Website Screen Shots Draft 2

By Kayleigh Umfreville

Welcome page

Welcome Page

From getting feedback and from peers they said that the

welcome page was too boring and didn’t really invite the

users in to use the website. Also one of our teachers

thought that having an “X” to go on to the next page is

very negative, which is something that we would like to

avoid.

From this feedback we started from the beginning as this

would be easier to come up with a new idea. We

decided that we wanted to play on the Garden of Eden

side to link with the theme of the album as this would

help promote it. The ivy is appearing in sections to make

it look like it is growing towards the door, the same effect

is applied to the feet. This will help to invite the users to

click on the door to the next page.

Home Page

Home Page

The feedback that we got on this page was that the background was too dark for the artists image. Also there wasn’t much about the artist which would help to sell her image.

From this we changed the background to a lighter background, but from looking at other artists website they always have a big close up of the artist on the homepage. From us to help develop to homepage further it would be to add a close up of Luna Lux.

We added little Polaroid photos of the artist that appear when you click on to the next page as this would help with her star image, and make her look fun. However, our teacher said that what she is wearing in these photos is very bland and to make it better her clothes need to stand out more.

Me Page

Me Page

On this page we have changed the background to

make the website consistent to make it look more

professional.

Also we changed the writing of Luna Lux as we think

that the new one that we have added looks more like

a hand writing and it is very distinctive, so people will

know who it is by the hand writing.

Music Page

Music Page

The only things that we changed on this page was

the background to make it consistent.

We haven’t received any constructive feedback on

this page as they think it is fine.

Connect Page

Connect Page

We haven’t changed anything on this page as we

haven’t got any feedback for it.

See Page

See Page

To make the website consistent we added a Polaroid

picture saying “Enjoy” as this would help make the

website more personal for the consumer.

See Page

See page

On this page we added little facts about her

childhood for her fans to get personal with her, which

is something that most fans wish to achieve.

Then we added more inspirations which link to her

music. This will show fans why she has wrote certain

lyrics, which will help them to give meaning.

See Page

See Page

We didn’t have this page before, so we added all of

our behind the scenes to give fans something more

to watch, which will help to make the website more

interesting for them to use. This also will lead to

them wanting to keep coming back to the website as

they can watch new videos that will continually be

out on there.

To improve this page we need to come up with new

video ideas that are fun (like vlogger games) This will

help to make Luna look fun and interesting, will help

to persuaded to come them to see her in concert.

Shop Page

Shop Page

On this page we have added new products to give

the consumers more of a selection to buy from.

Also when the proceed to the check out there is a

little message saying “Thank you” from Luna in her

hand writing making the website again more

personal.

Plus at the end of the page there is a link to buy

ticket which helps to promote her tour.

Shop Page

Shop Page

Originally we didn’t have this page but from looking

at other artist pages they always have a link to buy

their your tickets.

She is supporting Ed Sheeran when he goes on tour

this year, as this will help to promote her name and

get people to listen to her music.

She is playing at the festival Barn on the Farm, as

this is the type of festival that upcoming artists will

play to get their names out. Previously Hozier and

Jame Bay have played at this festival, which will give

it a good name.

Contact Page

Contact Page

Again we didn’t have this page before, but we added

it to make the website more interactive for the

audience.

To make this page better we could add in pictures

from the competition to show what other fans have

done.

Contact Page

Contact Page

We haven’t changed anything to this page as we

have not received any feedback to make it better.