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    The Language of

    Argumentin the language of the standards

    For EGHS Teachers and Students

    A compilation of information aligned to the Common Core to help spur a discussion

    on the teaching of reading and writing arguments

    Works Consulted

    Coleman, David. "Common Core R.CCR.8 Explained." Teaching the Core. N.p., n.d. Web. 01 June 2013.

    "English Language Arts Standards Reading: Informational Text Grade 11-12."Common Core State Standards Initiative. N.p., n.d. Web. 23 May 2013.

    Harvey, Gordon. Counterargument. Harvard University, 1999. Web. 01 June 2013.

    "Fallacies." The Writing Center. University of North Carolina, n.d. Web. 09 May 2 013.

    Ramage, John D., John C. Bean, and June Johnson. Writing Arguments: A Rhetoric with Readings. Boston: Allyn and Bacon, 2001. Print.

    Sinott-Armstrong, Walter, and Robert Fogelin. Understanding Arguments: An Introduction to Informal Logic. 8th ed. Australia: Wadsworth, 2010. Print.

    "A Workbook for Arguments: A Complete Course in Critical Thinking [Paperback]."A Workbook for Arguments: A Complete Course in Critical Thinking: David

    Morrow, Anthony Weston: 9781603845496: Amazon.com: Books. N.p., n.d. Web. 23 May 2013.

    "Writer's Web: Toulmin Model Exercise." Writer's Web: Toulmin Model Exercise. N.p., n.d. Web. 26 May 2013.

    Written and compiled by Greg DeCubellis

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    Unpacking the Language of the Standards

    Trying to make sense of argumentative writing terminology can be a challenge. It turns out that there are

    about 20 important terms, but, because argumentation is a part of so many disciplines, many (about

    three-fourths) of these terms have different names. Fortunately, several are synonymous with those we

    already use to teach persuasive writing. Others, however, will probably be new to you.

    In the table below, you will find argument writing terms used in the Common Core standards and other terms

    that are close in meaning. Knowing these terms is imperative to understanding this handout. Also, it is

    highly likely that the terms in the left column will be used on upcoming Common Core assessments, so it is

    important for students to know and understand them as well.

    L.O.T.S IS OR RESEMBLES... MEANING..

    argument a thesis with a projected organization The assertion of a claim based on logical reasons.

    argumentative

    writinglogos, position paper

    As distinct from persuasive writing, argumentative

    writing relies mostly on sharp, ethical reasoning over

    pathos, dissembling, and trickery.

    bias slant, spinA favorable or unfavorable preference for one thing

    over another.

    claim

    thesis, conclusion, logical conclusion,

    central claim, critical stance, main idea,

    opinion, assertion, inference, judgment,

    effect

    A statement asserted as true by a speaker or writer.

    counterclaim counter-argument, opposing viewpointAn opinion directly opposite the writers included to

    set up a rebuttal of that opposing opinion.

    delineate standard form

    Listing the premises in logical order above the

    conclusion with a horizontal line drawn between them.

    evidenceone or more reasons which support a

    claim

    Reason(s) that prove the claim (but NOT the

    examples used for illustrating the reasons).

    example detailA fact which illustrates the arguments supporting

    reason or evidence.

    fallacylogical fallacy, illogical reasoning,

    invalid reason

    An error in an argument in which the claim does not

    logically follow from the the reasons.

    persuasionmanipulative speech, writing, or

    imagery

    In its most extreme form, its goal is to convince an

    audience by any means necessary, including invalid

    reasoning and untrue reasons.

    premisereason, proposition, major premise,

    minor premise, axiom, postulate, causeA reason used to assert a claim.

    reason

    premise, proof, proposition, major

    premise, minor premise, cause, fact,

    statistic

    Seepremise

    reasoning logicThe process of drawing or forming a conclusion from

    stated or implied premises.

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    rebuttalcomeback, refutation, objection to an

    objection

    An answer to a counterclaim which points out the

    opposing viewpoints flaws. It is used to disarm a

    skeptical audience.

    rhetoricliterary language, engaging wording,

    diction, syntax

    This term has many meanings, but is used in the

    standards to mean the ways in which the writer crafts

    words and phrases artistically to help make the

    argument interesting and engaging.

    structure organization, organizational strategy,sequence of ideas

    How the writer orders his reasons, claim, examples,sub-claims, counterclaims, etc.

    sub-claims

    grounds, stated assumption,

    suppressed premise, warrant,

    enthymeme, clincher

    The ways in which the illustrative examples connect

    to the argument.

    syntax word order, sentence structure The word order within a sentence or clause.

    validity logical reasoning

    An argument is valid if it is logical. In other words, an

    argument is valid if there is no possible way its claim

    can be false when its reasons are true. Illogical

    arguments are NOT valid.

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    The Language of Argument PART

    Reading an rgument

    CONTENTS ALIGNMENT TO CCSS Gr.

    1) Reading an Argument Delineate and evaluate the reasoning in ... texts, including ... thepremises, purposes, and arguments

    9-10

    2) Argument and Persuasion Determine an authors point of view or purpose in a text... analyzinghow style and content contribute to the power, persuasiveness ...of the text.

    11-12

    3) The Parts of an Argument Analyze in detail how an authors ideas or claimsare developedand refined by particular sentences....

    9-10

    4) Standard Form Delineation Delineate ...the argument.

    5) Annotating the Parts of An Argument Analyze in detail how an authors ideas or claimsare developedand refined by particular sentences....

    9-10

    6) Evaluating a Claims Strength &

    Effectiveness

    Analyze in detail how an authors ideas or claimsare developed

    and refined by particular sentences....

    9-10

    7) Evaluating Evidence in Examples Delineate and evaluate the argument... assessing whether the ...the evidence is relevantand sufficient.

    9-10

    8) Annotating an Arguments Strength &

    Effectiveness

    Delineate and evaluate the reasoning in ... texts, including ... thepremises, purposes, and arguments .

    Determine an authors point of view or purpose in a text in which

    the rhetoricis particularly effective, analyzing how style and

    content contribute to the power, persuasiveness or beauty of the

    text.

    Determine an authors point of view or purpose in a text and

    analyze how an author uses rhetoricto advance that point of viewor purpose.

    11-12

    9) Evaluating an Arguments Reasonableness Delineate and evaluate the argumentand specific claimsin a text,assessing whether the reasoning is validand the evidence isrelevantand sufficient

    9-10

    10) Fallacies in Reasoning [I]dentify false statements and fallacious reasoning... 9-10

    11) Some Rhetorical Devices and their Effects [A]nalyze how an author uses rhetoric...[A]nalyze how style and content contribute to the power,persuasiveness... of the text.

    12) Useful Questions for Close, Careful

    Argument Evaluation

    Analyze in detail how an authors ideas or claimsare developedand refined by particular sentences, paragraphs, or larger portions

    of a text.

    Analyze and evaluate the effectiveness of the structure an authoruses in his or her exposition or argument, including whether thestructure makes points clear, convincing, and engaging.

    9-10

    13) Putting it all Together [All standards related to argument reading are addressed] 9-12

    14) Best Practices for Teaching Blue text indicates IN NEED OF COMPLETION 9-12

    "English Language Arts Standards Reading: Informational Text Grade 11-12."Common Core State Standards Initiative. N.p., n.d. Web. 23 May 2013.

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    The Language of Argument PART II

    Writing an rgument

    CONTENTS ALIGNMENT TO CCSS Gr.*

    1) Writing Short Arguments Use words, phrases, and clauses as well as varied syntax to link themajor sections of the text, create cohesion, and clarify therelationships between claims and reasons....

    2) Useful Tips for Finding Fallacies in your

    own Writing

    Use words, phrases, and clauses as well as varied syntax to link themajor sections of the text, create cohesion, and clarify therelationships between claims and reasons, between reasons andevidence, and between claims and counterclaims.

    3) Structuring an Extended Argument Develop claims and counterclaims fairly and thoroughly, supplying themost relevant evidence for each while pointing out the strengths andlimitationsof both in a manner that anticipates the audiencesknowledge level, concerns, values, and possible biases.

    4) Two Argument Strategies Compared[ Same as above ]

    5) Exploring Both Sides Introduce precise, knowledgeable claims, establish the significanceof the claim, distinguish the claim from alternate or counterclaims...

    6) Illustrating your Reasons & Stating your

    Assumptions

    Develop claims and counterclaims fairly and thoroughly, supplying the

    most relevant evidence for each while pointing out the strengths and

    limitationsof both in a manner that anticipates the audiences

    knowledge level, concerns, values, and possible biases.

    7) Classical Graphic Organizer [C]reate an organization that logically sequences claims,counterclaims, reasons, and evidence.

    8) Rogerian Graphic Organizer [C]reate an organization that logically sequences claims,counterclaims, reasons, and evidence.

    9) Best Practices for Teaching Argument

    Writing

    Use words, phrases, and clauses as well as varied syntax to link themajor sections of the text, create cohesion, and clarify therelationships between claims and reasons, between reasons andevidence, and between claims and counterclaims.

    * Underlined text indicates 11-12 standard.

    "English Language Arts Standards Reading: Informational Text Grade 11-12."Common Core State Standards Initiative. N.p., n.d. Web. 23 May 2013.

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    The Language of Argument

    Reading an rgument

    An ARGUMENT is a claim accompanied by supporting reasons.

    When you make a claim, you are saying, I claim this to be true. In argument writing, you want your reader

    to accept your claim as true too. Your opinion usually will not be accepted without good reason though. So,

    a good argument writer claimssomething to be true and then supports it with reasons(a reason is also

    called a premise). In a good argument, the writer makes a case to convince an audience based on the

    merit and reasonablenessof the claims, reasons, and evidence.In this way, an argument can change the

    readers point of view, bring about an action, or ask the reader to accept the writers explanation or

    evaluation of a problem. (CCSS-ELA Appendix A).

    An extended argumentative essay is also known as a position paper because the writer takes a position on

    a topic and uses clear reasoning to attempt to get the reader to understand and agree with his or her

    position. Notice the word attempt in the previous sentence. When you write an argumentative essay, you

    might not entirely convince the reader of your position. You may only strengthen the opinion of those who

    already agree with you or weaken the resolve of those who oppose your opinion. The important thing is that

    you present your argument clearly, honestly, and logically.

    Note: When the word argument is used in this context, it does not mean a disagreement. An argument

    simply is a statement that attempts to connects facts or statistics (evidence) in support of a claim. So...

    an argumentis NOT a mere disagreement.

    1. This is NOT an argument:

    Bob: Willie is a whale.

    Steve: No, hes a goat.

    Bob: NO! Hes a whale!

    2. This IS an argument:

    Willie is a whale. All whales are mammals. Therefore, Willie is a mammal.

    DISCUSS: Here, the writerdraws aconclusion for us that Willie is a mammal. He gives two

    related factual reasons to support his conclusion. What are they? Assuming you agree with

    the facts, do you agree with his opinion that Willie is a mammal? Why or why not?

    DISCUSS: Why is example one above NOT an argument? Is simply contradicting someone

    the same as making an argument? Why is example two above a good argument? Hint: See

    the definition of argument above before responding.

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    Persuasion

    Advertisers often appear to claim things to be true about their product.

    What is claimed to be true here?

    Using our shampoo twice a day will help keep you from losing your hair.

    a. Our shampoo reduces baldness

    b. Without using our shampoo, you will probably go bald.

    c. Our shampoo has a special ingredient that will help keep you

    from losing your hair.

    d. All of the abovee. None of the above

    What do we assume is true about this product? Perhaps it contains some special anit-balding ingredients?

    In your own words, what is the company claiming to be true?

    If you said that the company is claiming that their product

    Using our shampoo correctly requires massaging it into the scalp.

    Massaging the scalp increases blood flow to the area.

    Increased bloodflow to the scalp slows hair loss over time.

    Therefore, massaging the scalp slows hair loss over time.

    Therefore, our using shampoo correctly slows hair loss over time.

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    Argument and Persuasion

    Arguments purpose in its purest form is to use reasoning to seek the truth. The purpose of persuasion in its

    most extreme form is to use whatever strategies necessary, including deception, to get an audience to

    believe what you want it to believe (even if you dont believe in what you are saying yourself). An argument

    essay falls somewhere on the line in the shaded area below:

    Argument ---------------------------------------------------------------------------> Persuasion

    Exploratory

    writing

    examining all

    sides of an

    issue

    Argument as

    inquiry,

    asking the

    audience to

    think out the

    issue with the

    writer

    Dialectic

    argument,

    seeking

    common

    ground with a

    resistant

    audience

    Classical

    argument,

    aimed at a

    neutral or

    skeptical

    audience

    One-sided

    argument,

    aimed at a

    friendly

    audience

    Aggressive

    one-sided

    arguments

    Outright

    propaganda

    Literary texts Sermons

    Ceremonial

    speeches

    Parliamentary

    debate

    Rogerian

    argument

    Legal reasoning

    Classroom

    lectures

    Letter to editor

    Fund raising

    Calls to action

    Talk radio

    Cable news

    commentary

    Advertising

    The Parts of An Argument

    To understand an argument, it is helpful to identify its parts. Any simple argument has two parts: a claim

    and reasons. You must know how to distinguish between a claim (also known as an opinion or a

    conclusion) and reasons (also known as proof or premises). The following should help you see these in

    action.

    DISCUSS: Which sentence makes more sense?

    1. You are shivering because it is cold.

    a. b.

    2. It is cold because you are shivering.

    a. a.

    Argument number one uses cause and effect logically. Now look closer at the argument. Is the a.

    section the cause or the effect? The b. section? Which one is the claim? Which is the reason?

    How do you know? Why is argument number two invalid?

    DISCUSS: Compare and contrast the statements below with those above. Is the a. section the claimor

    the reason in the example below? What is the difference in meaning between the connecting words

    therefore and because? How are they both used differently to connect the same claim and reason?

    Compare the meaning of the two sentences below with the two above.

    1. You are shivering therefore, it is cold.

    a. b.

    2. It is cold therefore, you are shivering.

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    b. a.

    Standard Form Delineation

    Whats the bottom line? How will you know if an argument adds up? The best way is to delineate the

    argument using standard form. The word delineate contains the word line. In this way, it is helpful to list

    the reasons and draw horizontal line to separate them from the claim. Doing so will also help you determine

    the best order to present your reasons and whether your reasons are good ones. It will also help you toevaluate whether a writer has good reasons for supporting her claim and ordered them logically

    To write an argument in standard form, you first must identify the claim and then find the supporting reasons

    Consider this argument: Im shivering because its wet and cold out here and the same argument stated in

    a different order: Its wet and cold out here therefore, Im shivering.

    REASONS STATED

    AFTER THE CLAIM:

    CLAIM CONNECTOR REASON

    1

    REASON

    2

    REASON

    3

    Argument--> I am

    shivering

    BECAUSE it is

    wet,

    it is

    cold,

    and

    Im outside.

    REASONS STATED

    BEFORE THE CLAIM:

    REASON

    1

    REASON

    2

    REASON

    3

    CONNECTOR CLAIM

    Same Argument butDifferent Order-->

    It iscold,

    it iswet,

    andIm

    outside

    THEREFOREI am

    shivering

    .

    A good thinker knows how to write any argument in standard form regardless of the order in which the writer

    presents his reasons and claims.

    How to write any argument in standard form:

    1. Always state the claim first.

    2. Draw a line above the claim.

    2. List each reason above the line.

    An argument in standard form:

    Reason

    Reason

    Reason

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    _______

    Claim

    EXAMPLE:

    Step one: State the claim. In the example, the speaker makes a claim that he is shivering. Note

    how the reader writes the claim at the bottom, underneath a horizontal line leaving space above.

    _______________ _______________

    Claim --------> I am shivering

    Step two: Identify the reasons. Note how the reader writes each reason above the horizontal line.

    Reason --------> It is wet outside

    Reason --------> It is cold outside

    Reason --------> I am outside

    _______________ _______________

    Together, the entire argument, claim and reasons, will look like this in standard form:

    Reason --------> It is wet outside

    Reason --------> It is cold outside

    Reason --------> I am outside

    _______________ _______________

    Claim --------> I am shivering

    Although in argument writing, the argument may be stated with the reasons before the claim or vice versa,

    when you delineate an argument, you must always list the reasons above the claim. Boiling down and

    ordering an argument in this way helps you evaluate the arguments logic and allows you to compare the

    argument with other arguments written in standard form.

    Standard form looks similar to an addition problem in math. Written in this way, its easy to see if the

    argument adds up or not.

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    Annotating the Parts of an Argument

    The typical words and phrases used to make arguments are called argument markers. In a text, they may

    appear before or after a claim or reason. Recognizing and labeling these markers is the first step in being

    able to conduct a close and careful analysis of arguments and to reconstruct the argument in standard form.

    Once you are able to recognize argument markers, you will be able to use them yourself connect your own

    claims and reasons to make valid arguments. When annotating argumentative writing, you can use the

    abbreviation C to mark words that signal an arguments claim and P to mark its reasons (i.e., proof,premises).

    TERM &

    ABBREVIATION

    MEANING EXAMPLES COMMON ARGUMENT

    CONNECTORS

    (markers)

    CLAIM

    C

    A claim is an opinion. It

    is a logical conclusion

    drawn from the reasons

    or evidence.

    We can now conclude that Mr.

    Flump is an idiot.

    It is cold therefore, you areshivering.

    therefore hence thus

    furthermore so

    consequently

    then (without if)

    this shows that...

    REASON

    (proof)

    P

    A reason is a fact that

    attempts to provea

    claim. It answers the

    question, Why? It is

    also known as a

    premise.

    Because it is cold, you are

    shivering.

    Since Brian speaks up, he

    gets what he needs.

    because since for as

    given that...

    due to..

    on the grounds that...

    this follows from...

    Note: A conditional can

    be phrased as an

    if-thenstatement. A

    conditional is not an

    argument by itself

    because no reasons are

    given and no claims are

    made. It only expresses

    what mightor couldbetrue. It does not claim

    what is true.

    If you work hard, then you will

    get far in life.

    I will go shopping if you loan

    me the car.

    "A Workbook for Arguments: A Complete Course in Critical Thinking [Paperback]." A Workbook for Arguments: A Complete Course in Critical Thinking: David Morrow, Anthony Weston:

    9781603845496: Amazon.com: Books. N.p., n.d. Web. 23 May 2013.

    Sinott-Armstrong, Walter, and Robert Fogelin. Understanding Arguments: An Introduction to Informal Logic. 8th ed. Australia: Wadsworth, 2010. Print.

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    Evaluating a Claims Strength and Effectiveness

    Once you learn to recognize an arguments claim, you should be able to determine how much or little the

    writer is claiming. A claim can be broad or narrow, or somewhere in between. Please note, a broad claim is

    not necessarily a good claim, nor is a narrow claim necessarily a bad one . Broad claims are more bold but

    are also general and therefore typically difficult to prove. For example, Teachers alwaysassign homework

    is a sweeping generalization and sounds like a strong claim. However, it is difficult to defend. Why? Oneneed only find a singleexample of a teacher who assigns nohomework to disprove the claim that teachers

    alwaysassign homework.

    On the other hand, Teachers often assign homework is easier to defend because it claims less. The words

    always and usually make all the difference here. Always makes the claim appear stronger. Usually

    makes the claim appear less strong and therefore easier to defend. Good writers guard their claims by

    being careful not to generalize or make overstatements that can be easily disproven. Good writers are also

    careful not to make their claims too narrow for fear of not saying anything significant. Strong claims are

    usually so broad that they cannot be defended. Weak claims are usually not debatable and therefore do not

    invite a defense.

    In any case, the best claim is an accurate claim.

    A strong and weak claim compared

    CLAIM TOO STRONG:

    All dogs are mean

    CLAIM TOO WEAK:

    Some dogs are mean sometimes.

    Is too Broad Is too Narrow

    Claims too Much Claims too Little

    Impossible to Defend

    Not Worth Debating

    Easy to Defend

    Not Worth Debating

    PRACTICE: Know Your Strength! Fill in the blanks to make an accurate and meaningful claim. Be

    sure to use words that guard against claiming too much:

    __Few__ teachers at EGHS assign __difficult__ homework.

    ___________ teachers at EGHS assign __easy__ homework.

    ____________ dogs are ____________ mean.

    ____________ politicians ___________ lie.

    ___________ babies do not sleep through the night.

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    Evaluating Evidence in Examples

    Without examples such as facts and figures to illustrate your reasons, an argument has little credibility. Often it is important

    to explain outright how the examples help illustrate your reasons and thus support your claim. It is best not to assume your

    reader will make this connection on his or her own. You may already be familiar with this concept of stating assumptions as

    a clincher. It is also known as grounds, warrant, or suppressed premise, or sub-claim.

    PRACTICE: Provide examples for each of the claims you made above. If you cannot think of any examples, adjust theclaims strength until it is accurate and you can. Review the table below.

    CLAIM REASON EXAMPLE STATED ASSUMPTIONS

    Some teachers assign

    too much homework...

    ...becausethey forget

    that students have a life

    outside of school.

    For example, Mr.

    Hammerhead requires

    students to keep a written

    log of every moment we

    recycle in and out of

    school.

    Most people would agree that teens

    have a right to social life outside of

    school. Most teens would also find it

    embarrassing to carry around a

    notebook to social events. Since

    teens will normally opt for social

    acceptance over embarrassment, it

    is not realistic or right for a teacher toexpect students to do this kind of

    around-the-clock homework.

    PRACTICE: Read the claim, reason, and example below. In the blank box, explain how the example indeed illustrates the

    reason and proves the claim. See above for an example.

    CLAIM REASON EXAMPLE STATED ASSUMPTIONS

    All women should be

    prevented from joining

    combat units

    ...because women

    typically do not have the

    strength or endurance

    for combat.

    For example, women

    generally have weaker

    upper-body strength, a

    crucial requirement for

    carrying a wounded soldier

    off of the battlefield.

    PRACTICE: Make a claim of your own, and provide a good reason supporting it with an example which illustrates your

    reason. Explain the assumption that connects your example to your reason and claim.

    CLAIM

    State something youbelieve in strongly.

    REASON

    Provide a goodreason supporting

    your claim.

    EXAMPLE

    State an example whichillustrates the reason.

    STATED ASSUMPTIONS

    Explain the assumption thatconnects your example to your

    reason and claim.

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    Annotating an Arguments Strength and Effectiveness

    You can use the abbreviations below to indicate signal words for determining an arguments strength and effectiveness. You

    might use the acronym GRADES X to help you remember the associated terms. Note: Words meanings depend on their

    context. The common indicator words listed in the right column above are not guaranteed signals, so when in doubt use the

    context to decide on how the word works in the writing.

    TERM &

    ABBREVIATION

    MEANING EXAMPLES COMMON INDICATOR

    WORDS

    GUARDING

    G

    To guard is to protecta

    claim from being

    rejected.

    Most freshmen grades improve by

    mid-year.

    She probably quit her job.

    Note: Guarded claims usually require less

    evidence than unguarded claims.

    some many few

    might may possibly

    likely unlikely almost

    nearly may

    could be there is a

    good chance..., etc.

    RHETORICAL

    DEVICE

    R +/-

    irony, sarcasm,

    hyperbole, and other

    literary language

    Note: These may serve

    any purpose and may

    have positive or

    negative connotations.

    Going to the dentist is the worst thing in

    the world! (hyperbole and E-)

    Her face usually looks pretty as Snow

    Whites. (simile, allusion, and E+)

    [ varies ]

    ASSURING

    A

    To assure is to

    guaranteea claim is

    true without providing a

    reason.

    Everyone knows that seniors slack off.

    Trust me when I tell you that you are

    wrong.

    doctors agree... recent

    studies have shown

    I know for a fact that...

    its common sense...

    they say that...

    take it from me...

    DISCOUNTING

    D

    To discount is to reject

    or refute a fact or

    opinion.

    His class ring looks nice,

    but it is expensive.

    His class ring is expensive

    though it looks nice.

    although even if but

    nevertheless

    though while

    however nonetheless

    even though... whereas

    yet still etc.

    EVALUATING

    E +/-

    To evaluate is tojudge

    a fact or opinion

    positively or negatively.

    + or -

    Celia is too silly. E-

    Your equation is idiotic. E-

    Cool idea! E+

    beautiful dangerous

    wasteful sneaky sinful

    sloppy cute smart, etc.

    STATINGASSUMPTIONS

    S

    To explain how the theexamples indeed illustratethe reasons and supportthe claim.

    EXEMPLIFYING

    X

    To exemplify is to

    provide an example to

    illustrate the reasons.

    Celia is too silly. For example, she laughs

    at funerals.

    Your explanation is idiotic: Clearly, two

    plus two equals donut is not sound math!

    for example...

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    Evaluating an Arguments Reasonableness

    A claim is supported well if the relationship between the reasons makes sense. In other words, the reasons

    supporting your claim must be logically related to each other-- the reasons must add up. The more the

    reader accepts the writers argument as factually accurate and valid, the greater chance the reader will be

    convinced.

    A valid argument contains NO illogical reasoning. In other words, if you connect your reasons to your claimin a way that truly makes sense, you have made a logical argument. An argument is valid ONLY if there is

    no way that the claim can be false when the supporting reasons are true. Nonetheless, a reader might find

    some arguments to be more reasonable than others based on the number, type, specificity, and accuracy

    of evidence used to support the opinion.

    Consider Willie again for a moment:

    Willie is a whale. All whales are mammals. Therefore, Willie is a mammal.

    DISCUSS: Explain how these facts are related to each other:Willie is a whaleandAll whales are

    mammals. How are these facts related to the claim that Willie is a mammal? Is there any way that

    Willie could NOT be a mammal if its true that he is indeed a whale and that all whales are

    mammals? Does the Willie argument contain any illogical reasoning? Is it a valid argument?

    DISCUSS: Explain how these facts are related to each other: Penguins are black and white and

    Some old TV shows are black and white. Is there any way that some penguins can NOT be old TV

    shows even if its true that penguins are black and white and that some old TV shows are black and

    white? What is the difference in reasoning between the Willie argument and the penguin argument?

    Does the penguin argument contain any illogical reasoning? Is it a valid argument?

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    Breaking an Argument: Fallacies in Reasoning

    Remember, in a valid argument, the reasons and the claim add up. A fallacy in reasoning occurs when the

    writer has connected the claim and reasons in a way that appears to make sense but really does not add up

    An argument that relies on a fallacy is NOT valid. Keep in mind, however, if the reader does not recognize

    the invalid argument, he or she may still be persuaded by the argument. Being able to recognize these

    fallacies can help you to protect yourself against being convinced of something for the wrong reasons.

    Basic Fallacies false cause? overlooking alternatives? Appeal to motive where a premise is dismissed by

    calling into question the motives of its proposer

    Some errors in logic a easy to spot with a little training.

    FALLACY ALSO

    KNOWN AS

    WHAT IT MEANS

    or DOES

    EXAMPLE HOW TO FIX IT

    ridiculing theclaim

    appeal to ridicule Making fun of the claimitself rather than offering areason for disagreeing with

    it.

    That is the stupidest idea Ive everheard!

    (That may be, but the speaker stillneeds to say why.)

    The speaker should give a goodreason why the idea is bad.

    attacking theperson

    ad hominem Criticizing the personmaking the argumentinstead of the argumentitself.

    That kid skateboards, andskateboarders are troublemakers,which is why I dont believeanything he just said.

    The speaker should restate theboys claim and reasons and thenexplain why the boys reasonsmake no sense.

    bandwagon ad populem Offering the reason thateveryone is doingsomething in place of alogical reason for doing it.

    Everyone is jumping off the bridge.Thats a good enough reason forme to jump off too!

    (Just because others are doingsomething isnt a good reason fordoing it.)

    The speaker might have said,because the bridge is on fire, I will

    jump off to save my life. This isclearly a good reason.

    composition Assuming that what is trueof the part of somethingmust be true for it as awhole.

    loadedlanguage

    Playing on wordsconnotations and emotionsinstead of actually makingan argument.

    the bullshorns

    false dilemma

    bifurcation

    black-or-white

    Reducing all possibleoptions to just twoopposing ones.

    Either you are with the us, or youare with the terrorists. George W.Bush, 2001

    Dont allow the speaker tooversimplify your options. Justbecause someone says there areonly two options doesnt

    necessarily make it so. Forexample, Switzerland, a neutralcountry, could be neither forterrorism nor for the U.S.

    slippery slope the camels nose Suggesting that one stepin a direction will inevitablylead to a chain of eventsresulting in an undesirableoutcome.

    appeal to pity ad misericordiam Using pity reason forspecial treatment

    The teacher should give me apassing grade because my dogdied last night.

    http://www.google.com/url?q=http%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fwiki%2FAppeal_to_motive&sa=D&sntz=1&usg=AFQjCNFGPeML8kCmZjYHGFqhwl6P7iVlPA
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    Intermediate Fallacies

    loadedquestion

    complex question Phrasing a question to trapthe person into agreeing toa claim.

    Broseph, are you still beingmean to puppies?

    (Answering no will still implythat Broseph has been mean topuppies, even if he hasnt.)

    Broseph should not answer thequestion directly. Instead, he shouldcall out the speaker and dismiss herquestion by saying, You know verywell that I am neither mean, nor have Ihurt puppies. Stop trying to make me

    look bad. Focus your disagreement onmy ideas instead.

    appeal toignorance

    ad ignorantiam Arguing a claim is true justbecause it has not beenshown to be false

    appeal tohistory

    ad antiquitam Offering the fact thatsomething has been donein the past as a reason forcontinuing to do it.

    We drive on the right side ofthe road because its alwaysbeen done that way.

    Just because something has beendone for a long time is not a goodreason for doing it. There may verywell be logical reasons for driving onthe right side of the road, so thespeaker should state them. ShirleyJacksons short story The Lotteryexposes this fallacy.

    talking incircles

    begging thequestion

    circular argument

    Using a claim as a reason. How do I know my mom isusually right? Because she tellsme so!

    How does the speaker really know ifhis mom is usually right if he reliesonly on her opinion as proof? What ifher opinion is wrong? Then herreason must also be wrong too. Heshould provide many examples ofwhen his mom was right as proofinstead.

    slippery word equivocation

    hedging

    Changing meanings of animportant word in themiddle of the argument.

    Women and men are physicallyand emotionally different. SIncewe are not really equal, the lawshould not treat them equally.

    Contrast the slippery word with theword of similar but different meaningwhich was left out of the originalargument. Here the slippery word isequally which the speaker wants usto believe means exactly the same

    as opposed to its legal meaning,fairly. Rephrased properly, Sincewe are not really equal, the law shouldnot treat us fairly sounds suitablyridiculous. Vonneguts satirical shortstory Harrison Bergeron exposesthis fallacy.

    More Difficult Fallacies

    FALLACY ALSO KNOWN AS WHAT IT MEANS EXAMPLE HOW TO FIX IT

    q therefore p affirming the consequent I If my phone is dropped,its screen cracks. Itsscreen is cracked, sosomeone must havedropped it!

    The speaker should haverealized there were manyother ways his screencould have cracked.Maybe someone sat on it.

    not p therefore not q denying the antecedent

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    red herring Introducing a seeminglyrelated issue to take focusaway from the real issue.

    false cause post hoc ergo propter hoc(after this therefore that),or simply, post hoc,correlation vs. causation

    To quickly assumingsomething causedsomething else.

    false cause

    Straw Man Arguments: When you put a false argument into the mouth of your opponent and then proceed to

    knock it down, you have only created a "straw man" argument,

    overlooking alternatives

    FALLACIES TBD...

    ALSO TBD...

    Relevant, short, kid-friendly arguments for practice annotation. See workbook examples. Also for

    below see orange book shaded sheet for guide sheet for peer revision

    SEE THE FALLACY DETECTIVE COMICS

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    Some Common Rhetorical Devices and their Effects

    Most good writers can learn to make logical arguments. The best writers, though, enhance their argument by being

    thoughtful about the words and syntax (word order) they use.

    What it is What it does

    Allusion A reference outside the text to a specific event, person, place,

    or object commonly known to the reader.

    Fourscore and seven years ago our fathers brought forth on

    this continent a new nation... dedicated to the proposition

    that all men are created equal. Here, Lincoln alludes to the

    Declaration of Independence.

    Draws on the readers prior knowledge

    to illustrate an idea.

    Creates a sense of connectedness and

    understanding with the reader.

    Analogy A four-way comparison: e.g. teachers this school are likeguards in prisons.

    Helps make abstract ideas more vivid

    and understandable by connecting a

    new concept to something the reader

    already knows.

    Euphemism Using a less-than-direct word or phrase.

    We have come to dedicate a portion of that field as a final

    resting placefor those who here gave their lives....

    Clearly, the more direct word, graveyard, would add a sense

    of morbidity inconsistent with Lincolns solemn tone.

    Softens a notion or image a reader

    might find distracting or too disturbing.

    Hyperbole Exaggeration or overstatement

    The world... can never forget what they did here.

    Emphasizes a point. Be careful:

    hyperbole can easily backfire as a

    sweeping generalization.

    Irony When a writer means the opposite of what she says. Establishes tone. May engage thereader through humor.

    Parallelism Using the same grammatical structure in close proximity.

    ...that government ofthe people, bythe people, for the

    people, shall not perish from the earth. Here there are three

    prepositional phrases used to show the relationship among

    the peoples relationship to the government:

    Draws the readers attention to the

    relationship between the items in

    parallel.

    Sensory

    Imagery

    Description which appeals to the writers sense of of taste,

    touch, sound, sight, smell, balance, heat/cold.

    Vivifies the meaning by stimulating the

    brains sensory cortex.

    Simile &

    Metaphor

    A simile is an indirect comparison using like or as. A

    metaphor is a direct comparison using a linking verb (such as

    is) or of (as in chains of oppression). Example:...this nation, under God, shall have a new birth of

    freedom.

    Helps make abstract ideas more vivid

    and understandable by connecting the

    writers new concept to something thereader already knows.

    Tone The writers attitude or moral outlook toward the subject orreaders, e.g., cynical, empathetic, critical, idealistic, ironic,

    optimistic, realistic, suspicious, comic, sarcastic, supportive

    Contributes to the writers meaning by

    complementing his meaning.

    Repetition Can occur with letters (alliteration, assonance), words (epistrophe,chiasmus, epizeuxis), and phrases (anaphora).

    ...that government ofthe people, bythe people, forthe people,shall not perish from the earth.

    Emphasizes an important point or

    detail. Creates a hypnotic effect

    opening the readers unconscious mind

    to suggestion.

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    Putting it All Together

    DIRECTIONS: The passage below is a short piece arguing in support of a US "junk food tax." Read through the piece and

    look for the different parts of the writers argument. ANNOTATE the article carefully in the margins. Afterwards, answer the

    following questions on your own. Next, share your responses with a small group and compare what you hear with your

    responses.

    1. Which sentence(s) contain the authors claim?2. Her reasons?

    3. Does the author use any guarding words to limit the claim?

    4. What evidence does she provide to support her reasons? Is the evidence true? Is it strong?

    5. What assumptions connect the claim to the reasons?

    6. Does the author present any counterclaims?

    7. How would you judge the quality of the argument overall? Is the reasoning valid? Are the reasons ordered

    effectively? What is the most beautifully written sentence in your opinion?

    Why We Should Tax Junk Food

    With the alarming rise in obesity rates among Americans in the past few decades, numerous debates have

    arisen over how (or if) public policy should be changed to help improve this trend. One promising strategy, already

    adopted by seven states, has been to try and deter consumers from purchasing unhealthy foods through a tax on

    soda or sugary drinks and junk food (Lohman). These taxes address the issue that Americans today are consuming

    almost 20 percent more calories than they did in the early 1980s, and those calories are coming from increasingly

    less-healthy sources, mainly high-fat and high-sugar processed foods (USDA). Furthermore, processed foods and

    drinks are increasingly more affordable than the fruits, vegetables, and whole grains needed to sustain a healthy diet

    (Marsh). Assuming that cost is a more relevant factor of food choice than personal taste, increasing the price of soda

    and junk food through taxes, while using that revenue to subsidize unprocessed fruits and vegetables would

    encourage consumers to choose healthier products as they become more affordable than their unhealthy

    counterparts.

    In fact, there is evidence to suggest that cost, more so than preference, influences purchasing choices. A year

    after New York increased cigarette taxes from $1.25 to $2.75, smoking rates dropped by 12 percent to a historic low

    (Harutyunyan). Although some might argue that smoking is more of a lifestyle choice than eating, it is rather the

    choice of what foods to eat which will hopefully be affected in the long run. Additionally, this tax might hurt those in

    areas with little access to fresh produce and whole grains, such as in low-income urban areas; therefore the junk

    food tax would only work if healthy food choices are made not only affordable but easily available to low-income

    consumers through the use of subsidies (Marsh). However, if precautions are taken to ensure equal access to healthy

    food among all citizens, then using the carrot of subsidized healthy food and nutrition education along with the

    stick of a food tax, the typical American diet can-- and should-- be changed for the better.

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    ANSWERS

    1. What is the authors claim?

    The claim is stated in two places-- at the beginning of the piece, when the author states that the tax is a promisingstrategy against obesity. The claim is restated at the end, when the author writes using the carrot of subsidized

    healthy food and nutrition education along with the stick of a food tax, the typical American diet can, and should, be

    changed for the better.These two statements condense the main point which the author is trying to impart-- that a

    junk food tax has a good chance of being successful and should be implemented.

    2. Does the author limit the claim by using any guarding words?

    The author guards her claim by addressing the issues brought up by lack of access to healthy options in her

    restatement of the claim. Specifically, the qualifier appears as the statement however, if precautions are taken to

    ensure equal access to healthy food among all citizens, then.... The claim is again stated as she continues with

    using the carrot of subsidized healthy food and nutrition education along with the stick of a food tax, the typical

    American diet can-- and should-- be changed for the better.

    3. Where evidence does the author present in this essay?

    The main evidence to support her claim is given in the form of statistics about food consumption in the US to

    highlight the need for a program encouraging healthy food consumption. Specifically, she states Americans today

    are consuming almost 20 percent more calories than they did in the early 1980s, and those calories are coming from

    increasingly less-healthy sources, mainly high-fat and high-sugar processed foods. Furthermore, processed foods

    and drinks are increasingly more affordable than the fruits, vegetables, and whole grains needed to fora healthy diet.

    4. What assumptions (also known as suppressed premises, enthymemes, or warrants) connect the evidence to the claim?

    Because the author is arguing that a tax on unhealthy food would encourage healthy food consumption, the

    assumption linking evidence of unhealthy eating to the use of a food tax is that customers make purchasing

    decisions largely on the basis of cost. This idea is explicitly stated when the author writes mentions that we might

    assume cost is a more pertinent factor of food choice than personal taste .

    5. Does the author present any counterclaims?

    Yes, the author addresses two possible counterarguments by bringing them up, and then refuting them. She notes

    that with regard to the legitimacy of comparing smoking to eating habits, some might argue that smoking is more of a

    lifestyle choice than eating, it is rather the choice of what foods to eat which will hopefully be affected in the long run .

    She also notes the issue of food deserts by writing additionally, this tax might hurt those in areas with little access to

    fresh produce and whole grains, such as in low-income urban areas therefore the junk food tax would only work if

    healthy food choices are made not only affordable but easily available to low-income consumers through the use of

    subsidies (Marsh).

    6. How would you judge to overall quality of this argument? Is the reasoning valid?

    This answer dependents on your own analysis of the argument. However, there are many issues worth noting. The

    evidence provided does explain that there is a trend in unhealthy eating, but does not give evidence for why this

    trend is harmful, nor does it provide evidence for why this trend exists. The overall claim that a junk food tax should

    be implemented would be stronger if evidence were given explaining the consequences of allowing this unhealthy

    trend to continue also, the assumption that cost is a primary factor of food purchasing choices would be more valid if

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    evidence was provided outlining other factors in this type of decision-making. Additionally, the rebuttal and qualifier

    addressing the lack of accessibility to healthy food in low-income areas would be stronger if the author had

    suggested specific measures by which the accessibility issue would be resolved.

    "Writer's Web: Toulmin Model Exercise." Writer's Web: Toulmin Model Exercise. N.p., n.d. Web. 26 May 2013.

    The Language of Argument

    Writing an rgument

    Short Arguments

    Before writing an extended argument essay, it is best to begin practicing by writing a few short

    arguments. Short arguments are only about two paragraphs long. Use the following rules to help

    insure your short argument is logical and clear. Be sure to revise your work to insure you have used

    elaboration strategies forfull effect.

    Some General Guidelines

    1. Identify your reasons and claims.

    Ask yourself, What am I trying to prove? This is

    your claim. Think of a claim as a mini-thesis.

    (The reasons why you are claiming what you are

    claiming are also known as proof or premises--

    they will become your projected organization.)

    2. Develop your ideas in a natural order. Put your claim first, followed by your reasons OR

    put your reasons first and your claim last.

    3. Start from good, reliable reasons. No matter how well you use logic and word

    choice, your claim will appear silly if your reasons

    are questionable.

    4. Be concrete and concise when you use

    examples for to illustrate your reasons.

    Avoid generalities. Use clear examples to

    illustrate and clarify your reasons. Dontover-elaborate or you will lose your audience.

    5. Build on substance, not overtone. Offer actual reasons dont just rely on powerful

    word choice or generalizations.

    WRITE: Try it. Following the guidelines above write a two-paragraph letter to the editor a topic in the

    news about which you have an opinion. Next, rewrite your argument and change the order you

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    presented your reasons and claim. Which version is more natural and effective? Why?

    "A Workbook for Arguments: A Complete Course in Critical Thinking [Paperback]."A Workbook for Arguments: A Complete Course in Critical Thinking: David

    Morrow, Anthony Weston: 9781603845496: Amazon.com: Books. N.p., n.d. Web. 23 May 2013.

    Useful Tips for Finding Fallacies in Your Own Writing

    Good argument writing depends on clear, logical thinking. Fallacies are illogical. Here are some general

    tips to improve your argument by finding and eliminating fallacies in your own arguments:

    1) Pretend you disagree with the claim you are defending. What parts of the argument would

    now seem fishy to you? What parts would seem easiest to attack? Give special attention to

    strengthening those parts.

    2) List your main points under each one, list the evidenceyou have for it. Seeing your claims

    and evidence laid out this way may make you realize that you have no good evidence for a

    particular claim, or it may help you look more critically at the evidence youre using.

    3) Learn which types of fallacies you are especially prone to, and be careful to check for them

    in your work. Some writers make many of appeals to authority others are more likely to rely on

    weak analogies or set up straw men. Read over some of your old papers to see if theres a

    particular kind of fallacy you need to watch out for.

    4)Be aware that broad claims need more proof than narrow ones. Claims that use sweeping

    words like all, no, none, every, always, never, no one, and everyone are sometimes

    appropriatebut they require much more proof than less-sweeping claims that use words like

    some, many, few, sometimes, usually, and so forth.

    5) Double check your characterizations of others, especially your opponents, to be sure they are

    accurate and fair.

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    "Fallacies." The Writing Center. University of North Carolina, n.d. Web. 09 May 2013.

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    Exploring Both Sides

    Whether you use the classical or Rogerian approach, you MUST examine both sides of the argument when

    pre-writing and drafting. Considering both sides of an argument in this way may help you determine where

    your argument is strongest and where the opposing view is weakest, OR it may lead you to some common

    ground between your position and the opposing viewpoint. In any case, exploring the counterclaim in this

    way helps you appear more reasonable to your reader. Note the example below in which the writer has

    done some pre-writing to consider both sides of the question of whether girls should be encouraged to playfirst-person-shooter video games.

    Prompt: Should girls be encouraged to play first-person shooter video games?

    One View... Opposing View...

    CLAIM: First-person shooter video

    games are GOOD for girls.

    vs COUNTER-

    CLAIM:

    First-person shooter video

    games are BAD for girls.

    REASON

    1

    because beating guys at their own

    game is empowering for girls.

    vs. REASON

    1

    because they promote antisocial

    values such as indiscriminatekilling.

    REASON

    2

    because being skilled at these

    games frees girls from feminine

    stereotypes.

    vs. REASON

    2

    because they amplify the bad

    side of male stereotypes.

    REASON

    3

    because they give girls a different

    way of connecting with males.

    vs. REASON

    3

    because they waste valuable

    time that could have been spent

    on something constructive.

    REASON4

    because they give girls newinsights into a male subculture.

    vs. REASON4

    because FPS games couldencourage women to see

    themselves as objects.

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    PRACTICE: For each blank, fill in a good reason for the opposing view to the claim that women should be

    prevented from joining military combat units.

    Prompt: Should women be allowed to join military combat units?

    One View... Opposing View...

    CLAIM: Women should be PREVENTED

    from joining military combat units .

    COUNTER

    -CLAIM:

    Women should be ALLOWED to

    join combat units in the military.

    REASON

    1

    Women typically do not have the

    strength or endurance for combat.

    REASON

    1

    ???

    REASON

    2

    Women in close-knit combat units

    would hurt morale by introducing

    sexual jealousies.

    REASON

    2

    The image of women as combat

    soldiers would help society overcome

    harmful gender stereotyping.

    REASON

    3

    Women have not been socialized into

    fighters and wouldnt have the

    kill-em-with-a-bayonet spirit that men

    can get.

    REASON

    3

    ???

    REASON

    4

    Women would be less reliable to a

    combat unit if they became pregnant

    or had to care for infants or small

    children.

    REASON

    4

    Women would have more

    opportunities for promotions if they

    could serve in combat units.

    REASON

    5 ???

    REASON

    5

    Allowing women to serve in combat

    units promotes equal rights.

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    Counter-Argument Excerpted from The Academic Essay: A Brief Anatomy by Gordon Harvey

    When you counter-argue, you consider a possible argument againstyour thesiss claim or some aspect of

    your reasoning. This strategy is a good way to test your ideas when drafting. In the finished essay, it can be

    a persuasive and disarming tactic. It allows you to anticipate doubts and head off objections that a skeptical

    reader might have. It also enhances your credibility because it presents you as the kind of person who

    weighs alternatives before arguing for one, who confronts difficulties instead of sweeping them under the

    rug, and who is more interested in discovering the truth than winning a point.

    The Turn Against

    Counter-argument in an essay has two stages: you turn against your argument to challenge it and then you

    turn back to reaffirm it. You first imagine a skeptical reader who might resist your argument by pointing out

    a problem with your demonstration, e.g. that a different conclusion could be drawn from the same

    facts, a key assumption is unwarranted, a key term is used unfairly, certain evidence is ignored or

    played down

    one or more disadvantages or practical drawbacks to what you propose

    an alternative explanation or proposal that makes more sense.

    You introduce this turn against with a phrase like One might object here that... or It might seem that...or It's

    true that... or Admittedly,... or Of course,...or with an anticipated challenging question: But how...? orBut

    why...?or But isn't this just...? orBut if this is so, what about...?Then you state the case against yourself as

    briefly but as clearly and forcefully as you can, pointing to evidence where possible.

    The Turn Back

    Your return to your own argumentwhich you announce with a transitional word such asbut, yet, however,

    nevertheless or stillmust likewise involve careful reasoning, not a simple dismissal. In reasoning about the

    proposed counter-argument, you may

    refute it, showing why it is mistakenan apparent but not real problem acknowledge its validity or plausibility, but suggest why on balance it's relatively less important or

    less likely than what you propose, and thus doesn't overturn it

    concede its force and complicate your idea accordinglyrestate your thesis in a more exact,

    qualified, or nuanced way that takes account of the objection, or start a new section in which you

    consider your topic in light of it.

    Where to Put a Counter-Argument

    Counter-arguments most commonly appear

    as part of your introductionbefore you propose your claim or thesiswhere the existence of a

    different view is the motive for your essay, the reason it needs writing as a section or paragraph just after your introduction, in which you lay out the expected reaction or

    standard position before turning away to develop your own

    as a quick move within a paragraph, where you imagine a counter-argument not to your main idea

    but to the sub-idea that the paragraph is arguing or is about to argue

    as a section or paragraph just before the conclusion of your essay, in which you imagine what

    someone might object to what you have argued.

    WRITE: Using the turn against and turn toward steps above, write a counter-argument refuting

    why women should NOT be allowed in combat units (see previous example).

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    Illustrating your Reasons with Examples and Stating your Assumptions

    While counter-arguments are especially helpful in establishing your credibility, without examples such as

    facts and figures to illustrate your own argument for your reader, your argument will fall flat. It is also

    important to state outright how these examples help illustrate your reasons and support your claim. Never

    assume your reader will make this connection on his or her own. It is also a good idea to determine which

    assumptions are not shared by you and your audience. By stating these assumptions outright, you answer

    the question, So what? for the reader. In this way, the reader will see you have solid grounds for yourclaim whether or not he agrees with your claim. (The assumption that ties your claim and evidence together

    is also known as grounds, a suppressed premise, enthymeme, or warrant. In your essay, it will often appear

    in your clincher.)

    The tables below illustrate how stating an assumption makes the examples purpose clear in supporting the

    argument. Notice how the stated assumption clearly calls back to the claim and reason using their exact

    phrasing (these call back words are italicized).

    CLAIM REASON EXAMPLE STATED ASSUMPTION

    So what? How does the example tie the

    reason and claim together?

    Some teachers assign

    too much homework...

    ...because they

    forget that

    students have a

    life outside of

    school.

    For example, Mr.

    Hammerhead

    requires students

    to carry a notebook

    and keep a written

    log in a notebook of

    every time we

    recycle.

    Most people would agree that teens

    have a right to social life outside of

    schooland teens would find it

    embarrassing to carry around a

    notebook to social events. Since

    teens will normally opt for social

    acceptance over embarrassment, it

    is not realistic or right for a teacherto expect students to do this kind of

    around-the-clock homework.

    CLAIM REASON EXAMPLE STATED ASSUMPTIONS

    Women should be

    prevented from joining

    combat units

    ...because

    women typically

    are not strong

    enough for

    combat.

    For example,

    women generally

    have weaker

    upper-body

    strength, a crucial

    requirement for

    carrying a wounded

    soldier off of the

    battlefield.

    Clearly men weigh significantly more

    than women. It would be wrong to

    jeopardize wounded mens lives by

    reducing the number of those strong

    enough to lift and carry these heavy,

    wounded men to safety. Being fair to

    women by letting them join the

    infantry means being unfair to men

    who would die on the battlefield as a

    result, which is why women should

    be preventedfrom joiningcombat

    units.

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    PRACTICE: Make a claim about something you believe and provide a good reason supporting your

    claim. State an example which illustrates your reason. Explain the assumption that connects your

    example to your reason and claim. Use the table below to help you develop your ideas.

    CLAIM

    State something you

    believe in strongly.

    REASON

    Provide a good

    reason supportingyour claim.

    EXAMPLE

    State an example

    which illustrates thereason.

    STATE YOUR

    ASSUMPTIONS

    So what? Explain how the exampleties the reason and claim together.

    Circle the words that call back to

    your claim and reason.

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    GRAPHIC ORGANIZERS FOR EXTENDED ARGUMENTS

    Getting Started with Claims, Reasons, and Counterclaims

    1. Decide on an issue for an extended argument essay you would like to write (e.g., first-person-shooter

    video games). Make sure its a debatable issue that reasonable people could disagree on.

    2. Write a one-sentence question that summarizes the controversial issue your claim addresses (e.g.,

    Should girls be allowed to play first-person-shooter video games?). This will be your prompt forwriting.

    3. Draft a working thesis statement (claim) for your proposed argument.

    4. List several bulleted because statements for your reasons (two to four is sufficient). NOTE: A claim

    CANNOT be supported by other opinions unless accepted by the reader as fact (e.g., a doctors

    opinion, an experts opinion, etc.).

    5. Draft a working opposing thesis statement (counter-claim).

    6. List several bulleted because statements as counter-reasons.

    7. Freewrite for several minutes exploring your own feelings and thoughts about the reasons on both

    sides. Try not to finalize your position until you finish writing. Keep an open mind.

    8. Decide on a side to argue and finalize your position. Write your claim.

    9. Finalize your reasons and list them. Make sure they are good ones. Order your reasons in a way

    that make the most sense.

    10. Finalize your counter-claim and counter-reasons. List them using the chart below:

    PROMPT : __________________________________________________________________________ ?

    One View... Opposing View...

    CLAIM: vs. COUNTER

    -CLAIM:

    REASON

    1

    > because... vs. REASON

    1

    > because...

    REASON

    2

    > because... vs. REASON

    2

    > because...

    REASON3

    > because.. vs. REASON3

    *> because...

    REASON

    4

    > because... vs. REASON

    4

    > because...

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    Developing your Argument Further: Examples and Assumptions

    1. For each reason you provided above, list at least one example which illustrates the reason.

    2. Next, state how the example indeed helps prove your point.

    3. Use the table below as many times as needed to elaborate on your reasons convincingly.

    Restate your Claim:

    _______________________________________________________________________

    REASON 1

    Provide a good reason

    supporting your claim.

    EXAMPLE

    State an example which illustrates

    the reason.

    STATE YOUR ASSUMPTION

    So what? Explain how the example ties the

    reason and claim together. Circlethe words

    that call back to your claim and reason.

    REASON 2

    Provide a good reason

    supporting your claim.

    EXAMPLE

    State an example which illustrates

    the reason.

    STATE YOUR ASSUMPTION

    So what? Explain how the example ties thereason and claim together. Circlethe words

    that call back to your claim and reason.

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    REASON 3

    Provide a good reason

    supporting your claim.

    EXAMPLE

    State an example which illustrates

    the reason.

    STATE YOUR ASSUMPTION

    So what? Explain how the example ties the

    reason and claim together. Circlethe words

    that call back to your claim and reason.

    REASON 4

    Provide a good reason

    supporting your claim.

    EXAMPLE

    State an example which illustrates

    the reason.

    STATE YOUR ASSUMPTION

    So what? Explain how the example ties the

    reason and claim together. Circlethe words

    that call back to your claim and reason.

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    Strategizing and Organizing: Classical or Rogerian Structure?

    Decide whether the classical or Rogerian strategy is best suited for your essays purpose, occasion, and

    audience. Next, fill out the appropriate brainstorming sections for EITHER the Classical or Rogerian plans

    below. To help you brainstorm, use the claims, reasons, counterclaims, examples, and stated assumptions

    you have already developed.

    Classical Organizer

    SECTION(each of the five sections may consist of more

    than one paragraph)

    BRAINSTORM HERE...

    Introduce your topic

    (one to several paragraphs)

    > Begin with an attention grabbing hook (e.g.,

    a memorable scene)

    > Explain the issue and needed background> State claim (thesis) and projected

    organization (arguments)

    Present your position

    > This is the main body of the essay.

    > Present and support each reason in order.

    > Tie each reason to a value or belief held by

    the audience.

    Summarize opposing views

    > Summary of views differing from writers

    (opposing views should be fair and

    complete).

    Respond to opposing views

    > Dismiss or concede to opposing views.

    > Show weaknesses in opposing views.> May concede to some strengths.

    Conclude

    > Summarize the argument briefly.

    > Leave a strong lasting impression.

    > Calls for an action or relate topic to the

    broader world of ideas.

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    Rogerian Organizer

    BRAINSTORM HERE...

    Introduce your topic

    State the problem you hope to resolve. By

    presenting your issue as a problem, raise the

    possibility of positive change. Try to state why

    opponents will want to solve the same problem.

    Summarize Opposing Views

    As accurately and neutrally as possible, state

    the views of the people with whom you

    disagree. By doing this you show that you are

    capable of listening without judging and have

    given a fair hearing to people who thinkdifferently from you.

    Show You Understand the Opposition

    Also called the statement of validity. Show that

    you understand that there are situations in

    which the opposing views are valid. Which

    parts of the opposing arguments do you

    concede? Under which conditions might you

    share these views?

    Make your Claim

    Now that readers have seen that youve given

    full consideration to views other than your own,

    they should be prepared to listen fairly to your

    views. State your position.

    Guard your Claim

    Describe situations in which you hope your

    views will be honored. By showing that your

    position is reasonable in specific contexts, yourecognize that people wont agree with you all

    of the time. However, opponents are allowed to

    agree in part and share common ground.

    State the Benefits

    Appeal to the self-interest of your opponents by