How could you improve the email (letter) below?
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LO: how can I improve my response for the Writing section of the exam?LO: how can I improve my response for the Writing section of the exam?
C/W 20th May
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School Librarian
School Librarian
Hardworking, polite
Like reading
Play sports
Book monitor in Primary School
Want to be an English teacher when I am
older
How do you plan?
School Librarian
1. Hardworking, polite
Like reading
Play sports
Book monitor in Primary School
Want to be an English teacher when I am
older
How do you plan?
School Librarian
1. Hardworking, polite
1. Like reading
Play sports
Book monitor in Primary School
Want to be an English teacher when I am
older
How do you plan?
School Librarian
1. Hardworking, polite
1. Like reading
Play sports
2. Book monitor in Primary School
Want to be an English teacher when I am
older
How do you plan?
School Librarian
1. Hardworking, polite
1. Like reading
3. Play sports
2. Book monitor in Primary School
Want to be an English teacher when I am
older
How do you plan?
School Librarian
1. Hardworking, polite
1. Like reading
3. Play sports
2. Book monitor in Primary School
4. Want to be an English teacher when
I am older
How do you plan?
Introduction?
Conclusion?
Dear Mrs Carew,
I am emailing you regarding the position of pupil-librarian. I would very much like to be considered for the role and believe I have all the characteristics to be a success.
In conclusion, I would like to thank you for taking the time to read my letter and I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours Faithfully, ___________
Dear Mrs Carew,
I am emailing you regarding the position of pupil-librarian. I would very much like to be considered for the role and believe I have all the characteristics to be a success.
Firstly,
Secondly/Also,
Thirdly/In addition/Furthermore
In conclusion, I would like to thank you for taking the time to read my letter and I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours Faithfully, ___________
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How could you improve the email (letter) below?
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