30/9/15el fin de septiembre…el fin de “El Consumismo y el Trabajo Infantil”

Yo Puedo….Evaluate a project to give positive feedback explaining what

was best

Evaluate a project to explain something that could be improved.

Choose the most effective PSA group

Make 5 grammatical corrections on my On Demand Writing based on feedback from Sra.

La Evaluación Yes Sort Of No

The video included all of the necessary information.*visual images*spanish text in video and audio*discuss issues and consequences of child labor*represent a solution*connect consumerism and child labor*time limit managed

I could understand everything they said.

The video was interesting to watch.

I could understand the suggested solution.

La EvaluaciónOne thing I really liked about the video was:

One suggestion I have for improvement is:

En Google Classroom

1. Join if you haven’t already - code is on the board!2. Open the assignment named “PSA Viewing: Peer Edit”3. Watch ALL the videos using the provided links4. Complete the Peer Evaluation table for TWO of the videos (not

your own)5. Vote for the best video in the class and explain why

(you may NOT vote for your own video!)6. Press ‘TURN IN’ when you have completed the assignment

Las CorreccionesCode Explanation Example

# Number- the pronoun and the noun do not agree in number

#El niños

wc Word choice: you used the wrong word

^ Insert word; usually a connecting word or pronoun

Me gusta jugar ^ Barbies.Quiero ir a escuela.

Eng. English word ENGMe gusta ir to los conciertos.

Code Explanation Examplesp The word was spelled

incorrectly. spJuego los desportes.

s/v Subject and verb need to agree.

s/vYo compra vestidos.

n Noun/adjective agreement

nLa chica es guapo.

g Gender agreement gEl chica

wo Word order woamericano niños

pos Possession: ‘s does not exist

posEstudiante’s

Las Correcciones• Hay que corregir 5 errores indicados en tu ensayo

“on demand writing”• Puedes usar recursos: teléfonos, diccionarios,

vocabulario…• Necesitas engrapar (staple) el papel de

correcciones con la rúbrica y pon los papeles en el cuaderno