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spring
buds
flowers bloom
fall
crab apples fall
rustling in the wind
summer
birds sing
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My House in the sky
My dad and I made a house on the top branch of a
tree in my very own backyard. I sit up there all year
round. In spring buds appear and soon flowers bloom.
Birds sing there in Summer. In the fall crab apples fall
off. I listen leafs rustle in the wind. Winter snowstorms
make it look pretty. We nailed boards up the trees trunk
for climbing.
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My House in the sky
My dad and I made a house on the top branch of a
tree in my very own backyard. I sit up there all year
round. In spring buds appear and soon flowers bloom.
Birds sing there in Summer. In the fall crab apples fall
off. I listen leafs rustle in the wind. Winter snowstorms
make it look pretty. We nailed boards up the trees trunk
for climbing.
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fragrant, pink
Robins tweet ping on the ground
the tree like lace
This is my special tree where I can think and watch the seasons change.
My House in the sky
My dad and I made a house on the top branch of a
tree in my very own backyard. I sit up there all year
round. In spring buds appear and soon flowers bloom.
Birds sing there in Summer. In the fall crab apples fall
off. I listen leafs rustle in the wind. Winter snowstorms
make it look pretty. We nailed boards up the trees trunk
for climbing.
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fragrant, pink
Robins tweet ping on the ground
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the tree like lace ’
This is my special tree where I can think and watch the seasons change.
My House in the Sky
My dad and I made a house on the top branch of atree in my backyard. We nailed boards up the tree’strunk for climbing. I sit up there all year round. In springbuds appear and soon fragrant, pink flowers bloom.Robins tweet there in summer. In the fall crab applesping on the ground. I listen to leaves rustle in the wind.Winter snowstorms make the tree look like lace. This is my special tree where I can think and watch the seasons change.
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