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    WRITING POLICY PAPERS

    WRITERSGUIDE

    Tree of Knowledge

    She is a tree of life to them that lay hold upon her:

    and happy is every one that clings to her.

    Her ways are ways of pleasantness and all her paths

    are peace

    All rights reserved to the Civil Service Commission

    *The guide is written in the masculine, but is intended for men and

    women alike

    Department ofDoctrine &

    Knowledge

    Management

    Reform Implementation

    Staff

    Civil Service

    Commission

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    The Civil Service Commissioner

    Introductory Remarks

    Lastin deed, but first in thought" (from the liturgical poem: "Lecha Dodi"). The greater the act,

    the greater the importance of initial reflection. We are dealing with human resources

    management in the Civil Service. It is work of great importance and its outcome is significant to

    the quality of both state and society. This requires the activity to be based on a well-organized

    doctrine. Thereforeand this is elementary and needs no further explanation- we must operate

    according to the Civil Service Human Resources Management Doctrine. This has further

    importance because the Civil Service Commission is positioning itself, within the current reform

    plan, as the administrative body responsible for managing human resources in the Civil Service,

    while strengthening the process of delegating responsibilities to offices and auxiliary units. We

    will find that formulating doctrine relating to key issues will be the central task of the

    Commission in the coming years. As a result, a human resources management doctrine

    department was established and we have begun the work.

    I applaud the initiative that leads to thewriting of this document. It constitutes a guideline for

    writing policy papers and is of the utmost value in formulating a doctrine built on a strong,

    systematic and unified foundation. This is a good opportunity to commend the prodigious work

    of the writer of this guide, the director of the human resources management doctrine

    department of the Civil Service Commission, Dr. Iris Nehemiah, who has worked tirelessly in the

    implementation of the reform in general and in the promotion of the doctrine in particular.

    S i n c e r e l y ,

    Moshe Dayan

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    Chief of Staff of Reform Implementation

    Introductory Remarks

    The Civil Service Human Resources Reform stems from a cultural shift from reactive to strategic

    management. In general, the strategy is designed to integrate purpose, policy and overall goals

    with the organizations practical activities by defining operational objectives and

    implementation methods to achieve this end. In this regard, Civil Service human resources

    management today severely lacks a theoretical and doctrinal dimension.

    Doctrine (in Latin "doctrina", which means teaching, learning), is a comprehensive term for

    policy, meaning the complex of rules, approaches and basic principles in an area of knowledge

    or for the operation of an organization. The doctrine shapes and determines the fundamental

    principles underlying the strategies and plans of operation.

    The Treeof KnowledgeProgram , designed to createabout40policy papers, is a significant

    milestone in establishing the ideological infrastructure for human resources management

    change within the civil service reform.

    The design of the policy paper, which includes operating principles, concepts and rules on

    various subjects, will need to reflect three fundamental components:

    Policy

    Procedural Infrastructure Procedures derived from policy-making processes as an

    exampletheir integration in the circle of government

    planning , procedures involved in the officesworking

    conditions, interconnections between entities, etc.

    Human infrastructure Determination of functions, of functionaries, training and

    knowledge areas, requiring attention in light of the

    determination of the new policy.

    Technological infrastructure Defining requirements in the areas of content and

    information, programs and applications, terminal equipment,

    resulting from the new policy.

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    I have no doubt that the completion of the policy papers as a whole will not only serve as a

    conceptual infrastructure, but as the basis for many activities in reform implementation, and will

    generate activities for general organizational changes at all levels of management infrastructure:

    procedural, human and technological, as one.

    I wish to express my appreciation of Dr. Iris Nehemiah for leading the Tree of Knowledge

    Program, which has been integrated into our operational plan for this special year of reform

    implementation.

    Wishing you much success,

    -Signed-

    Ron Tsur

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    Head of the Department of Doctrine and KnowledgeManagement

    Introductory Remarks

    Dear policy paper writer,

    I am happy to present to you a brief guide to writing policy papers, summarizing the main

    principles in writing policy papers by the policy paper writing staff for the Tree of Knowledge

    Program, under the guidance of the Department of Doctrine and Knowledge Management ofthe Civil Service Commission. This program is designed to develop and shape doctrine

    management and policy that establish basic concepts of human resources management in order

    to make the best possible use of the civil serviceshuman resources potential. Writing policy

    papers is a challenging process that requires a bird's eye view and a systemic perspective to

    examine the current situation and ask several basic questions:

    WHY WHAT HOW

    These questions should be answered in a broader context, where it is required to study in

    depth the global employment environment, and within, the new trends and the

    organizational milieu in which we operate, and within it, the opportunities and the risks it

    poses in the implementation of thepolicy.In addition, it is required to map key players in the

    area and consider what are the implicit and explicit interests of every office holder and the

    added value that each of the players may grant to promote the implementation of the policy.

    Why is necessary to updateor develop policy. Why now?

    What are the challenges and

    issues answered by the

    policy. Will engagement in

    this issue contribute to

    improvement of human

    resources?

    What should be done tofulfill the objective?

    What are the possible

    alternatives for optimal

    response to challenges and

    issues that arise.

    How can we realize theselected policy to

    maximize improvement of

    human resources.

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    The vision of improving human resources and fostering excellence among public servants,

    requires us to examine a wealth of issues and operational challenges that arise, first of all

    through human lensesoriented to the needs of the individual, the public servant, and as

    much as possible in a utopian world without constraints. Only at a later stage of the writing,

    will it be correct to discuss the constraints that exist in the civil service. However, we are not

    allowed to consider them in order to "think outside the box" and adopt correct and necessary

    practices when formulating policies, to ensure realization of thevision.

    Remember that you have been given a golden opportunity to influence policy design, to

    improve processes and develop practical tools for the sake of a civil service of higher quality.

    The Doctrine Department is at your service to assist and provide you with the tools necessary

    for fulfilling this important task.

    I wish you a fruitful endeavor, a pleasurable undertaking, together with feelings of satisfaction,

    fulfillment and success.

    Sincerely,

    -Signed-

    Dr. Iris Nehemiah

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    TABLE OF CONTENTS

    1.

    INTRODUCTION

    2. METHODOLOGY OF POLICY PAPER WRITING

    2.1 The process of writing a policy paper at the

    macro-level

    2.2 Defining the requirement, problem and the

    objective formulation

    2.3 Identifying the core issue

    2.4 Preparation of a draft policy paper

    2.4.1 Formulation and definition of criteria and

    measures of success

    2.4.2 Normative criteria2.4.3 Performance criteria - Mapping potential

    risks

    2.4.4 Deciding between conflicting valuesand

    decision- support tools

    2.4.5 Creating alternatives and their presentation

    2.4.6 Analysis of alternatives

    2.4.7 Formulation ofpreferred alternative

    2.5 Policy implementation and control

    2.5.1 Definition of central and secondary objectives

    2.5.2 Establishing control indices for

    implementation policies

    2.5.3 Policy assessment using measurement tools

    3. Organization of papers relating to human

    resources management in the civil service

    and operational stages of their

    formulation

    3.6 Classification of pre-creation papers

    3.7 Fixed time frame for the creation process of a

    policy paper

    3.8 Stages of policy formation and key anchors in

    projectile view (Gantt chart)

    3.9 Explanation offered for all stages of the

    process according to the timeline

    3.10 Details of the types of documents required

    according to work stages

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    3.10.1 Projectile work plan

    Initiating document

    Internal draft3.10.4 Official policy paper - First edition

    3.10.5 Official policy paper - Permanent second

    edition

    Sources

    Appendices

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    1.INTRODUCTION

    This guide is designed for you to formulate a policy within the framework of the Tree of

    Knowledgeprogram. The guide is divided into two main sections:theFirst Chapterdeals with

    the process of writing the policy paper by the project team and includes the process of editing

    the required subject, including examination of requirements, problem formulation, analysis of

    alternatives, and more. Chapter Twodeals with the overall concept of policy papers and the

    process of writing policy papers in practice, including a time schedule and Gantt chart and

    activities proposed for policy writing within the framework of the Tree of KnowledgeProgram.

    It also includes the parts required to be ultimately included in the paper in the permanent

    edition that will be distributed to offices.

    The policy formulation of the doctrine of management is the process of building a large codex of

    basic, doctrinal, policy and operational documents, used as an inexhaustible magnet of

    information and knowledge in the field of management, ensuring the existence of professional

    dialogue crossing levels and ranks, and allowing the existence of effective and beneficial

    reciprocal interaction among various agencies in the civil service.

    It is designed to help civil service managers and professionals at all levels to establish an

    appropriate management culture, formulate enriching processes, and enhance human

    resources, all the while maintaining continuous organizational and mental flexibility in

    management processes.

    On the one hand, at the base of its operational concept, lies a codex - a common language -

    with uniformity of components and terms relevant to the issue, and , on the other hand, a clear

    and organized system of formulation, of organization and maintenance of documents.

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    Initiation

    Initiation of doctrinarian subjects in the Civil Service.

    Mapping of ongoing requirements with the organizational units.

    Investigation

    Collecting information and investigating data required for determining policy.

    Developing partnerships with knowledgeable (academia, government) and

    experienced (business sector) entities valuable for creating a broad and relevant

    informational envelope.

    Development

    Development of policy papers based on a box of methods and tools.

    Systematic integration (combination) of various policy papers.

    Projectile approach identifying the development phase as a triangle of three

    constraints:Content, time, quality.

    Control Quality control ensuring products of great organizational value.

    Operational control ensuring a proper and efficient process .

    Communication of activities according to the analysis of interested parties.

    The Department of Doctrine and Knowledge Management serves as a professional and

    superior authority on the subject of the application of the model of policy papers and

    doctrine, of implementation of systems and tools, and management of documentscodex.

    This by:

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    Work program to

    write, distribute,for reproduction

    and maintenance.

    Writing guides

    and programs.

    Professional assistance,

    guidance and training,

    including consultation,

    informatics, organization

    and methods,conductingsurveys, editing and

    graphics.

    Seminars and

    qualification training

    focused on the subject of

    writing policy papers .

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    2. METHODOLOGY OF POLICY PAPER WRITING

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    2.1 The process of writing a policy paper at macro-level

    The policy paper presents a practical problem and outlines a solution chosen in a reasoned and

    informed manner from a variety of alternatives examined. The paper serves as a tool for

    decisionmaking, together with a call to action, and an effort to convince the reader. At the

    micro-level,the main process of writing a policy paper focuses on the following stages described

    in the diagram:

    Definition

    of the

    Requirement

    Definition

    of the issue

    Formulation

    of

    alternativesCooperation

    Policy

    evaluation

    Policy

    implementation

    and control

    Policy

    design

    Selection

    of the

    preferred

    alternative

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    2.2 Defining the requirement, the problem and objective formulation

    The first step in writing a policy paper is to define the requirement for the policy paper,

    and the reason for which setting policy is required. What is the undesired condition or

    situation that created this requirement, (e.g., inefficiency, inequality, etc.), requiring

    responses and rectifications by relevant parties.

    Formulation of the problem and justification regarding the need for intervention is a critical and

    important stage in writing a policy paper, given that, according to its definition, the policy comes

    to present a deep and accurate solution to a problem and its nature.

    Determining the objective of the policy paper stems directly from the way the problem is

    defined. The objective may be moral or instrumental, and it is important that it should be based

    on preliminary guidelines and premises. Formulation of the objective must be lucid and written

    in a clear and realistic language.

    2.3 Identifying the core issue

    Identifying the underlying core issue and handling it through policy instruments can lead to

    achieving the desired result. Therefore, care must be taken to distinguish between the core

    issue and secondary issues, which are usually symptoms of the core issue.

    The policy paper should deal with the core issue rather than its symptoms. Therefore, we must

    closely examine the reasons for the symptoms, the root problem, and not focus on the

    symptoms themselves. For this, we must constantly ask what causes the symptoms we see.

    2.3.1 Tool to investigate problems

    We recommend a possible investigative tool to locate the root cause of the problem. In

    professional literature this tool is known asWhy Five, meaning posing five questions. The

    premise of the method is that the person stops to investigate the problem the moment he

    finds an accessible and discernable reason for the problem. At this point, he stops the

    investigation and does not try to determine if the cause he identified is really the source or

    whether there exists something else that caused it. The proposed method forces one to ask

    whyagain and again, in order to eventually get to the root cause of the problem.

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    2.3.1.1 Description of the method in a practical way

    As stated, we should examine and investigate why this happened, and only after the cause of

    the problem is understood, to ask again why this happened, and so on: An investigation of the

    reason for A to happen will lead to the conclusion that it occurred because of B. Instead of

    trying to deal with B, it is necessary to continue and try to understand why this happened: a

    short investigation will lead to the conclusion thatBwas caused by C. Further investigation will

    lead to the conclusion that C was caused by D, and thus until the root of the problem is

    reached. The FiveLevels recommendationis not a necessary condition. One can continue till the

    root cause is understood.

    2.3.2 Mapping the issue

    In order to deal with the core issue, one must first assess its scope and examine the extent of its

    impact on the organization, the employees or the public. This is necessary in order to better

    understand the issue and also to formulate a course of action to deal with it.

    In order to treat the core issue, one has to observe the processes that led to its formation.

    Then, we must examine how to deal with the issue through the use of policy instruments. In

    general, the following characteristics of the problem should be considered:

    The severity level of the problem- How serious is the problem? The subject affected by the problem- Who exactly is affected and injured as a result of

    the existence of the problem?

    The nature of the problem- Whether the nature is instrumental or symbolic?

    Urgency of the problemHow urgent is it to treat the problem. Does the treatment

    depend on a particular time?

    Duration of the existence of the problem- Is it a new problem that recently emerged or

    is it an old and ongoing problem?

    Identifying the authors of the problemWho are the authors of the problem and the

    various factors that created it?

    2.4 Preparation of a draft policy paper

    At the draft stage of the preparation of the policy paper, the subject will be decipheredthe

    'why' question - why a change or update of the policy is necessary; what are the problems to be

    solved as a result. The draft paper will include an analysis of the various alternatives, risks and

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    chances involved in the selection of each of the various alternatives, and the preferred

    alternative recommendation formulation.

    2.4.1 Formulation and definition of criteria and measures of success

    The criteria are variables we use to help examine the success of the policy, and, in fact, they are

    the basic requirements of the policy to be set. The criteria have to be formulated before

    formulating alternatives in order to avoid biases or intent during their formulation.

    There are two types of criterion:

    Normative criteria

    Performance criteria

    While the normative criteria are the basic requirements and the essence of the policy, the

    operative criteria test the ability of its application. Normative criteria are mandatory in every

    policy paper.

    2.4.2 Normative criteria

    EffectivenessCarrying out the right operations enabling the best possible achievement

    of the objective of the policy. It is important that the effectiveness index presents a

    quantitative measure by which it will be possible to examine how the policy contributes

    to the improvement of human resources and how it contributes to solving the problem

    in question. This criterion is designed to examine if and whether the policy is effective at

    the operational level.

    FairnessTo what extent does the policy ensure equal distribution of resources. The

    fairness criterion is designed to control the policy in accordance with the principle of

    equality and the policys actual impact on it.

    EfficiencyPerforming actions in a proper manner. In what measure does the policy

    ensure that its effect will be maximal in relation to what has been invested in it. The

    effectiveness criterion should reflect the cost of the objective and whether it is cost-

    effective. This criterion is similar to the effectiveness criterion but focuses on the

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    relationship between the investment required for implementation of the policy versus

    the anticipated benefit.

    Competitiveness - How much does the policy promote the value of competition, an

    important value in improving human resources in the civil service, and the advancement

    of vital processes in civil service. Through this policy, all the countrys citizens are

    allowed to freely compete for civil service positions and progress in rank in accordance

    to performance.

    Equal and fair representation To what extent does the proposed policy allow various

    groups in Israeli society equal and fair representation. Further to the fairness criterion,

    fair representation of different groups and strata of Israeli society is here important,

    according to the principles of the Civil Service Commission.

    Security To what extent does the proposed policy fulfill the basic needs of the

    individual civil service employee,starting from existential security to material security.

    It is important to remember that security is expressed in many ways and on many

    levels, not just at the physical level.

    ServiceabilityTo what extent will the proposed policy improve the service provided

    to internal organizational customers and the countrys citizens. The level of the

    serviceability of civil servants is a very valuable criterion since the objective of working

    in the civil service is to provide service to the countryscitizens.

    The public service image To what extent will the proposed policy improve the public

    service image and help improve the public service team spirit.

    2.4.3 Performance criteria - Mapping potential risks

    Legality - the illegality of the proposed solution. An illegal alternative will in advancenot be accepted; and therefore, the challenge exists in situations of uncertainty. In

    these situations, it is important to consider means of dealing with the challenge

    (eliminating an alternative, a change in legislation, requesting the General Attorney s

    opinion.)

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    Political feasibility- Difficulty or inability to politically carry out the proposed policy in

    light of expected objections. In this criterion, an analysis of the balance of power andinterests should be carried out, including motives and hidden relationships between the

    various parties.

    Practical feasibility - Difficulty or inability to perform the proposed solution in

    light of the following parameters: time schedules, technological barriers,

    professional ability, budget, supervision capability, etc.

    Inflexibility - There exists a risk that it will be impossible to backpedalif the

    proposed solution does not work.

    Indirect positive effects- What are the positive byproducts of the policy. How does

    it

    impact the promotion of other fields.

    Indirect negative effects- What are the negative byproducts of the policy. Will this

    policy negatively affect other areas.

    Cost- What is the economic or social cost resulting from the implementation of the

    policy.

    Degree of weighted- risk This can be calculated according to the severity of each risk (as

    decided by the team ), multiplied by the percentage of the possibility it might occur.

    2.4.4. Deciding between conflicting valuesand decision -support tools

    The criteria in many cases represent values that have built-in contradiction or some tension,

    (e.g., fairness versus efficiency). To be able to analyze the various alternatives, based on a

    uniform scale, it is necessary to formulate and establish decision- support tools that can

    examine risks versus chanceswisely, in order to reach an optimal decision.

    Below are the different types of decision-support tools:

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    Weights - Different risks and chances have different degrees of importance; therefore it is

    recommended to appoint weights to different criteria. Weights can be determined

    quantitatively (appoint to each risk and chance a degree of importance based on100%);and to

    do so in a qualitative manner (high importance, medium importance, low importance).

    Ranking - One can rank all risks and chances according to their importance, with the most

    important risk and chance ranked first, followed by other risks and chances ranked in order of

    importance.

    Extreme conditions- Sometimes certain risks are so great that alternatives can be rules out in

    light of this risk. One can set an index whereby a certain weighted rank of risk (risk severity

    multiplied by the likeliness it will occur) may eliminate a potential solution.

    2.4.5 Creating alternatives and their presentation

    Writing a policy paper is not a technical operation but a process whose sole purpose is to offer a

    solution to an existing problem; and therefore, the stage of creating alternatives is essential

    to the process. At first stage, it is important to place all possible alternatives on the table.

    One must ensure that the alternatives present new approaches in dealing with the issue

    and / or new ideas not presented earlier. Of course, among all alternatives should also be

    included the alternative of continuing the current policy, even if it perpetuates the existing

    problem, given that it may be preferable to other alternatives that may provoke more serious

    effects and problems. The process of identifying possible alternatives is a process of joint

    thinking. It is important for the process to be carried out in such a way that encourages

    thought and creativity, to avoid the need to focus on searching for the' best 'alternative;

    however, as many alternatives as possible should be explored.

    One should ensure separation between the stage of presenting alternatives and the stage of

    analysis of an alternative ,and avoid expressing clear preference for one of the alternatives

    prior to its full analysis.

    To create high-quality and high-feasibility alternatives one should use relevant analogies,

    comparisons to existing models (in different sectors or offices, or abroad), and generic

    solutions. When presenting alternatives in a policy paper, it is important to present them as a

    process of brainstorming and developing new ways of thinking. Presentation of alternatives

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    must be done in a proper manner, presenting the essentials of each alternative, and taking into

    account underlying premises or preliminary guidelines, if such exist. With multiple alternatives,

    one should present the main alternatives and only later present secondary alternatives.

    2.4.6 Analysis of alternatives

    This stage is carried out in light of the criteria we determined. Analysis of risks and chances as a

    toolfor analyzing the results of the alternativeand not the analysis of the alternative itself. The

    challenge is to translate the risks and chances into results; i.e., to turn them into a value that can

    be weighted and examined quantitatively. If one looks at the risk of political feasibility, for

    example, one is required to quantitatively weigh the amount of impact of all relevant political

    forces on theimplementation or non-implementationof the program.

    2.4.6.1 Examination of the impact

    The implementation of a policy alternative may have different implications. Therefore, at the

    analysis stage, one should examine the extent each alternative solves the problem in question,

    its practical and its ethical implications, as well as examine whether the alternative will awaken

    new problems. In addition, one should segment the target population (workers / management

    levels etc.), into groups that may benefit from the alternative compared to groups that may be

    harmed by it, and pay attention to whether there are populations that are not directly related to

    the problem, and that may be affected as a result of the implementation of the alternative.

    For each alternative, one should build scenarios based on comparative experience, analogies,

    theoretical models and models that exist in the field, and try to refine the implications of the

    alternative and its future success. For each alternative an estimate of the result should be

    performed , the kind of result to be created from the qualitatively and quantitatively point of

    view, how a certain amount of investment in a particular element will bring a particular type of

    result, and so on. Finally, one should consult professional elements and experts to analyze

    options in the best possible way. It is very important to support alternatives with facts and

    figures and distinguish between facts and interpretations.

    At the stage of analysis, it is important to analyze all alternatives according to the same scale

    and against the same criteria. Analysis that examines advantages against disadvantages for each

    alternative by itself has no importance when the alternatives as a whole have no common

    ground of comparison. Therefore, one should position all alternatives and criteria together in

    an alternative analysis table.

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    2.4.6.2 Alternatives analysis table

    With the completion of the process of analysis, one should place the alternatives in an analysis

    chart where each alternative will be ranked under each criterion both quantitatively and

    qualitatively, of course one should treat the current situation as one of the possible alternatives

    (See sample weighting table).

    Legend:

    Red normative criterion less likely, making high-risk criteria.

    Orange chance normative criterion medium, medium-risk criterion performance.

    Green normative criterion likely, low-risk performance criterion

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    Performance criteria (risks) Normative criteria (chances)1

    5. 4. 3. 2. 1.

    8.1.4. 2.3.

    A

    Alternative

    B

    C

    D

    5.6.7.

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    It is possible to change criteria by referring to the issue itself.

    LEGEND

    NORMATIVE CRITERIA (CHANCES) PERFROMANCE CRITERIA (RISKS)

    1. Effectiveness 1. Legality.

    2. Fairness 2. Political feasibility

    3. Efficiency 3.Practical feasibility

    4. Competitiveness 4.Indirect negative effects

    5. Equal and fair representation 5.Cost

    6. Security

    7. Serviceability

    8. Public Service Image

    ATERNATIVES A/B/C/D ALTERNATIVES A/B/C/D

    Red squares= Low chances; Red squares = High risk

    Yellow squares = medium chance ; Yellow squares= Medium risk

    Green squares= High chance Green squares= Low risk

    [Public Service Image: Green square = low risk;

    Yellow square = Intermediate risk]

    2.4.7 Formulation of preferred alternative

    At this stage, a preferred alternative is selected in light of weighted criteria, as reflected in the

    analysis table, and in light of the examination of alternative risks and chances. In addition, a

    detailed risk analysis of the preferred alternative and its implications will be presented.

    In cases where it is difficult to recommend one of the alternatives, it may be possible that a

    flaw exists in the process of weighting alternatives.

    The choice of one of the alternatives as the recommended policy, will be made keeping in

    mind the following points:

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    A choice between conflicting valuesand the world view of the Civil Service

    Commissioner and the writing team.

    Decision according to the possibility of immediately realizing the alternative,

    (especially in cases where there is a high urgency.)

    A combination of alternatives over time.

    Setting a minimum ranking in order that only the alternative receiving this rank

    may be elected.

    Analysis of alternative scenarios and suggestions for balancing and dealing with

    weaknesses in the alternative.

    Exchange ratio - how much we are willing to sacrifice one value to realize

    another.

    Finally, one should write the policy recommendation. The policy recommendation will

    include a summary of all findings and presentation of recommendations with all its pros and

    cons and an explanation of why it was chosen in a knowledgeable and reasoned process.

    2.4.7.1 Summarizing stage -

    At the summarizing stage of the policy paper, a link should be established between the

    problem presented at the beginning and the recommended solution presented at the

    conclusion. The summary will include a condensed summary of the main findings without

    presenting findings or new ideas not presented in the policy paper so far. The summary should

    present the main practical action plan that includes details of the recommended policies - who

    will act upon it, what is the recommended schedule for implementing the policy and each stage

    of the work plan, and what elements and factors should be considered, focusing on the

    practical implementation of the policy, etc.

    2.4.7.2 Bibliography and appendices

    Upon completion of the policy paper, a complete list of all sources used during its writing

    should be prepared, such as articles, books, websites, etc.; and such list should be clearly

    edited, in an orderly manner, following the standard in research articles. In cases where

    interviews were conducted throughout the process, it is important to incorporate the names of

    the respondents in the list of sources. Finally, it should be accompanied by appendices that

    include all relevant documents mentioned in the course of the paper but not fully presented in

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    it. Within this framework must be added written instructions, a draft of the civil service

    regulations amendment, tools created, and so on.

    2.5 Policy implementation and control2

    ____________________________________________________________________

    2.5.1 Definition of central and secondary objectives

    Upon completion of the formulation and design of the policy paper, the writing teams should

    answer the following question: to what extent does the formulated policy for implementation

    provide a solution to the need (the problem / reason for which the policy was formulated). To

    this end, throughout the process, a control should be integrated as an essential

    accompaniment for feedback (evaluation) of the policyssuccess and to carry out adjustments

    and tuning of the formulated policy, or of the alternative chosen, for implementation.

    The premise is that the central and secondary objective of the policy is a cornerstone of quality

    control performance capability. In the absence of definitions clear and lucid to all, the ability

    to determine the norm of the desired success will be impaired.

    2.5.2 Establishing control indices for implementing policies

    The ability to perform quality control after policy implementation is based on the clear

    definition of the policy paper objectives (as described in section 2.2 above ) and by the

    determination of qualitative indices of success for the alternative selected for implementation,

    specified by the authors of the policy in the chapter on control indices in the policy paper (as

    described in sections2.4.2and2.4.3).

    The control index is an index (marker or indicator) to measure and detect the presence and

    direction of desirable or undesirable change. The index is not databut contains two essentialdata: the objectivesdatum (planning), and the implementation datum (in practice).The index,

    as an indicator, shows the relationship between planning and implementation.

    _______________________2

    This chapter was written by the senior control department of the Civil Service Commission

    accompanying the policy writing process.

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    Apparently it is possible to establish numerous control indices; however, this has no purpose or

    benefit and is not sufficient to determine the policysdegree of implementation. The principle

    of using a control system establishes that advanced thinking is necessary when determining

    indices, the amount of which will help as managerial indicators while avoiding the situation

    described as you cantsee the forest (objective of the policy) for the trees (control indices).

    It is therefore recommended to carry out mapping of policy papers components for control

    and to establish priorities regarding their implementation over time.

    This, in order to avoid situations in which the principle and the essential are abandoned in

    favor of the non-essential and the unnecessary.

    Accordingly, the control doctrine recommends policy writers to choose indices that will reflect

    the extent to which the policysobjective has been achieved, and to do so while relating to the

    criteria (normative and performance) determined for the policy and the alternative selected

    for implementation.

    Preferred key guidelines for determining indices:

    Measurement capability - Each marker is required to be measurable

    (quantitative) or be evaluated (quality) through the investment of reasonableresources. In order to achieve it, one has to estimate the required data and

    their level of accessibility.

    Reliability- The index data should be reliable for the result obtained

    to correctly reflectthemeasured subject. One of the credibility structures is the

    ability to reconstruct the measurement.

    Comprehensiveness The entirety of various indices should cover or

    reasonably represent (partially, but adequately) the totality of the issue /

    criteria it is important to measure.

    SimplicityIndices also have visibility-explained value. It is recommended that

    the indices should be "self-explanatoryand clear to the reasonable observer.

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    Balance - Balanced measurement usually ensures integrity and greater

    reliability. It is desirable that the entirety of the diverse indices relate to the

    variety of aspects in the issue they measure, such as:

    Long-term -( Usually strategic / managerial indices that estimate at long-

    range the impact of policy implementation) versusshort term (quantitative

    operational indices that focus on the short-term activity of an individual or

    of organizational units).

    Effectiveness -( In the implementation of policy, the degree of

    contribution to promote the organization's primary objectives) versus

    efficiency (the ratio between inputs invested during the process of

    implementing the policy, and the results of the actual policy

    implementation).

    Quantity(Indices relating to the analysis of the data of policy

    implementation in terms of size, number, dimension,

    weight,percentage, etc.) versusQuality(indices relating to the analysis of

    policy implementation data in terms of internal nature, attributes, value,

    nature of operations, etc.).

    Reference to the dimensions of the issue as a whole - input / process /

    output/ results:

    Inputs(Resources involved in implementing policy).

    Processes - (Key processes operating the policy).

    Outputs (Products designed according to standards of planning

    predetermined in the policy paper).

    Results - (Desired effects of the alternative proposed in the paper

    according to policy makers).

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    2.5.3 Policy assessment using measurement tools

    The authors of the policy referred to the data and their sources required for

    the control and evaluation of the policy implementation, including:

    What data are required?

    What is the nature of the data? Binary(1-0),Ordinal (items from a

    list, when the order of items is significant), quantitative (calculating

    the number of items).

    Where are the data? (with the Commission, the offices, the

    information systems ) or if they do not exist, how to produce andcharacterize, maintain and add them to the control process?

    The authors of the policy referred to the possible measurement tools for assessing the

    manner in which the policy is implemented, including:

    Questionnaires and surveys

    Modularquestion tools (monitoring and feedback forms).

    Databases of organizational processes (protocols, evaluations and reviews,

    insight databanks, etc.).

    Files and reports (projects, programs and other activities, tracking tables, etc.)

    Implementable information systems storing data which can serve as business-intelligence cover to create indices.

    Dedicated systems for control management and performance measurement,

    and more.

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    3. ORGANIZATION OF PAPERS RELATING TO HUMAN RESOURCES MANAGEMENT

    IN THE CIVIL SERVICE AND OPERATIONAL STAGES OF THEIR FORMULATION

    _____________________________________________________________________

    3.1 Policy papers

    The basic documents constitute the fundamental basis for all human resources management

    activity. They are the professional basis of civil service activity and express the worksobjective

    for dealing with Civil Service Commission prime responsibilities. In this sense, the basic

    concepts precede the doctrine in regard to each issue, since they are the fundamental phase in

    the development of the doctrines.

    The various concepts provide a response to two basic questions:

    1. What is the purpose of Civil Service work in treating a specific issue?2. What is the general approach to the realization of this objective?

    The doctrine of human resources management in the civil service is based on five major

    building blocks from which the fundamental concepts are derived:

    Policy

    documents

    Doctrinal

    documents

    Non-doctrinaldocuments

    Guideline

    documentsPlanning

    documents

    Organizational

    systemdocuments

    Core

    knowledge

    documents

    Staff Opinion Procedures Operation

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    a. Adjusting the structure of the organization to its tasks - such as reducing the

    gap between the needs arising from the tasks and the organization of the

    officesmanpower.

    b. Management of the manpower that handles the organization's core skills -

    such as securing a multi-year coordination between the quantity and quality of

    the manpower which constitutes the employee population with skills defined

    as the officescore skills, and the needs derived from the annual and multiyear

    objectives of the task of the office.

    c. Development of human resources and processes for maximizing its potential

    to achieve the objectives of the office and maximizing the potential of the

    officeshuman resources in a manner appropriate to its needs and task

    objectives.

    d. Management of labor relations and wages:

    Conservation of managerial flexibility and continuity of current

    operations, while maintaining a proper working relationship with

    workersorganizations represented in the office.

    Monitoring and control of salary expenses.

    e. Organizational culture - Diagnosis of the organizationalclimate,(norms,

    ethics, behavior-shaping feelings). Identification of trends and professional

    treatment of the softdimensionsof the organization, just as much as (if not

    more) the treatment of its overt and formal dimensions.

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    3.2 Doctrinal documents

    Documents dealing with core formulation of organizational operation policy. The doctrinal

    documents outline the process for achieving conceptual goals and can be formulated in

    knowledge spheres (management domains) or organizational spheres (structural domains).

    Basic domain doctrines (the core knowledge) are divided into five areas:

    Staff administration Information and knowledge management

    Leadership and management capabilities

    Training and guidance

    Organization

    Human resources Adjustment of the organizationto its tasks

    Work relations andwa es Core manpower

    Or anizational Culture

    Instruction and training

    Workers evaluation

    Career development

    tracks

    Standardization, peaks

    Organizational structure

    Work methods

    Skill management

    Work relations system

    Wage costs

    People and positions

    directly affecting outputsand results of office

    operations

    Ethos, values, ethical code

    Common language

    Non-formal organization

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    In order to provide a distinct response that takes into account special needs and challenges,two other classifications of basic domain doctrines must be addressed:

    1. Classification by an organizational hierarchy system:

    Government office

    Supporting unit

    District

    2. Classification by an organizational domain system

    Government offices

    Health System

    Security system

    3.3 Guidance documents

    Documents mainly instructional, techno-logistical, operational or action guidelines.

    Operating documents (techniques)

    Procedures documents

    Instruction documents

    3.4 Documents that deal neither with concepts nor doctrines

    Secondary documents that can be attached to any of the above categories as a

    complementary, attached, illustrating document or as appendices.

    Position document - A document expressing the position of the writer in acomprehensive and reasoned manner, a non-binding policy paper, but a

    presentation of the approach and position of the author only (the policy paper

    can express the position of the staff body, or of the holder of a specific

    function),

    Meta-analysis research - Research combining several different studies and

    analyzing a combination of research findings together in the main study.

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    Required document -A document published for receiving offers of service or of

    a product, designed to reduce options and to give detailed directions to the

    service provider or supplier. The document describes the desired

    specifications, areas of responsibilities, period of service, selection criteria and

    all information that might be relevant.

    3.5 Program documents

    Type of structural documents or simply forms: they are usually in a uniform

    format that enables cutting, combination or consolidation of several documents

    together for the purposes of analysis, comparison, or continuous planning.

    Current plans (work programs).

    Basic theoretical development or empowerment programs (e.g., annual

    programs for human resources planning).

    SUMMARIZING CHART

    Labor relations

    and wagesHuman resources

    developmentCore personnel

    Adapting the

    organization to

    its tasks

    Basic concept

    Training and

    guidanceManagementHR Manager

    Information /

    knowledge

    management

    Basic doctrine (Core

    knowledge)

    DistrictSupport unitOffice

    Perception of

    operation according

    to organizational

    system

    ControlHuman ResourcesStrategic planningManagementProfessional

    Systems

    Techniques,

    procedures and

    instructions

    3.6 Classification of pre-creation documents

    Master documents and policies will be ranked according to their importance

    (prioritizing issues as defined by the Civil Service Commissioner), compared to

    the level of complexity (scope, amount of resources in the creative process),

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    according to a model chart indicating the power of the two components

    aligned in importance and complexity.

    The documents will be labeled stating both the importance and complexity

    according to the model chart, where the AA label will reflect a degree of great

    importance along with great complexity, respectively, (see figure below).

    3.7 Fixed time frame for the creation process of a policy document

    The time frame given to the creative and development process of master documents and policy

    will be affected by document classification as well as budgeting, resources and communication

    levels (taking into account circumstances requiring great flexibility). It has been determined

    that:

    With great importance (high priority) and a large degree of complexity (AA) -

    the time frame for writing the document is 6-8months.

    With medium importance (medium priority) and medium complexity(AB, BA),

    the time frame for writing the document is4-6months.

    Medium importanceand complexity (BA,AB)

    4-6 months

    Great importance andcomplexity (AA)

    6-8months

    Low importance and

    complexity (BB)2-4 months

    Medium impotance andcomplexity (BA, AB)

    4-6 months

    Policy papercomplexity

    A

    B

    Importance /

    prioritization issues

    B Com lexit A

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    With low importance (low prioritization) and low complexity(BB), the time

    frame for writing the document is 2-4months.

    3.8 Stages of policy formation and key anchors in projectile view (Gantt chart)

    Stage 0-Or anization

    Stage AContentA roval

    Stage B-Document

    formulation

    Stage C

    Document

    approval

    Stage 2-Toolsdevelopment/

    update

    Preparations

    Subject approval and expectations adjustment facing Doctrine & Management Department

    Team consolidation

    Ex ectations ad ustment and settin team time schedule

    Work lan re aration

    Initiating

    Mapping current situation, needs exam., research and info. collection re other

    laces

    Draft formulation of olic document ro osal

    Discussion of writersforum prior to Commissioners approval

    Amendment of proposed draft following feedback of

    preparation forum

    Commissioners approval of policy document content

    Discussion &

    WritingWork groups meetings to discuss and

    formulate policy papers

    Follow-updiscussions tocontrol progressPresentation of draft policy document to

    the re aration forum

    Commissioner approval of program

    Discussion in preparation forum for submitt ing policy document for Commissioners

    a roval

    Amendment of draft policy paper following feedback from thepreparation forum

    Presentation of paper for Commissioner sapproval

    Amendment of policy paper as a result of Commissioners feedback

    and paper approval

    Development of tools for policy implementation

    Weeks

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    3.9 Details offered for all stages of the process according to the timeline (the time frame will vary according to the labeling

    specified in the document (AA-CC)

    Maximum

    execution time

    Milestone

    -

    Responsibility of

    Chief Content

    Officer

    Participating partiesResponsible for

    implementation

    Preparations

    necessary to

    the process

    Purpose of the

    Process

    and deliverables

    required

    ProcessTimeline

    Two weeks

    from the start

    of the project

    Publishing

    summary results

    emphasizing work

    plan.

    Doctrine Department

    Chief Content Officer

    Team members

    Head of Doctrine

    Dept.

    Chief Content

    Officer

    Pre-

    coordination

    of

    expectations

    Chief Content

    Officer

    - Doctrine

    Department

    Approval of subject

    Coordination of

    expectations

    Group

    formation

    Setting schedules

    Starting

    discussion

    External

    1-2

    months

    One month from

    the start of the

    project

    Writing of work

    plan with schedules

    and areas of

    responsibility .

    Doctrine Department

    Chief Content Officer

    Team members

    Head of Doctrine

    Dept.

    Chief Content

    Officer

    Preliminary

    content

    Chief Content

    Officer

    Coordination internal

    teams expectations

    Setting time

    schedules

    Preparation of workplan

    Starting

    discussion

    internal

    Six weeks from

    the start of the

    project

    Preparation of

    daft of initiated

    document

    Chief Content Officer

    Staff Head Reform

    implementation

    Head of Strategy

    Dept.

    Representative of

    the Legal Office

    Consolidated

    action team

    Dept. Heads

    Other factors as

    determined by the

    Commissioner

    Control

    representative

    Head of Doctrine

    Dept.

    Chief Content

    Officer

    Preparation of

    draft proposal

    of policy paper

    including

    alternatives

    for action

    Feedback

    Proposing

    alternatives

    Directions for action

    Formulation

    preferred alternative

    Preparatory

    discussion

    forum for

    Commissioner s

    work approval

    of work content

    and research

    question

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    Two months

    from the start of

    the project

    Distribution of

    initiated

    document

    Chief Content Officer

    Staff Head Reform

    implementation

    Head of Strategy

    Dept.

    Representative of

    the Legal Office

    Consolidated action

    team

    Appointed parties

    Dept. Heads

    Other factors as

    determined by the

    Commissioner

    Control

    representative

    Head of Doctrine

    Dept.

    Chief Content

    Officer

    formulating a

    revised draft in

    view of the

    preparation

    forum of the

    policy paper

    including

    alternatives

    for action

    Presentation policy

    document results and

    proposed mode of

    operation

    Discussion re

    Commissioners

    approval of

    content,

    research

    question and

    schedule for

    implementation .

    Four

    months

    from the start of

    the project

    Writing chapters of

    the policy paper

    Doctrine Department

    Chief Content Officer

    Team members

    Chief Content

    Officer

    Formation of

    organized

    offer for

    discussion

    before any

    discussion

    Developing the topic

    and formulating a

    policy paper in light of

    the approval of the

    content by the

    Commissioner

    Meetings of

    working groups

    to develop

    subject and

    write the policy.

    3-4

    months

    Four

    months

    from the start of

    the project

    Publishing

    discussion

    proceedings with

    status of

    implementation

    Doctrine Department

    Chief Content Officer

    Team members

    Doctrine

    Department

    Chief Content

    Officer

    Team members

    Publication of

    summary

    discussion

    including

    design versus

    performance

    and

    emphasized

    items for the

    future.

    Monitoring deadlines

    and performance of

    various areas of

    responsibility

    Follow-up

    discussions

    Four

    months

    from the start of

    the project

    Preparation

    Draft of policy

    paper

    .

    Head of the Reform implementation staff

    Head of Strategy Dept.

    Action team

    Representative of the Legal Office

    Control representative

    Other factors as determined by the

    Commissioner

    Head of Doctrine

    Dept.

    Chief Content

    Officer

    Preparation of

    the first draft

    of the policy

    paper

    containing

    alternatives

    for action

    Feedback

    Proposing alternatives

    and possible courses

    of action

    Preferred a lternative

    formulation

    Forum prepares

    for the

    Commissioner

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    Six

    months

    from the start of

    the project

    Distribution of

    internal draft of

    policy paper

    Head of the Reform implementation staff

    Head of Strategy Dept.

    Action team

    Representative of the Legal Office

    Control representative

    Other factors as determined by the

    Commissioner

    Head of Doctrine

    Dept.

    Chief Content

    Officer

    Preparation of

    a final policy

    paper

    Presentation of results

    of the policy paper and

    its approval by the

    Commissioner

    Discussion re

    Presentation to

    Commissioner

    and approval of

    the paper.

    5-6months

    Three

    months from the

    end of the

    previous stage

    Distribution

    of new tools

    Head of the Reform implementation staff

    Head of Strategy Dept.

    Action team

    Representative of the Legal Office

    Control representative

    Other factors as determined by the

    Commissioner

    Head of Doctrine

    Dept.

    Chief Content

    Officer

    preparation of

    procedures

    document and

    of any other

    relevant

    product.

    Creation tools,

    procedures, formats,

    guide files and updating

    procedures and

    required policies

    Developing /

    updating tools

    and procedures.

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    3.10 Details of the types of documents required according to work stages

    Document of project work plan - The project work plan serves as

    an ignition document of the policy paper writing process.

    The initiating" document- A skeleton document of the policy

    Including most of the complete document components in addition to

    project work arrangements.

    Internal draftdocumentFinal product of the writing offered to a group of

    factors composed of relevant functionaries in the Civil Service, other officials

    in government, as well as experts and external interested parties in relevant

    areas. Completion of this stage in process is the approval of the paper and its

    dissemination as an official draft.

    Official Policy Paper - First EditionA document amending all comments

    received in the internal draft document. The implementation of this

    document in its renewed distribution is binding, and supersedes all previous

    and current versions of this document. The document will be distributed to

    the relevant circle of users. The document will be distributed as a binding

    document for a determined period (usually one year) after which the policy

    will be examined by the Commission control unit. The control unit will present

    gaps, if any, and the policy will be updated by the official body of the

    Commission under the supervision of the Doctrine and Knowledge

    Management Department of the Civil Service Commission, and subsequently,

    a revised edition will be distributed.

    Official Policy Paper permanent Second Edition - This is a document

    with final validity including implementation comments received in the First

    Edition of the document. This document in its renewed distribution has full

    validation for implementation and will actually eliminate all previous versions

    of the document. The document will be reviewed and examined periodically

    in accordance with the multiyear programs of the Civil Service Commission

    and shall constitute an integral part of the cycle of design and

    implementation.

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    Project

    Work Plan

    Initiating

    document

    Internal

    Draft

    Official

    Policy

    Paper -

    First

    Edition

    Second

    Permanent

    Edition

    3.10.1 Project work plan

    The project work plan is a starting document of the process of writing the policy paper.

    In this document, the team leader sets the schedule for the projectsimplementation and the

    participating team members. In addition, the team leader will determine the parties in the civil

    service, and individuals from outside the civil service, who will take part in policy formulation as

    experts and respondents to the project. Below is the structure of the document:

    Structure of the project work plan:

    Background on the team formation and need for formulation of the policy

    paper.

    Project goal setting and work content.

    Staff members and officials.

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    Other factors taking part in writing the document and the thought

    processes.

    Key milestones in the process and setting timetables for

    Implementation.

    Potential interfaces with other writing teams of the Tree of Knowledge

    program.

    Drafting a letter of appointment to be submitted to the Commissioner (see

    Appendix A: Appendix for drafting a model letter of appointment).

    .

    3.10.2 Initiating document

    The initiation document is an important part of the process of writing a policy. It includes the

    formulation of the central idea underlying the policy documentand preparing a general outline for

    dealing with the issue. In this context, the writing team members perform individual categorization of

    each of the relevant existing materials (such as policy papers written in the past, the Civil Service

    Code, guidelines) and other materials that can assist in formulating a position (e.g., numerical data on

    the issue and trends, academic documents, policy analyzes performed by research institutes and / or

    foreign governments, etc.). Initiating the writing of a policy paper will be carried out to face an

    existing challenge in the basic current doctrine foundation and can be expressed in several ways:

    Writing a new policy paper;

    Updating an existing policy paper - amendment or addition;

    Adapting existing policies to new circumstances, etc.

    An initiation document will be written for each policy paper, in which shall be specified the

    requirements and expectations of the policy paper as well as of the writing staff. The initiation

    document coordinates expectations between the parties connected to the formulation and the

    writing of the policy paper. The initiation document will be submitted for approval to theCommissioner after a preparation forum is held with the participation of the relevant parties (see

    table in section3.9).Following are details of the document structure:

    3.10.2.1 Initiation document structure

    Managerssummary including a general and concise explanation.

    Details about the core issue.

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    Defining the objective of the document.

    Defining measures to treat the issue.

    The target audience the policy addresses.

    A brief survey of the issue and its trends (including the quantitative analysis of the

    issuesdimension).

    Presenting possible alternatives referring to chances and opportunities in

    implementing each alternative.

    Recommendation on the overall preferred alternative (including the rationale and

    the principle of using the ROI index).

    Milestones in the implementation of applied alternative.

    Recommended procedure for application and implementation including tools.

    The staff members cooperating on writing the policy.

    Relating factors.

    Interfaces and communication.

    Timetable for writing continuation.

    List of sources.

    Appendices.

    3.10.2.2 Additional sections and emphasis on writing the structure of the initiating document

    Contents :Table of Contents including chapters and sub-chapters in a way that

    gives a good idea of the contents of the document, and even constitutes its

    skeleton.

    List of main points: List of changesand important innovations to be included in

    the doctrinal paper.

    Milestones for implementation : Details of stages in preparing the document

    according to time schedule. With eachmilestone, the process and the writing of

    the document and its contents will be reviewed by the responsible entity in the

    Doctrine Department. It should be emphasized that during the writing of the policy

    paper, with the assistance ofan external factor, by means of contractual relations

    (a consultant), the staff leader should prepare itself together with the DoctrineDepartment team to work in accordance with the time schedule determined.

    Source List :This list will include the mandatory sources relevant to the issue, as

    well as the sources, as appropriate and necessary, as well as in accordance with

    the decision of the doctrinal body or the writer.

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    Relating factors: itis recommended, during the writing process, to combine

    interested parties and / or experts who can shed light on this issue and the

    manner in which to cope with such. The writer of the PID (Project initiating

    Documentation) will detail which relating factors are planned to be included in

    the initiating document. The factor authorizing the document should ensure that

    there is no lack of relevant factors in the formulating and writing process of the

    policy paper.

    Writers: Thewritersprofessional background, areas of expertise and any other

    relevant personal or professional detail important to the writing process should

    be detailed.

    Forerunner Chapter: It is the function of the forerunnerchapterto check the

    actual ability of the staff writers to write the policy papers. This, some cases, is

    another milestone required under the Commissioner's decision.

    Implementation and application: The process of application of the policy within

    government bodies including control indices of the process should be detailed. In

    addition, the staff work required to implement the policy should also be detailed. .

    Interfaces and communication:Writing of the policy papers must take place within

    the framework of organized staff work in which are involved all Civil Service

    Commission authorities (such as the Legal Office, Control, etc.). All possible

    interfaces should appear in the table. Documents will be produced in digital format

    for the purpose of updating, and at first stag, will be submitted to the Civil Service

    Commission website and later to an Internet Website dedicated to knowledge

    management doctrines.

    3.10.3 Internal draft

    The Internal draft is the initial version of the policy paper, and is served to interested parties and

    relevant experts in the civil service and externally. The official draft contains the same items to be

    included below in the official policy paper, but it is not a binding document.

    Below is the internal draft document structure:

    3.10.3.1 Internal draft document structure:

    General:

    Executive summary.

    Objective of the document.

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    Definitions and basic concepts.

    Requirements:

    Theoretical background of the issue, its trends today in the country and abroad.

    Main aspects of the prevailing situation and todayspolicy.

    The gap between the current and ideal situation, experience and lessons learned,

    and the need to adjust and respond to existing and anticipated challenges.

    The proposed response:

    Defining indices used to analyze various alternatives.

    Summary description of proposed alternatives.

    Presentation of preferred alternatives.

    Presentation of the meaning of alternatives.

    Application and implementation processincluding recommendedtools.

    Operational guidelines and milestones.

    Control indices.

    Flowchart detailing the policy (see example of the flowchartin Appendix B: Example

    of Flowchart).

    Relevant guidelines and tools developed.

    List of team members partners in the writing of the policy paper and their function.

    List of sources.

    Appendices.

    3.10.4 Official policy paper - First Edition

    The official policy paper is distributed as a binding document after changes have been madein light

    of comments received from various factors,partners in the draft document.

    This document is binding for operation for a pre-defined period; thereafter, a Second Permanent

    Editionis to be distributed.

    This document includes a section on guidelines and procedures for implementation, including

    amendment of the Civil Service Regulations. The structure of the policy paper in its First Edition is:

    3.104.1 Document structure of the First Official Edition:

    General:

    Executive summary.

    Objective of the document.

    Definitions and basic concepts.

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    Requirements:

    Theoretical background of the issue, its trends today in the country and abroad.

    Main aspects of the prevailing situation in the Civil Service and todayspolicy.

    The gap between the current and ideal situation, experience and lessons learned,

    and the need to adjust and respond to existing and anticipated challenges.

    The proposed response:

    Defining indices used to analyze various alternatives.

    Summary description of proposed alternatives.

    Presentation of preferred alternatives.

    Presentation of the meaning of alternatives.

    Application and implementationprocess,including the tools developed.

    Operational guidelines and milestones.

    Flowchart detailing the policy (see example of the flowchartin Appendix B).

    Relevant guidelines and tools developed.

    List of sources.

    List of team members partners in the writing of the policy paper and their function

    (table configuration).

    List of responders in the writing of the policy paper and their function (table

    configuration).

    Determining the body responsible for updating the document guided by the

    Doctrine Department of the Civil Service Commission.

    Establishing the measures of control and the manner in which policy evaluation

    will be carried out.

    Periods - Document approval period, closing date of examination period prior

    to second edition permanent status (configuration table).

    List of sources.

    Appendices:

    Appendix ADocumentation of the references submitted for the internal

    draft.

    Appendix B - Table of amendments documenting the amendments made

    from the internal draft.

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    Appendix C - Documentation of the relevant section in the Civil Service

    Regulations.

    Appendix DOperational tool and relevant forms.

    3.10.5 Official policy paper - Permanent Second Edition

    The Second Edition is the policy paper after having received final validation by the core team and the

    leadership of theCommission, and after inserting all the amendments and improvements received

    from the actual policy implementers in light of the policy operation in the area.The document is

    binding indefinitely and constitutes an integral part of the design and operation cycle.

    3.10.5.1 Structure of Permanent Second Edition:

    General:

    Executive summary.

    Objective of the document.

    Definitions and basic concepts.

    Requirements:

    Theoretical background of the issue, its trends today in the country and abroad.

    Main aspects of the prevailing situation and todayspolicy.

    The gap between the current and ideal situation, experience and lessons learned,

    and the need to adjust and respond to existing and anticipated challenges.

    The proposed response:

    Defining indices used to analyze various alternatives.

    Summary description of proposed alternatives.

    Presentation of preferred alternatives.

    Presentation of the meaning of alternatives. Application and implementationprocess,including the tools developed.

    Operational guidelines and milestones.

    Flowchart detailing the policy (see example of the flowchartin Appendix B).

    Relevant guidelines and tools developed.

    List of sources.

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    List of team members partners in the writing of the policy paper and their function

    (table configuration).

    List of responders in the writing of the policy paper and their function (table

    configuration).

    Determining the body responsible for updating the document guided by the

    Doctrine Department of the Civil Service Commission.

    Establishing measures of control and the manner in which policy evaluation

    will be carried out.

    Periods - Document approval date.

    List of sources.

    Appendices:

    Appendix A - Operating tools including relevant forms.

    Appendix B - Documentation of references submitted to the internal draft.

    Appendix C - Table of amendments documenting the amendments madefrom the

    internal draft.

    Appendix DDocumentation of references submitted to the policypapersFirst

    Edition.

    Appendix E - Table of amendments documenting the amendments madein the

    First Edition.

    Appendix F - Documentation of the relevant chapter in the Civil Service

    Regulations, and any accompanying instructions.

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    4. SourcesBelow are links to useful information on the subject of the chapter:

    Young, E. & Quinn, L. (2002), Writing

    Effective Public Policy Papers: A Guide for

    Policy Advisers in Central and Eastern

    Europe.

    Professor Levy, Yagil (2011)

    Writing a Policy Paper (The Open University),

    (in Hebrew).

    Several examples of policy papers are

    presented in the book, and extensive details

    on all parts of the paper.

    European Union (2008), "Writing Policy

    Papers and Policy Briefs",

    http://www.foodsec.org/.../docs/1

    policy_paper_guide.pdf

    http://www.foodsec.org/.../docs/1http://www.foodsec.org/.../docs/1
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    APPENDICES

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    Appendix A: Model Draft of Letter of Appointment

    Date___________________

    Ex4102 to 2066

    To: [Team member details

    Re: Your appointment to the team for writing policy papers on the subject

    [details of the subject]

    According to a report on implementation of civil service reform, and the government decision No.

    481, dated3.6.2013, I hereby appoint you to the working staff for formulating a policy paper on the

    subject [detailsof the subject.

    In its work, the team will give its opinion, among others, on the following subjects:

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    0.__________________________________________________________________________

    4.___________________________________________________________________________

    3.____________________________________________________________________________

    Mrs. / Mr. [Chairmansname] shall serve as team leader.

    The team should submit to the undersigned a draft with recommendations by [date].

    I wish the team success in this important task.

    Best regards,

    Moshe Dayan

    Civil Service Commissioner

    APPENDIX B: FLOW CHART EXAMPLE

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