1. 1. One Minute Music Video Draft Audience Feedback Shake It Out
2. 2. Overall Feedback: Overall, the music video was well received, those who watched it complimented the greyscale and colour juxtaposition and recognised this as a device to differentiate the narrative from the performance.
3. 3. Symbolism The Black Box was also successfully recognised as a symbol of the protagonists problems, however, comments state that the black box needs to make more of an appearance to emphasise its significance to the audience.
4. 4. Type of Music Most of the feedback I received recognised the music video as a Standard Clip with narrative elements or vice versa. This is what I am intending, as the music video is both a televised bard and a commercial exhibitionist type. However, one stated that there needs to be more lipsyncing within the narrative side of the music video.
5. 5. Ancillary Products All individuals who gave feedback complimented the use of greyscale and colour as a means of juxtaposition, as it is visible in both the magazine advert and digipak. Praise was also given to artist being as prominent in the ancillary products as he is in the music video. Although, comments added that the black boxs place is more evident within the ancillary products than the music video, and should be the other way round.
6. 6. Goodwins Theory Feedbacks points out various different correlations with Goodwins theory; most notably: the notion of looking is highly addressed, as well as meeting the demands of the record label. A relationship between music, lyrics and visuals were also recognised.
7. 7. Conclusive Improvements Required My audience feedback has made it evident as to what has worked well, and what needs to be changed. From this feedback, I shall integrate the symbol of the black box more thoroughly into the music video. I have also repeated a few shots, so, to remedy this I must use different angles rather than the more repetitive mid shot that is seen more consistently throughout my music video I shall experiment with shots such as: handheld, canted, establishing, POV and others. Although overall, most feedback has been positive and I shall continue with my current execution of my music video.