Many people saw my draft version of my front cover and i got a recurring theme of ‘the image looks stretched’ and ‘the colour scheme is to bland’ so i took action on this and i brought in a bright yellow colour to text and strokes around images. I also retook my main image and took on member out, as i was told that on my draft version all my band members should stand together in the same position and my crouching member was ‘out of place’. I was also told through audience feedback that my main cover line wasn't ‘clear enough’ so i resized it and moved it into the centre of the page, adding a yellow stroke making it stand out more and using hierarchy of text i mage it the 2nd biggest text on the page.

These are my draft and final version of my contents page of my final magazine. On my final page i added more features and to keep up with consistency i gave it page number 3 and brought yellow text , to co-inside with the front cover. I leanrt many skills in editing my images, making shapes and embedded shapes, with strokes around, and also on text such as ‘This week...’.

My first draft was looked at by different people, and from my audience feed back i found that colour scheme was ‘lacking’ on my cover, so this is why i changed the text from the bottom from yellow to purple. Also i was told my Masthead look ‘out of proportion’ to the banner on the top of the page. So i went on changing size of text and shape of the banner. I also had a move around of my cover line, to make it stand out in the middle of the yellow star. I took the star off Google on added to my cover. As i didn't have many skills on Photoshop i was slowly learning. So i changed the opacity as an effect.