered. Who would keep the door open for
anyone else if the whole point is to get your body through the door? Who would care about having an
intellectual conversation when learning the facts is going to get you the A+ in class? Who cares about
what your profession is when all it is is a way for you to gain something superficial such as money and
fame? But I think the majority of people are better than that. However, I’ll be honest with you, it’s
something that still stands out to me like a sore thumb. It keeps me up at night wondering why
humanity is so obsessed with social media, or why celebrities are cherished like they found a cure to
Ebola, or why advertising truly is beneficial to companies. But I like to see it that way now as truly a sore
thumb- something that is different from everything else around it. I like to think that the things I find
most valuable in life are what others find most valuable too, because, just like my ideals about college
and professionals, I had to learn it somewhere.