The Body and Soul of Writing

What

Works,

Works

StoryCharacters in Conflict

SceneSetting the Stage

VoiceThe Heart of the

Reading Experience

Emotional VibrancyCapture your readers

through their emotions

Exposition Rising Action

Climax Falling Action

Dénouement

Sets up story and ends with inciting incident

Hook me!

Obstacles, problems, trouble

Show me conflict!

Comedy-, things go bad. Tragedy- things go well.

Show me huge change!

Moment of reversal after the climax, final suspense.

Start wrapping things up

Conflicts are resolved. Catharsis.

Give me a feeling a that lingers

Character Arc – How does the hero change over the course of the story?

Hero at the beginning couldn’t defeat the villain

Beware of passive\weak characters

Villains are people too!

Embrace the archetypes

P.O.V.Setting

Show Me, Don’t Tell Me!

The movie camera of our imagination…

Point of view (literature) or narrative mode, the perspective of the narrative voice; the pronoun used in narration. Point of view (literature) - Wikipedia, the free

encyclopedia!

Who should be telling your story? Why?

Close 3rd Person versus God-like Power!

Time?Place?Color of the curtains?The details you use are the details your

P.O.V. character sees.Setting the stage and establishing P.O.V.

right away at the beginning of every chapter.

For a narrative, the exposition is the author's providing of some information to the audience about the plot, characters' histories, setting, and theme.

Exposition (narrative) - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia!

Scene work is visceral.Scene work shows us what we are most

interested in.Scene work draws us into the conflict.Exposition is a talking head in a documentaryExposition is narration in a movieExposition is boringExposition is necessary

Exposition as Ammunition!

Can you teach voice? Can you imitate voice? Can you spot voice?

Voice - the word choice, sentence structure, details and dialogue

Lemony Snicket, Ernest Hemingway, Stephen King

The spell you cast is in the voice

Story and conflict should direct emotions.

Show the emotional reactions of your character

Make the emotional reactions visceral – how does it feel to lose the love of your life?

Definition of VISCERAL1: felt in or as if in the internal organs of the body :

deep <a visceral conviction> 2: not intellectual : instinctive, unreasoning

<visceral drives> 3: dealing with crude or elemental emotions :

earthy <a visceral novel> www.merriam-webster.com

Exposition in Dialogue “Why, Cousin Jimmy, I haven’t seen you since we both found

the murdered body of your father, my uncle, on the side of the road by the old cemetery last October before the first snowfall. That’s right around the time I met Janet, the love of my life…”

Overwriting Cousin Jimmy was furious. He was scowling so hard I

thought his face would fall off. His eyes were glowing with the hot, hellish anger of a righteous angel framed by the Devil for a crime he didn’t commit. His jaws were clamped shut, almost as if Cousin Jimmy had been born angry and the anger had rusted his jaws closed.

Prairie Dogs I couldn’t believe Cousin Jimmy’s reaction to the news. He

had been full of hot, hellish anger. Kind of like the time we met at the old cemetery last October before the first snowfall.

Clichés I stopped Cousin Jimmy in the nick of time because by the time I

found her, Janet was as weak as a kitten.

Purple Prose Janet’s limp hand was white, white like a swan’s feathers on a

winter’s evening with the gray light muffling the world, this weary, weary world, so old, so withdrawn, so hopeless, that never would there be a rosy dawn to warm us—never again, never a dawn, only cold, only winter, only night.

P.O.V. Slips Cousin Jimmy wanted Janet at that moment, like had never wanted

anyone, ever before, not even when he was sixteen and Darla Plantington had dropped her scarf in front of his house.

The overuse of adverbs “Are you serious?” Cousin Jimmy asked quietly. “No, if you’re not,” I said quickly. “Maybe I am,” Cousin Jimmy said mysteriously.

Using the slip of paper you are given, do the following:Give us the scene or the opening of the sceneSet the stage and establish P.O.V. right away.Avoid the diseases all except your own

disease and then do it up right.Look for ways to heighten conflict

A novel is a perfect table made from 23 perfectly cut legs

What works, works, but this is a subjective business

Put your best foot forward

Don’t give them a reason to reject you

Another writer’s blockage—a more serious blockage—may arise from an excessive need for a success not actually related to good writing: an excessive need to please admirers (that is, to be loved), or prove himself vastly superior to others (that is, to be superhuman), or justify his existence against the too obstreperous cry of some old psychological wound (that is, to be redeemed). No amount of work can solve this writer’s problem, because nothing he writes satisfies the actual motive behind it.

--John Gardner, On Becoming a Novelist, 135

What are some of your old ideas that keep you away from writing? Where are you powerless over your writing and how is your writing life unmanageable?

Step 1 – Admitted we were powerless over writing and our writing lives had become unmanageable.

Fear of SuccessFear of FailureThe Time CardSelf DoubtCritical VoicesThinking Too bigThinking Too smallPerfectionismThe Lie of InspirationEnvy Despair

What does a sane writer look like?

Step 2 – Came to believe that a power greater than ourselves could restore us to sanity

Step 3 – Made a decision to turn our will and our lives over to a power greater than ourselves

For me, writing is the hope that life is good, that I am good, that there is a purpose, a reason, for all of this pain and chaos. When I write, I am affirming life’s inherent goodness. This is my sacred, secret dream. When I write, I am spitting in the face of doubt, despair, and death.

We write alone, but we are not alone. How do we become successful?HonestyHonestyOpen-mindednessOpen-mindedness

WillingnessWillingness

•Books•Conferences•Workshops•Critique Groups•Other writers•Friends•Spiritual Advisors•Therapists

Be Strong, Be Daring, Be Be Strong, Be Daring, Be Impossibly Courageous!Impossibly Courageous!

Why Not You?

Listen to the MUSTN'TS, child,Listen to the DON'TSListen to the SHOULDN'TSThe IMPOSSIBLES, the WON'TSListen to the NEVER HAVESThen listen close to me --Anything can happen, childANYTHING can be.

-Shel Silverstein

Once writing has become your major vice and greatest pleasure only death can stop it

-Ernest Hemingway

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