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I. Dress-Ups I II III IV V 1. –ly word 2. Because clause 3. Strong Verb 4. Quality Adjective 5. WWW.ASIA.BUW Underline one of each and label in right margin Minimum Rule: One in every paragraph II. Sentence Openers II III IV subject prep phrase –ly word , –ing or –ed WWW.ASIA.BUW Other: Number in left margin (every sentence) Minimum Rule: 5 sentences that begin differently, No more than two of the same in a row. III. Decorations * I II III IV V 1. Rhetorical question (?) 3. 3sss (short staccato sentences) 4. simile-metaphor/allusion (sim/met/allu) 5. parallelism (paral) 6. alliteration (all) Label in right margin Minimum Rule: 2 throughout essay IV. Sentence Styles (Triple Extensions)* I II III IV V 1. word / phrase / clause repetition 2. repeating "ings", consecutive or spaced 3. repeating adjectives or nouns 4. repeating verbs, consecutive or spaced Write word “triple” in margin Minimum Rule: One Triple STYLE throughout essay * Required for a 90 or above adapted from Institute for Excellence in Writing

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I. Dress-Ups I II III IV V1. –ly word

2. Because clause

3. Strong Verb

4. Quality Adjective

5. WWW.ASIA.BUW

Underline one of each and label in right margin Minimum Rule: One in every paragraph

II. Sentence Openers II III IV subject

prep phrase

–ly word ,

–ing or –ed

WWW.ASIA.BUW

Other:

Number in left margin (every sentence)Minimum Rule: 5 sentences that begin differently, No more than two of the same in a row.

III. Decorations * I II III IV V1. Rhetorical question (?)

3. 3sss (short staccato sentences)

4. simile-metaphor/allusion (sim/met/allu)

5. parallelism (paral)

6. alliteration (all)

Label in right margin Minimum Rule: 2 throughout essay

IV. Sentence Styles (Triple Extensions)* I II III IV V1. word / phrase / clause repetition

2. repeating "ings", consecutive or spaced

3. repeating adjectives or nouns

4. repeating verbs, consecutive or spaced

Write word “triple” in margin Minimum Rule: One Triple STYLE throughout essay

* Required for a 90 or above

adapted from Institute for Excellence in Writing

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Name: Hr:

Structure*use a pen

Introduction

☐ Attention-getter technique used: _______ ☐ State thesis – highlight

Body Paragraphs

☐ Each paragraph has a Topic Sentence (key words highlighted)☐ MLA in-text citations used correctly (Box citations)

Conclusion

☐ Restate thesis using different words (key words highlighted)☐ State what’s most significant & why☐ State what reader should take away from reading the essay

☒ Optional: Echo introductory attention-getter.

MLA Format

☐ MLA Heading left top☐ Title centered☐ Double-spaced 1” margins☐ At least 2 different sources (Birmingham Jail required)☐ Quotes lead in (no quote bombs)☐ Works Cited page properly formatted

Stylistic TechniquesBanned Word * *No higher than C (70) for failure to revise

☐ No banned words (including “you” and “I”) – see banned word list

Cross out Correction: replace with a different word

Contractions* *No higher than C (70) for failure to revise

☐ No contractions in formal writing

Cross out Correction: rewrite each contraction as two words.

ONE/BODY/THING – Vague Nouns* *No higher than C (70) for failure to revise

☐ No vague nouns – words ending with one/body/thing ex. Everyone, thing, something, etc

Cross out Correction: replace vague nouns with CONCRETE nouns

adapted from Institute for Excellence in Writing


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