Assigment 11 part 2

Target AudienceKaya & Sanel

Age – 18 – 21

Gender – Male and Female

Ethnicity – British

Location – United Kingdom

Interests/Hobbies – Partying, sex, drugs

Lifestyle – Free spirit, people who live for the day not the future

Why would our target audience be interested in our idea/plot?• Its based on real life, so it could relate to some of our target audience• Our target audience will be interested to learn about the drug throughout the film and

interested in her hallucinations• The film is based in modern time and youth culture, use of slang in a closed narrative so

they can connect and relate to what they see in the film and leave thinking about the consequences

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Why would our target audience be interested in our film because of its form?• The use of editing in the hallucinations will interest the target audience, they may find it

funny or remarkable• The use of modern music through out the film will interest our target audience as the film

will seem more real which helps them connect to it• The hidden message behind the film will interest them into seeing why the message is

there and therefore will realise there is not way out when you try drugs and not to let their friends pressure them into using it.

Why would your target audience be interested in your film because of genre/conventions?• Our target audience can relate to drama’s as a lot happen in growing up in the society we

live in.• Many of the conventions in the film are very realistic which helps build climax and tension

with our target audience because they would have or will be in the same situation in their lives

• The convention of emotion shares experience with the target audience making them feel understood and not out casted.

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What feedback we received from our target audienceThe majority answers

We asked 18 – 2 19 – 2 20 – 1 21 – 1

• Showing the illusions is very captivating and makes the opening sequence and film different from others of its kind

• Sends our a good and education message

• The title is unique, sounds interesting, and they like it

• Would watch the rest of the film because of the hallucinations and to see what happens to Laura

• They likes the location because it was familiar and makes it more relatable

• We could improve by making flashbacks longer, use a more dramatic scene

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Kaya & Sanel

Characters How have you developed your characters since draft 1?

• We haven't developed the characters at all, we’ve changed them completely.

• We changed our character to people that the target audience can relate to and feel sympathy and emotions or making it seem real.

• We unlike draft have no older characters, the characters in our opening sequence now are all young adults

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Characters Kaya & Sanel

Actor 1:Sanel Homer

Age:16

Actor 1:Laura Hibbitt

Age:18

(The costume will be changed as we didn’t have the right props also the make up we want, we haven't got yet)

Inspiration photos

The eye make up

The cut on the lips and the tears

The dark and dull colours and baggy clothes

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CharactersCostume and props

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Dark wig, to give a more dark look for her character

Bloody nose to show she's not well and doesn't bother about hygiene

Dark blue baggy jacket

Black baggy knee length skirt and black tattered tights

Black runny eye make up

Dirt on face to show she's not hygienic

Black and white dirty top

Pale skin

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Side bag

Black scarf

CharactersMise –en-scene

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Name – Laura Hibbit

Gender – Female

Age – 18

Costume – Dark brown wig, black jacket, baggy skirt, dirty top, dirty knee high boots

Props – Beer bottle (Becks)

Make-up – Pale skin, Black smudged eye make up, bloody nose, sweaty head, tears, cuts on the lip, dirty cheeks

Stereotype – Typical youth that doesn't care about the future and ruins her life Facial expression – Dizzy, dead, lights are on and no ones home

Body language – Effortless, exhausted

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Laura Hibbit –What does she represent?

Laura represents a typical youth in Britain who gets pressured by her friends to try drugs which ends up ruining her life and her future, sending a message to the audience that there's no easy way out of using drugs and that it will end up killing you one day. We want the target audience to relate to her and feel sympathy for her so she is to represent someone they can visualise in real life.

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Actor 2:Gia Alveranga

Age:16

Actor 2:Doll Dolly

Age:None

Inspiration photos

There is no picture of Gia in costume

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Kaya & Sanel

Cute dolls dress which will be ripped and smeared in blood

Stripy black and white tights which will be ripped

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Kaya & Sanel

Name – Doll Dolly

Gender – Female

Age – None

Costume – Tutu skirt, fitted colour full t-shirt, knee high stripy socks and platform high heels

Props – None

Make-up – Eye shadow, blush, fake lashes, face paint, bloody arms

Stereotype – Demented doll Facial expression – Lots of blinking, face doesn't move

Body language – Very, very, fast body movement, lots of random movement

Not actual character

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Doll Dolly–What does she represent?

Doll Dolly is meant to be represented as a hallucinated character that doesn't exist in real life. She is there to frighten and show what happens while Laura in on LSD


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Actor 2:Rahel Fasil

Age:16

Actor 2:Clown

Age:None

Inspiration photos

There is no picture of Rahel in costume

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Kaya & Sanel

Orange afro wig

Clown jumpsuit

Clown shoes

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Kaya & Sanel

Name – Clown

Gender – Male

Age – None

Costume – Colour full jumpsuit and hat

Props – None

Make-up – Blood tears, black around the eyes, drawn mouth

Stereotype – Demented Clown Facial expression – Lots of blinking, face doesn't move

Body language – Very, very, fast body movement, lots of random movement


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Clown–What does he represent?

Clown is meant to be represented as a hallucinated character that doesn't exist in real life. She is there to frighten and show what happens while Laura in on LSD


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Locations (her journey from home to the park/ forest)Kaya & Sanel

The front door where Laura will leave

She starts her journey to the forest

This is where CCTV will watch her walk into the park

She continues her journey to the forest

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LocationsKaya & Sanel

She enters the forest and continues her journey

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Locations – Where the scene happensKaya & Sanel

This is where she will stop and collapse

• Its always accessible as there is no gate stopping you getting in

• We will get there by 226 bus then walking up to the park down a straight road

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Locations – The park/forestKaya & Sanel

Heath and Safety:

• Could slip as it's very muddy

• Trees can fall on you

• You could trip on rock

• Prickly leaves

• Poisonous little insects

• Could be kidnapped

• Cars goes by – could run over

• Could get a hay-fever attack

• Could fall over the CCTV platform

• It could rain

• Animals in cages and the cages are loose so animal could set free

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Locations Kaya & Sanel

This is the room where Laura will first try the drug in the flashbacks

• This location is always accessible as its one of our group members home

• We will get there by bus then walking

Heath and Safety:• House could go on fire

• Fall over

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The bath where Laura will cut herself in the flashbacks


• We will get there by bus then walkingHeath and Safety:

• House could go on fire• Fall down the stairs

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Where Laura will party in the flashbacks

• This location is only accessible when the school is open and when the drama room is being used

• We will get there by bus then walking as we would use it during the school day

Heath and Safety:• Lights can fall on you

• Other technical things can fall on you• School could go on fire

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Where Laura gets in a fight with her friend in the flashbacks


• We will get there by bus then walking

Heath and Safety:• House could go on fire

• Fall over

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The front door Laura leaves from

• This location is only accessible when someone's in the house to let us open the door as they’re not a group member• We will get there by bus then walking

Heath and Safety:• Get kidnapped• Fall over

• Cross the road and get run over

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