Exemplar 1 - NZQA · Exemplar 2 Not achieved exemplar for 90851 – 2015 Total score 06 Q Grade...
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Not Achieved
Exemplar 1
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Exemplar 1 Not Achieved exemplar for 90851 – 2015 Total score 05
Q Grade score Annotation
1 A3 There is an adequate explanation of how the writer’s experience of the setting changes in 1(c), with a limited reference to past times (“previous visit he was welcomed louder and happier …”)
2 N1
The candidate gives an appropriate example in 2(a), with a brief explanation of the attitude to the dog. 2(b). The explanation is undeveloped. Different attitudes to the dog throughout the text are not addressed.
3 N1
The candidate gives an appropriate example in 2(a), with a brief explanation of understanding the process of gardening 2(b). The explanation is undeveloped. The writer’s experiences of gardening throughout the text are not addressed.
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Not Achieved
Exemplar 2
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Exemplar 2 Not achieved exemplar for 90851 – 2015 Total score 06
Q Grade score Annotation
1 N2 There is a superficial explanation of how the writer’s experience of the setting changes in 1(c) (“would also arrive with a lot of mood and sound”)
2 N2
A correct feature is identified in 2(a), but the explanation given does not outline the writer’s attitude 2(b). The explanation is in 2(c) is superficial and generalised, with a tendency to paraphrase the text.
3 N1
The candidate gives an appropriate example in 2(a), with a brief explanation of understanding the process of gardening 2(b). The explanation is undeveloped. The writer’s experiences of gardening throughout the text are not addressed.