What would I improve now I have feedback
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What have I learnt from
my audience feedback
By Lois Baker
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Digipak“possibly another colour being added” – “so it’s got something to stand out”
“I think there could be a little bit more colour”
“the picture of the eye could have been a bit clearer”
= From the feedback I received I’d probably add some colour to my digipak. I’d most likely make the text a brighter colour so it stands out a bit better. However adding colour may detract from the theme. I’d also make the picture of the eye a higher resolution so it would be better quality compared to the rest of the pictures.
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Music video
“I feel the music video could have had beginning and an end”
= Next time I would of included more of narrative to my music video, in order for it to be easier to follow and also more interesting to watch.
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Music video
“timing of things some scenes could have been second or two shorter”
= Some scenes could have been shorter so it wouldn’t be as boring to watch. The scene of the hand at the end could have been a lot shorter.
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Digipak
“possibly another colour”
=Again like the digipak I would include some colour to the advert so it stands out. I would include the same colour on the digipak as the advert – possibly a neutral colour like blue.
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“include some brush strokes here”
“empty space underneath the eye”
= If I remake my advert I would of included some more of brush strokes under the eye so there isn’t empty space.