Esere Simei-Akajagbo

Alterations along the way

Enigma was a bag

The forestry abandoned canal created a shadow- which made it look like we had poor lighting

Credits were incorrectly used, font and style was all different

We never challenged ourselves with the score music. We just dragged and dropped sound to the background

Flashbacks showed her cleaning blood

We used a variety of angles such as low, long, mid The sequence was under 2mins!

Draft 1: Baggage

This was much better than draft 1

However, The music created sympathy and we wanted tension

We introduced a new character

Attention to MES- the blood looked realistic

The mirror scene was an unique shot which was great

The we tried to challenge our selves by using Foley- never worked out. The heavy breathing never matched the action

It was just WEIRD! And the crunching of Kayla walking on pebbles

Match on action at the end- however the ending seemed like and ending. It didn't encourage you to want to watch more

Draft 2- Who’s Next?

Was a DISASTER!!!!

We couldn't upload it, had bad lighting. Footage was grainy

The story slightly as another character was introduced Holly

Camera was shaky and unleveled

Draft 3 & Draft 4

We decided to change the storyline

We noticed that our genre was changing to horror as it was involving gory footage

We decided to watch more Horror films and we were influenced by Maniac, Hard Candy, Jeepers Creepers, Creep..

Therefore, we decided to use POV- to restrict Kayla's identity and to enhance the slasher horror side as these films were inspirations to us

Draft 5