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Youtube The Ruin
The Literacy ShedThe Post Apocalyptic Shed
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PART 1
Setting the scene
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Part 1. Setting the Scene
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Zooming in
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Clanking pipes. The sound of something being dragged. Breaking the silence
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Crashes below. Silence returns. What other sounds can you hear?
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The Ruin by Wes Ball
PART 2
Introducing the main character
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Part 2. Introducing the main character.
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Introduce the mission
What can they hear?Can they feel something?
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What had fallen from the tower block was a large metal box like a refrigerator, asafe –a coffin even. Slowly through the settling dust, a figure emerged. She worea baseball cap pulled down low – a scarf covered her face. When she reached the box, she looked left and right, to check if she were alone. She kicked the metal box hard. The door fell open, spilling its contents across the floor.
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PART 3
The chase but by who?
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How do they start running? Sprang, like a cheetahHe glanced behind him?Beating sound growing louder
From behind a buildingEmerging from a buildingBuzzing like a wasp
If only they could get there…..If only they could make it too the bridge
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Describe what it is. An H25 rotor droid. Haven DR Penetrator Drone
As the drone swooped in, the hero suicidally leapt from the bridge
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Slid down the moss covered concrete embankment
Where a motorway once had been was their motorbike from last century It was noisy, primitive machine. But fast.
It revved into life. The engine roared.
Maybe they had a chance.
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The noise was behind her buzzing like an angry wasp. She leapt up and ran like a cheetah, not waiting to see what it was behind her – she already knew: it was a locator drone. If only she could reach the freeway without being caught. The drone was above her now, taking aim like a mosquito, ready to suck her life from this abandoned world. She reached the bridge and leapt suicidally over the side. She skidded down the embankment, and there it was, her ticket out of Nowhere City. A battered Norton 7000 was parked, ready. She leapt on it and kick started the engine. It roared into life and she sped off down the open freeway, as the drone circled angrily above her.
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PART 4
The chase
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Sped away. Leant hard over the bike.Dodging abandoned cars.The roadNeglected, peppered with holesCould they outrun it?
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There was no way they could have caught upLooked back.The drone is still there, Following them. Stuck like glue. Locked on like a magnet.
They realise they can’t outrun themIn a split second they change their mindTime for plan B
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The engine of the Norton 7000 shook under her as she leant over the handle bars, willing the bike to go as fast as possible to get away from the drone. The road blurred under her wheels, as she flew down the freeway dodging abandoned cars; holes were peppered across the road threatening to throw her from her bike with one mistake.
Surely she had ridden fast enough? Surely the drone could not have kept up with her blistering speed? She stole a glance behind her. Her blood ran cold – it was still there. Ahead she looked and saw the road split and an idea flashed through her mind. It was time for plan B. She dropped down a gear and sped the bike towards a slipway off the freeway.
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The Ruin by Wes Ball
PART 5
The chase – plan B
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But the droid had a second plan tooTwo heat seeking missiles dropped from its undercarriage.Rockets flickered as they locked on to them
Camera eyes
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Fizzed
Bounced down the road.ExplodingThe missiles were unharmed
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They had to try againUp ahead they saw a carIf they toss it into the car then maybe..
It clattered under the car
The car exploded but the missiles didn’t stop
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Had one bomb leftOne chance left.Sign post for the old tunnels
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she threw the flare behind her.
the camera droids locked on to their target.
she drove the Norton 7000 even faster.
Two things happening at the same time.
ClauseVerbMake sense
jump she pickle hat red
SentenceWhen a clause has been punctuated
Dropping from the main droid,
While she glanced back,
As the camera droids chased her harder,
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PART 6
The chase – the final chance
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As fast as the bike would goIt rattled.Bits threatening to throw themselves off the bike.
If only they could get to the tunnelThere it wasLike a dark mouth ready to …..
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The tunnel was pitch black. They were plunged into darknessThe chasing drones flicked on their lights.Ghostly white light.
The tunnel was dangerousAbandoned cars leapt out of the darkness wildly
The missiles locked on to the targetThey panicked
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Laser smashed into the tunnel wallA shower of sparks.she drove faster.
Then up ahead she saw it
The light at the end of the tunnel
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Reached for last bombThe missile locked on. They wouldn’t be able to escape twice
At the mouth of the tunnelEnd of the tunnel
It stuck to the roof By the entranceFizzing
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The entrance exploded.
Missiles scattered
Slowed to a stopLooked backWhat could they say think?
Safe?
Heart droppedThe drone rose again
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Describe emotions using your inside organs
To think with your gut
I had a gut feeling
Her guts twisted
Her stomach knotted
Tense on the inside
Her heart sank…..
She was determined not to be disheartened
Her heart rose…..
Her heart pounded…………….
Thud! Thud!
As if her heart would burst
She was heartened…..
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PART 7
The chase – the drone returns
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The drone rose up
Spitting bullets
Dodged. Sped through the highway, under bridges.
The drone is in pursuit againDesperate to get away,Air heavy with the sound of gunshot and helicopter blades
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Drone whirled around ahead to face them.
She reached for her ……. Sword nano-sword
Suddenly veered offSped up a side ramp of an old broken bridgeHeart in her mouthHeart would pound through their chest
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Leapt off the bikeSomersaulted like a XXXXXXXXXXThe bike wailed into the distance
Landed on dronePlunged the swordElectricity sparked and flew from the circuit panels
There was a bang and it all went black.
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SilenceWalkCrunching in the gravel
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SilenceWalkCrunching in the gravel
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Then, like a bad dream, the locator drone rose up from behind the bridge again. But this time it felt different. It aimed it’s guns and opened fire. With cat-like reflexes she…..
The drone whirred past her and spun around so that they faced each other like ………………………….. There was only one option left. She revved the Norton 7000 hard. “Here we go,” she thought and she sped head-on towards the locator drone.