First draft audience feedbackSUMMARY

By Josh Davey

Camerawork

The first drafts’ camera work is entirely conventional because:

•Correctly represents characters •Correctly represents the psychological

disorder•Shows necessary scenes

Editing

The editing was entirely conventional because:

• It’s fast paced and dramatic•Adds conventional themes such as tension•Speeds up as the sound does

Sound

The sound was entirely conventional because:

• It adds tension and mystery• It starts of slow and increases in speed• Increases in speed in conjunction to the

editing

Mise-en-scene

The mise-en-scene was conventional because:

•The low key lighting shows the protagonist in danger and builds tension

•Locations are everyday locations which matches the plot

•Transitions in lighting between protagonist and antagonists

Summary

In order to improve I have been given the following list from the feedback:

• -Change locations for the antagonist scenes (as it's obvious it's a classroom)

• -Add in more little details• -Re-film the pill taking scene in a vast

amount of locations• -Show more of the antagonist, create more

fear