What have you learned from your audience feedback?

Trailer

• Needed voice over • Music needed to be more varied to indicate scenes

including a conflict. • More variety of cuts; some shots were too long• needed to include more sounds to main soundtrack as

in parts the music sounded too empty/ slightly echoic making it appear unfinished.

• Sound effects- a particular scene in a trailer the sound effect we used to imitate the sound of water ending up sounding similar to a flying device.

Magazine

• Looked like a free insert out of a newspaper due to layout and colour scheme.

Removed: bold white border.

Added:Other images of new coming films.

Repositioned most of the text to the right hand side of the cover.

Poster

• At first the image of the dominant character in two different poses made appear as though they were twins instead if illustrating the transition of the “geek” becoming more “street”. Therefore we chose to dress the main character in two separate outfits to distinguish her transition from being a geek and then becoming more street/cool.