The Hamburger Paragraph
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Transcript of The Hamburger Paragraph
Hamburger
The Perfect
How to Make
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What Ingredients Do You Need?
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Consider Unity
behaving together in the same way to have the same result
How to Write a Paragraph
Which of the Two Images Represent Unity?
UNITY DISUNITY
Read the paragraph. What is the main idea? Is there unity?
Build Up Unity
California is a great state to live in. Not only is California very large, but also many people live there. Furthermore, you can find many different types of jobs in California. I want to be a firefighter. Moreover, California has really amazing weather. The weather in New York is good too, but it snows a lot there. Therefore, if you want to live in a great state, you should think about moving to California.
Living in California
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Beef Burger
Bottom Bun
Top Bun
Lettuce and TomatoKetchup and Pickles
How to Make the Perfect Burger
Topic Sentence
Conclusion Sentence
Support Details 1Support Details 2Support Details 3
The topic sentence introduces the topic of your paragraph. Try to make it exciting!A topic sentence expresses the main idea of the paragraph.
The Hamburger Paragraph
The Hamburger ParagraphThere are many reasons that I love to teach.
These are just few reasons why I love to teach.
First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school.Another reason I love to teach is that I enjoy teaching.A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new.Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around students.
There are many reasons that I love to teach. First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school. Another reason I love to teach is that I enjoy teaching. A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around students. These are just few reasons why I love to teach.
Can these sentences be used as topic sentences? If not, edit them.
My hometown is famous for several amazing natural features.
The Hamburger Paragraph
Topic Sentence
My hometown is famous because it is located by Wheaton River, which is very wide, and because it is built near an unusually steep hill called Wheaton Hill.
My hometown is famous for two reasons.
There are two reasons why some people like to buy cars with automatic transmission and two reasons why others like cars with manual transmission.
Topic Sentence
Smooth = transitions
Bumpy = NOtransitions
Transition words are words that link sentences together making the reading smooth.
Use of Transitions
California is a great state to live in. Not only is California very large, but also many people live there. Furthermore, you can find many different types of jobs in California. Moreover, California has really amazing weather. Therefore, if you want to live in a great state, you should think about moving to California.
California is a great state to live in. California is very large, and many people live there. You can find many different types of jobs in California. California has really amazing weather. If you want to live in a great state, you should think about moving to California.
Add transition words, then compare between them.
How to Write a Paragraph
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handin contrastinstead of
on the contrary
converselynotwithstandi
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furthermoreoverin additionabove thatabove all
firstsecond
theneventually
finally
at onceat last
meanwhilein the
meantimepresently
at the same time
shortlyin the end
temporarily
as a resultfor this reason
thereforehence
consequentlyaccordingly
in shortto conclude
in briefon the wholein summaryto sum up
Contrast Add Points
Consequence
Time Cause / Effect
Types of Transitions
There are many reasons that I love teaching. First of all, I love teaching because I love being at school. Another reason I love teaching is that I enjoy teaching. A third reason I love teaching is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Finally, I love teaching because I love to be around students. These are just few reasons why I love teaching.
How to Write a Paragraph
Write a paragraph about your favorite
sport.
Home Work
How to Write a Paragraph