You Attitude Positive Emphasis Worksheet

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Business Communications 110 Improving You-Attitude and Positive Emphasis Revise these sentences to improve you-attitude and positive emphasis. Eliminate any awkward phrasing. In some cases, you may need to add information to revise the sentence effectively. 1. We cannot provide vegetarian meals unless you let us know at least three days in advance. 2. We are pleased to provide free e-mail accounts to students. 3. You’ll be happy to know that we have installed an ATM for your convenience. 4. We’re swamped. We won’t be able to get your order out to you until Friday morning. 5. We cannot process your request for a reservation because some information is missing. 6. Customers under 60 are not eligible for the Prime Time discount. 7. Your balance of $835 is delinquent. 8. I have worked hard to get you the best contract possible. 9. We are shipping your order of September 14 today. 10. It will be impossible to open an account for you until you send us your signature card.

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You Attitude Positive Emphasis Worksheet

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Business Communications 110Improving You-Attitude and Positive Emphasis

Revise these sentences to improve you-attitude and positive emphasis. Eliminate any awkward phrasing. In some cases, you may need to add information to revise the sentence effectively.

1. We cannot provide vegetarian meals unless you let us know at least three days in advance.

2. We are pleased to provide free e-mail accounts to students.3. You’ll be happy to know that we have installed an ATM for your

convenience.4. We’re swamped. We won’t be able to get your order out to you

until Friday morning.5. We cannot process your request for a reservation because some

information is missing.6. Customers under 60 are not eligible for the Prime Time discount.7. Your balance of $835 is delinquent.8. I have worked hard to get you the best contract possible.9. We are shipping your order of September 14 today.10. It will be impossible to open an account for you until you

send us your signature card.