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WRITING POLICY PAPERS
WRITERSGUIDE
Tree of Knowledge
She is a tree of life to them that lay hold upon her:
and happy is every one that clings to her.
Her ways are ways of pleasantness and all her paths
are peace
All rights reserved to the Civil Service Commission
*The guide is written in the masculine, but is intended for men and
women alike
Department ofDoctrine &
Knowledge
Management
Reform Implementation
Staff
Civil Service
Commission
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The Civil Service Commissioner
Introductory Remarks
Lastin deed, but first in thought" (from the liturgical poem: "Lecha Dodi"). The greater the act,
the greater the importance of initial reflection. We are dealing with human resources
management in the Civil Service. It is work of great importance and its outcome is significant to
the quality of both state and society. This requires the activity to be based on a well-organized
doctrine. Thereforeand this is elementary and needs no further explanation- we must operate
according to the Civil Service Human Resources Management Doctrine. This has further
importance because the Civil Service Commission is positioning itself, within the current reform
plan, as the administrative body responsible for managing human resources in the Civil Service,
while strengthening the process of delegating responsibilities to offices and auxiliary units. We
will find that formulating doctrine relating to key issues will be the central task of the
Commission in the coming years. As a result, a human resources management doctrine
department was established and we have begun the work.
I applaud the initiative that leads to thewriting of this document. It constitutes a guideline for
writing policy papers and is of the utmost value in formulating a doctrine built on a strong,
systematic and unified foundation. This is a good opportunity to commend the prodigious work
of the writer of this guide, the director of the human resources management doctrine
department of the Civil Service Commission, Dr. Iris Nehemiah, who has worked tirelessly in the
implementation of the reform in general and in the promotion of the doctrine in particular.
S i n c e r e l y ,
Moshe Dayan
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Chief of Staff of Reform Implementation
Introductory Remarks
The Civil Service Human Resources Reform stems from a cultural shift from reactive to strategic
management. In general, the strategy is designed to integrate purpose, policy and overall goals
with the organizations practical activities by defining operational objectives and
implementation methods to achieve this end. In this regard, Civil Service human resources
management today severely lacks a theoretical and doctrinal dimension.
Doctrine (in Latin "doctrina", which means teaching, learning), is a comprehensive term for
policy, meaning the complex of rules, approaches and basic principles in an area of knowledge
or for the operation of an organization. The doctrine shapes and determines the fundamental
principles underlying the strategies and plans of operation.
The Treeof KnowledgeProgram , designed to createabout40policy papers, is a significant
milestone in establishing the ideological infrastructure for human resources management
change within the civil service reform.
The design of the policy paper, which includes operating principles, concepts and rules on
various subjects, will need to reflect three fundamental components:
Policy
Procedural Infrastructure Procedures derived from policy-making processes as an
exampletheir integration in the circle of government
planning , procedures involved in the officesworking
conditions, interconnections between entities, etc.
Human infrastructure Determination of functions, of functionaries, training and
knowledge areas, requiring attention in light of the
determination of the new policy.
Technological infrastructure Defining requirements in the areas of content and
information, programs and applications, terminal equipment,
resulting from the new policy.
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I have no doubt that the completion of the policy papers as a whole will not only serve as a
conceptual infrastructure, but as the basis for many activities in reform implementation, and will
generate activities for general organizational changes at all levels of management infrastructure:
procedural, human and technological, as one.
I wish to express my appreciation of Dr. Iris Nehemiah for leading the Tree of Knowledge
Program, which has been integrated into our operational plan for this special year of reform
implementation.
Wishing you much success,
-Signed-
Ron Tsur
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Head of the Department of Doctrine and KnowledgeManagement
Introductory Remarks
Dear policy paper writer,
I am happy to present to you a brief guide to writing policy papers, summarizing the main
principles in writing policy papers by the policy paper writing staff for the Tree of Knowledge
Program, under the guidance of the Department of Doctrine and Knowledge Management ofthe Civil Service Commission. This program is designed to develop and shape doctrine
management and policy that establish basic concepts of human resources management in order
to make the best possible use of the civil serviceshuman resources potential. Writing policy
papers is a challenging process that requires a bird's eye view and a systemic perspective to
examine the current situation and ask several basic questions:
WHY WHAT HOW
These questions should be answered in a broader context, where it is required to study in
depth the global employment environment, and within, the new trends and the
organizational milieu in which we operate, and within it, the opportunities and the risks it
poses in the implementation of thepolicy.In addition, it is required to map key players in the
area and consider what are the implicit and explicit interests of every office holder and the
added value that each of the players may grant to promote the implementation of the policy.
Why is necessary to updateor develop policy. Why now?
What are the challenges and
issues answered by the
policy. Will engagement in
this issue contribute to
improvement of human
resources?
What should be done tofulfill the objective?
What are the possible
alternatives for optimal
response to challenges and
issues that arise.
How can we realize theselected policy to
maximize improvement of
human resources.
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The vision of improving human resources and fostering excellence among public servants,
requires us to examine a wealth of issues and operational challenges that arise, first of all
through human lensesoriented to the needs of the individual, the public servant, and as
much as possible in a utopian world without constraints. Only at a later stage of the writing,
will it be correct to discuss the constraints that exist in the civil service. However, we are not
allowed to consider them in order to "think outside the box" and adopt correct and necessary
practices when formulating policies, to ensure realization of thevision.
Remember that you have been given a golden opportunity to influence policy design, to
improve processes and develop practical tools for the sake of a civil service of higher quality.
The Doctrine Department is at your service to assist and provide you with the tools necessary
for fulfilling this important task.
I wish you a fruitful endeavor, a pleasurable undertaking, together with feelings of satisfaction,
fulfillment and success.
Sincerely,
-Signed-
Dr. Iris Nehemiah
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
1.
INTRODUCTION
2. METHODOLOGY OF POLICY PAPER WRITING
2.1 The process of writing a policy paper at the
macro-level
2.2 Defining the requirement, problem and the
objective formulation
2.3 Identifying the core issue
2.4 Preparation of a draft policy paper
2.4.1 Formulation and definition of criteria and
measures of success
2.4.2 Normative criteria2.4.3 Performance criteria - Mapping potential
risks
2.4.4 Deciding between conflicting valuesand
decision- support tools
2.4.5 Creating alternatives and their presentation
2.4.6 Analysis of alternatives
2.4.7 Formulation ofpreferred alternative
2.5 Policy implementation and control
2.5.1 Definition of central and secondary objectives
2.5.2 Establishing control indices for
implementation policies
2.5.3 Policy assessment using measurement tools
3. Organization of papers relating to human
resources management in the civil service
and operational stages of their
formulation
3.6 Classification of pre-creation papers
3.7 Fixed time frame for the creation process of a
policy paper
3.8 Stages of policy formation and key anchors in
projectile view (Gantt chart)
3.9 Explanation offered for all stages of the
process according to the timeline
3.10 Details of the types of documents required
according to work stages
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3.10.1 Projectile work plan
Initiating document
Internal draft3.10.4 Official policy paper - First edition
3.10.5 Official policy paper - Permanent second
edition
Sources
Appendices
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1.INTRODUCTION
This guide is designed for you to formulate a policy within the framework of the Tree of
Knowledgeprogram. The guide is divided into two main sections:theFirst Chapterdeals with
the process of writing the policy paper by the project team and includes the process of editing
the required subject, including examination of requirements, problem formulation, analysis of
alternatives, and more. Chapter Twodeals with the overall concept of policy papers and the
process of writing policy papers in practice, including a time schedule and Gantt chart and
activities proposed for policy writing within the framework of the Tree of KnowledgeProgram.
It also includes the parts required to be ultimately included in the paper in the permanent
edition that will be distributed to offices.
The policy formulation of the doctrine of management is the process of building a large codex of
basic, doctrinal, policy and operational documents, used as an inexhaustible magnet of
information and knowledge in the field of management, ensuring the existence of professional
dialogue crossing levels and ranks, and allowing the existence of effective and beneficial
reciprocal interaction among various agencies in the civil service.
It is designed to help civil service managers and professionals at all levels to establish an
appropriate management culture, formulate enriching processes, and enhance human
resources, all the while maintaining continuous organizational and mental flexibility in
management processes.
On the one hand, at the base of its operational concept, lies a codex - a common language -
with uniformity of components and terms relevant to the issue, and , on the other hand, a clear
and organized system of formulation, of organization and maintenance of documents.
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Initiation
Initiation of doctrinarian subjects in the Civil Service.
Mapping of ongoing requirements with the organizational units.
Investigation
Collecting information and investigating data required for determining policy.
Developing partnerships with knowledgeable (academia, government) and
experienced (business sector) entities valuable for creating a broad and relevant
informational envelope.
Development
Development of policy papers based on a box of methods and tools.
Systematic integration (combination) of various policy papers.
Projectile approach identifying the development phase as a triangle of three
constraints:Content, time, quality.
Control Quality control ensuring products of great organizational value.
Operational control ensuring a proper and efficient process .
Communication of activities according to the analysis of interested parties.
The Department of Doctrine and Knowledge Management serves as a professional and
superior authority on the subject of the application of the model of policy papers and
doctrine, of implementation of systems and tools, and management of documentscodex.
This by:
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Work program to
write, distribute,for reproduction
and maintenance.
Writing guides
and programs.
Professional assistance,
guidance and training,
including consultation,
informatics, organization
and methods,conductingsurveys, editing and
graphics.
Seminars and
qualification training
focused on the subject of
writing policy papers .
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2. METHODOLOGY OF POLICY PAPER WRITING
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2.1 The process of writing a policy paper at macro-level
The policy paper presents a practical problem and outlines a solution chosen in a reasoned and
informed manner from a variety of alternatives examined. The paper serves as a tool for
decisionmaking, together with a call to action, and an effort to convince the reader. At the
micro-level,the main process of writing a policy paper focuses on the following stages described
in the diagram:
Definition
of the
Requirement
Definition
of the issue
Formulation
of
alternativesCooperation
Policy
evaluation
Policy
implementation
and control
Policy
design
Selection
of the
preferred
alternative
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2.2 Defining the requirement, the problem and objective formulation
The first step in writing a policy paper is to define the requirement for the policy paper,
and the reason for which setting policy is required. What is the undesired condition or
situation that created this requirement, (e.g., inefficiency, inequality, etc.), requiring
responses and rectifications by relevant parties.
Formulation of the problem and justification regarding the need for intervention is a critical and
important stage in writing a policy paper, given that, according to its definition, the policy comes
to present a deep and accurate solution to a problem and its nature.
Determining the objective of the policy paper stems directly from the way the problem is
defined. The objective may be moral or instrumental, and it is important that it should be based
on preliminary guidelines and premises. Formulation of the objective must be lucid and written
in a clear and realistic language.
2.3 Identifying the core issue
Identifying the underlying core issue and handling it through policy instruments can lead to
achieving the desired result. Therefore, care must be taken to distinguish between the core
issue and secondary issues, which are usually symptoms of the core issue.
The policy paper should deal with the core issue rather than its symptoms. Therefore, we must
closely examine the reasons for the symptoms, the root problem, and not focus on the
symptoms themselves. For this, we must constantly ask what causes the symptoms we see.
2.3.1 Tool to investigate problems
We recommend a possible investigative tool to locate the root cause of the problem. In
professional literature this tool is known asWhy Five, meaning posing five questions. The
premise of the method is that the person stops to investigate the problem the moment he
finds an accessible and discernable reason for the problem. At this point, he stops the
investigation and does not try to determine if the cause he identified is really the source or
whether there exists something else that caused it. The proposed method forces one to ask
whyagain and again, in order to eventually get to the root cause of the problem.
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2.3.1.1 Description of the method in a practical way
As stated, we should examine and investigate why this happened, and only after the cause of
the problem is understood, to ask again why this happened, and so on: An investigation of the
reason for A to happen will lead to the conclusion that it occurred because of B. Instead of
trying to deal with B, it is necessary to continue and try to understand why this happened: a
short investigation will lead to the conclusion thatBwas caused by C. Further investigation will
lead to the conclusion that C was caused by D, and thus until the root of the problem is
reached. The FiveLevels recommendationis not a necessary condition. One can continue till the
root cause is understood.
2.3.2 Mapping the issue
In order to deal with the core issue, one must first assess its scope and examine the extent of its
impact on the organization, the employees or the public. This is necessary in order to better
understand the issue and also to formulate a course of action to deal with it.
In order to treat the core issue, one has to observe the processes that led to its formation.
Then, we must examine how to deal with the issue through the use of policy instruments. In
general, the following characteristics of the problem should be considered:
The severity level of the problem- How serious is the problem? The subject affected by the problem- Who exactly is affected and injured as a result of
the existence of the problem?
The nature of the problem- Whether the nature is instrumental or symbolic?
Urgency of the problemHow urgent is it to treat the problem. Does the treatment
depend on a particular time?
Duration of the existence of the problem- Is it a new problem that recently emerged or
is it an old and ongoing problem?
Identifying the authors of the problemWho are the authors of the problem and the
various factors that created it?
2.4 Preparation of a draft policy paper
At the draft stage of the preparation of the policy paper, the subject will be decipheredthe
'why' question - why a change or update of the policy is necessary; what are the problems to be
solved as a result. The draft paper will include an analysis of the various alternatives, risks and
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chances involved in the selection of each of the various alternatives, and the preferred
alternative recommendation formulation.
2.4.1 Formulation and definition of criteria and measures of success
The criteria are variables we use to help examine the success of the policy, and, in fact, they are
the basic requirements of the policy to be set. The criteria have to be formulated before
formulating alternatives in order to avoid biases or intent during their formulation.
There are two types of criterion:
Normative criteria
Performance criteria
While the normative criteria are the basic requirements and the essence of the policy, the
operative criteria test the ability of its application. Normative criteria are mandatory in every
policy paper.
2.4.2 Normative criteria
EffectivenessCarrying out the right operations enabling the best possible achievement
of the objective of the policy. It is important that the effectiveness index presents a
quantitative measure by which it will be possible to examine how the policy contributes
to the improvement of human resources and how it contributes to solving the problem
in question. This criterion is designed to examine if and whether the policy is effective at
the operational level.
FairnessTo what extent does the policy ensure equal distribution of resources. The
fairness criterion is designed to control the policy in accordance with the principle of
equality and the policys actual impact on it.
EfficiencyPerforming actions in a proper manner. In what measure does the policy
ensure that its effect will be maximal in relation to what has been invested in it. The
effectiveness criterion should reflect the cost of the objective and whether it is cost-
effective. This criterion is similar to the effectiveness criterion but focuses on the
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relationship between the investment required for implementation of the policy versus
the anticipated benefit.
Competitiveness - How much does the policy promote the value of competition, an
important value in improving human resources in the civil service, and the advancement
of vital processes in civil service. Through this policy, all the countrys citizens are
allowed to freely compete for civil service positions and progress in rank in accordance
to performance.
Equal and fair representation To what extent does the proposed policy allow various
groups in Israeli society equal and fair representation. Further to the fairness criterion,
fair representation of different groups and strata of Israeli society is here important,
according to the principles of the Civil Service Commission.
Security To what extent does the proposed policy fulfill the basic needs of the
individual civil service employee,starting from existential security to material security.
It is important to remember that security is expressed in many ways and on many
levels, not just at the physical level.
ServiceabilityTo what extent will the proposed policy improve the service provided
to internal organizational customers and the countrys citizens. The level of the
serviceability of civil servants is a very valuable criterion since the objective of working
in the civil service is to provide service to the countryscitizens.
The public service image To what extent will the proposed policy improve the public
service image and help improve the public service team spirit.
2.4.3 Performance criteria - Mapping potential risks
Legality - the illegality of the proposed solution. An illegal alternative will in advancenot be accepted; and therefore, the challenge exists in situations of uncertainty. In
these situations, it is important to consider means of dealing with the challenge
(eliminating an alternative, a change in legislation, requesting the General Attorney s
opinion.)
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Political feasibility- Difficulty or inability to politically carry out the proposed policy in
light of expected objections. In this criterion, an analysis of the balance of power andinterests should be carried out, including motives and hidden relationships between the
various parties.
Practical feasibility - Difficulty or inability to perform the proposed solution in
light of the following parameters: time schedules, technological barriers,
professional ability, budget, supervision capability, etc.
Inflexibility - There exists a risk that it will be impossible to backpedalif the
proposed solution does not work.
Indirect positive effects- What are the positive byproducts of the policy. How does
it
impact the promotion of other fields.
Indirect negative effects- What are the negative byproducts of the policy. Will this
policy negatively affect other areas.
Cost- What is the economic or social cost resulting from the implementation of the
policy.
Degree of weighted- risk This can be calculated according to the severity of each risk (as
decided by the team ), multiplied by the percentage of the possibility it might occur.
2.4.4. Deciding between conflicting valuesand decision -support tools
The criteria in many cases represent values that have built-in contradiction or some tension,
(e.g., fairness versus efficiency). To be able to analyze the various alternatives, based on a
uniform scale, it is necessary to formulate and establish decision- support tools that can
examine risks versus chanceswisely, in order to reach an optimal decision.
Below are the different types of decision-support tools:
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Weights - Different risks and chances have different degrees of importance; therefore it is
recommended to appoint weights to different criteria. Weights can be determined
quantitatively (appoint to each risk and chance a degree of importance based on100%);and to
do so in a qualitative manner (high importance, medium importance, low importance).
Ranking - One can rank all risks and chances according to their importance, with the most
important risk and chance ranked first, followed by other risks and chances ranked in order of
importance.
Extreme conditions- Sometimes certain risks are so great that alternatives can be rules out in
light of this risk. One can set an index whereby a certain weighted rank of risk (risk severity
multiplied by the likeliness it will occur) may eliminate a potential solution.
2.4.5 Creating alternatives and their presentation
Writing a policy paper is not a technical operation but a process whose sole purpose is to offer a
solution to an existing problem; and therefore, the stage of creating alternatives is essential
to the process. At first stage, it is important to place all possible alternatives on the table.
One must ensure that the alternatives present new approaches in dealing with the issue
and / or new ideas not presented earlier. Of course, among all alternatives should also be
included the alternative of continuing the current policy, even if it perpetuates the existing
problem, given that it may be preferable to other alternatives that may provoke more serious
effects and problems. The process of identifying possible alternatives is a process of joint
thinking. It is important for the process to be carried out in such a way that encourages
thought and creativity, to avoid the need to focus on searching for the' best 'alternative;
however, as many alternatives as possible should be explored.
One should ensure separation between the stage of presenting alternatives and the stage of
analysis of an alternative ,and avoid expressing clear preference for one of the alternatives
prior to its full analysis.
To create high-quality and high-feasibility alternatives one should use relevant analogies,
comparisons to existing models (in different sectors or offices, or abroad), and generic
solutions. When presenting alternatives in a policy paper, it is important to present them as a
process of brainstorming and developing new ways of thinking. Presentation of alternatives
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must be done in a proper manner, presenting the essentials of each alternative, and taking into
account underlying premises or preliminary guidelines, if such exist. With multiple alternatives,
one should present the main alternatives and only later present secondary alternatives.
2.4.6 Analysis of alternatives
This stage is carried out in light of the criteria we determined. Analysis of risks and chances as a
toolfor analyzing the results of the alternativeand not the analysis of the alternative itself. The
challenge is to translate the risks and chances into results; i.e., to turn them into a value that can
be weighted and examined quantitatively. If one looks at the risk of political feasibility, for
example, one is required to quantitatively weigh the amount of impact of all relevant political
forces on theimplementation or non-implementationof the program.
2.4.6.1 Examination of the impact
The implementation of a policy alternative may have different implications. Therefore, at the
analysis stage, one should examine the extent each alternative solves the problem in question,
its practical and its ethical implications, as well as examine whether the alternative will awaken
new problems. In addition, one should segment the target population (workers / management
levels etc.), into groups that may benefit from the alternative compared to groups that may be
harmed by it, and pay attention to whether there are populations that are not directly related to
the problem, and that may be affected as a result of the implementation of the alternative.
For each alternative, one should build scenarios based on comparative experience, analogies,
theoretical models and models that exist in the field, and try to refine the implications of the
alternative and its future success. For each alternative an estimate of the result should be
performed , the kind of result to be created from the qualitatively and quantitatively point of
view, how a certain amount of investment in a particular element will bring a particular type of
result, and so on. Finally, one should consult professional elements and experts to analyze
options in the best possible way. It is very important to support alternatives with facts and
figures and distinguish between facts and interpretations.
At the stage of analysis, it is important to analyze all alternatives according to the same scale
and against the same criteria. Analysis that examines advantages against disadvantages for each
alternative by itself has no importance when the alternatives as a whole have no common
ground of comparison. Therefore, one should position all alternatives and criteria together in
an alternative analysis table.
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2.4.6.2 Alternatives analysis table
With the completion of the process of analysis, one should place the alternatives in an analysis
chart where each alternative will be ranked under each criterion both quantitatively and
qualitatively, of course one should treat the current situation as one of the possible alternatives
(See sample weighting table).
Legend:
Red normative criterion less likely, making high-risk criteria.
Orange chance normative criterion medium, medium-risk criterion performance.
Green normative criterion likely, low-risk performance criterion
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Performance criteria (risks) Normative criteria (chances)1
5. 4. 3. 2. 1.
8.1.4. 2.3.
A
Alternative
B
C
D
5.6.7.
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It is possible to change criteria by referring to the issue itself.
LEGEND
NORMATIVE CRITERIA (CHANCES) PERFROMANCE CRITERIA (RISKS)
1. Effectiveness 1. Legality.
2. Fairness 2. Political feasibility
3. Efficiency 3.Practical feasibility
4. Competitiveness 4.Indirect negative effects
5. Equal and fair representation 5.Cost
6. Security
7. Serviceability
8. Public Service Image
ATERNATIVES A/B/C/D ALTERNATIVES A/B/C/D
Red squares= Low chances; Red squares = High risk
Yellow squares = medium chance ; Yellow squares= Medium risk
Green squares= High chance Green squares= Low risk
[Public Service Image: Green square = low risk;
Yellow square = Intermediate risk]
2.4.7 Formulation of preferred alternative
At this stage, a preferred alternative is selected in light of weighted criteria, as reflected in the
analysis table, and in light of the examination of alternative risks and chances. In addition, a
detailed risk analysis of the preferred alternative and its implications will be presented.
In cases where it is difficult to recommend one of the alternatives, it may be possible that a
flaw exists in the process of weighting alternatives.
The choice of one of the alternatives as the recommended policy, will be made keeping in
mind the following points:
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A choice between conflicting valuesand the world view of the Civil Service
Commissioner and the writing team.
Decision according to the possibility of immediately realizing the alternative,
(especially in cases where there is a high urgency.)
A combination of alternatives over time.
Setting a minimum ranking in order that only the alternative receiving this rank
may be elected.
Analysis of alternative scenarios and suggestions for balancing and dealing with
weaknesses in the alternative.
Exchange ratio - how much we are willing to sacrifice one value to realize
another.
Finally, one should write the policy recommendation. The policy recommendation will
include a summary of all findings and presentation of recommendations with all its pros and
cons and an explanation of why it was chosen in a knowledgeable and reasoned process.
2.4.7.1 Summarizing stage -
At the summarizing stage of the policy paper, a link should be established between the
problem presented at the beginning and the recommended solution presented at the
conclusion. The summary will include a condensed summary of the main findings without
presenting findings or new ideas not presented in the policy paper so far. The summary should
present the main practical action plan that includes details of the recommended policies - who
will act upon it, what is the recommended schedule for implementing the policy and each stage
of the work plan, and what elements and factors should be considered, focusing on the
practical implementation of the policy, etc.
2.4.7.2 Bibliography and appendices
Upon completion of the policy paper, a complete list of all sources used during its writing
should be prepared, such as articles, books, websites, etc.; and such list should be clearly
edited, in an orderly manner, following the standard in research articles. In cases where
interviews were conducted throughout the process, it is important to incorporate the names of
the respondents in the list of sources. Finally, it should be accompanied by appendices that
include all relevant documents mentioned in the course of the paper but not fully presented in
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it. Within this framework must be added written instructions, a draft of the civil service
regulations amendment, tools created, and so on.
2.5 Policy implementation and control2
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2.5.1 Definition of central and secondary objectives
Upon completion of the formulation and design of the policy paper, the writing teams should
answer the following question: to what extent does the formulated policy for implementation
provide a solution to the need (the problem / reason for which the policy was formulated). To
this end, throughout the process, a control should be integrated as an essential
accompaniment for feedback (evaluation) of the policyssuccess and to carry out adjustments
and tuning of the formulated policy, or of the alternative chosen, for implementation.
The premise is that the central and secondary objective of the policy is a cornerstone of quality
control performance capability. In the absence of definitions clear and lucid to all, the ability
to determine the norm of the desired success will be impaired.
2.5.2 Establishing control indices for implementing policies
The ability to perform quality control after policy implementation is based on the clear
definition of the policy paper objectives (as described in section 2.2 above ) and by the
determination of qualitative indices of success for the alternative selected for implementation,
specified by the authors of the policy in the chapter on control indices in the policy paper (as
described in sections2.4.2and2.4.3).
The control index is an index (marker or indicator) to measure and detect the presence and
direction of desirable or undesirable change. The index is not databut contains two essentialdata: the objectivesdatum (planning), and the implementation datum (in practice).The index,
as an indicator, shows the relationship between planning and implementation.
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This chapter was written by the senior control department of the Civil Service Commission
accompanying the policy writing process.
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Apparently it is possible to establish numerous control indices; however, this has no purpose or
benefit and is not sufficient to determine the policysdegree of implementation. The principle
of using a control system establishes that advanced thinking is necessary when determining
indices, the amount of which will help as managerial indicators while avoiding the situation
described as you cantsee the forest (objective of the policy) for the trees (control indices).
It is therefore recommended to carry out mapping of policy papers components for control
and to establish priorities regarding their implementation over time.
This, in order to avoid situations in which the principle and the essential are abandoned in
favor of the non-essential and the unnecessary.
Accordingly, the control doctrine recommends policy writers to choose indices that will reflect
the extent to which the policysobjective has been achieved, and to do so while relating to the
criteria (normative and performance) determined for the policy and the alternative selected
for implementation.
Preferred key guidelines for determining indices:
Measurement capability - Each marker is required to be measurable
(quantitative) or be evaluated (quality) through the investment of reasonableresources. In order to achieve it, one has to estimate the required data and
their level of accessibility.
Reliability- The index data should be reliable for the result obtained
to correctly reflectthemeasured subject. One of the credibility structures is the
ability to reconstruct the measurement.
Comprehensiveness The entirety of various indices should cover or
reasonably represent (partially, but adequately) the totality of the issue /
criteria it is important to measure.
SimplicityIndices also have visibility-explained value. It is recommended that
the indices should be "self-explanatoryand clear to the reasonable observer.
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Balance - Balanced measurement usually ensures integrity and greater
reliability. It is desirable that the entirety of the diverse indices relate to the
variety of aspects in the issue they measure, such as:
Long-term -( Usually strategic / managerial indices that estimate at long-
range the impact of policy implementation) versusshort term (quantitative
operational indices that focus on the short-term activity of an individual or
of organizational units).
Effectiveness -( In the implementation of policy, the degree of
contribution to promote the organization's primary objectives) versus
efficiency (the ratio between inputs invested during the process of
implementing the policy, and the results of the actual policy
implementation).
Quantity(Indices relating to the analysis of the data of policy
implementation in terms of size, number, dimension,
weight,percentage, etc.) versusQuality(indices relating to the analysis of
policy implementation data in terms of internal nature, attributes, value,
nature of operations, etc.).
Reference to the dimensions of the issue as a whole - input / process /
output/ results:
Inputs(Resources involved in implementing policy).
Processes - (Key processes operating the policy).
Outputs (Products designed according to standards of planning
predetermined in the policy paper).
Results - (Desired effects of the alternative proposed in the paper
according to policy makers).
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2.5.3 Policy assessment using measurement tools
The authors of the policy referred to the data and their sources required for
the control and evaluation of the policy implementation, including:
What data are required?
What is the nature of the data? Binary(1-0),Ordinal (items from a
list, when the order of items is significant), quantitative (calculating
the number of items).
Where are the data? (with the Commission, the offices, the
information systems ) or if they do not exist, how to produce andcharacterize, maintain and add them to the control process?
The authors of the policy referred to the possible measurement tools for assessing the
manner in which the policy is implemented, including:
Questionnaires and surveys
Modularquestion tools (monitoring and feedback forms).
Databases of organizational processes (protocols, evaluations and reviews,
insight databanks, etc.).
Files and reports (projects, programs and other activities, tracking tables, etc.)
Implementable information systems storing data which can serve as business-intelligence cover to create indices.
Dedicated systems for control management and performance measurement,
and more.
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3. ORGANIZATION OF PAPERS RELATING TO HUMAN RESOURCES MANAGEMENT
IN THE CIVIL SERVICE AND OPERATIONAL STAGES OF THEIR FORMULATION
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3.1 Policy papers
The basic documents constitute the fundamental basis for all human resources management
activity. They are the professional basis of civil service activity and express the worksobjective
for dealing with Civil Service Commission prime responsibilities. In this sense, the basic
concepts precede the doctrine in regard to each issue, since they are the fundamental phase in
the development of the doctrines.
The various concepts provide a response to two basic questions:
1. What is the purpose of Civil Service work in treating a specific issue?2. What is the general approach to the realization of this objective?
The doctrine of human resources management in the civil service is based on five major
building blocks from which the fundamental concepts are derived:
Policy
documents
Doctrinal
documents
Non-doctrinaldocuments
Guideline
documentsPlanning
documents
Organizational
systemdocuments
Core
knowledge
documents
Staff Opinion Procedures Operation
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a. Adjusting the structure of the organization to its tasks - such as reducing the
gap between the needs arising from the tasks and the organization of the
officesmanpower.
b. Management of the manpower that handles the organization's core skills -
such as securing a multi-year coordination between the quantity and quality of
the manpower which constitutes the employee population with skills defined
as the officescore skills, and the needs derived from the annual and multiyear
objectives of the task of the office.
c. Development of human resources and processes for maximizing its potential
to achieve the objectives of the office and maximizing the potential of the
officeshuman resources in a manner appropriate to its needs and task
objectives.
d. Management of labor relations and wages:
Conservation of managerial flexibility and continuity of current
operations, while maintaining a proper working relationship with
workersorganizations represented in the office.
Monitoring and control of salary expenses.
e. Organizational culture - Diagnosis of the organizationalclimate,(norms,
ethics, behavior-shaping feelings). Identification of trends and professional
treatment of the softdimensionsof the organization, just as much as (if not
more) the treatment of its overt and formal dimensions.
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3.2 Doctrinal documents
Documents dealing with core formulation of organizational operation policy. The doctrinal
documents outline the process for achieving conceptual goals and can be formulated in
knowledge spheres (management domains) or organizational spheres (structural domains).
Basic domain doctrines (the core knowledge) are divided into five areas:
Staff administration Information and knowledge management
Leadership and management capabilities
Training and guidance
Organization
Human resources Adjustment of the organizationto its tasks
Work relations andwa es Core manpower
Or anizational Culture
Instruction and training
Workers evaluation
Career development
tracks
Standardization, peaks
Organizational structure
Work methods
Skill management
Work relations system
Wage costs
People and positions
directly affecting outputsand results of office
operations
Ethos, values, ethical code
Common language
Non-formal organization
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In order to provide a distinct response that takes into account special needs and challenges,two other classifications of basic domain doctrines must be addressed:
1. Classification by an organizational hierarchy system:
Government office
Supporting unit
District
2. Classification by an organizational domain system
Government offices
Health System
Security system
3.3 Guidance documents
Documents mainly instructional, techno-logistical, operational or action guidelines.
Operating documents (techniques)
Procedures documents
Instruction documents
3.4 Documents that deal neither with concepts nor doctrines
Secondary documents that can be attached to any of the above categories as a
complementary, attached, illustrating document or as appendices.
Position document - A document expressing the position of the writer in acomprehensive and reasoned manner, a non-binding policy paper, but a
presentation of the approach and position of the author only (the policy paper
can express the position of the staff body, or of the holder of a specific
function),
Meta-analysis research - Research combining several different studies and
analyzing a combination of research findings together in the main study.
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Required document -A document published for receiving offers of service or of
a product, designed to reduce options and to give detailed directions to the
service provider or supplier. The document describes the desired
specifications, areas of responsibilities, period of service, selection criteria and
all information that might be relevant.
3.5 Program documents
Type of structural documents or simply forms: they are usually in a uniform
format that enables cutting, combination or consolidation of several documents
together for the purposes of analysis, comparison, or continuous planning.
Current plans (work programs).
Basic theoretical development or empowerment programs (e.g., annual
programs for human resources planning).
SUMMARIZING CHART
Labor relations
and wagesHuman resources
developmentCore personnel
Adapting the
organization to
its tasks
Basic concept
Training and
guidanceManagementHR Manager
Information /
knowledge
management
Basic doctrine (Core
knowledge)
DistrictSupport unitOffice
Perception of
operation according
to organizational
system
ControlHuman ResourcesStrategic planningManagementProfessional
Systems
Techniques,
procedures and
instructions
3.6 Classification of pre-creation documents
Master documents and policies will be ranked according to their importance
(prioritizing issues as defined by the Civil Service Commissioner), compared to
the level of complexity (scope, amount of resources in the creative process),
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according to a model chart indicating the power of the two components
aligned in importance and complexity.
The documents will be labeled stating both the importance and complexity
according to the model chart, where the AA label will reflect a degree of great
importance along with great complexity, respectively, (see figure below).
3.7 Fixed time frame for the creation process of a policy document
The time frame given to the creative and development process of master documents and policy
will be affected by document classification as well as budgeting, resources and communication
levels (taking into account circumstances requiring great flexibility). It has been determined
that:
With great importance (high priority) and a large degree of complexity (AA) -
the time frame for writing the document is 6-8months.
With medium importance (medium priority) and medium complexity(AB, BA),
the time frame for writing the document is4-6months.
Medium importanceand complexity (BA,AB)
4-6 months
Great importance andcomplexity (AA)
6-8months
Low importance and
complexity (BB)2-4 months
Medium impotance andcomplexity (BA, AB)
4-6 months
Policy papercomplexity
A
B
Importance /
prioritization issues
B Com lexit A
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With low importance (low prioritization) and low complexity(BB), the time
frame for writing the document is 2-4months.
3.8 Stages of policy formation and key anchors in projectile view (Gantt chart)
Stage 0-Or anization
Stage AContentA roval
Stage B-Document
formulation
Stage C
Document
approval
Stage 2-Toolsdevelopment/
update
Preparations
Subject approval and expectations adjustment facing Doctrine & Management Department
Team consolidation
Ex ectations ad ustment and settin team time schedule
Work lan re aration
Initiating
Mapping current situation, needs exam., research and info. collection re other
laces
Draft formulation of olic document ro osal
Discussion of writersforum prior to Commissioners approval
Amendment of proposed draft following feedback of
preparation forum
Commissioners approval of policy document content
Discussion &
WritingWork groups meetings to discuss and
formulate policy papers
Follow-updiscussions tocontrol progressPresentation of draft policy document to
the re aration forum
Commissioner approval of program
Discussion in preparation forum for submitt ing policy document for Commissioners
a roval
Amendment of draft policy paper following feedback from thepreparation forum
Presentation of paper for Commissioner sapproval
Amendment of policy paper as a result of Commissioners feedback
and paper approval
Development of tools for policy implementation
Weeks
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3.9 Details offered for all stages of the process according to the timeline (the time frame will vary according to the labeling
specified in the document (AA-CC)
Maximum
execution time
Milestone
-
Responsibility of
Chief Content
Officer
Participating partiesResponsible for
implementation
Preparations
necessary to
the process
Purpose of the
Process
and deliverables
required
ProcessTimeline
Two weeks
from the start
of the project
Publishing
summary results
emphasizing work
plan.
Doctrine Department
Chief Content Officer
Team members
Head of Doctrine
Dept.
Chief Content
Officer
Pre-
coordination
of
expectations
Chief Content
Officer
- Doctrine
Department
Approval of subject
Coordination of
expectations
Group
formation
Setting schedules
Starting
discussion
External
1-2
months
One month from
the start of the
project
Writing of work
plan with schedules
and areas of
responsibility .
Doctrine Department
Chief Content Officer
Team members
Head of Doctrine
Dept.
Chief Content
Officer
Preliminary
content
Chief Content
Officer
Coordination internal
teams expectations
Setting time
schedules
Preparation of workplan
Starting
discussion
internal
Six weeks from
the start of the
project
Preparation of
daft of initiated
document
Chief Content Officer
Staff Head Reform
implementation
Head of Strategy
Dept.
Representative of
the Legal Office
Consolidated
action team
Dept. Heads
Other factors as
determined by the
Commissioner
Control
representative
Head of Doctrine
Dept.
Chief Content
Officer
Preparation of
draft proposal
of policy paper
including
alternatives
for action
Feedback
Proposing
alternatives
Directions for action
Formulation
preferred alternative
Preparatory
discussion
forum for
Commissioner s
work approval
of work content
and research
question
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Two months
from the start of
the project
Distribution of
initiated
document
Chief Content Officer
Staff Head Reform
implementation
Head of Strategy
Dept.
Representative of
the Legal Office
Consolidated action
team
Appointed parties
Dept. Heads
Other factors as
determined by the
Commissioner
Control
representative
Head of Doctrine
Dept.
Chief Content
Officer
formulating a
revised draft in
view of the
preparation
forum of the
policy paper
including
alternatives
for action
Presentation policy
document results and
proposed mode of
operation
Discussion re
Commissioners
approval of
content,
research
question and
schedule for
implementation .
Four
months
from the start of
the project
Writing chapters of
the policy paper
Doctrine Department
Chief Content Officer
Team members
Chief Content
Officer
Formation of
organized
offer for
discussion
before any
discussion
Developing the topic
and formulating a
policy paper in light of
the approval of the
content by the
Commissioner
Meetings of
working groups
to develop
subject and
write the policy.
3-4
months
Four
months
from the start of
the project
Publishing
discussion
proceedings with
status of
implementation
Doctrine Department
Chief Content Officer
Team members
Doctrine
Department
Chief Content
Officer
Team members
Publication of
summary
discussion
including
design versus
performance
and
emphasized
items for the
future.
Monitoring deadlines
and performance of
various areas of
responsibility
Follow-up
discussions
Four
months
from the start of
the project
Preparation
Draft of policy
paper
.
Head of the Reform implementation staff
Head of Strategy Dept.
Action team
Representative of the Legal Office
Control representative
Other factors as determined by the
Commissioner
Head of Doctrine
Dept.
Chief Content
Officer
Preparation of
the first draft
of the policy
paper
containing
alternatives
for action
Feedback
Proposing alternatives
and possible courses
of action
Preferred a lternative
formulation
Forum prepares
for the
Commissioner
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Six
months
from the start of
the project
Distribution of
internal draft of
policy paper
Head of the Reform implementation staff
Head of Strategy Dept.
Action team
Representative of the Legal Office
Control representative
Other factors as determined by the
Commissioner
Head of Doctrine
Dept.
Chief Content
Officer
Preparation of
a final policy
paper
Presentation of results
of the policy paper and
its approval by the
Commissioner
Discussion re
Presentation to
Commissioner
and approval of
the paper.
5-6months
Three
months from the
end of the
previous stage
Distribution
of new tools
Head of the Reform implementation staff
Head of Strategy Dept.
Action team
Representative of the Legal Office
Control representative
Other factors as determined by the
Commissioner
Head of Doctrine
Dept.
Chief Content
Officer
preparation of
procedures
document and
of any other
relevant
product.
Creation tools,
procedures, formats,
guide files and updating
procedures and
required policies
Developing /
updating tools
and procedures.
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3.10 Details of the types of documents required according to work stages
Document of project work plan - The project work plan serves as
an ignition document of the policy paper writing process.
The initiating" document- A skeleton document of the policy
Including most of the complete document components in addition to
project work arrangements.
Internal draftdocumentFinal product of the writing offered to a group of
factors composed of relevant functionaries in the Civil Service, other officials
in government, as well as experts and external interested parties in relevant
areas. Completion of this stage in process is the approval of the paper and its
dissemination as an official draft.
Official Policy Paper - First EditionA document amending all comments
received in the internal draft document. The implementation of this
document in its renewed distribution is binding, and supersedes all previous
and current versions of this document. The document will be distributed to
the relevant circle of users. The document will be distributed as a binding
document for a determined period (usually one year) after which the policy
will be examined by the Commission control unit. The control unit will present
gaps, if any, and the policy will be updated by the official body of the
Commission under the supervision of the Doctrine and Knowledge
Management Department of the Civil Service Commission, and subsequently,
a revised edition will be distributed.
Official Policy Paper permanent Second Edition - This is a document
with final validity including implementation comments received in the First
Edition of the document. This document in its renewed distribution has full
validation for implementation and will actually eliminate all previous versions
of the document. The document will be reviewed and examined periodically
in accordance with the multiyear programs of the Civil Service Commission
and shall constitute an integral part of the cycle of design and
implementation.
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Project
Work Plan
Initiating
document
Internal
Draft
Official
Policy
Paper -
First
Edition
Second
Permanent
Edition
3.10.1 Project work plan
The project work plan is a starting document of the process of writing the policy paper.
In this document, the team leader sets the schedule for the projectsimplementation and the
participating team members. In addition, the team leader will determine the parties in the civil
service, and individuals from outside the civil service, who will take part in policy formulation as
experts and respondents to the project. Below is the structure of the document:
Structure of the project work plan:
Background on the team formation and need for formulation of the policy
paper.
Project goal setting and work content.
Staff members and officials.
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Other factors taking part in writing the document and the thought
processes.
Key milestones in the process and setting timetables for
Implementation.
Potential interfaces with other writing teams of the Tree of Knowledge
program.
Drafting a letter of appointment to be submitted to the Commissioner (see
Appendix A: Appendix for drafting a model letter of appointment).
.
3.10.2 Initiating document
The initiation document is an important part of the process of writing a policy. It includes the
formulation of the central idea underlying the policy documentand preparing a general outline for
dealing with the issue. In this context, the writing team members perform individual categorization of
each of the relevant existing materials (such as policy papers written in the past, the Civil Service
Code, guidelines) and other materials that can assist in formulating a position (e.g., numerical data on
the issue and trends, academic documents, policy analyzes performed by research institutes and / or
foreign governments, etc.). Initiating the writing of a policy paper will be carried out to face an
existing challenge in the basic current doctrine foundation and can be expressed in several ways:
Writing a new policy paper;
Updating an existing policy paper - amendment or addition;
Adapting existing policies to new circumstances, etc.
An initiation document will be written for each policy paper, in which shall be specified the
requirements and expectations of the policy paper as well as of the writing staff. The initiation
document coordinates expectations between the parties connected to the formulation and the
writing of the policy paper. The initiation document will be submitted for approval to theCommissioner after a preparation forum is held with the participation of the relevant parties (see
table in section3.9).Following are details of the document structure:
3.10.2.1 Initiation document structure
Managerssummary including a general and concise explanation.
Details about the core issue.
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Defining the objective of the document.
Defining measures to treat the issue.
The target audience the policy addresses.
A brief survey of the issue and its trends (including the quantitative analysis of the
issuesdimension).
Presenting possible alternatives referring to chances and opportunities in
implementing each alternative.
Recommendation on the overall preferred alternative (including the rationale and
the principle of using the ROI index).
Milestones in the implementation of applied alternative.
Recommended procedure for application and implementation including tools.
The staff members cooperating on writing the policy.
Relating factors.
Interfaces and communication.
Timetable for writing continuation.
List of sources.
Appendices.
3.10.2.2 Additional sections and emphasis on writing the structure of the initiating document
Contents :Table of Contents including chapters and sub-chapters in a way that
gives a good idea of the contents of the document, and even constitutes its
skeleton.
List of main points: List of changesand important innovations to be included in
the doctrinal paper.
Milestones for implementation : Details of stages in preparing the document
according to time schedule. With eachmilestone, the process and the writing of
the document and its contents will be reviewed by the responsible entity in the
Doctrine Department. It should be emphasized that during the writing of the policy
paper, with the assistance ofan external factor, by means of contractual relations
(a consultant), the staff leader should prepare itself together with the DoctrineDepartment team to work in accordance with the time schedule determined.
Source List :This list will include the mandatory sources relevant to the issue, as
well as the sources, as appropriate and necessary, as well as in accordance with
the decision of the doctrinal body or the writer.
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Relating factors: itis recommended, during the writing process, to combine
interested parties and / or experts who can shed light on this issue and the
manner in which to cope with such. The writer of the PID (Project initiating
Documentation) will detail which relating factors are planned to be included in
the initiating document. The factor authorizing the document should ensure that
there is no lack of relevant factors in the formulating and writing process of the
policy paper.
Writers: Thewritersprofessional background, areas of expertise and any other
relevant personal or professional detail important to the writing process should
be detailed.
Forerunner Chapter: It is the function of the forerunnerchapterto check the
actual ability of the staff writers to write the policy papers. This, some cases, is
another milestone required under the Commissioner's decision.
Implementation and application: The process of application of the policy within
government bodies including control indices of the process should be detailed. In
addition, the staff work required to implement the policy should also be detailed. .
Interfaces and communication:Writing of the policy papers must take place within
the framework of organized staff work in which are involved all Civil Service
Commission authorities (such as the Legal Office, Control, etc.). All possible
interfaces should appear in the table. Documents will be produced in digital format
for the purpose of updating, and at first stag, will be submitted to the Civil Service
Commission website and later to an Internet Website dedicated to knowledge
management doctrines.
3.10.3 Internal draft
The Internal draft is the initial version of the policy paper, and is served to interested parties and
relevant experts in the civil service and externally. The official draft contains the same items to be
included below in the official policy paper, but it is not a binding document.
Below is the internal draft document structure:
3.10.3.1 Internal draft document structure:
General:
Executive summary.
Objective of the document.
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Definitions and basic concepts.
Requirements:
Theoretical background of the issue, its trends today in the country and abroad.
Main aspects of the prevailing situation and todayspolicy.
The gap between the current and ideal situation, experience and lessons learned,
and the need to adjust and respond to existing and anticipated challenges.
The proposed response:
Defining indices used to analyze various alternatives.
Summary description of proposed alternatives.
Presentation of preferred alternatives.
Presentation of the meaning of alternatives.
Application and implementation processincluding recommendedtools.
Operational guidelines and milestones.
Control indices.
Flowchart detailing the policy (see example of the flowchartin Appendix B: Example
of Flowchart).
Relevant guidelines and tools developed.
List of team members partners in the writing of the policy paper and their function.
List of sources.
Appendices.
3.10.4 Official policy paper - First Edition
The official policy paper is distributed as a binding document after changes have been madein light
of comments received from various factors,partners in the draft document.
This document is binding for operation for a pre-defined period; thereafter, a Second Permanent
Editionis to be distributed.
This document includes a section on guidelines and procedures for implementation, including
amendment of the Civil Service Regulations. The structure of the policy paper in its First Edition is:
3.104.1 Document structure of the First Official Edition:
General:
Executive summary.
Objective of the document.
Definitions and basic concepts.
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Requirements:
Theoretical background of the issue, its trends today in the country and abroad.
Main aspects of the prevailing situation in the Civil Service and todayspolicy.
The gap between the current and ideal situation, experience and lessons learned,
and the need to adjust and respond to existing and anticipated challenges.
The proposed response:
Defining indices used to analyze various alternatives.
Summary description of proposed alternatives.
Presentation of preferred alternatives.
Presentation of the meaning of alternatives.
Application and implementationprocess,including the tools developed.
Operational guidelines and milestones.
Flowchart detailing the policy (see example of the flowchartin Appendix B).
Relevant guidelines and tools developed.
List of sources.
List of team members partners in the writing of the policy paper and their function
(table configuration).
List of responders in the writing of the policy paper and their function (table
configuration).
Determining the body responsible for updating the document guided by the
Doctrine Department of the Civil Service Commission.
Establishing the measures of control and the manner in which policy evaluation
will be carried out.
Periods - Document approval period, closing date of examination period prior
to second edition permanent status (configuration table).
List of sources.
Appendices:
Appendix ADocumentation of the references submitted for the internal
draft.
Appendix B - Table of amendments documenting the amendments made
from the internal draft.
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Appendix C - Documentation of the relevant section in the Civil Service
Regulations.
Appendix DOperational tool and relevant forms.
3.10.5 Official policy paper - Permanent Second Edition
The Second Edition is the policy paper after having received final validation by the core team and the
leadership of theCommission, and after inserting all the amendments and improvements received
from the actual policy implementers in light of the policy operation in the area.The document is
binding indefinitely and constitutes an integral part of the design and operation cycle.
3.10.5.1 Structure of Permanent Second Edition:
General:
Executive summary.
Objective of the document.
Definitions and basic concepts.
Requirements:
Theoretical background of the issue, its trends today in the country and abroad.
Main aspects of the prevailing situation and todayspolicy.
The gap between the current and ideal situation, experience and lessons learned,
and the need to adjust and respond to existing and anticipated challenges.
The proposed response:
Defining indices used to analyze various alternatives.
Summary description of proposed alternatives.
Presentation of preferred alternatives.
Presentation of the meaning of alternatives. Application and implementationprocess,including the tools developed.
Operational guidelines and milestones.
Flowchart detailing the policy (see example of the flowchartin Appendix B).
Relevant guidelines and tools developed.
List of sources.
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List of team members partners in the writing of the policy paper and their function
(table configuration).
List of responders in the writing of the policy paper and their function (table
configuration).
Determining the body responsible for updating the document guided by the
Doctrine Department of the Civil Service Commission.
Establishing measures of control and the manner in which policy evaluation
will be carried out.
Periods - Document approval date.
List of sources.
Appendices:
Appendix A - Operating tools including relevant forms.
Appendix B - Documentation of references submitted to the internal draft.
Appendix C - Table of amendments documenting the amendments madefrom the
internal draft.
Appendix DDocumentation of references submitted to the policypapersFirst
Edition.
Appendix E - Table of amendments documenting the amendments madein the
First Edition.
Appendix F - Documentation of the relevant chapter in the Civil Service
Regulations, and any accompanying instructions.
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4. SourcesBelow are links to useful information on the subject of the chapter:
Young, E. & Quinn, L. (2002), Writing
Effective Public Policy Papers: A Guide for
Policy Advisers in Central and Eastern
Europe.
Professor Levy, Yagil (2011)
Writing a Policy Paper (The Open University),
(in Hebrew).
Several examples of policy papers are
presented in the book, and extensive details
on all parts of the paper.
European Union (2008), "Writing Policy
Papers and Policy Briefs",
http://www.foodsec.org/.../docs/1
policy_paper_guide.pdf
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APPENDICES
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Appendix A: Model Draft of Letter of Appointment
Date___________________
Ex4102 to 2066
To: [Team member details
Re: Your appointment to the team for writing policy papers on the subject
[details of the subject]
According to a report on implementation of civil service reform, and the government decision No.
481, dated3.6.2013, I hereby appoint you to the working staff for formulating a policy paper on the
subject [detailsof the subject.
In its work, the team will give its opinion, among others, on the following subjects:
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0.__________________________________________________________________________
4.___________________________________________________________________________
3.____________________________________________________________________________
Mrs. / Mr. [Chairmansname] shall serve as team leader.
The team should submit to the undersigned a draft with recommendations by [date].
I wish the team success in this important task.
Best regards,
Moshe Dayan
Civil Service Commissioner
APPENDIX B: FLOW CHART EXAMPLE
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Receiving potentialdeparture
Offer to
continue
work
Is theworker
aboveaverage
Is the
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short supply
the workeris
interested
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