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FY

E P

rog

ram

at

Ma

rqu

ette

Un

iver

sity

Ru

bri

c fo

r S

cori

ng

En

gli

sh 1

– U

nit

1, R

het

ori

cal

An

aly

sis

July

20

09

Wri

tin

g C

on

ven

tion

s 3 –

Pro

fici

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(A,

AB

)

2 –

Com

pet

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(B, B

C,

C)

1 –

Dev

elo

pin

g O

utc

om

e

(CD

, D

, F

) R

het

ori

cal

Neg

oti

ati

on

of

PU

RP

OS

E &

AU

DIE

NC

E

The

wri

tten

text…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

xp

ress

es p

urp

ose

in

th

e

intr

od

uct

ion a

nd t

hes

is s

tate

men

t

• E

ffec

tiv

ely a

dd

ress

es c

lass

an

d t

each

er

w/i

n c

om

mo

n c

on

ver

sati

on

ab

ou

t li

tera

cy

Rea

der

s ar

e d

efin

itel

y p

ersu

aded

to

con

sid

er t

he

text’

s id

eas

• P

urp

ose

re

rhet

ori

cal

anal

ysi

s is

dis

cern

ible

bu

t no

t ex

pli

cit

• A

dd

ress

es c

lass

an

d t

each

er w

/in

com

mo

n c

on

ver

sati

on

ab

ou

t li

tera

cy

Rea

der

s ar

e p

rob

ably

per

suad

ed t

o

con

sid

er t

he

text’

s id

eas

• V

agu

ely e

xp

ress

es w

rite

r’s

pu

rpo

se i

n

the

intr

o

• G

ives

lit

tle

atte

nti

on

to

aud

ien

ce

Rea

der

s ar

e co

nfu

sed

an

d/o

r in

sult

ed

and

are

no

t p

ersu

aded

to

con

sid

er t

he

text’

s id

eas

OR

GA

NIZ

AT

ION

/LO

GIC

Giv

en t

he

purp

ose

and

aud

ien

ce,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• E

mp

loys

thes

is s

tate

men

t th

at f

ocu

ses

wri

ter’

s su

mm

ativ

e p

oin

t (“

stro

ng

resp

on

se”)

ab

ou

t th

e te

xt

bei

ng a

nal

yze

d.

• A

pp

rop

riat

ely a

dd

ress

es t

he

thre

e p

arts

of

the

assi

gn

men

t: s

um

mar

y,

rhet

ori

cal

anal

ysi

s, s

tro

ng r

esp

on

se

• E

mp

loys

logic

al s

equ

ence

of

con

nec

ted

¶s

T

he

org

aniz

atio

nal

lo

gic

enh

ance

s a

read

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g o

f th

e te

xt’

s id

eas

• E

mp

loys

thes

is s

tate

men

t th

at e

stab

-

lish

es s

om

e o

rgan

izat

ion

fo

r th

e pap

er

• E

mp

loys

clea

r ar

ran

gem

ent

of

¶s

Th

e o

rgan

izat

ion

al l

ogic

ass

ists

a

read

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g o

f th

e te

xt’

s id

eas

• E

mp

loys

thes

is s

tate

men

t th

at i

s

form

ula

ic o

r u

nre

late

d t

o t

he

body ¶

s

• E

mp

loys

con

fusi

ng a

rran

gem

ent

of

¶s

O

rgan

izat

ion

pro

ble

ms

mak

e it

dif

fi-

cult

fo

r a

read

er t

o f

oll

ow

th

e te

xt’

s id

eas

DE

VE

LO

PM

EN

T

Giv

en t

he

purp

ose

and

aud

ien

ce,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely f

ram

es ¶

s ar

ou

nd w

rite

r’s

ow

n

po

ints

, w

hic

h l

ink t

o t

hes

is

• E

ffec

tiv

ely u

ses

sum

mar

y,

par

aph

rase

,

and

qu

ota

tion

fro

m t

he

anal

yze

d t

ext

as

evid

ence

su

ppo

rtin

g t

ho

se p

oin

ts

• E

ffec

tivel

y e

mp

loys

tact

ics

of

exp

osi

tion

• F

ram

es ¶

s ar

ou

nd g

ener

al s

tate

men

ts

• U

ses

sum

mar

y,

par

aph

rase

, &

qu

ota

tio

n

to d

escr

ibe

the

anal

yze

d t

ext

rath

er t

han

to

sup

po

rt p

oin

ts a

bo

ut

it

• E

mp

loys

tact

ics

of

exp

osi

tion

wit

hin

par

agra

ph

s

• S

tate

s gen

eral

po

ints

th

at a

re v

agu

e,

con

fusi

ng,

or

un

rela

ted t

o t

hes

is;

or

pre

-

sen

ts p

arag

rap

hs

wit

ho

ut

po

int

sen

ten

ces

• P

arag

rap

hs

serv

e m

ain

ly t

o s

um

mar

ize

the

anal

yze

d t

ext

• O

mit

s o

r u

ses

con

fusi

ng ¶

bre

aks

INT

EG

RA

TIN

G S

OU

RC

E

MA

TE

RIA

L

Giv

en t

he

purp

ose

and

aud

ien

ce,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• U

ses

smo

oth

, cl

ear

attr

ibu

tive

ph

rase

s an

d

con

sist

ent

ML

A s

tyle

par

enth

etic

al c

itat

ion

s

wh

en r

efer

rin

g t

o m

ater

ial

fro

m t

he

text

bei

ng a

nal

yze

d o

r to

an

y e

xte

rnal

mat

eria

l

that

is

no

t co

mm

on

kn

ow

led

ge

• P

rese

nts

acc

ura

te M

LA

wo

rks

cite

d l

ist

• U

ses

attr

ibu

tio

n a

nd

in

tern

al M

LA

sty

le

cita

tio

ns

wit

h l

ittl

e aw

kw

ard

nes

s an

d f

ew

inco

nsi

sten

cies

or

erro

rs

• P

rese

nts

co

mp

eten

t M

LA

wo

rks

cite

d

list

• O

mit

s m

any a

ttri

bu

tive

ph

rase

s an

d u

ses

few

or

un

clea

r in

tern

al M

LA

cit

atio

ns

• R

elie

s ex

ten

sivel

y o

n q

uota

tions

• P

rese

nts

in

com

ple

te o

r in

accu

rate

ML

A

wo

rks

cite

d l

ist

ST

UD

EN

T E

XP

ER

T’S

ET

HO

S

Giv

en t

he

purp

ose

and

aud

ien

ce,

the

wri

tten

tex

t em

plo

ys

an

acad

emic

vo

ice

that

• D

emo

nst

rate

s co

mp

reh

ensi

ve

un

der

stan

din

g o

f th

e co

nte

nt

• D

emo

nst

rate

s p

erso

nal

en

gag

emen

t

wit

h t

he

con

ten

t (v

ia t

he

wri

ter’

s id

eas,

val

ues

, b

elie

fs)

R

ead

ers

per

ceiv

e th

is t

extu

al v

oic

e as

reli

able

an

d t

rust

wo

rth

y

• D

emo

nst

rate

s g

ener

al u

nd

erst

and

ing o

f

the

con

ten

t

• D

emo

nst

rate

s so

me

eng

agem

ent

wit

h

the

con

ten

t

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

mo

stly

un

reli

able

• D

emo

nst

rate

s li

ttle

or

no

un

der

stan

din

g

of

the

con

tent

• D

emo

nst

rate

s li

ttle

or

no

per

son

al

engag

emen

t w

ith

th

e co

nte

nt

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

un

reli

able

RE

AD

AB

ILIT

Y

The

wri

tten

text…

• C

on

tain

s fe

w o

r n

o e

rro

rs i

n s

pel

lin

g,

gra

mm

ar,

or

pu

nct

uat

ion

• E

ffec

tiv

ely u

ses

sen

ten

ces

wit

h c

lear

sub

ject

s an

d v

erb

s

• U

ses

wel

l-ch

ose

n v

oca

bu

lary

fo

r an

effe

ctiv

e ac

adem

ic s

tyle

• C

on

tain

s so

me

dis

trac

tin

g e

rro

rs i

n

spel

lin

g,

gra

mm

ar,

pu

nct

uat

ion

, or

use

s

inef

fect

ive

sen

ten

ce s

tru

ctu

re,

bu

t th

ese

pro

ble

ms

do

no

t in

terf

ere

wit

h a

rea

der

’s

com

pre

hen

sio

n

• U

ses

larg

ely a

pp

rop

riat

e ac

adem

ic w

ord

cho

ices

an

d s

tyle

• C

on

tain

s nu

mer

ou

s d

istr

acti

ng e

rro

rs i

n

spel

lin

g,

gra

mm

ar,

pu

nct

uat

ion

, or

sen

ten

ce s

tru

ctu

re,

som

e o

f w

hic

h

inte

rfer

e w

ith

a r

ead

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g

• C

on

tain

s vo

cab

ula

ry c

ho

ices

that

are

con

fusi

ng o

r in

app

rop

riat

e fo

r an

acad

emic

sty

le

FYE Assessment Report Appendix B, FYE Rubrics September 2012

FY

E P

rog

ram

at

Ma

rqu

ette

Un

iver

sity

Ru

bri

c fo

r S

cori

ng

En

gli

sh 1

– U

nit

2, A

cad

emic

Ex

posi

tion

July

20

09

Wri

tin

g C

on

ven

tio

ns

3 –

Pro

fici

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(A,

AB

)

2 –

Com

pet

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(B, B

C,

C)

1 –

Dev

elo

pin

g O

utc

om

e

(CD

, D

, F

)

Rh

eto

rica

l N

egoti

ati

on

of

PU

RP

OS

E &

AU

DIE

NC

E

The

wri

tten

text…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely a

rtic

ula

tes

pu

rpo

se i

n t

he

intr

od

uct

ion a

nd t

hes

is s

tate

men

t in

ter

ms

of

surp

risi

ng v

iew

an

d k

no

wle

dge

gap

• E

ffec

tiv

ely a

dd

ress

es a

ud

ien

ce a

s le

ss

info

rmed

th

an w

rite

r b

ut

par

t o

f th

e sa

me

con

ver

sati

on

abo

ut

glo

bal

pop

cult

ure

Rea

der

s ar

e d

efin

itel

y p

ersu

aded

to

con

sid

er t

he

text’

s id

eas.

• A

nn

oun

ces

sub

ject

mat

ter

in t

he

intr

od

uct

ion a

nd

/or

thes

is s

tate

men

t bu

t

pu

rpo

se r

e su

rpri

sin

g v

iew

an

d k

no

wle

dge

gap

rem

ain

s im

pli

cit

• A

ckn

ow

led

ges

au

die

nce

as

par

t o

f a

con

ver

sati

on

abo

ut

glo

bal

pop

cult

ure

Rea

der

s ar

e p

rob

ably

per

suad

ed t

o

con

sid

er t

he

text’

s id

eas.

• V

agu

ely e

xp

ress

es w

rite

r’s

pu

rpo

se i

n

the

intr

o;

thes

is i

s m

issi

ng,

vag

ue,

or

on

ly

des

crip

tive

(“al

l ab

out”

wri

tin

g)

• L

acks

atte

nti

on

to

su

rpri

sin

g v

iew

or

kn

ow

led

ge

gap

• G

ives

lit

tle

atte

nti

on

to

aud

ien

ce

Rea

der

s ar

e co

nfu

sed

an

d/o

r in

sult

ed

and

are

no

t p

ersu

aded

to

con

sid

er t

he

text’

s

idea

s.

OR

GA

NIZ

AT

ION

/LO

GIC

Giv

en t

he

purp

ose

and

aud

ien

ce,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• E

mp

loys

wri

ter’

s id

eas

as m

ain

po

ints

• E

mp

loys

logic

al a

rran

gem

ent

of

¶s

• E

mp

loys

logic

al a

rran

gem

ent

w/i

n ¶

s b

y

mo

vin

g f

rom

po

ints

to

par

ticu

lars

• E

ffec

tiv

ely c

on

clu

des

th

e p

aper

by

mo

vin

g b

eyo

nd

su

mm

ary

T

he

org

aniz

atio

nal

lo

gic

enh

ance

s a

read

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g o

f w

rite

r’s

po

ints

.

• U

nev

enly

use

s w

rite

r’s

idea

s as

mai

n p

ts

• E

mp

loys

clea

r ar

ran

gem

ent

of

¶s

• E

mp

loys

clea

r ar

ran

gem

ent

w/i

n ¶

s bu

t

inco

nsi

sten

t in

rel

atio

nsh

ip b

etw

een

poin

ts

and

par

ticu

lars

• C

on

clu

sion

co

nta

ins

mo

re t

han

su

mm

ary

Th

e o

rgan

izat

ion

al l

ogic

ass

ists

a

read

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g o

f w

rite

r’s

po

ints

.

• F

ocu

ses

on

rea

din

gs,

not

wri

ter’

s id

eas

• E

mp

loys

con

fusi

ng s

equ

ence

of

¶s

• E

mp

loys

con

fusi

ng a

rran

gem

ent

w/i

n ¶

s •

• E

mp

loys

no

co

ncl

usi

on

or

on

e th

at i

s a

rep

etit

ive

sum

mar

y

Lac

k o

f cl

ear

org

aniz

atio

n m

akes

it

dif

ficu

lt f

or

a re

ader

to

und

erst

and

wri

ter’

s

po

ints

.

DE

VE

LO

PM

EN

T

Giv

en t

he

purp

ose

and

aud

ien

ce,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

mp

loys

sum

mar

y a

nd

rhet

ori

cal

anal

ysi

s o

f re

adin

gs

• E

ffec

tiv

ely s

tate

s w

rite

r’s

reas

on

ing i

n

sup

po

rt o

f th

e th

esis

• E

ffec

tiv

ely s

tate

s ev

iden

ce,

supp

ort

ing

wri

ter’

s th

inkin

g w

ith

tex

tual

ref

eren

ces

(via

su

mm

ary,

par

aph

rase

, &

qu

ota

tio

n)

• E

mp

loys

mo

re s

um

mar

y t

han

an

alysi

s

• A

deq

uat

ely s

tate

s an

d i

llu

stra

tes

wri

ter’

s

reas

on

ing i

n s

upp

ort

of

the

thes

is

• A

deq

uat

ely s

tate

s ev

iden

ce,

sup

po

rtin

g

wri

ter’

s th

inkin

g w

ith

tex

tual

ref

eren

ces

(via

su

mm

ary,

par

aph

rase

, &

qu

ota

tio

n)

• D

oes

no

t d

emo

nst

rate

rh

eto

rica

l an

alysi

s

of

read

ings

and

con

tain

s to

o m

uch

sum

mar

y

• R

efer

s to

rea

din

gs

bu

t d

oes

n’t

co

nn

ect

them

to

wri

ter’

s th

inkin

g—

min

imal

use

of

sum

mar

y a

nd

par

aph

rase

INF

OR

MA

TIO

N L

ITE

RA

CY

Giv

en t

he

purp

ose

and

aud

ien

ce,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely f

ocu

ses

on

3 w

ell-

cho

sen

texts

, at

lea

st o

ne

w/

vie

w f

r. o

uts

ide

U.S

.

• U

ses

clea

r at

trib

uti

ve

ph

rase

s an

d

effe

ctiv

ely c

red

its

sou

rces

wit

h c

on

sist

ent

inte

rnal

ML

A s

tyle

par

enth

etic

al c

itat

ion

s

• P

rese

nts

acc

ura

te M

LA

wo

rks

cite

d l

ist

• D

iscu

sses

3 r

ead

ings,

at

leas

t on

e w

/

vie

w f

rom

ou

tsid

e U

.S.

• U

ses

attr

ibu

tio

n a

nd

cre

dit

s so

urc

es w

ith

inte

rnal

ML

A s

tyle

cit

atio

ns

wit

h o

nly

a

few

in

con

sist

enci

es o

r er

rors

• P

rese

nts

co

mp

eten

t M

LA

wo

rks

cite

d l

ist

• D

iscu

sses

3 r

ead

ings

un

even

ly,

w/o

adeq

uat

e at

ten

tio

n t

o v

iew

fr.

ou

tsid

e U

.S.

• O

mit

s m

any a

ttri

bu

tive

ph

rase

s an

d u

ses

few

or

un

clea

r M

LA

sty

le c

itat

ion

s

• P

rese

nts

in

com

ple

te o

r in

accu

rate

ML

A

wo

rks

cite

d l

ist

ST

UD

EN

T E

XP

ER

T’S

ET

HO

S

The

wri

tten

text

em

plo

ys

an

acad

emic

vo

ice

that

• D

emo

nst

rate

s th

oro

ugh

und

erst

and

ing o

f

con

ten

t

• D

emo

nst

rate

s p

erso

nal

en

gag

emen

t

wit

h c

on

ten

t

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

reli

able

an

d k

no

wle

dgea

ble

.

• D

emo

nst

rate

s g

ener

al u

nd

erst

and

ing o

f

con

ten

t

• D

emo

nst

rate

s so

me

per

son

al e

ngag

emen

t

wit

h c

on

ten

t

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

mo

stly

rel

iab

le a

nd

kn

ow

led

gea

ble

.

• D

emo

nst

rate

s m

inim

al u

nd

erst

and

ing o

f

con

ten

t

• D

emo

nst

rate

s m

inim

al e

ngag

emen

t w

ith

con

ten

t

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

no

t p

arti

cula

rly r

elia

ble

or

kno

wle

dgea

ble

.

RE

AD

AB

ILIT

Y

The

wri

tten

text…

• C

on

tain

s fe

w o

r n

o e

rro

rs i

n s

pel

lin

g,

gra

mm

ar,

pu

nct

uat

ion

or

sen

ten

ce s

tru

ctu

re

(esp

. su

bje

ct p

osi

tion

, ac

tive

ver

bs,

par

alle

lism

, an

d t

ran

siti

on

s)

• U

ses

wel

l-ch

ose

n v

oca

bu

lary

an

d a

n

emp

loys

an e

ffec

tiv

e ac

adem

ic s

tyle

• C

on

tain

s so

me

dis

trac

tin

g e

rro

rs i

n

spel

lin

g,

gra

mm

ar,

pu

nct

uat

ion

, or

sen

ten

ce

stru

ctu

re, b

ut

thes

e er

rors

do

no

t in

terf

ere

wit

h c

om

pre

hen

sio

n

• E

mp

loys

a la

rgel

y a

pp

rop

riat

e ac

adem

ic

style

• C

on

tain

s nu

mer

ou

s er

rors

in

spel

lin

g,

gra

mm

ar,

pu

nct

uat

ion

, o

r se

nte

nce

stru

ctu

re,

som

e in

terf

erin

g w

ith

a r

ead

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g

• C

on

tain

s vo

cab

ula

ry c

ho

ices

co

nfu

sin

g

or

inap

pro

pri

ate

for

an a

cad

emic

sty

le

FYE Assessment Report Appendix B, FYE Rubrics September 2012

FY

E P

rog

ram

at

Ma

rqu

ette

Un

iver

sity

Ru

bri

c fo

r S

cori

ng

En

gli

sh 1

– U

nit

3, A

cad

emic

Arg

um

ent

Wri

tin

g C

on

ven

tio

ns

3 –

Pro

fici

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(A,

AB

)

2 –

Com

pet

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(B, B

C,

C)

1 –

Dev

elo

pin

g O

utc

om

e

(CD

, D

, F

)

Rh

eto

rica

l N

egoti

ati

on

of

PU

RP

OS

E &

AU

DIE

NC

E

The

wri

tten

text…

• U

ses

intr

o e

ffec

tivel

y t

o d

efin

e is

sue

in

a w

ay t

hat

ack

no

wle

dg

es c

om

pet

ing

per

spec

tives

• E

ffec

tiv

ely a

sser

ts m

ajo

r cl

aim

in

th

esis

stat

emen

t an

d g

ives

over

vie

w o

f ar

gu

men

t

(may

be

two

sen

ten

ces)

• I

ncl

ud

es e

ffec

tive

just

ific

atio

n s

ecti

on

• E

ffec

tiv

ely a

dd

ress

es a

ud

ien

ce a

s p

art

of

com

mo

n c

on

ver

sati

on

ab

ou

t en

vir

on

-

men

tal

issu

es b

ut

less

in

form

ed o

n

spec

ific

iss

ue

Rea

der

s ar

e d

efin

itel

y p

ersu

aded

to

con

sid

er t

he

text’

s id

eas.

• D

efin

es i

ssu

e in

in

tro

du

ctio

n i

n a

way

that

ack

no

wle

dges

co

mp

etin

g p

ersp

ecti

ves

• U

ses

thes

is s

tate

men

t to

pre

sen

t cl

aim

;

over

vie

w o

f ar

gu

men

t vag

ue

or

mis

sin

g

• I

ncl

ud

es j

ust

ific

atio

n s

ecti

on

• A

dd

ress

es a

ud

ien

ce a

s p

art

of

com

mo

n

con

ver

sati

on

abo

ut

envir

on

men

tal

issu

es

bu

t le

ss i

nfo

rmed

on

sp

ecif

ic i

ssu

e

Rea

der

s ar

e p

rob

ably

per

suad

ed t

o

con

sid

er t

he

text’

s id

eas.

• D

efin

es i

ssu

e vag

uel

y,

wit

ho

ut

ackn

ow

led

gin

g c

om

pet

ing p

ersp

ecti

ves

• U

ses

vag

ue

or

no

th

esis

sta

tem

ent,

or

thes

is i

s no

t ar

gu

able

• O

mit

s o

r giv

es l

ittl

e at

ten

tio

n t

o

just

ific

atio

n s

ecti

on

• G

ives

lit

tle

atte

nti

on

to

aud

ien

ce

Rea

der

s ar

e co

nfu

sed

an

d/o

r in

sult

ed

and

are

no

t p

ersu

aded

to

con

sid

er t

he

text’

s id

eas.

OR

GA

NIZ

AT

ION

/LO

GIC

S

ee A

BG

W 4

57

.

Giv

en t

he

purp

ose

and

aud

ien

ce,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

mp

loys

logic

al ¶

seq

uen

ce

to m

ake

and

def

end

cla

im

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

mp

loys

logic

al

arra

ngem

ent

of

idea

s w

ith

in e

ach

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

mp

loys

con

clu

sio

n t

hat

mo

ves

bey

on

d s

um

mar

y t

ow

ard

act

ion

Th

e o

rgan

izat

ion

al l

ogic

en

han

ces

a

read

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g o

f th

e te

xt’

s id

eas.

• E

mp

loys

reas

on

ably

cle

ar ¶

seq

uen

ce

• E

mp

loys

reas

on

ably

cle

ar a

rran

gem

ent

of

idea

s w

ith

in e

ach

• A

deq

uat

ely e

mp

loys

con

clu

sio

n t

hat

do

es m

ore

th

an s

um

mar

ize

Th

e o

rgan

izat

ion

al l

ogic

ass

ists

a

read

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g o

f th

e te

xt’

s id

eas.

• P

rese

nts

co

nfu

sin

g a

rran

gem

ent

of

¶s

• P

rese

nts

co

nfu

sin

g a

rran

gem

ent

of

idea

s

wit

hin

eac

h ¶

• E

mp

loys

vag

ue

or

sum

mar

y c

on

clu

sion

Th

e la

ck o

f p

urp

ose

ful

org

aniz

atio

n

mak

es i

t d

iffi

cult

fo

r a

read

er t

o u

nd

er-

stan

d t

he

text’

s id

eas.

DE

VE

LO

PM

EN

T

Giv

en t

he

purp

ose

and

aud

ien

ce,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

mp

loys

reas

on

s to

su

ppo

rt

thes

is a

rgu

men

t— m

akin

g a

nd

def

end

ing

a cl

aim

ab

ou

t a

deb

atab

le i

ssu

e

• E

ffec

tiv

ely u

ses

bo

dy ¶

s to

su

pp

ort

reas

on

s w

/ ev

iden

ce f

rom

rea

son

ing &

rese

arch

• S

mo

oth

ly i

nte

gra

tes

sou

rces

via

su

m-

mar

y,

par

aph

rase

, &

qu

ota

tion

as

nee

ded

• A

deq

uat

ely e

mp

loys

reas

on

ed

argu

men

t—m

akin

g a

nd

def

end

ing a

cla

im

abo

ut

a d

ebat

able

iss

ue

• A

deq

uat

ely s

tate

s w

rite

r’s

reas

on

s

(gen

eral

po

ints

) th

at s

upp

ort

th

e th

esis

• A

deq

uat

ely s

up

po

rts

reas

on

s w

/ ev

i-

den

ce f

r. r

easo

nin

g &

res

earc

h v

ia s

um

-

mar

y,

par

aph

rase

, &

qu

ota

tion

as

nee

ded

• D

oes

no

t d

emo

nst

rate

rea

son

ed

argu

men

t

• S

tate

s re

aso

ns

that

are

vag

ue,

co

nfu

sin

g,

or

un

rela

ted

to

th

e th

esis

• E

mp

loys

litt

le o

r n

o e

vid

ence

INF

OR

MA

TIO

N L

ITE

RA

CY

Giv

en t

he

purp

ose

and

aud

ien

ce,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• I

nte

gra

tes

effe

ctiv

ely,

sum

mar

izes

an

d

cou

nte

rs a

per

tin

ent

op

po

sin

g a

rgu

men

t

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

mp

loys

rhet

ori

cal

anal

ysi

s

in d

iscu

ssio

n o

f al

l so

urc

es

• U

ses

clea

r at

trib

uti

ve

ph

rase

s an

d

effe

ctiv

ely c

red

its

sou

rces

wit

h c

on

sist

ent

inte

rnal

ML

A s

tyle

par

enth

etic

al c

itat

ion

s

• P

rese

nts

acc

ura

te M

LA

wo

rks

cite

d l

ist

• D

iscu

sses

op

po

sin

g a

rgu

men

t o

nly

bri

efly

• C

on

tain

s ev

iden

ce o

f rh

eto

rica

l an

alysi

s

• U

ses

attr

ibu

tio

n, an

d c

red

its

sou

rces

wit

h i

nte

rnal

ML

A s

tyle

cit

atio

ns

wit

h

on

ly a

few

in

con

sist

enci

es o

r er

rors

• P

rese

nts

co

mp

eten

t M

LA

wo

rks

cite

d

list

• O

mit

s tr

eatm

ent

of

op

po

sin

g a

rgu

men

t

• O

mit

s m

any a

ttri

bu

tive

ph

rase

s an

d u

ses

few

or

un

clea

r M

LA

sty

le c

itat

ion

s

• P

rese

nts

in

com

ple

te o

r in

accu

rate

ML

A

wo

rks

cite

d l

ist

C

on

tinu

ed o

n t

he

rever

se

July

200

9

FYE Assessment Report Appendix B, FYE Rubrics September 2012

FY

E P

rog

ram

at

Ma

rqu

ette

Un

iver

sity

Ru

bri

c fo

r S

cori

ng

En

gli

sh 1

– U

nit

3, A

cad

emic

Arg

um

ent

Wri

tin

g C

on

ven

tio

ns

3 –

Pro

fici

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(A,

AB

)

2 –

Com

pet

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(B, B

C,

C)

1 –

Dev

elo

pin

g O

utc

om

e

(CD

, D

, F

) S

TU

DE

NT

EX

PE

RT’S

ET

HO

S

the

wri

tten

tex

t em

plo

ys

an

acad

emic

vo

ice

that

• D

emo

nst

rate

s co

mp

reh

ensi

ve

un

der

stan

din

g o

f co

nte

nt

• D

emo

nst

rate

s p

erso

nal

en

gag

emen

t w

ith

con

ten

t via

wri

ter’

s id

eas,

val

ues

, b

elie

fs

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

Tru

stw

ort

hy.

• D

emo

nst

rate

s g

ener

al u

nd

erst

and

ing o

f

con

ten

t

• D

emo

nst

rate

s so

me

per

son

al

engag

emen

t w

ith

th

e co

nte

nt

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

mo

stly

tru

stw

ort

hy.

• D

emo

nst

rate

s li

ttle

or

no

un

der

stan

din

g

of

con

ten

t

• D

emo

nst

rate

lit

tle

or

no

per

sonal

engag

emen

t co

nte

nt

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

no

t tr

ust

wo

rth

y.

RE

AD

AB

ILIT

Y

The

wri

tten

text…

• C

on

tain

s fe

w o

r n

o e

rro

rs i

n s

pel

lin

g,

gra

mm

ar,

pu

nct

uat

ion

, o

r se

nte

nce

stru

ctu

re

• E

ffec

tiv

ely u

ses

sen

ten

ces

wit

h c

lear

sub

ject

s &

ver

bs,

par

alle

lism

, tr

ansi

tion

s

• S

ho

ws

evid

ence

of

hav

ing a

tten

ded

to

old

-new

co

ntr

act

to e

nh

ance

rea

dab

ilit

y

• U

ses

wel

l-ch

ose

n v

oca

bu

lary

fo

r an

effe

ctiv

e ac

adem

ic s

tyle

• C

on

tain

s so

me

dis

trac

tin

g e

rro

rs i

n

spel

lin

g,

gra

mm

ar,

pu

nct

uat

ion

, or

sen

ten

ce s

tru

ctu

re, b

ut

thes

e er

rors

do

no

t

inte

rfer

e w

ith

co

mp

reh

ensi

on

• I

ncl

ud

es s

ente

nce

seq

uen

ces

that

nee

d

tran

siti

on

s, p

aral

lel

stru

ctu

re,

and

/or

app

lica

tion

of

old

-new

co

ntr

act

pri

nci

ple

s

• L

arg

ely e

mp

loys

app

rop

riat

e ac

adem

ic

style

• C

on

tain

s nu

mer

ou

s d

istr

acti

ng e

rro

rs i

n

spel

lin

g,

gra

mm

ar,

pu

nct

uat

ion

, or

sen

ten

ce s

tru

ctu

re,

som

e o

f w

hic

h

inte

rfer

e w

ith

a r

ead

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g

• C

on

tain

s no

evid

ence

of

atte

nti

on

to

tran

siti

on

s, p

aral

leli

sm,

or

the

old

-new

con

trac

t

• C

on

tain

s vo

cab

ula

ry c

ho

ices

co

nfu

sin

g

or

inap

pro

pri

ate

for

an a

cad

emic

sty

le

FYE Assessment Report Appendix B, FYE Rubrics September 2012

FY

E P

rog

ram

at

Ma

rqu

ette

Un

iver

sity

Ru

bri

c fo

r S

cori

ng

En

gli

sh 1

– U

nit

4, N

arr

ati

ve

Lit

era

cy

July

200

9

C

on

tinu

ed o

n r

ever

se

Wri

tin

g C

on

ven

tio

ns

3 –

Pro

fici

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(A,

AB

)

2 –

Com

pet

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(B, B

C,

C)

1 –

Dev

elo

pin

g O

utc

om

e

(CD

, D

, F

)

Rh

eto

rica

l N

egoti

ati

on

of

PU

RP

OS

E &

AU

DIE

NC

E

The

wri

tten

text…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely d

efin

es p

urp

ose

to e

xam

ine

the

rhet

ori

cal

imp

act

of

the

textu

al,

cult

ura

l, a

nd

eth

ical

dim

ensi

on

s of

a

nar

rati

ve

con

tain

ed w

ith

in a

tex

t th

at h

as

bro

ader

pu

rpo

ses

• E

ffec

tiv

ely a

dd

ress

es c

lass

an

d t

each

er

as a

n a

ud

ien

ce c

uri

ou

s to

rea

d a

bo

ut

lin

ks

amo

ng t

extu

al,

cult

ura

l, a

nd

eth

ical

dim

ensi

on

s o

f n

arra

tive

in t

his

con

text

Rea

der

s ar

e d

efin

itel

y p

ersu

aded

to

con

sid

er t

he

text’

s id

eas.

• D

efin

es p

urp

ose

to

exam

ine

the

rhet

ori

cal

imp

act

of

the

textu

al,

cult

ura

l, a

nd

eth

ical

dim

ensi

on

s o

f a

nar

rati

ve

con

tain

ed w

ith

in a

text

that

has

bro

ader

pu

rpo

ses

• A

dd

ress

es c

lass

an

d t

each

er a

s an

aud

ien

ce c

uri

ou

s to

rea

d a

bo

ut

links

amo

ng

textu

al,

cult

ura

l, a

nd

/or

eth

ical

dim

ensi

on

s

of

nar

rati

ve

in t

his

con

text

Rea

der

s ar

e p

rob

ably

per

suad

ed t

o

con

sid

er t

he

text’

s id

eas.

• V

agu

ely d

efin

es p

urp

ose

and

/or

do

es n

ot

stip

ula

te t

extu

al, cu

ltu

ral,

and

eth

ical

dim

ensi

on

s o

f th

e n

arra

tive

un

der

an

alysi

s.

• G

ives

lit

tle

atte

nti

on

to

aud

ien

ce.

Rea

der

s ar

e co

nfu

sed

an

d/o

r in

sult

ed a

nd

no

t p

ersu

aded

to c

on

sid

er t

he

text’

s id

eas.

OR

GA

NIZ

AT

ION

/LO

GIC

Giv

en t

he

purp

ose

and

aud

ien

ce,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

mp

loys

an i

nte

rpre

tive

thes

is s

tate

men

t to

org

aniz

e p

aper

• E

mp

loys

logic

al a

rran

gem

ent

of

¶s

• E

mp

loys

logic

al a

rran

gem

ent

of

idea

s

wit

hin

eac

h ¶

• E

ffec

tiv

ely i

ntr

odu

ces

and

con

clu

des

pap

er

Th

e o

rgan

izat

ion

al l

ogic

en

han

ces

a

read

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g o

f th

e te

xt’

s id

eas.

• A

deq

uat

ely e

mp

loys

an i

nte

rpre

tive

thes

is

stat

emen

t to

org

aniz

e p

aper

.

• E

mp

loys

clea

r ar

ran

gem

ent

of

¶s

• E

mp

loys

clea

r ar

ran

gem

ent

of

idea

s

wit

hin

eac

h ¶

• A

deq

uat

ely i

ntr

od

uce

s an

d c

oncl

ud

es

pap

er

Th

e o

rgan

izat

ion

al l

ogic

ass

ists

a

read

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g o

f th

e te

xt’

s id

eas.

• E

mp

loys

no

th

esis

sta

tem

ent

or

on

e th

at

do

es n

ot

org

aniz

e th

e p

aper

• E

mp

loys

con

fusi

ng a

rran

gem

ent

of

¶s

• E

mp

loys

con

fusi

ng a

rran

gem

ent

of

idea

s

wit

hin

eac

h ¶

• E

mp

loys

vag

ue

intr

od

uct

ion a

nd

/or

sum

mar

y c

on

clu

sio

n.

Lac

k o

f p

urp

ose

ful

org

aniz

atio

n m

akes

it

dif

ficu

lt f

or

a re

ader

to

und

erst

and

id

eas.

DE

VE

LO

PM

EN

T

Giv

en t

he

purp

ose

and

aud

ien

ce,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

mp

loys

gen

eral

po

ints

as

reas

on

s th

at s

up

po

rt t

he

thes

is

• E

ffec

tiv

ely s

tate

s an

d t

ies

in p

arti

cula

r

det

ails

(fr

om

nar

rati

ve,

co

nta

inin

g t

ext,

and

add

itio

nal

tex

ts)

as e

vid

ence

• E

ffec

tiv

ely i

nte

gra

tes

add

itio

nal

so

urc

es

(via

su

mm

ary,

par

aph

rase

, o

r q

uota

tio

n)

• A

deq

uat

ely e

mp

loys

gen

eral

po

ints

as

reas

on

s th

at s

up

po

rt t

he

thes

is

• A

deq

uat

ely s

tate

s an

d t

ies

in p

arti

cula

r

det

ails

(fr

om

nar

rati

ve,

co

nta

inin

g t

ext,

an

d

add

itio

nal

tex

ts)

as e

vid

ence

• A

deq

uat

ely i

nte

gra

tes

add

itio

nal

so

urc

es

(via

su

mm

ary,

par

aph

rase

, o

r q

uota

tio

n)

• D

oes

no

t ex

pla

in g

ener

al p

oin

ts a

s re

aso

ns

that

sup

po

rt t

he

thes

is, o

r st

ates

gen

eral

po

ints

that

are

vag

ue

or

con

fusi

ng

• E

mp

loys

litt

le o

r n

o e

vid

ence

, or

reli

es

pri

mar

ily o

n s

um

mar

y

• D

emo

nst

rate

s in

effe

ctiv

e u

se o

f ad

dit

ion

al

sou

rces

INF

OR

MA

TIO

N L

ITE

RA

CY

Giv

en t

he

purp

ose

and

aud

ien

ce,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely r

eco

gn

izes

an

d a

dd

ress

es

nee

ds

for

info

rmat

ion

fro

m e

xte

rnal

sou

rces

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

mp

loys

rhet

ori

cal

anal

ysi

s

in d

iscu

ssio

n o

f al

l te

xts

• U

ses

clea

r at

trib

uti

ve

ph

rase

s an

d

effe

ctiv

ely c

red

its

sou

rces

wit

h c

on

sist

ent

inte

rnal

ML

A s

tyle

par

enth

etic

al c

itat

ion

s

• P

rese

nts

acc

ura

te M

LA

wo

rks

cite

d l

ist

• R

eco

gn

izes

an

d a

dd

ress

es n

eeds

for

info

rmat

ion

fro

m e

xte

rnal

so

urc

es

• P

ays

som

e at

ten

tio

n t

o r

het

ori

cal

anal

ysi

s

in d

iscu

ssio

n o

f te

xts

• U

ses

attr

ibu

tio

n a

nd

cre

dit

s so

urc

es v

ia

inte

rnal

ML

A s

tyle

par

enth

etic

al c

itat

ion

s

wit

h o

nly

a f

ew i

nco

nsi

sten

cies

or

erro

rs

• P

rese

nts

co

mp

eten

t M

LA

wo

rks

cite

d l

ist

• I

nad

equ

atel

y a

dd

ress

es n

eed

s fo

r

info

rmat

ion

fro

m e

xte

rnal

so

urc

es

• P

ays

litt

le o

r n

o a

tten

tio

n t

o r

het

ori

cal

anal

ysi

s in

dis

cuss

ion

of

texts

• O

mit

s m

any a

ttri

bu

tive

ph

rase

s an

d u

ses

few

or

un

clea

r M

LA

sty

le c

itat

ion

s

• P

rese

nts

in

com

ple

te o

r in

accu

rate

ML

A

wo

rks

cite

d l

ist

ST

UD

EN

T E

XP

ER

T’S

ET

HO

S

the

wri

tten

tex

t em

plo

ys

an

acad

emic

vo

ice

that

• D

emo

nst

rate

s co

nfi

den

t an

d

auth

ori

tati

ve

und

erst

and

ing o

f th

e co

nte

nt

• D

emo

nst

rate

s p

erso

nal

en

gag

emen

t

wit

h t

he

con

ten

t (i

dea

s, v

alu

es,

bel

iefs

)

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

reli

able

.

• D

emo

nst

rate

s g

ener

al u

nd

erst

and

ing o

f

the

con

ten

t

• D

emo

nst

rate

s so

me

per

son

al e

ngag

emen

t

wit

h t

he

con

ten

t

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

mo

stly

rel

iab

le.

• D

emo

nst

rate

s li

ttle

or

no

un

der

stan

din

g o

f

the

con

ten

t

• D

emo

nst

rate

s li

ttle

or

no

per

son

al

engag

emen

t w

ith

th

e co

nte

nt

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

un

reli

able

.

FYE Assessment Report Appendix B, FYE Rubrics September 2012

FY

E P

rog

ram

at

Ma

rqu

ette

Un

iver

sity

Ru

bri

c fo

r S

cori

ng

En

gli

sh 1

– U

nit

4, N

arr

ati

ve

Lit

era

cy

Wri

tin

g C

on

ven

tio

ns

3 –

Pro

fici

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(A,

AB

)

2 –

Com

pet

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(B, B

C,

C)

1 –

Dev

elo

pin

g O

utc

om

e

(CD

, D

, F

)

RE

AD

AB

ILIT

Y

The

wri

tten

text…

• C

on

tain

s fe

w o

r n

o e

rro

rs i

n s

pel

lin

g,

gra

mm

ar,

pu

nct

uat

ion

, o

r se

nte

nce

stru

ctu

re

• E

ffec

tiv

ely u

ses

sen

ten

ces

wit

h c

lear

sub

ject

s &

ver

bs,

par

alle

lism

, tr

ansi

tion

s

• S

ho

ws

evid

ence

of

hav

ing a

tten

ded

to

old

-new

co

ntr

act

to e

nh

ance

rea

dab

ilit

y

• U

ses

wel

l-ch

ose

n v

oca

bu

lary

fo

r an

effe

ctiv

e ac

adem

ic s

tyle

• C

on

tain

s so

me

dis

trac

tin

g e

rro

rs i

n

spel

lin

g,

gra

mm

ar,

pu

nct

uat

ion

, or

sen

ten

ce

stru

ctu

re, b

ut

thes

e er

rors

do

no

t in

terf

ere

wit

h c

om

pre

hen

sio

n

• I

ncl

ud

es s

ente

nce

seq

uen

ces

that

nee

d

tran

siti

on

s, p

aral

lel

stru

ctu

re,

and

/or

app

lica

tion

of

old

-new

co

ntr

act

pri

nci

ple

s

• L

arg

ely e

mp

loys

app

rop

riat

e ac

adem

ic

style

• C

on

tain

s nu

mer

ou

s d

istr

acti

ng e

rro

rs i

n

spel

lin

g,

gra

mm

ar,

pu

nct

uat

ion

, or

sen

ten

ce

stru

ctu

re,

som

e o

f w

hic

h i

nte

rfer

e w

ith

a

read

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g

• C

on

tain

s no

evid

ence

of

atte

nti

on

to

tran

siti

on

s, p

aral

leli

sm,

or

the

old

-new

con

trac

t

• C

on

tain

s vo

cab

ula

ry c

ho

ices

co

nfu

sin

g o

r

inap

pro

pri

ate

for

an a

cad

emic

sty

le

FYE Assessment Report Appendix B, FYE Rubrics September 2012

Fir

st-Y

ear

En

gli

sh P

rog

ram

at

Ma

rqu

ette

Un

iver

sity

Rub

ric

for

Sco

ring

Ora

l Pr

ese

ntation

s in E

nglish

2, All U

nits

Ja

nu

ary 2

00

9

See o

ther

side f

or c

rite

ria r

elate

d t

o no

nverb

al asp

ect

s of

delive

ry.

CO

NV

EN

TIO

NS

3 –

Pro

fici

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(A,

AB

)

2 –

Com

pet

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(B, B

C,

C)

1 –

Dev

elo

pin

g O

utc

om

e

(CD

, D

, F

) 1. R

het

ori

cal

Neg

oti

ati

on

of

PU

RP

OS

E &

AU

DIE

NC

E

Th

e sp

eake

r…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely c

on

vey

s p

urp

ose

of

talk

nea

r

beg

inn

ing o

f p

rese

nta

tio

n

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

stab

lish

es e

tho

s o

f co

lleg

e

stu

den

t ex

per

t: a

uth

ori

ty a

nd

en

gag

emen

t

• E

xp

lici

tly p

rovid

es b

ackgro

und i

nfo

rma-

tio

n c

onn

ecti

ng t

o p

rio

r cl

ass

dis

cuss

ion

Lis

ten

ers

are

def

init

ely p

ersu

aded

to

con

sid

er t

he

spea

ker

’s i

dea

s.

Th

e sp

eake

r…

• S

tate

s p

urp

ose

of

talk

• C

on

tro

ls m

ater

ial

suff

icie

ntl

y t

o c

on

vey

eth

os

of

coll

ege

stu

den

t ex

per

t

• P

rovid

es s

om

e b

ackgro

un

d i

nfo

rmat

ion

wit

hin

co

nte

xt

of

clas

s d

iscu

ssio

ns

Lis

ten

ers

are

pro

bab

ly p

ersu

aded

to

con

sid

er t

he

spea

ker

’s i

dea

s.

Th

e sp

eake

r…

• V

agu

ely e

xp

ress

es p

urp

ose

of

talk

or

leav

es i

t im

pli

cit

• S

eem

s o

ver

wh

elm

ed b

y c

on

ten

t, f

aili

ng

to c

on

vey

eth

os

of

coll

ege

stu

den

t ex

per

t

• G

ives

lit

tle

atte

nti

on

to

aud

ien

ce’s

info

rmat

ion

nee

ds

or

clas

sroo

m c

on

text

Lis

ten

ers

are

no

t p

ersu

aded

to c

on

sid

er

the

text’

s id

eas.

2. O

RG

AN

IZA

TIO

N/L

OG

IC

• A

rran

gem

ent

of

info

rmat

ion

and

id

eas

engag

es a

ud

ien

ce.

• I

ntr

od

uct

ion e

ffec

tiv

ely g

rab

s li

sten

ers’

atte

nti

on

and

fo

cuse

s p

urp

ose

.

• E

ffec

tiv

ely s

tate

d m

ain

po

ints

sta

nd

ou

t.

• T

ran

siti

on

s en

han

ce t

he

org

aniz

atio

n.

• C

on

clu

sion

wra

ps

up

pu

rpo

se o

f

pre

sen

tati

on i

n s

atis

fyin

g m

ann

er.

• A

ud

ien

ce c

an f

oll

ow

pre

sen

tati

on

’s

arra

ngem

ent

of

info

rmat

ion

an

d i

dea

s.

• I

ntr

od

uct

ion i

s gen

eral

ly f

ocu

sed

on

spea

ker

’s p

urp

ose

.

• M

ain

po

ints

are

cle

ar.

• T

ran

siti

on

s ar

e cl

ear.

• C

on

clu

sion

wra

ps

up

pu

rpo

se o

f

pre

sen

tati

on a

deq

uat

ely.

• L

ogic

beh

ind a

rran

gem

ent

of

info

rmat

ion

and

id

eas

is d

iffi

cult

to

fo

llo

w.

• C

urs

ory

in

tro

du

ctio

n l

acks

focu

s in

ter

ms

of

spea

ker

’s p

urp

ose

.

• M

ain

po

ints

are

dif

ficu

lt t

o i

den

tify

.

• T

ran

siti

on

s ar

e im

pli

cit

or

mis

sin

g.

• P

rese

nta

tio

n s

top

s ra

ther

th

an c

on

clud

es;

wra

p u

p o

f p

urp

ose

is

un

clea

r o

r m

issi

ng.

3. D

EV

EL

OP

ME

NT

OF

ID

EA

S

Th

e sp

eake

r…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

mp

loys

reas

on

s &

evid

ence

• U

ses

evid

ence

an

d r

easo

ns

that

eff

ecti

vel

y

engag

e w

ith

au

die

nce

’s v

alu

es a

nd

bac

k-

gro

und

kn

ow

led

ge

• M

eets

tim

e re

qu

irem

ents

Th

e sp

eake

r…

• A

deq

uat

ely e

mp

loys

reas

on

s &

evid

ence

• U

ses

evid

ence

an

d r

easo

ns

that

co

nn

ect

wit

h a

ud

ien

ce’s

val

ues

an

d b

ackg

roun

d

kn

ow

led

ge

• M

eets

tim

e re

qu

irem

ents

, b

ut

rush

ed

Th

e sp

eake

r…

• E

mp

loys

fau

lty r

easo

ns

and

/or

use

s

inad

equ

ate

supp

ort

ing e

vid

ence

• D

oes

no

t u

se e

vid

ence

an

d r

easo

ns

that

con

nec

t w

ith

aud

ien

ce’s

val

ues

an

d

bac

kgro

un

d

• D

oes

n’t

mee

t ti

me

req

uir

emen

ts

4. V

ER

BA

L D

EL

IVE

RY

• V

oca

bu

lary

is

wel

l ch

ose

n f

or

a cl

assr

oo

m

talk

.

• L

angu

age

is a

rtic

ula

ted

wel

l.

• C

on

ten

t em

anat

es f

rom

sp

eaker

’s

kn

ow

led

ge—

talk

is

no

t m

emo

rize

d o

r re

ad i

n

sen

ten

ces

fro

m n

ote

s.

• S

ente

nce

str

uct

ure

en

han

ces

list

ener

s’

com

pre

hen

sio

n—

pre

sen

tati

on

app

ears

to

hav

e b

een

wri

tten

/pla

nn

ed t

o b

e hea

rd.

• S

pea

ker

eff

ecti

vel

y m

od

ula

tes

vo

ice

vo

lum

e as

nee

ded

.

• S

pea

ker

eff

ecti

vel

y m

od

ula

tes

rate

of

spea

kin

g.

• S

pea

ker

co

nvey

s an

eff

ecti

ve

level

of

enth

usi

asm

.

• W

ord

ch

oic

es a

re a

pp

rop

riat

e fo

r a

clas

sro

om

tal

k.

• L

angu

age

is g

ener

ally

cle

arly

sp

oken

.

• S

pea

ker

ap

pea

rs u

nce

rtai

n a

t ti

mes

,

over

ly r

elia

nt

on n

ote

s o

r m

emo

riza

tio

n.

• S

ente

nce

str

uct

ure

do

es n

ot

inte

rfer

e

wit

h l

iste

ner

s’ c

om

pre

hen

sio

n b

ut

do

es

no

t ap

pea

r to

hav

e b

een

wri

tten

/pla

nn

ed

for

list

enin

g a

udie

nce

.

• S

pea

ker

ap

pro

pri

atel

y m

od

ula

tes

vo

ice

vo

lum

e as

nee

ded

.

• S

pea

ker

ap

pro

pri

atel

y m

od

ula

tes

rate

of

spea

kin

g.

• S

pea

ker

co

nvey

s a

gen

eral

ly a

pp

rop

riat

e

level

of

enth

usi

asm

.

• S

om

e vo

cab

ula

ry c

ho

ices

are

co

nfu

sin

g

or

inap

pro

pri

ate

for

a cl

assr

oo

m t

alk.

• L

angu

age

is t

oo

fre

qu

entl

y u

ncl

ear.

• T

alk i

s m

emo

rized

or

pri

mar

ily r

ead

,

mak

ing s

pea

ker

dis

tan

t fr

om

co

nte

nt

and

aud

ien

ce.

• S

ente

nce

str

uct

ure

in

terf

eres

wit

h

list

ener

s’ c

om

pre

hen

sio

n, ta

lk a

pp

ears

to

hav

e b

een

wri

tten

/pla

nn

ed t

o b

e re

ad.

• S

pea

ker

do

es n

ot

mo

du

late

vo

ice

vo

lum

e

as n

eed

ed.

• S

pea

ker

do

es n

ot

mo

du

late

sp

eed

of

pre

sen

tati

on a

s n

eed

ed.

• S

pea

ker

do

es n

ot

con

vey

an

ap

pro

pri

ate

level

of

enth

usi

asm

.

FYE Assessment Report Appendix B, FYE Rubrics September 2012

Jan

uar

y 2

00

9

5. N

ON

VE

RB

AL

DE

LIV

ER

Y

• S

pea

ker

’s p

ost

ure

, ges

ture

s, a

nd

fac

ial

exp

ress

ion

s en

han

ce d

eliv

ery.

• S

pea

ker

mak

es e

ffec

tiv

e ey

e co

nta

ct w

ith

aud

ien

ce m

emb

ers.

• S

pea

ker

’s a

ttir

e is

ap

pro

pri

ate

and

pro

fess

ion

al.

• S

pea

ker

eff

ecti

vel

y h

and

les

no

tes,

Po

wer

Po

int,

oth

er p

rop

s.

• S

pea

ker

’s p

ost

ure

, ges

ture

s, a

nd

fac

ial

exp

ress

ion

s d

o n

ot

inte

rfer

e w

ith

eff

ecti

ve

del

iver

y.

• S

pea

ker

lo

oks

at a

ud

ien

ce m

ore

th

an a

t

no

tes.

• S

pea

ker

’s a

ttir

e is

ap

pro

pri

ate

and

pro

fess

ion

al.

• S

pea

ker

is

no

t o

ver

ly d

epen

den

t o

n

no

tes,

Po

wer

Po

int,

oth

er p

rop

s.

• S

pea

ker

’s p

ost

ure

, ges

ture

s, a

nd

/or

faci

al

exp

ress

ion

s ar

e d

istr

acti

ng e

nou

gh

to

inte

rfer

e w

ith

eff

ecti

ve

del

iver

y.

• S

pea

ker

lo

oks

at n

ote

s m

ore

th

an a

t

aud

ien

ce.

• S

pea

ker

’s a

ttir

e is

in

app

rop

riat

e o

r

un

pro

fess

ion

al.

• S

pea

ker

is

over

ly d

epen

den

t on n

ote

s,

Po

wer

Po

int,

oth

er p

rop

s.

Not

e: Ind

ivid

ual in

stru

ctor

s m

ay w

ish t

o ad

d a

six

th lin

e

of c

rite

ria

rela

ted t

o vi

sual

aid

s fo

r or

al p

rese

ntat

ions

; in

deed,

if y

ou a

re r

equ

irin

g st

udent

s to

use

pre

sent

atio

n so

ftw

are

dur

ing

their

tal

ks

and y

ou a

re t

eac

hin

g th

em

how

to

use it

eff

ect

ively

, yo

u ar

e a

dvi

sed t

o est

ablish

gra

din

g st

andar

ds

for

this

asp

ect

of

the p

rese

ntat

ions

.

FYE Assessment Report Appendix B, FYE Rubrics September 2012

Fir

st-Y

ear

En

gli

sh P

rog

ram

at

Ma

rqu

ette

Un

iver

sity

Ru

bri

c fo

r S

cori

ng

En

gli

sh 2

– U

nit

1, V

isu

al

Lit

era

cy

Jan

uar

y 2

00

9

WR

ITIN

G C

ON

VE

NT

ION

S

3 –

Pro

fici

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(A,

AB

)

2 –

Com

pet

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(B, B

C,

C)

1 –

Dev

elo

pin

g O

utc

om

e

(CD

, D

, F

) R

het

ori

cal

Neg

oti

ati

on

of

PU

RP

OS

E &

AU

DIE

NC

E

Th

e w

ritt

en t

ext…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

xp

ress

es v

ia i

ntr

odu

ctio

n &

thes

is s

tate

men

t as

sign

ed p

urp

ose

to

anal

yze

an

d i

nte

rpre

t th

e rh

eto

rica

l im

pac

t

of

nar

rati

ve

and

cu

ltura

l el

emen

ts i

n t

wo

vis

ual

tex

ts w

/ “c

om

mo

n d

eno

min

ato

r”

• E

ffec

tiv

ely s

ho

ws

ho

w a

nal

yzi

ng t

he

two

vis

ual

s to

get

her

rev

eals

cu

ltu

ral

and

nar

rati

ve

dim

ensi

on

s an

d r

het

ori

cal

pu

rpo

ses

of

each

• E

ffec

tiv

ely a

dd

ress

es c

lass

an

d t

each

er

w/i

n c

om

mo

n c

on

ver

sati

on

ab

ou

t vis

ual

rhet

ori

c an

d n

arra

tive

Rea

der

s ar

e d

efin

itel

y p

ersu

aded

to

con

sid

er t

he

stud

ent’

s id

eas.

• E

xp

ress

es i

n i

ntr

odu

ctio

n a

nd

/or

thes

is

stat

emen

t as

sign

ed p

urp

ose

to

an

alyze

an

d

inte

rpre

t th

e rh

eto

rica

l im

pac

t o

f n

arra

tive

and

cu

ltu

ral

elem

ents

in

tw

o v

isu

al t

exts

• C

on

nec

ts r

het

ori

cal

effe

ct o

f n

arra

tive

and

cult

ura

l el

emen

ts i

n o

ne

text

to t

ho

se o

f th

e

oth

er

• A

dd

ress

es c

lass

an

d t

each

er a

s p

art

of

com

mo

n c

on

ver

sati

on

ab

ou

t vis

ual

rh

eto

ric

and

nar

rati

ve

Rea

der

s ar

e p

rob

ably

per

suad

ed t

o

con

sid

er t

he

stud

ent’

s id

eas.

• V

agu

ely e

xp

ress

es a

ssig

ned

pu

rpo

se t

o

anal

yze

an

d i

nte

rpre

t th

e rh

eto

rica

l im

pac

t

of

nar

rati

ve

and

cu

ltura

l el

emen

ts i

n t

wo

vis

ual

tex

ts—

thes

is u

ncl

ear,

mis

sin

g,

or

pu

rely

des

crip

tive

• I

gn

ore

s o

r in

adeq

uat

ely d

evel

op

s

rhet

ori

cal

effe

ct o

f n

arra

tive

& c

ult

ura

l

elem

ents

; d

iscu

ssio

n r

elie

s p

rim

aril

y o

n

form

al d

escr

ipti

on

of

the

vis

ual

tex

ts

• G

ives

lit

tle

atte

nti

on

to c

on

ver

sati

on a

nd

exp

erie

nce

sh

ared

wit

h a

ud

ien

ce

Rea

der

s ar

e n

ot

per

suad

ed t

o c

on

sid

er

the

text’

s id

eas.

OR

GA

NIZ

AT

ION

/LO

GIC

Giv

en t

he

pu

rpo

se a

nd

au

die

nce

,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• E

mp

loys

thes

is s

tate

men

t th

at r

esp

ond

s

spec

ific

ally

to

th

e in

terp

reti

ve

assi

gn

men

t,

focu

ses

the

pap

er,

and

fo

reca

sts

pap

er’s

org

aniz

atio

n

• E

mp

loys

logic

al a

rran

gem

ent

of

¶s

• E

mp

loys

logic

al a

rran

gem

ent

of

idea

s

wit

hin

par

agra

ph

s

• E

mp

loys

effe

ctiv

e in

trod

uct

ion

an

d c

on

-

clu

sio

n,

wh

ich

mo

ves

bey

on

d s

um

mar

y

Th

e o

rgan

izat

ion

al l

ogic

en

han

ces

a

read

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g o

f th

e te

xt’

s id

eas.

• E

mp

loys

thes

is s

tate

men

t th

at c

on

nec

ts

wit

h t

he

inte

rpre

tive

assi

gn

men

t, p

rovid

es

focu

s, a

nd

su

gges

ts a

n o

rgan

izat

ion

al l

ogic

for

the

pap

er

• E

mp

loys

clea

r ar

ran

gem

ent

of

¶s

• E

mp

loys

clea

r ar

ran

gem

ent

of

idea

s

wit

hin

mo

st p

arag

rap

hs

• E

mp

loys

a cl

ear

intr

odu

ctio

n a

nd

con

clu

sio

n

Th

e o

rgan

izat

ion

al l

ogic

ass

ists

a

read

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g o

f th

e te

xt’

s id

eas.

• L

acks

thes

is s

tate

men

t co

nn

ecti

ng t

o t

he

inte

rpre

tive

assi

gn

men

t, o

r la

cks

focu

s

that

co

nn

ects

to b

od

y o

f th

e p

aper

• E

mp

loys

con

fusi

ng a

rran

gem

ent

of

¶s

• E

mp

loys

con

fusi

ng a

rran

gem

ent

of

idea

s w

ith

in m

ost

par

agra

ph

s

• E

mp

loys

form

ula

ic i

ntr

odu

ctio

n a

nd

con

clu

sio

n d

isco

nn

ecte

d f

rom

in

terp

reti

ve

pu

rpo

se o

f th

e p

aper

Org

aniz

atio

n p

rob

lem

s m

ake

it d

iffi

-

cult

fo

r re

ader

to

und

erst

and t

ext’

s id

eas.

D

EV

EL

OP

ME

NT

Giv

en t

he

pu

rpo

se a

nd

au

die

nce

,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely d

evel

op

s b

od

y p

arag

rap

hs

cen

tere

d o

n w

rite

r’s

ow

n g

ener

al p

oin

ts,

wh

ich

ser

ve

as r

easo

ns

sup

po

rtin

g t

he

thes

is

• E

ffec

tiv

ely s

up

po

rts/

dev

elo

ps

thes

e

po

ints

wit

h d

etai

ls a

bo

ut

the

vis

ual

tex

ts

der

ived

fro

m p

erso

nal

ob

serv

atio

n,

idea

s

in s

ou

rce

texts

, an

d e

xte

rnal

res

earc

h

• A

deq

uat

ely c

ente

rs b

od

y p

arag

rap

hs

on

stat

emen

ts o

f w

rite

r’s

ow

n g

ener

al p

oin

ts,

wh

ich

su

ppo

rt t

he

thes

is

• A

deq

uat

ely s

up

po

rts/

dev

elo

ps

thes

e

po

ints

wit

h d

etai

ls a

bo

ut

the

vis

ual

tex

ts

der

ived

fro

m p

erso

nal

ob

serv

atio

n,

idea

s in

sou

rce

texts

, an

d e

xte

rnal

res

earc

h

• S

tate

s gen

eral

po

ints

th

at a

re v

agu

e,

con

fusi

ng,

or

un

rela

ted t

o t

hes

is;

or

pre

-

sen

ts p

arag

rap

hs

wit

ho

ut

po

int

sen

ten

ces

• P

rese

nts

det

ails

th

at f

un

ctio

n a

s

des

crip

tion

or

sum

mar

y,

bu

t n

ot

as

evid

ence

• O

r p

rovid

es t

oo f

ew s

up

po

rtin

g d

etai

ls

• O

mit

s o

r u

ses

con

fusi

ng ¶

bre

aks

WR

ITE

R’S

ET

HO

S

Giv

en t

he

pu

rpo

se a

nd

au

die

nce

,

the

wri

tten

tex

t em

plo

ys a

text

ua

l vo

ice

tha

t…

• D

emo

nst

rate

s co

nfi

den

t, a

uth

ori

tati

ve

un

der

stan

din

g o

f th

e as

sign

ed i

nte

rpre

tive

pu

rpo

se a

nd c

onte

nt

• D

emo

nst

rate

s p

erso

nal

en

gag

emen

t

wit

h p

urp

ose

& c

on

ten

t (v

ia t

he

wri

ter’

s

idea

s, i

nsi

gh

ts,

val

ues

, b

elie

fs)

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

tru

stw

ort

hy.

• D

emo

nst

rate

s g

ener

al u

nd

erst

and

ing o

f

the

assi

gn

ed i

nte

rpre

tive

pu

rpo

se a

nd

con

ten

t

• D

emo

nst

rate

s so

me

per

son

al e

ngag

emen

t

wit

h p

urp

ose

& c

on

ten

t (v

ia t

he

wri

ter’

s

idea

s, i

nsi

gh

ts,

val

ues

, b

elie

fs)

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

mo

stly

tru

stw

ort

hy.

• D

emo

nst

rate

s li

ttle

or

no

un

der

stan

din

g

of

the

assi

gn

ed i

nte

rpre

tive

pu

rpose

an

d

con

ten

t

• D

emo

nst

rate

s li

ttle

or

no

per

son

al

engag

emen

t w

ith

pu

rpo

se a

nd c

on

ten

t

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

un

tru

stw

ort

hy o

r u

nco

nvin

cin

g

FYE Assessment Report Appendix B, FYE Rubrics September 2012

Fir

st-Y

ear

En

gli

sh P

rog

ram

at

Ma

rqu

ette

Un

iver

sity

Ru

bri

c fo

r S

cori

ng

En

gli

sh 2

– U

nit

1, V

isu

al

Lit

era

cy

Jan

uar

y 2

00

9

RE

AD

AB

ILIT

Y

Giv

en t

he

pu

rpo

se a

nd

au

die

nce

,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• C

on

tain

s fe

w o

r n

o e

rro

rs i

n s

pel

lin

g,

gra

mm

ar,

pu

nct

uat

ion

, o

r se

nte

nce

stru

ctu

re

• E

ffec

tiv

ely u

ses

sen

ten

ces

wit

h c

lear

sub

ject

s &

ver

bs,

par

alle

lism

, tr

ansi

tion

s

• S

ho

ws

evid

ence

of

hav

ing a

tten

ded

to

old

-new

co

ntr

act

to e

nh

ance

rea

dab

ilit

y

• U

ses

wel

l-ch

ose

n v

oca

bu

lary

fo

r an

effe

ctiv

e st

yle

• C

on

tain

s so

me

dis

trac

tin

g e

rro

rs i

n

spel

lin

g,

gra

mm

ar,

pu

nct

uat

ion

, or

sen

ten

ce

stru

ctu

re, b

ut

thes

e er

rors

do

no

t in

terf

ere

wit

h c

om

pre

hen

sio

n

• N

eed

s cl

eare

r su

bje

ct-v

erb

seq

uen

ces,

par

alle

l st

ruct

ure

s, o

r ex

pli

cit

tran

siti

on

s to

enh

ance

cla

rity

• N

eed

s ap

pli

cati

on

of

old

-new

co

ntr

act

pri

nci

ple

s to

en

han

ce r

ead

abil

ity

• L

arg

ely e

mp

loys

app

rop

riat

e ac

adem

ic

style

• C

on

tain

s nu

mer

ou

s d

istr

acti

ng e

rro

rs i

n

spel

lin

g,

gra

mm

ar,

pu

nct

uat

ion

, or

sen

ten

ce s

tru

ctu

re,

som

e o

f w

hic

h

inte

rfer

e w

ith

a r

ead

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g

• C

on

tain

s li

ttle

or

evid

ence

of

atte

nti

on

to s

ub

ject

-ver

b s

equ

ence

, p

aral

leli

sm,

tran

siti

on

s, o

r th

e o

ld-n

ew c

on

trac

t to

enh

ance

cla

rity

an

d r

ead

abil

ity

• C

on

tain

s vo

cab

ula

ry c

ho

ices

co

nfu

sin

g

or

inap

pro

pri

ate

for

an a

cad

emic

sty

le

INF

OR

MA

TIO

N L

ITE

RA

CY

G

iven

th

e p

urp

ose

an

d a

ud

ience

,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely a

dd

ress

es n

eed

fo

r

info

rmat

ion

fr

exte

rnal

so

urc

es

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

mp

loys

rhet

ori

cal

anal

ysi

s

in d

iscu

ssio

n o

f al

l te

xts

• P

rovid

es c

lear

att

ribu

tive

ph

rase

s an

d

effe

ctiv

ely c

red

its

sou

rces

via

co

nsi

sten

t

inte

rnal

AP

A s

tyle

par

enth

etic

al c

itat

ion

s

• P

rese

nts

tho

rou

gh

and

acc

ura

te A

PA

refe

ren

ces

list

wit

h f

ew o

r n

o e

rrors

• E

ffec

tiv

ely p

rese

nts

th

e vis

ual

tex

ts

un

der

dis

cuss

ion

wit

h c

on

ven

tional

AP

A

form

at a

nd

cap

tion

s fo

r vis

ual

fig

ure

s

• A

dd

ress

es n

eed

fo

r in

form

atio

n f

rom

exte

rnal

so

urc

es

• D

evo

tes

som

e at

ten

tio

n t

o r

het

ori

cal

anal

ysi

s in

dis

cuss

ion

of

texts

• P

rovid

es a

ttri

bu

tio

n a

nd c

red

its

sou

rces

via

in

tern

al A

PA

sty

le p

aren

thet

ical

cit

atio

n

wit

h o

nly

a f

ew i

nco

nsi

sten

cies

or

erro

rs

• P

rese

nts

co

mp

eten

t A

PA

ref

eren

ces

list

wit

h f

orm

at e

rro

rs o

nly

, n

o c

on

ten

t er

rors

• I

ncl

ud

es t

he

vis

ual

tex

ts u

nd

er d

iscu

ssio

n

bu

t w

itho

ut

goo

d A

PA

fo

rmat

an

d c

apti

on

s

for

vis

ual

fig

ure

s

• I

nad

equ

atel

y a

dd

ress

es n

eed

fo

r

info

rmat

ion

fro

m e

xte

rnal

so

urc

es

• I

ncl

ud

es l

ittl

e o

r no

att

enti

on

to

rhet

ori

cal

anal

ysi

s in

dis

cuss

ion

of

texts

• I

ncl

ud

es t

oo

few

att

rib

uti

ve

ph

rase

s an

d

use

s fe

w o

r u

ncl

ear

AP

A c

itat

ion

s

• P

rese

nts

in

com

ple

te o

r in

corr

ectl

y

form

atte

d A

PA

ref

eren

ces

list

• I

ncl

ud

es t

he

vis

ual

tex

ts u

nd

er

dis

cuss

ion w

ith

out

atte

nti

on t

o A

PA

form

atti

ng,

or

fail

s to

in

clu

de

them

FYE Assessment Report Appendix B, FYE Rubrics September 2012

Fir

st-Y

ear

En

gli

sh P

rog

ram

at

Ma

rqu

ette

Un

iver

sity

Ru

bri

c fo

r S

cori

ng

En

gli

sh 2

– U

nit

2, N

ews

Lit

era

cy

Jan

uar

y 2

00

9

WR

ITIN

G C

ON

VE

NT

ION

S

3 –

Pro

fici

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(A,

AB

)

2 –

Com

pet

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(B, B

C,

C)

1 –

Dev

elo

pin

g O

utc

om

e

(CD

, D

, F

) R

het

ori

cal

Neg

oti

ati

on

of

PU

RP

OS

E &

AU

DIE

NC

E

Th

e w

ritt

en t

ext…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

xp

ress

es v

ia i

ntr

odu

ctio

n &

thes

is s

tate

men

t th

e as

sign

ed p

urp

ose

of

eval

uat

ing c

over

age

of

an e

ven

t b

y m

ult

iple

U.S

. &

inte

rnat

ion

al n

ews

med

ia

• E

ffec

tiv

ely d

evel

op

s th

e ar

gu

men

t b

y

app

lyin

g c

lear

ly a

rtic

ula

ted

eval

uat

ive

crit

eria

bas

ed o

n t

he

un

it’s

rea

din

gs

abo

ut

go

od

qu

alit

y j

ou

rnal

ism

• E

ffec

tiv

ely y

et b

riefl

y p

rovid

es n

eed

ed

con

textu

al i

nfo

rmat

ion

re

the

even

t an

d t

he

new

s so

urc

es u

nd

er d

iscu

ssio

n

• E

ffec

tiv

ely a

dd

ress

es c

lass

an

d t

each

er

w/i

n c

om

mo

n c

on

ver

sati

on

ab

ou

t th

e

reli

abil

ity o

f n

ews

rep

ort

s

Rea

der

s ar

e d

efin

itel

y p

ersu

aded

to

con

sid

er t

he

stud

ent’

s id

eas.

• E

xp

ress

es i

n i

ntr

odu

ctio

n a

nd

/or

thes

is

stat

emen

t th

e as

sign

ed p

urp

ose

of

eval

u-

atin

g c

over

age

of

an e

ven

t b

y m

ult

iple

U.S

.

and

in

tern

atio

nal

new

s m

edia

• D

evel

op

s th

e ar

gu

men

t b

y a

pp

lyin

g

exp

lici

t ev

alu

ativ

e cr

iter

ia b

ased

on

th

e

un

it’s

rea

din

gs

abou

t goo

d q

ual

ity

jou

rnal

ism

• P

rovid

es n

eed

ed c

on

textu

al i

nfo

rmat

ion

regar

din

g t

he

even

t an

d t

he

new

s so

urc

es

un

der

dis

cuss

ion

• A

dd

ress

es c

lass

an

d t

each

er a

s p

art

of

com

mo

n c

on

ver

sati

on

ab

ou

t th

e re

liab

ilit

y

of

new

s re

po

rts

Rea

der

s ar

e p

rob

ably

per

suad

ed t

o

con

sid

er t

he

stud

ent’

s id

eas.

• V

agu

ely e

xp

ress

es t

he

assi

gn

ed p

urp

ose

of

eval

uat

ing c

over

age

of

an e

ven

t b

y m

ult

iple

U.S

. an

d i

nte

rnat

ion

al n

ews

med

ia—

thes

is

per

hap

s un

clea

r, m

issi

ng,

or

pu

rely

des

crip

tive

• U

ses

vag

uel

y e

xp

ress

ed o

r o

ver

ly

gen

eral

ized

eval

uat

ive

crit

eria

wit

h m

inim

al

refe

ren

ce t

o t

he

un

it’s

rea

din

gs

• P

rovid

es i

nad

equ

ate

con

textu

al

info

rmat

ion

reg

ard

ing t

he

even

t an

d n

ews

sou

rces

und

er d

iscu

ssio

n O

R d

evo

tes

too

mu

ch s

pac

e to

su

mm

ariz

ing t

he

even

t

• G

ives

to

o l

ittl

e at

ten

tio

n t

o u

nit

rea

din

gs

and

dis

cuss

ion r

e jo

urn

alis

tic

reli

abil

ity

Rea

der

s ar

e n

ot

per

suad

ed t

o c

on

sid

er

the

text’

s id

eas.

OR

GA

NIZ

AT

ION

/LO

GIC

Giv

en t

he

pu

rpo

se a

nd

au

die

nce

, th

e w

ritt

en t

ext…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

mp

loys

thes

is s

tate

men

t th

at

mak

es a

n e

val

uat

ive

clai

m a

bo

ut

the

qu

alit

y

of

cover

age

acro

ss m

edia

ou

tlet

s an

d

ind

icat

es c

rite

ria

use

d f

or

the

eval

uat

ion

• E

mp

loys

logic

al a

rran

gem

ent

of

¶s

• E

mp

loys

logic

al a

rran

gem

ent

of

idea

s

wit

hin

par

agra

ph

s

• E

mp

loys

effe

ctiv

e in

trod

uct

ion

an

d c

on

-

clu

sio

n,

wh

ich

mo

ves

bey

on

d s

um

mar

y

Th

e o

rgan

izat

ion

al l

ogic

en

han

ces

a

read

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g o

f th

e te

xt’

s id

eas.

• P

rese

nts

th

esis

sta

tem

ent

wit

h e

val

uat

ive

clai

m a

bo

ut

qu

alit

y o

f co

ver

age

acro

ss

med

ia o

utl

ets

and

in

dic

ates

cri

teri

a u

sed

fo

r

the

eval

uat

ion

• E

mp

loys

clea

r ar

ran

gem

ent

of

¶s

• E

mp

loys

clea

r ar

ran

gem

ent

of

idea

s

wit

hin

mo

st p

arag

rap

hs

• E

mp

loys

a cl

ear

intr

odu

ctio

n a

nd

con

clu

sio

n, w

hic

h m

oves

bey

on

d s

um

mar

y

Th

e o

rgan

izat

ion

al l

ogic

ass

ists

a

read

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g o

f th

e te

xt’

s id

eas.

• L

acks

thes

is s

tate

men

t co

nn

ecti

ng t

o t

he

eval

uat

ive

assi

gn

men

t, a

nd

/or

pre

sen

ts t

hes

is

that

neg

lect

s to

in

dic

ate

crit

eria

use

d f

or

the

eval

uat

ion

• E

mp

loys

con

fusi

ng a

rran

gem

ent

of

¶s

• E

mp

loys

con

fusi

ng a

rran

gem

ent

of

idea

s

wit

hin

mo

st p

arag

rap

hs

• E

mp

loys

form

ula

ic i

ntr

odu

ctio

n a

nd

con

clu

sio

n d

isco

nn

ecte

d f

rom

ev

alu

ativ

e

pu

rpo

se o

f th

e p

aper

Org

aniz

atio

n p

rob

lem

s m

ake

it d

iffi

-cu

lt

for

read

er t

o u

nd

erst

and

tex

t’s

idea

s.

Rem

aini

ng t

hre

e c

ateg

orie

s ar

e o

n op

posi

te s

ide/n

ext

page

:

Deve

lopm

ent

, R

ead

abili

ty, Inf

orm

atio

n Lit

era

cy

FYE Assessment Report Appendix B, FYE Rubrics September 2012

Jan

uar

y 2

00

9

WR

ITIN

G C

ON

VE

NT

ION

S

3 –

Pro

fici

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(A,

AB

)

2 –

Com

pet

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(B, B

C,

C)

1 –

Dev

elo

pin

g O

utc

om

e

(CD

, D

, F

) D

EV

EL

OP

ME

NT

Giv

en t

he

pu

rpo

se a

nd

au

die

nce

,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely s

up

po

rts

thes

is c

laim

wit

h

bo

dy p

arag

rap

hs

exp

lain

ing t

he

crit

eria

-

mat

ch p

roce

ss t

he

wri

ter

is u

sin

g t

o

eval

uat

e th

e n

ews

rep

ort

s u

nd

er

dis

cuss

ion:

See

fra

mew

ork

on

AB

GW

43

9

• E

ffec

tiv

ely d

evel

op

s b

od

y p

arag

rap

hs

fro

m c

lear

po

int

sen

ten

ces

that

sta

te

wri

ter’

s re

aso

nin

g i

n w

rite

r’s

ow

n w

ord

s

• E

ffec

tiv

ely u

ses

sum

mar

y,

par

aph

rase

,

and

qu

ota

tion

to

pre

sen

t d

etai

led

evid

ence

illu

stra

tin

g a

nd

ela

bo

rati

ng u

po

n t

he

wri

ter’

s cr

iter

ia-m

atch

po

ints

• E

ffec

tiv

ely s

um

mar

izes

an

d r

esp

ond

s to

anti

cip

ated

ob

ject

ion

s to

cri

teri

a or

mat

ches

• A

deq

uat

ely s

up

po

rts

thes

is c

laim

wit

h

bo

dy p

arag

rap

hs

exp

lain

ing t

he

crit

eria

-

mat

ch p

roce

ss t

he

wri

ter

is u

sin

g t

o

eval

uat

e th

e n

ews

rep

ort

s u

nd

er

dis

cuss

ion:

See

fra

mew

ork

on

AB

GW

43

9

• A

deq

uat

ely d

evel

op

s b

od

y p

arag

rap

hs

fro

m c

lear

po

int

sen

ten

ces

that

sta

te

wri

ter’

s re

aso

nin

g i

n w

rite

r’s

ow

n w

ord

s

• A

deq

uat

ely u

ses

sum

mar

y,

par

aph

rase

,

and

qu

ota

tion

to

pre

sen

t d

etai

led

evid

ence

illu

stra

tin

g a

nd

ela

bo

rati

ng u

po

n t

he

wri

ter’

s cr

iter

ia-m

atch

po

ints

• A

deq

uat

ely s

um

mar

izes

an

d r

esp

ond

s to

anti

cip

ated

ob

ject

ion

s to

cri

teri

a or

mat

ches

• L

acks

sup

po

rt f

or

thes

is c

laim

bec

ause

bo

dy p

arag

rap

hs

do n

ot

adeq

uat

ely e

xp

lain

the

crit

eria

-mat

ch p

roce

ss t

he

wri

ter

is u

sin

g

to e

val

uat

e th

e n

ews

rep

ort

s un

der

dis

cuss

ion

:

See

fra

mew

ork

on

AB

GW

43

9

• P

rese

nts

bod

y p

arag

rap

hs

wit

ho

ut

clea

r

po

int

sen

ten

ces

stat

ing w

rite

r’s

reas

on

ing i

n

wri

ter’

s o

wn

wo

rds

• L

acks

adeq

uat

e ev

iden

ce t

o i

llust

rate

an

d

elab

ora

te u

po

n w

rite

r’s

crit

eria

-mat

ch p

oin

ts;

det

ails

too

fre

qu

entl

y f

un

ctio

n a

s d

escr

ipti

on

or

sum

mar

y,

no

t ev

iden

ce

• L

acks

adeq

uat

e su

mm

ary o

r re

spo

nse

to

anti

cip

ated

ob

ject

ion

s to

cri

teri

a or

mat

ches

• O

mit

s o

r u

ses

con

fusi

ng ¶

bre

aks

WR

ITE

R’S

ET

HO

S

Giv

en t

he

pu

rpo

se a

nd

au

die

nce

,

the

wri

tten

tex

t em

plo

ys a

text

ua

l vo

ice

tha

t…

• D

emo

nst

rate

s co

nfi

den

t, a

uth

ori

tati

ve

un

der

stan

din

g o

f th

e as

sign

ed e

val

uat

ive

pu

rpo

se a

nd c

onte

nt

• D

emo

nst

rate

s p

erso

nal

en

gag

emen

t

wit

h p

urp

ose

& c

on

ten

t (v

ia t

he

wri

ter’

s

idea

s, i

nsi

gh

ts,

val

ues

, b

elie

fs)

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

tru

stw

ort

hy.

• D

emo

nst

rate

s g

ener

al u

nd

erst

and

ing o

f

the

assi

gn

ed e

val

uat

ive

pu

rpo

se a

nd

con

ten

t

• D

emo

nst

rate

s so

me

per

son

al

engag

emen

t w

ith

pu

rpo

se &

co

nte

nt

(via

the

wri

ter’

s id

eas,

in

sigh

ts,

val

ues

, b

eli

efs)

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

mo

stly

tru

stw

ort

hy.

• D

emo

nst

rate

s li

ttle

or

no

un

der

stan

din

g o

f

the

assi

gn

ed e

val

uat

ive

pu

rpo

se a

nd

con

ten

t

• D

emo

nst

rate

s li

ttle

or

no

per

son

al

engag

emen

t w

ith

pu

rpo

se a

nd c

on

ten

t (v

ia

the

wri

ter’

s id

eas,

in

sigh

ts,

val

ues

, b

eli

efs)

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

un

tru

stw

ort

hy o

r u

nco

nvin

cin

g.

RE

AD

AB

ILIT

Y

Giv

en t

he

pu

rpo

se a

nd

au

die

nce

,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• C

on

tain

s fe

w o

r n

o e

rro

rs i

n s

pel

lin

g,

gra

mm

ar,

pu

nct

uat

ion

, o

r se

nte

nce

stru

ctu

re

• E

ffec

tiv

ely u

ses

sen

ten

ces

wit

h c

lear

sub

ject

s &

ver

bs,

par

alle

lism

, &

tran

siti

on

s

• S

ho

ws

evid

ence

of

hav

ing a

tten

ded

to

old

-new

co

ntr

act

to e

nh

ance

rea

dab

ilit

y

• U

ses

wel

l-ch

ose

n v

oca

bu

lary

fo

r an

effe

ctiv

e ac

adem

ic s

tyle

• C

on

tain

s so

me

dis

trac

tin

g e

rro

rs i

n

spel

lin

g,

gra

mm

ar,

pu

nct

uat

ion

, or

sen

ten

ce s

tru

ctu

re, b

ut

they

do

not

inte

rfer

e w

ith

a r

ead

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g

• N

eed

s cl

eare

r su

bje

ct-v

erb

seq

uen

ces,

par

alle

l st

ruct

ure

s, o

r ex

pli

cit

tran

siti

on

s to

enh

ance

cla

rity

• N

eed

s ap

pli

cati

on

of

old

-new

co

ntr

act

pri

nci

ple

s to

en

han

ce r

ead

abil

ity

• L

arg

ely e

mp

loys

app

rop

riat

e ac

adem

ic

vo

cab

ula

ry

• C

on

tain

s nu

mer

ou

s d

istr

acti

ng e

rro

rs i

n

spel

lin

g,

gra

mm

ar,

pu

nct

uat

ion

, or

sen

ten

ce

stru

ctu

re,

som

e o

f w

hic

h i

nte

rfer

e w

ith

a

read

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g

• C

on

tain

s li

ttle

or

evid

ence

of

atte

nti

on

to

sub

ject

-ver

b s

equ

ence

, p

aral

leli

sm,

or

tran

siti

on

s

• C

on

tain

s li

ttle

or

evid

ence

of

atte

nti

on

to

the

old

-new

co

ntr

act

• C

on

tain

s vo

cab

ula

ry c

ho

ices

co

nfu

sin

g o

r

inap

pro

pri

ate

for

an a

cad

emic

sty

le

INF

OR

MA

TIO

N L

ITE

RA

CY

Giv

en t

he

pu

rpo

se a

nd

au

die

nce

,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• H

as e

ffec

tivel

y c

ho

sen

new

s so

urc

es t

hat

fit

gu

idel

ines

in

unit

ass

ign

men

t

• P

rovid

es a

cces

s to

all

fiv

e n

ews

sou

rces

via

th

e W

eb o

r cl

earl

y l

abel

ed p

aper

co

py

in p

ort

foli

o

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

mp

loys

rhet

ori

cal

anal

ysi

s

in d

iscu

ssio

n o

f te

xts

• P

rovid

es c

lear

, ac

cura

te a

ttri

buti

on

an

d

effe

ctiv

ely c

red

its

sou

rces

via

co

nsi

sten

t

inte

rnal

AP

A s

tyle

par

enth

etic

al c

itat

ion

s

• P

rese

nts

tho

rou

gh

and

acc

ura

te A

PA

refe

ren

ces

list

wit

h f

ew o

r n

o e

rrors

• H

as c

ho

sen

new

s so

urc

es a

deq

uat

e fo

r

un

it a

ssig

nm

ent

• P

rovid

es a

cces

s to

all

fiv

e n

ews

sou

rces

via

th

e W

eb o

r cl

earl

y l

abel

ed p

aper

co

py

in p

ort

foli

o

• D

evo

tes

som

e at

ten

tio

n t

o r

het

ori

cal

anal

ysi

s in

dis

cuss

ion

of

texts

• P

rovid

es a

ttri

bu

tio

n a

nd c

red

its

sou

rces

via

in

tern

al A

PA

sty

le p

aren

thet

ical

cita

tio

n w

ith

few

in

con

sist

enci

es o

r er

rors

• P

rese

nts

co

mp

eten

t A

PA

ref

eren

ces

list

wit

h f

orm

at e

rro

rs o

nly

, n

o c

on

ten

t er

rors

• H

as c

ho

sen

new

s so

urc

es i

nad

equ

ate

for

a

com

pet

ent

app

roac

h t

o t

he

assi

gn

men

t

• D

oes

no

t p

rovid

e ad

equ

ate

acce

ss t

o a

ll

fiv

e n

ews

sou

rces

via

Web

or

clea

rly l

abel

ed

pap

er c

op

y i

n p

ort

foli

o

• I

ncl

ud

es l

ittl

e o

r no

att

enti

on

to r

het

ori

cal

anal

ysi

s in

dis

cuss

ion

of

texts

• I

ncl

ud

es t

oo

few

att

rib

uti

ve

ph

rase

s an

d/o

r

use

s to

o f

ew,

un

clea

r, i

nco

nsi

sten

t, o

r

inac

cura

te A

PA

sty

le p

aren

thet

ical

cit

atio

ns

• P

rese

nts

in

com

ple

te,

inco

rrec

tly f

orm

atte

d,

or

inac

cura

te A

PA

ref

eren

ces

list

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rqu

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iver

sity

Ru

bri

c fo

r S

cori

ng

En

gli

sh 2

– U

nit

3, C

ivic

Lit

era

cy

Jan

uar

y 2

00

9

WR

ITIN

G C

ON

VE

NT

ION

S

3 –

Pro

fici

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(A,

AB

)

2 –

Com

pet

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(B, B

C,

C)

1 –

Dev

elo

pin

g O

utc

om

e

(CD

, D

, F

) R

het

ori

cal

Neg

oti

ati

on

of

PU

RP

OS

E &

AU

DIE

NC

E

Th

e w

ritt

en t

ext…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

stab

lish

es a

so

cial

iss

ue

as

a rh

eto

rica

l p

roble

m

• E

ffec

tiv

ely s

tate

s it

s p

urp

ose

/thes

is a

t

the

end o

r th

e b

egin

nin

g o

f th

e es

say

• E

ffec

tiv

ely a

dd

ress

es g

ener

al a

ud

ien

ce

of

New

swee

k “M

y T

urn

” re

ader

s

Rea

der

s ar

e d

efin

itel

y p

ersu

aded

to

con

sid

er t

he

text’

s id

eas.

• E

stab

lish

es a

so

cial

iss

ue

as a

rh

eto

rica

l

pro

ble

m

• S

tate

s it

s p

urp

ose

/th

esis

at

the

end

or

the

beg

inn

ing e

ssay

• A

dd

ress

es g

ener

al a

ud

ien

ce o

f

New

swee

k “M

y T

urn

” re

ader

s

Rea

der

s ar

e p

rob

ably

per

suad

ed t

o

con

sid

er t

he

text’

s id

eas.

• D

oes

no

t es

tab

lish

a s

oci

al i

ssue

as a

rhet

ori

cal

pro

ble

m

• V

agu

ely s

tate

s it

s p

urp

ose

/th

esis

• G

ives

lit

tle

atte

nti

on

to

aud

ien

ce

Rea

der

s ar

e n

ot

per

suad

ed t

o c

on

sid

er

the

text’

s id

eas.

OR

GA

NIZ

AT

ION

/LO

GIC

Giv

en t

he

pu

rpo

se a

nd

au

die

nce

,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

mp

loys

gen

re c

on

ven

tion

s

of

crea

tive

no

n-f

icti

on

• E

ffec

tiv

ely o

rgan

izes

¶s

• E

ffec

tiv

e o

rgan

izes

id

eas

wit

hin

eac

h ¶

• E

ffec

tiv

ely i

ntr

odu

ces

and

con

clu

des

the

essa

y,

avo

idin

g a

su

mm

ary c

on

clu

sion

Th

e o

rgan

izat

ion

al l

ogic

en

han

ces

a

read

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g o

f th

e te

xt’

s id

eas.

• C

lear

ly e

mp

loys

gen

re c

on

ven

tio

ns

of

crea

tive

no

n-f

icti

on

• C

lear

ly a

rran

ges

¶s

• C

lear

ly o

rgan

izes

id

eas

wit

hin

mo

st ¶

s

• A

deq

uat

ely i

ntr

od

uce

s an

d c

oncl

ud

es

the

essa

y

Th

e o

rgan

izat

ion

al l

ogic

ass

ists

a

read

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g o

f th

e te

xt’

s id

eas.

• I

nef

fect

ivel

y e

mp

loys

(or

om

its)

gen

re

con

ven

tion

s of

crea

tive

no

n-f

icti

on

• E

mp

loys

con

fusi

ng a

rran

gem

ent

of

¶s

• E

mp

loys

con

fusi

ng o

rgan

izat

ion

of

idea

s w

ith

in m

ost

¶s

• E

mp

loys

vag

ue

intr

od

uct

ion a

nd

/or

con

clu

sio

n

Org

aniz

atio

n p

rob

lem

s m

ake

it d

iffi

cult

for

a re

ader

to

un

der

stan

d t

he

text’

s id

eas.

D

EV

EL

OP

ME

NT

Giv

en t

he

pu

rpo

se a

nd

au

die

nce

,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely t

ells

a s

tory

lin

ked

to

lar

ger

soci

al i

ssu

e th

at w

ou

ld i

nte

rest

rea

der

s

• E

ffec

tiv

ely r

efle

cts

on

wh

at t

he

sto

ry

mea

ns

for

wri

ter

and

oth

ers,

usi

ng

refl

ecti

on

as

a fo

rm o

f tr

uth

-see

kin

g

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

mp

loys

refl

ecti

on

s as

reas

on

s to

su

pp

ort

sta

ted p

urp

ose

/th

esis

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

mp

loys

spec

ific

det

ails

to

dev

elo

p s

tory

an

d p

rovid

e ev

iden

ce f

or

refl

ecti

on

s

• A

deq

uat

ely t

ells

a s

tory

lin

ked

to

lar

ger

soci

al i

ssu

e th

at w

ou

ld i

nte

rest

rea

der

s

• A

deq

uat

ely r

efle

cts

on

wh

at t

he

sto

ry

mea

ns

for

wri

ter

and

oth

ers,

usi

ng

refl

ecti

on

as

a fo

rm o

f tr

uth

-see

kin

g

• A

deq

uat

ely e

mp

loys

refl

ecti

on

s as

reas

on

s to

su

pp

ort

sta

ted p

urp

ose

/th

esis

• A

deq

uat

ely e

mp

loys

spec

ific

det

ails

to

dev

elo

p s

tory

an

d p

rovid

e ev

iden

ce f

or

refl

ecti

on

s

• I

nef

fect

ivel

y l

ink

s st

ory

to

lar

ger

so

cial

issu

e th

at m

ay o

r m

ay n

ot

inte

rest

rea

der

s

• I

nef

fect

ivel

y r

efle

cts

on

wh

at t

he

sto

ry

mea

ns

for

wri

ter

and

oth

ers,

in

effe

ctiv

ely

usi

ng r

efle

ctio

n a

s a

form

of

tru

th-s

eekin

g

• I

nef

fect

ivel

y e

mp

loys

refl

ecti

on

s as

reas

on

s to

su

pp

ort

sta

ted p

urp

ose

/th

esis

• I

nef

fect

ivel

y e

mp

loys

spec

ific

det

ails

to

dev

elo

p s

tory

an

d p

rovid

e ev

iden

ce f

or

refl

ect

ion

s W

RIT

ER’S

ET

HO

S

Giv

en t

he

pu

rpo

se a

nd

au

die

nce

,

the

wri

tten

tex

t em

plo

ys a

text

ua

l vo

ice

tha

t…

• D

emo

nst

rate

s co

nfi

den

t, a

uth

ori

tati

ve

un

der

stan

din

g o

f th

e co

nte

nt

• D

emo

nst

rate

s p

erso

nal

en

gag

emen

t

wit

h t

he

con

ten

t (v

ia t

he

wri

ter’

s id

eas,

val

ues

, b

elie

fs)

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

tru

stw

ort

hy.

• D

emo

nst

rate

s g

ener

al u

nd

erst

and

ing o

f

the

con

ten

t

• D

emo

nst

rate

s so

me

per

son

al

engag

emen

t w

ith

th

e co

nte

nt

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

mo

stly

tru

stw

ort

hy.

• D

emo

nst

rate

s li

ttle

or

no

un

der

stan

din

g

of

th

e co

nte

nt.

• D

emo

nst

rate

s li

ttle

or

no

per

son

al

engag

emen

t w

ith

th

e co

nte

nt.

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

un

tru

stw

ort

hy.

RE

AD

AB

ILIT

Y

Giv

en t

he

pu

rpo

se a

nd

au

die

nce

,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• C

on

tain

s fe

w o

r n

o e

rro

rs i

n s

pel

lin

g,

gra

mm

ar,

pu

nct

uat

ion

, o

r se

nte

nce

stru

ctu

re

• E

mp

loys

effe

ctiv

e “M

y T

urn

” st

yle

• C

on

tain

s so

me

erro

rs i

n s

pel

ling,

gra

mm

ar,

pu

nct

uat

ion

, o

r se

nte

nce

stru

ctu

re, b

ut

thes

e er

rors

do

no

t in

terf

ere

wit

h c

om

pre

hen

sio

n

• E

mp

loys

som

e el

emen

ts o

f a

“My T

urn

style

• C

on

tain

s nu

mer

ou

s er

rors

in

spel

lin

g,

gra

mm

ar,

pu

nct

uat

ion

, o

r se

nte

nce

stru

ctu

re t

hat

in

terf

ere

wit

h

com

pre

hen

sio

n.

• D

oes

no

t em

plo

y a

“M

y T

urn

” st

yle

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iver

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bri

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r S

cori

ng

En

gli

sh 2

– U

nit

4, W

ork

pla

ce L

iter

acy

Ja

nuar

y 2

009

WR

ITIN

G C

ON

VE

NT

ION

S

3 –

Pro

fici

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(A,

AB

)

2 –

Com

pet

ent

Ou

tcom

e

(B, B

C,

C)

1 –

Dev

elo

pin

g O

utc

om

e

(CD

, D

, F

) R

het

ori

cal

Neg

oti

ati

on

of

PU

RP

OS

E &

AU

DIE

NC

E

Th

e w

ritt

en t

ext…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely d

efin

es a

wo

rkp

lace

pro

ble

m a

nd

pro

po

ses

a so

luti

on

• E

ffec

tiv

ely a

dd

ress

es a

n a

ud

ience

wh

o

has

th

e po

wer

to

so

lve

the

pro

ble

m,

wit

h

an e

ye

tow

ard

(a)

in

form

ing t

hem

, (b

)

per

suad

ing t

hem

, (c

) gen

erat

ing g

oo

d w

ill,

and

(d

) sa

vin

g t

hem

tim

e

• E

ffec

tiv

ely i

nd

icat

es w

het

her

ad

dre

ssee

has

req

ues

ted

a r

epo

rt o

r th

is i

s an

un

soli

cite

d r

eco

mm

end

atio

n

Rea

der

s ar

e d

efin

itel

y p

ersu

aded

to

con

sid

er t

he

text’

s id

eas.

• D

efin

es a

wo

rkp

lace

pro

ble

m a

nd

pro

po

ses

a so

luti

on

• A

dd

ress

es a

n a

ud

ien

ce w

ho

has

th

e

po

wer

to

so

lve

the

pro

ble

m,

wit

h a

n e

ye

tow

ard

(a)

in

form

ing t

hem

, (b

) p

ersu

adin

g

them

, (c

) gen

erat

ing g

oo

d w

ill,

an

d (

d)

savin

g t

hem

tim

e

• L

eaves

it

to r

ead

ers

to i

nfe

r w

het

her

add

ress

ee h

as r

equ

este

d a

rep

ort

or

this

is

an u

nso

lici

ted r

eco

mm

end

atio

n

Rea

der

s ar

e p

rob

ably

per

suad

ed t

o

con

sid

er t

he

text’

s id

eas.

• I

nef

fect

ivel

y d

efin

es a

wo

rkp

lace

pro

ble

m a

nd

/or

pro

po

ses

a so

luti

on

• D

oes

no

t ad

dre

ss a

n a

ud

ien

ce w

ho

has

the

po

wer

to

so

lve

the

pro

ble

m

• N

egle

cts

to w

rite

in

way

s th

at (

a) i

nfo

rm

aud

ien

ce,

(b)

per

suad

e au

die

nce

, (c

)

gen

erat

e go

od

wil

l, a

nd

/or

(d)

save

aud

ien

ce’s

tim

e

• D

oes

no

t in

dic

ate

wh

eth

er a

dd

ress

ee h

as

req

ues

ted

a r

epo

rt o

r th

is i

s an

unso

lici

ted

reco

mm

end

atio

n

Rea

der

s ar

e n

ot

per

suad

ed t

o c

on

sid

er

the

text’

s id

eas.

OR

GA

NIZ

AT

ION

/LO

GIC

Giv

en t

he

pu

rpo

se a

nd

au

die

nce

,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

mp

loys

bu

sin

ess

form

at

con

ven

tion

s

• E

ffec

tiv

ely o

rgan

izes

in

div

idu

al ¶

s

aro

und

maj

or

pro

ble

m-s

olu

tion

po

ints

(Th

ink:

topic

sen

ten

ces

& s

kim

mab

ilit

y.)

Th

e o

rgan

izat

ion

al l

ogic

en

han

ces

a

read

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g o

f th

e te

xt’

s id

eas.

• G

ener

ally

fo

llo

ws

bu

sin

ess

form

at

con

ven

tion

s

• O

rgan

izes

in

div

idu

al ¶

s ar

oun

d m

ajo

r

po

ints

(T

hin

k:

top

ic s

ente

nce

s &

skim

mab

ilit

y.)

Th

e o

rgan

izat

ion

al l

ogic

ass

ists

a

read

er’s

un

der

stan

din

g o

f th

e te

xt’

s id

eas.

• D

oes

no

t fo

llo

w b

usi

nes

s fo

rmat

con

ven

tion

s

• E

mp

loys

con

fusi

ng o

rgan

izat

ion

of

idea

s w

ith

in ¶

s (T

hin

k:

top

ic s

ente

nce

s &

skim

mab

ilit

y.)

Org

aniz

atio

nal

pro

ble

ms

mak

e it

dif

ficu

lt t

o u

nd

erst

and t

he

text’

s id

eas.

DE

VE

LO

PM

EN

T

Giv

en t

he

pu

rpo

se a

nd

au

die

nce

,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• H

as e

ffec

tivel

y s

elec

ted

th

e in

form

atio

n

to p

rese

nt

as s

upp

ort

mat

eria

l

• E

ffec

tiv

ely p

rese

nts

th

e in

form

atio

n i

n

term

s o

f re

ader

ben

efit

s an

d n

eed

s

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

mp

loys

pu

rpo

se s

tate

men

t

and

pro

ble

m s

tate

men

t in

in

trod

uct

ion

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

mp

loys

con

clu

sio

ns

and

reco

mm

end

atio

ns

• H

as s

elec

ted

ad

equ

ate

info

rmat

ion

to

pre

sen

t as

su

pp

ort

mat

eria

l

• A

deq

uat

ely p

rese

nts

in

form

atio

n i

n

term

s o

f re

ader

ben

efit

s an

d n

eed

s

• A

deq

uat

ely e

mp

loys

pu

rpo

se s

tate

men

t

and

pro

ble

m s

tate

men

t in

in

trod

uct

ion

• A

deq

uat

ely e

mp

loys

con

clu

sions

and

reco

mm

end

atio

ns

• H

as n

ot

sele

cted

in

form

atio

n t

o p

rese

nt

wel

l—to

o m

uch

, to

o l

ittl

e, o

r co

nfu

sin

g

• D

oes

no

t p

rese

nt

info

rmat

ion

in t

erm

s

of

read

er b

enef

its

and

nee

ds

• I

nef

fect

ivel

y e

mp

loys

or

om

its

pu

rpo

se

and

/or

pro

ble

m s

tate

men

ts i

n i

ntr

od

uct

ion

• I

nef

fect

ivel

y e

mp

loys

con

clu

sio

ns

and

reco

mm

end

atio

ns

WR

ITE

R’S

ET

HO

S

Giv

en t

he

pu

rpo

se a

nd

au

die

nce

,

the

wri

tten

tex

t em

plo

ys a

text

ua

l vo

ice

tha

t…

• D

emo

nst

rate

s a

con

fid

ent,

bu

sin

ess-

like

eth

os,

in

clud

ing a

war

enes

s o

f et

hic

al a

nd

legal

co

nce

rns

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

kn

ow

led

gea

ble

an

d t

rust

wo

rth

y.

• D

emo

nst

rate

s an

ad

equ

ate

bu

sin

ess-

like

eth

os,

in

clud

ing s

om

e aw

aren

ess

of

eth

ical

an

d l

egal

co

nce

rns

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

mo

stly

kn

ow

led

gea

ble

an

d t

rust

wo

rth

y.

• D

emo

nst

rate

s li

ttle

or

no

bu

sin

ess-

like

eth

os,

in

clud

ing l

ittl

e o

r no

aw

aren

ess

of

eth

ical

an

d l

egal

co

nce

rns

Rea

der

s p

erce

ive

this

tex

tual

vo

ice

as

un

kn

ow

led

gea

ble

an

d u

ntr

ust

wo

rth

y.

FYE Assessment Report Appendix B, FYE Rubrics September 2012

Jan

uar

y 2

00

9

RE

AD

AB

ILIT

Y

Giv

en t

he

pu

rpo

se a

nd

au

die

nce

,

the

wri

tten

tex

t…

• C

on

tain

s fe

w o

r n

o e

rro

rs i

n s

pel

lin

g,

gra

mm

ar,

pu

nct

uat

ion

or

sen

ten

ce

stru

ctu

re

• U

ses

wel

l-ch

ose

n v

oca

bu

lary

fo

r an

effe

ctiv

e w

ork

pla

ce s

tyle

• E

ffec

tiv

ely e

mp

loys

stra

tegie

s o

f

bu

sin

ess

style

(e.

g.,

yo

u-v

iew

str

ateg

y,

po

siti

ve

ph

rasi

ng,

clar

ity,

con

cise

nes

s,

clea

r su

bje

ct p

osi

tion

s)

• E

ffec

tiv

ely p

rovid

es i

n-t

ext

cita

tio

n o

f

sou

rce

mat

eria

ls a

s n

eed

ed

• C

on

tain

s so

me

erro

rs i

n s

pel

ling,

gra

m-

mar

, p

un

ctu

atio

n, o

r se

nte

nce

str

uct

ure

,

bu

t er

rors

do

no

t af

fect

co

mp

reh

ensi

on

• L

arg

ely e

mp

loys

app

rop

riat

e vo

cab

ula

ry

for

a w

ork

pla

ce s

tyle

• E

mp

loys

stra

tegie

s o

f b

usi

nes

s st

yle

(e.g

., y

ou

-vie

w s

trat

egy,

po

siti

ve

ph

rasi

ng,

clar

ity,

con

cise

nes

s, c

lear

su

bje

ct

po

siti

on

s)

• P

rovid

es c

itat

ion

s fo

r so

urc

e m

ater

ials

as n

eed

ed

• C

on

tain

s nu

mer

ou

s er

rors

in

spel

lin

g,

gra

mm

ar,

pu

nct

uat

ion

, o

r se

nte

nce

stru

ctu

re t

hat

aff

ect

com

pre

hen

sio

n

• C

on

tain

s vo

cab

ula

ry c

ho

ices

co

nfu

sin

g

or

inap

pro

pri

ate

for

a w

ork

pla

ce s

tyle

• T

oo

fre

qu

entl

y n

egle

cts

to e

mp

loy

elem

ents

of

app

rop

riat

e b

usi

nes

s st

yle

(e.g

., y

ou

-vie

w s

trat

egy,

po

siti

ve

ph

rasi

ng,

clar

ity,

con

cise

nes

s, c

lear

su

bje

ct

po

siti

on

s)

• D

oes

no

t p

rovid

e n

eed

ed c

itat

ion

s

Not

e: Ins

truc

tors

who

requ

ire a

cov

er m

emo

des

crib

ing

the c

onte

xt

for

the p

ropo

sal sh

ould

sti

pula

te c

rite

ria

for

their

gra

din

g of

that

mem

o, p

erh

aps

just

by

hav

ing

the

firs

t co

lum

n sa

y “t

he w

ritt

en

texts

.”

FYE Assessment Report Appendix B, FYE Rubrics September 2012