English Final
Presentation
By: Andrew Sedano
Intro
ductio
n Goals
Beginning Attitutde Literacy Memoir
Discourse Community Project
• Engineering Lab Report
Over All Growth
Interactive Assignment
Goals
Broaden my vocabulary Improve the flow of my
papers
Learn new formats
Able to create well defined papers
Literacy Memoir
Who are you as writer? Who/what has
influenced your writing?
What in your writing needs improvement?
Reflect on your past writing experiences
Lite
racy
Mem
oir
Pa
rt I
Anticipations Steps
• Brainstorming• Journal entries• Proposal/Teacher Conference• 30 min. writing session
Peer Workshop• Multiple viewpoints• HOC (Higher Order Concerns)
• LOC (Lower Order Concerns)
Improvements• Grammatical• Organization• Flow• Content
Exa
mple
of Pe
er
Revie
w
Exa
mple
of Pe
er
Revie
w
Literacy Memoir
Part II
Anticipations
• Confident
• Less grammatical mistakes
Steps
• Eliminate all HOC
• Look over peer review and comments
• Accept/Not Accept changes
Ms. Camargo’s Revisions• More specific• Include better details
Litera
cy Mem
oir
Part III
Anticipations
• Better organized
• Flows a lot smother
• More detailed
Steps• Eliminate all LOC• Consider Ms. Camargo’s revisions• Add more detailed and be more specific• Proper Format (MLA)
Improvements• Better flowing• Easily understandable• Well organized• No grammar mistakes
Litera
cy Mem
oir
Reflectio
nOverall
Improvement
Proper steps needed
in order to consider
something as your
final draft.
Learn how to peer
review
Better
organizational skills
Better flowing paper
Well developed
details
Continue to
have
problems…
Putting ideas to paper
Introductions/Conclusions
Better vocabulary
What Was
Learned
Type of writer
Steps taken when
approaching a new
paper
Discourse
Community Project
What type of writing will you take part in in your future career?
• Research
• Reports
• Design Packages
• Project Proposals
What writing conventions are preeminent in your Discourse Community?
• Chicago Manual Format
• Detailed
• Labeled
Engin
eerin
g
Conve
ntio
ns
Engin
eerin
g
Conve
ntio
ns
Dis
cours
e
Com
munit
y Pr
oje
ct
Anticipations Steps
• Research• Individual Report• Reflection
Camargo’s Revisions• Proper Format Correcting• Better Detail• Better Word Choice
DC
P R
evisio
ns
DC
P R
eflectio
n Learned
Type of writing styles and conventions
Jargon ENGR 1201
Other Discourse Communities
Improvements Well developed research Proper Formatting (MLA)
Ove
rall G
row
th Revisions
Peer Editing Organization
Better flowing paper
Formatting Skills
Journ
al W
riteQuestions
How has your attitude changed regarding peer review since that of your high school years?
Why do you think this is? maturity, peer workshop guidelines, etc.
TH
AN
K YO
UQUESTIONS?
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