English ARC Work Sample Taylor

Mid Stage 5 English student work sample – Grade C

Language is simple and demonstrates variable control

Attempts to consider context but ideas remain undeveloped

Grade Commentary Taylor has demonstrated a sound understanding of some of the conventions of a film review. A recount of the plot with some evaluation and generalisations based on the film has been provided. An understanding of the context and perspective of the film is apparent. Simple film techniques have been identified and are supported with examples. An appropriate tone has been used, but there is little flair in the use of language which at times is clichéd.

Taylor’s response demonstrates characteristics of work typically produced by a student performing at a grade C standard midway through Stage 5.

English ARC Work Sample Taylor

Language is simple and demonstrates variable control