Things We Could Cut
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THINGS WE COULD CUT - Cut Amy’s leader scene (20 seconds) Instead at the start do the sign ‘I am in control’ together and then turn and say ‘Good morning how are you good thanks.’ - Quicker scene changes (10 seconds) - In Hamish’s scene, make sure you know exactly what to say and what to do so you’re not repeating things like ‘No, don’t spit it out’ , ‘Eat it’, etc. A good thing to go by is if you’ve said it once don’t say it again And don’t say anything that doesn’t need to be said - In Amy’s last scene, see Melis quicker and don’t have as many pauses unless it’s the big pause for Pip’s death -
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THINGS WE COULD CUT
- Cut Amy’s leader scene (20 seconds) Instead at the start do the sign ‘I am in control’ together and then turn and say ‘Good morning how are you good thanks.’
- Quicker scene changes (10 seconds)- In Hamish’s scene, make sure you know exactly what to say and what to do so you’re
not repeating things like ‘No, don’t spit it out’ , ‘Eat it’, etc. A good thing to go by is if you’ve said it once don’t say it again And don’t say anything that doesn’t need to be said
- In Amy’s last scene, see Melis quicker and don’t have as many pauses unless it’s the big pause for Pip’s death
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