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DAY 13 IMPROVING
SENTENCES DAY 1
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SEATING CHART: TEAM GLEN
Winning does not require people to be against someone else; people can reach their goals through cooperation just as well as they can through competition. Winning is not always the result of selfish individualism. People achieve happiness by cooperating with others to increase the happiness of all, rather than by winning at others’ expense. Ours is not a world in which the price of one person’s happiness is someone else’s unhappiness.
Assignment: When some people win, must others lose, or are there situations in which everyone wins?
Grace
Qamar
Yasmin
Laith
Fatina
Raghd
Amanda
Shahd
Door
Ustaz GlenMohammad
Ghamin Ahmad
Yara
Omar
Warm Up:1. Have your
homework out.2. Take 3 Minutes to
Brainstorm your answer.
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SEATING CHART: TEAM RACHEL
Winning does not require people to be against someone else; people can reach their goals through cooperation just as well as they can through competition. Winning is not always the result of selfish individualism. People achieve happiness by cooperating with others to increase the happiness of all, rather than by winning at others’ expense. Ours is not a world in which the price of one person’s happiness is someone else’s unhappiness.
Assignment: When some people win, must others lose, or are there situations in which everyone wins?
Aseel
SabaNadine
Rita Kosty
IbrahimMazen
Sara A
Abdelrahman
Door
Leena
Ustaz GlenSara O
Reem
Warm Up:1. Have your
homework out.2. Take 3 Minutes to
Brainstorm your answer.
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SEATING CHART: TEAM RADHAWinning does not require people to be against someone else; people can reach their goals through cooperation just as well as they can through competition. Winning is not always the result of selfish individualism. People achieve happiness by cooperating with others to increase the happiness of all, rather than by winning at others’ expense. Ours is not a world in which the price of one person’s happiness is someone else’s unhappiness.
Assignment: When some people win, must others lose, or are there situations in which everyone wins?
Adam
Saja
Leen
NadaElyaa
DanaZeina
Sara
Bana
Door
Khaled
Ustaz Glen
DinaNicole
Warm Up:1. Have your
homework out.2. Take 4 Minutes to
Brainstorm your answer.
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SEATING CHART: TEAM ROBIN/ALLISON
Winning does not require people to be against someone else; people can reach their goals through cooperation just as well as they can through competition. Winning is not always the result of selfish individualism. People achieve happiness by cooperating with others to increase the happiness of all, rather than by winning at others’ expense. Ours is not a world in which the price of one person’s happiness is someone else’s unhappiness.
Assignment: When some people win, must others lose, or are there situations in which everyone wins? Warm Up:
1. Have your homework out.
2. Take 4 Minutes to Brainstorm your answer. Shaima
Serry
SewarGhaith
Zain
TalaNourNadeen
Bashar
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AGENDA Warm Up: Essay Overview of Strategy Modifiers Wordiness البغل سباق
Homework: Pg 429. 1-14. Explain Answers and come in with questions.
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STRATEGY FOR IMPROVING SENTENCES
Skip Directions Don’t Read Answer A. It’s the exact same as
the sentence Common Focuses
1. Run-On Sentences 2. Sentence Fragments3. Misplaced Modifiers4. Passive voice5. Parallelism6. Faulty Coordination/Subordination7. Wordiness
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8 STEP PROCESS1. Read the sentence and try to hear the problem.2. If you find an error, eliminate A.3. Before you look at the answer choices, figure
out how to fix the error.4. Find the correction that most closely matches
yours.5. If no correction matches, eliminate answers
that repeat the error or contain new errors.6. If you’re still stumped, reach into your bag of
tricks 7. Plug your answer back into the sentence to
check it.8. If you’re still stumped—cut, guess, and run.
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BAG OF DESPERATE TRICKS Go with the shortest answer. Cut answer choices that change the
meaning of the sentence. Cut answer choices that begin with
words ending in -ing. (Should be the noun)
Don’t forget about A.
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MODIFIERS A Modifier is a word or set of words that
describes, clarifies, or gives more detail about a concept/part of sentence.
Modifiers can include adjectives, adverbs, phrases, and clauses
Modifiers should be located as close as possible to the word they are modifying in order to avoid confusion on what it is modifying
Often introduced by sets of commas
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EXAMPLES
1. Mazen barely kicked that ball twenty yards.Mazen kicked that ball barely twenty yards.2. When looking for bargains, the small shops
off the main street usually offer good sale prices.
The small shops off the main street usually offer good sale prices to shoppers looking for bargains.
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EXAMPLE Flying for the first time, the roar of the
jet engines intimidated the small child, and he grew frightened as the plane roared down the runway.
The subject is usually the first noun that follows the introductory modifier.
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PARTNER PRACTICE
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PASSIVE VOICE Passive voice is not always considered
an error. If the answer includes no other errors as
is active, choose it instead of the passive voice
If the sentence construct includes “by ____” it’s probably passive.
The tray was polished by Jonathan
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WORDINESS The fewer the words, generally the
better.
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البغل سباق Class Divided into Teams A problem is put on the board Everybody Answers the Question I will call on one person randomly from each team to see if
they got the correct answer. If they get the correct Answer they get to draw a card Numbers 1-10 = the Value You can choose to go cutthroat Red Jacks = -5, Black Jacks = - 10 Queens = Steal one player from another team + 10 points Kings = Switch Points with another player Jokers = Red Joker, You steal all the points from a team of
your choice. Black Joker: You give all your points to another team.
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QUESTION 1
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QUESTION 2
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QUESTION 2.5
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QUESTION 3
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QUESTION 4
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QUESTION 5
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QUESTION 6
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QUESTION 7
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QUESTION 8
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QUESTION 9
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QUESTION 10
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QUESTION 11
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QUESTION 12
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QUESTION 13
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QUESTION 14
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EXIT PASS
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HOMEWORK Pg 429. 1-14. Explain Answers and come
in with questions.