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Crowdfunding Campaign Write-
Up AnalysisBy:Kim Russell Comenta
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Desirable Write-Up Campaigns
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Upon examining their content, they have lesser paragraph and sentence. But they have more pictures and videos.
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Most of what they have in their kickstarter page are photos of their company. They only have few words and I think viewers are more entertained while learning about their project.
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Undesirable Write-Up
Crowdfunding Campaigns
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The owner is asking to drink red bull in every state and post in social
media. It was not indicated very well why
they need to do this. Content wasn’t very
detailed.
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Content didn’t connect to
audience why they need to fund their
project.
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Topic Resourcehttps://www.kickstarter.com/projects/getpebble/pebble-time-awesome-smartwatch-no-compromises?ref=most_funded
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/ryangrepper/coolest-cooler-21st-century-cooler-thats-actually
https://www.digitaltrends.com/cool-tech/worst-kickstarter-projects/
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Image Resourcehttps://jncahill.wordpress.com/2013/05/15/writing-dos-and-donts-first-person-pov/http://www.nixx-media.com/our-strategy/social-media-campaign-creation/http://www.starkinsider.com/2015/07/pebble-time-smartwatch-review.htmlhttps://leanarch.eu/2014/04/26/the-dutch-government-massively-failed-it-projects-openly-discussed/