Download - Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 November 22 1963 is an important date in american history. Corrected November 22, 1963, is an important date in American history.

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Page 1: Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 November 22 1963 is an important date in american history. Corrected November 22, 1963, is an important date in American history.

Proofreading Warm-up

Item 1November 22 1963 is an important date in american history.

CorrectedNovember 22, 1963, is an important date in American history.

Page 2: Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 November 22 1963 is an important date in american history. Corrected November 22, 1963, is an important date in American history.

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Item 2Thats the day president john f kennedy was killed in dallas texas.

CorrectedThat’s the day President John F. Kennedy was killed in Dallas, Texas.

Page 3: Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 November 22 1963 is an important date in american history. Corrected November 22, 1963, is an important date in American history.

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Item 3Is there anyone whom doesn’t remember what they were doing at that fateful moment.

CorrectedIs there anyone who doesn’t remember what he or she was doing at that fateful moment?

Page 4: Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 November 22 1963 is an important date in american history. Corrected November 22, 1963, is an important date in American history.

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Item 4Mother set in front of the television and watched and cryed.

CorrectedMother sat in front of the television and watched and cried.

Page 5: Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 November 22 1963 is an important date in american history. Corrected November 22, 1963, is an important date in American history.

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Item 5many questions were rose about the assassination.

CorrectedMany questions were raised about the assassination.

Page 6: Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 November 22 1963 is an important date in american history. Corrected November 22, 1963, is an important date in American history.

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Item 6The girl knowed she should not of been watching the family, threw the kitchen window.

CorrectedThe girl knew she should not have been watching the family through the kitchen window. (comma after family deleted)

Page 7: Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 November 22 1963 is an important date in american history. Corrected November 22, 1963, is an important date in American history.

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Item 7Jude and her both like stories about world war II

CorrectedJude and she both like stories about World War II.

Page 8: Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 November 22 1963 is an important date in american history. Corrected November 22, 1963, is an important date in American history.

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Item 8Wounded the pilot was triing to fly back too his base after a bombing mission.

CorrectedWounded, the pilot was trying to fly back to his base after a bombing mission.

Page 9: Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 November 22 1963 is an important date in american history. Corrected November 22, 1963, is an important date in American history.

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Item 9The man laid in the hospital bed and listened to the sound of a plane a long ways away.

CorrectedThe man lay in the hospital bed and listened to the sound of a plane a long way away.

Page 10: Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 November 22 1963 is an important date in american history. Corrected November 22, 1963, is an important date in American history.

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Item 10There’s several reasons the pilot become suspicious.

CorrectedThere are several reasons the pilot becomes suspicious.

Page 11: Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 November 22 1963 is an important date in american history. Corrected November 22, 1963, is an important date in American history.

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Item 11He had been hurted bad during the bombing.

CorrectedHe had been hurt badly during the bombing.

Page 12: Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 November 22 1963 is an important date in american history. Corrected November 22, 1963, is an important date in American history.

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Item 12The piece, that was finaly acheived at the end of World War II, came as a releif to so many people.

CorrectedThe peace that was finally achieved at the end of World War II came as a relief to so many people. (commas deleted)